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 Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 8:57 am
Rathmostofar66 ---I'm still looking over the Forums trying to find where I can put the application for the Village Hidden in the Mist. There's so much stuff around here I kinda got lost...anyway, here is my RP piece...--- "Rain...it has been too long..." Zabudo quietly spoke to himself as he walked through his village in the rain...
A crack of lightning shot through the sky, illuminating the empty streets around him that were being poured on by the relentless storm. He loved to take walks like this in the rain. It calmed his thoughts and calmed his body, usually sore from his training. His clothes were soaked down to his bones and his long, silvery hair had turned gray from the on-pouring clouds...
His feet sloshed through the ankle deep water as he came to the edge of the district, coming to the large lake bed that surrounded the village. He smiled lightly as he slowly removed his shirt and jeans, letting them rest on the bank as his crimson eyes gazed over the pool, wearing nothing more then his boxers now as he slipped off his shoes...
He turned his head to see a young girl, about his age with a yellow, rain suit on and an umbrella above her head. Her body was slightly muddy from the bank as she slowly turned her head to him, looking at him through her crystalline eyes that were marked by dark bags under them...
He could sense a deep sorrow from her. A gaping may of pain in her expression that told him that she was longing for someone at her side...longing for a friend...
Realizing this, he slowly made his way to her and gently sat on the muddy bank beside her. Her lips lightly parted as she breathed, speaking in a quiet voice, "You'll....catch a cold...if you continue like this..."
Zabudo blinked a few times as he was caught off guard by her statement. She was in no better condition then he was...she was the one who seemed sick. Without realizing it, he placed his hand on her knee as she looked up at him, her eyes needing someone to care...
"You will be the one ill if you stay...do not worry about me..."
She lightly smiled as she held his hand, her cold hands feeling deathly and bony. Her eyes then slowly turned away as she looked out to the lake, her hand lightly gripping his hand tighter as she chanted, "Then before I become more ill...let me swim out there again...take me with you..."
He grinned more as she turned her face towards him, still looking at him through a pool of sorrow and instantly he knew that he needed to oblige. He slowly helped her up as she dropped her umbrella, letting it roll to the edge of the bank as she then unbuttoned her rain jacket and revealed her skimpy swim suit of plain white and a blue flower pattern.
In the center of her cleavage lay a necklace, a simple metal chain was put through a beautiful, multi-colored conch shell about the size of his thumb, its spirally surface as smooth as her skin and glowed dully with multi-colored light.
She held his hand tighter as they then ran down the bank and broke into the water, its ice cold claws digging into them, snapping them awake as they began to swim through it. The surface gleamed like hundreds of jewels as they swam deeper, taking in all that was around them as they examined the lake floor and watched the many creatures swim by and around them...
For a slow hour, they swam and played together, occasionally going back to the surface for air as they enjoyed this leisurely time. The longer time that passed, the more happier the woman became until she was ecstatic, more alive then she ever seemed as they swam gracefully through the waters before they soon became tired and swam back to the bank...
But something was wrong...her youthful energy was slowly fading as he had to carry her a few steps on the bank, her body feeling limp and frail against his. His eyes were wide with worry as she looked up at him, a small smile across her face as her eyes were half open...
She slowly fumbled her hands on her neck and took off her beautiful conch necklace and placed it around his neck as he held her close. Surprisingly then, she lightly kissed him, soft and wet it was and brief as she then looked up into his eyes...
"Thank you..." She barely whispered, her hand holding his cheek weakly, "Do not....forget...the love of the....water....we.....s-shared...."
Her head then slumped back as her eyes closed, her body like slush against him, weak and unmoving. His heart curled up in his throat as he began to sob, slowly standing as he carried her in his arms. He could not speak, he could not howl in pain. He barely knew her yet he felt as if he has lost a dear lover to him...he did not even know her name...
As he slowly carried her away, his cheeks flared with red as his eyes clamped shut with the tears that flowed down his cheeks...but no one would ever know that he cried...for the rain erased it all...
The Sorrowful Tears of the Water Maiden...cried upon him now...and forever...pass. not bad
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Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 11:03 am
RP Sample
With tears raising from Hara's face he wrote a detailed letter to his mother letting her know he was leaving her and he didn't want to be found even though he didn't want to. As he kissed her he thought of all the times she protected him and began to feel terrible about it. He quickly ran through the forest so he wouldn't change his breathe. Although he began to lose his breathe, he kept going with the tears cooling his face. As he approached the gate to the village, he slowed his movements. A smile appeared as clear as day when he walked through the gate.
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Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 11:25 am
insectkiller RP SampleWith tears raising from Hara's face he wrote a detailed letter to his mother letting her know he was leaving her and he didn't want to be found even though he didn't want to. As he kissed her he thought of all the times she protected him and began to feel terrible about it. He quickly ran through the forest so he wouldn't change his breathe. Although he began to lose his breathe, he kept going with the tears cooling his face. As he approached the gate to the village, he slowed his movements. A smile appeared as clear as day when he walked through the gate. pass.
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Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 11:29 am
ryoku walked down the street and stoped in front of a ramen shop
"man am i hungry but i dont have any money,got it "
he said making a plan he disguised himself walked into the shop and gorged himself
the shopkeper said"thatll be 60ryo and dont even think about skipping out"
he turned to see the disguised ryoku trying to slip away the man grabbed him and ryoku disappeared it was a clone the shopowner ran out and searched for ryoku who was on the roof of of the shop
"I cant believe he fell for it"
he said jumping off the roof and heading in the opposite direction of the shopkeeper and laughing uncontrollably
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Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:45 pm
~~~~~RP sample~~~~~
hageshii walked through the academy doors feeling mildly vexed seeing all the other students grouped together talking with one another for he had no friends and never really got along with anyone so he pulled the collar of his jacket higher and continued on inside not paying any attention to the others
after a few minutes he found his class he was assigned to and opened the door no one was in yet so he walked over to the back and sat down waiting for class to begin
~~~~~end of sample~~~~~
i hope i passed if not i can maybe rethink of something and try again right?
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Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 12:03 pm
((heres a post from a zombie rp where i played a crazy ex-spetsnaz ^_^ ))
Marcus was running but not getting anywhere. All he saw was the darkness around him, to the left the right and behind him. The only thing he saw was a speck of light in front of him. Yet no matter how much he ran it never seamed to get any closer. The only thing that got closer was the darkness, it continued getting closer until it had him in a strangle hold. Then just as the darkness over took him Marcus bolted upright. He was in a cold sweat and panting like he had just won a marathon. Looking around he saw the room he called home for the night. To anyone else Marcus would just seam a ordinary old man but he was so much more then that.
Marcus had taken his sleep in a bars stock room that night and felt it was time to move onward. Marcus first took some food and hoffed it down before putting his hand on his knife as he opened the door. Seeing that the bar was still empty he thought it best to take a bottle with him for the road. After that was done Marcus headed towards the back door towards the bars alleyway.
Putting his hand on the door knob Marcus began talking out loud to himself. “live that’s what’s important, that’s what they want, but its mine I wont give it to them, they want it but its mine.” Marcus paused for a second as he burst through the door and shouted “Mine!” as he shouted Marcus saw three figures approaching him as they did Marcus continued his speech. “this life is mine, and what mine stays mine, not yours or yours…Mine!” as he shouted for the second time Marcus rushed the closest figure his knife in his right hand. Jumping in the air Marcus brought the knife down on the first figures head and again shouted “ Its mine!” Marcus then broke off into more words “ the head target the head, the head is what they want to keep but ill take them take them like I’m told.” One of the figures then reached for Marcus in a kind of lunge. Grabbing its arm and spinning out of the way Marcus indented to flip him backwards but the arms bone broke resulting in Marcus holding its arm. Before it could turn around Marcus wrapped his left arm around its neck and proceeded to beat its head with the end of the arm that broke off. The bone had snapped and luckily made a useful dagger. Leaving the arm sticking out of its head Marcus let if fall as he turned to take on his final opponent. By this time it was almost on top of him dropping his knife Marcus tackled it to the ground where he sat on top of it. He then proceeded to beat its head with his bare fists until it was just a messy pulp. Knowing it was done Marcus went and picked up his knife. Smiling Marcus walked down the ally way talking to himself. “there slow and weak, weak is not good that’s why im not, not being weak means I get to keep what’s mine.”
Reaching the main street Marcus walked down it towards out of town. He wanted to keep his life so to leave was the best choice of action that much was clear. He didn’t know how much farther it would be until he reached where he wanted to go but he didn’t care. Soon enough Marcus came across a shop he thought he should go into. it was a gun shop and as much as he enjoyed his knife he would need a wepon. entering the shop Marcus found that there was already a man in the store and noticed that he had a gun. Marcus didnt see a scared person with a gun he saw a solider and since he was able to carry a gun then he must still have a rank. "Marcus Fedorov ex-spetsnaz at your orders Comrade" Marcus let a short salute go before realizing he didn't need to salute anymore. since he technically wasn't part of the military any longer.
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Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 4:42 pm
will anyone ever read this gonk
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Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 12:46 am
((Meh... this is just an example of me role-playing solo in a Kingdom Hearts RP Guild... which I am a Vice Captain in... he's a Dragoon/Gunner...))
Hikaru was walking alone through the streets of a city in the world known only as The World That Never Was, and he couldn't remember why he was here anyway, all he remembered of anything related to this place was a man telling him to come here by the train system that had been designed to go through the different worlds, as inter-world travel was extremely common these days, and he didn't know whether it was a blessing or not, since the heartless were still a risk, and he could tell his Nobody persona was a member of that accursed Organization XIII, and Hikaru just smiled. Hikaru could barely remember how his Nobody had been formed but he remembered it none the less, and his Nobody was unique, similar to how unique that Roxas or Namine were, from all the rumours he had heard about them, and his eyes looked towards the sky as he wondered why the heart-shaped moon was still doing there, and he continued to wall through the Dark City, wondering why the Heartless hadn't appeared to attack him yet, and it was entirely possible that something was holding them back somehow. Ryuugasen, the spear his grandfather had given him was glistening in the limited light streaming from the moon, and Dragon, his handgun was safe in its holster, another gift his grandfather had given him, although he continued to wonder why his grandfather had worked for a while with Organization XIII, forging weapons and other things for them, but it didn't matter, what was done was done, and there was no changing it. And then he began to remember how his Nobody had been formed, as if the flashback he was experiencing was happening in the real world at that very second, although he kind of wondered a lot at times, and he wondered how he had kept on fighting even after loosing his heart that time before he got it back.
There were dark inky black creatures everywhere, and his sister was right behind him, as the young Hikaru was trying to protect her and his twin brother from them, and all three of them were in an alley way in their home town, a brick wall to their backs, and Hikaru was wielding a razor sharp spear at the ready, and that spear was Ryuugasen and in its holster by his side was Dragon, his handgun which he mainly used for ranged combat, although right now it didn't matter. He destroyed a ton of heartless when he utilized one of his own basic attacks, Dragon Slash, where he charged Ryuugasen with some of his bio-electricity, causing it to possess a extremely powerful paralysis effect on it, but it had the strange effect of doing massive damage to a heartless, and Hikaru wondered if this was because of the electricity or something else.
They were getting closer and there seemed to be no end to them, and then he rapidly held Ryuugasen in a single hand and pulled Dragon out of its holster, he pulled down on the trigger, releasing a burst of pure energy which struck the ground and released an energy shock-wave heading out of the alleyway, which cleared out all the heartless, and Hikaru decided to take this chance "NOW!" Hikaru said as he grabbed his sister's wrist, and Kira, his twin brother grabbed her wrist as well, and they ran out of the alleyway and into the streets, but they were still chased by Heartless, who were running after them and Hikaru feared that there would be no end to them, but as they ran past other people, Hikaru wondered why the heartless weren't attacking those other people, as there was nothing special about Hikaru and his family that would make them an interesting target for the Heartless.
((Its not finished but it should do for now...))
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Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 6:50 pm
true bboy ryoku walked down the street and stoped in front of a ramen shop "man am i hungry but i dont have any money,got it " he said making a plan he disguised himself walked into the shop and gorged himself the shopkeper said"thatll be 60ryo and dont even think about skipping out" he turned to see the disguised ryoku trying to slip away the man grabbed him and ryoku disappeared it was a clone the shopowner ran out and searched for ryoku who was on the roof of of the shop "I cant believe he fell for it" he said jumping off the roof and heading in the opposite direction of the shopkeeper and laughing uncontrollably pass. quite funny rofl
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Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 6:51 pm
Gleiche ~~~~~RP sample~~~~~ hageshii walked through the academy doors feeling mildly vexed seeing all the other students grouped together talking with one another for he had no friends and never really got along with anyone so he pulled the collar of his jacket higher and continued on inside not paying any attention to the others after a few minutes he found his class he was assigned to and opened the door no one was in yet so he walked over to the back and sat down waiting for class to begin ~~~~~end of sample~~~~~ i hope i passed if not i can maybe rethink of something and try again right? pass
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Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 6:53 pm
zombielover09 ((heres a post from a zombie rp where i played a crazy ex-spetsnaz ^_^ ))
Marcus was running but not getting anywhere. All he saw was the darkness around him, to the left the right and behind him. The only thing he saw was a speck of light in front of him. Yet no matter how much he ran it never seamed to get any closer. The only thing that got closer was the darkness, it continued getting closer until it had him in a strangle hold. Then just as the darkness over took him Marcus bolted upright. He was in a cold sweat and panting like he had just won a marathon. Looking around he saw the room he called home for the night. To anyone else Marcus would just seam a ordinary old man but he was so much more then that.
Marcus had taken his sleep in a bars stock room that night and felt it was time to move onward. Marcus first took some food and hoffed it down before putting his hand on his knife as he opened the door. Seeing that the bar was still empty he thought it best to take a bottle with him for the road. After that was done Marcus headed towards the back door towards the bars alleyway.
Putting his hand on the door knob Marcus began talking out loud to himself. “live that’s what’s important, that’s what they want, but its mine I wont give it to them, they want it but its mine.” Marcus paused for a second as he burst through the door and shouted “Mine!” as he shouted Marcus saw three figures approaching him as they did Marcus continued his speech. “this life is mine, and what mine stays mine, not yours or yours…Mine!” as he shouted for the second time Marcus rushed the closest figure his knife in his right hand. Jumping in the air Marcus brought the knife down on the first figures head and again shouted “ Its mine!” Marcus then broke off into more words “ the head target the head, the head is what they want to keep but ill take them take them like I’m told.” One of the figures then reached for Marcus in a kind of lunge. Grabbing its arm and spinning out of the way Marcus indented to flip him backwards but the arms bone broke resulting in Marcus holding its arm. Before it could turn around Marcus wrapped his left arm around its neck and proceeded to beat its head with the end of the arm that broke off. The bone had snapped and luckily made a useful dagger. Leaving the arm sticking out of its head Marcus let if fall as he turned to take on his final opponent. By this time it was almost on top of him dropping his knife Marcus tackled it to the ground where he sat on top of it. He then proceeded to beat its head with his bare fists until it was just a messy pulp. Knowing it was done Marcus went and picked up his knife. Smiling Marcus walked down the ally way talking to himself. “there slow and weak, weak is not good that’s why im not, not being weak means I get to keep what’s mine.”
Reaching the main street Marcus walked down it towards out of town. He wanted to keep his life so to leave was the best choice of action that much was clear. He didn’t know how much farther it would be until he reached where he wanted to go but he didn’t care. Soon enough Marcus came across a shop he thought he should go into. it was a gun shop and as much as he enjoyed his knife he would need a wepon. entering the shop Marcus found that there was already a man in the store and noticed that he had a gun. Marcus didnt see a scared person with a gun he saw a solider and since he was able to carry a gun then he must still have a rank. "Marcus Fedorov ex-spetsnaz at your orders Comrade" Marcus let a short salute go before realizing he didn't need to salute anymore. since he technically wasn't part of the military any longer.pass
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Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 6:55 pm
Crystalline Seraphim ((Meh... this is just an example of me role-playing solo in a Kingdom Hearts RP Guild... which I am a Vice Captain in... he's a Dragoon/Gunner...))
Hikaru was walking alone through the streets of a city in the world known only as The World That Never Was, and he couldn't remember why he was here anyway, all he remembered of anything related to this place was a man telling him to come here by the train system that had been designed to go through the different worlds, as inter-world travel was extremely common these days, and he didn't know whether it was a blessing or not, since the heartless were still a risk, and he could tell his Nobody persona was a member of that accursed Organization XIII, and Hikaru just smiled. Hikaru could barely remember how his Nobody had been formed but he remembered it none the less, and his Nobody was unique, similar to how unique that Roxas or Namine were, from all the rumours he had heard about them, and his eyes looked towards the sky as he wondered why the heart-shaped moon was still doing there, and he continued to wall through the Dark City, wondering why the Heartless hadn't appeared to attack him yet, and it was entirely possible that something was holding them back somehow. Ryuugasen, the spear his grandfather had given him was glistening in the limited light streaming from the moon, and Dragon, his handgun was safe in its holster, another gift his grandfather had given him, although he continued to wonder why his grandfather had worked for a while with Organization XIII, forging weapons and other things for them, but it didn't matter, what was done was done, and there was no changing it. And then he began to remember how his Nobody had been formed, as if the flashback he was experiencing was happening in the real world at that very second, although he kind of wondered a lot at times, and he wondered how he had kept on fighting even after loosing his heart that time before he got it back.
There were dark inky black creatures everywhere, and his sister was right behind him, as the young Hikaru was trying to protect her and his twin brother from them, and all three of them were in an alley way in their home town, a brick wall to their backs, and Hikaru was wielding a razor sharp spear at the ready, and that spear was Ryuugasen and in its holster by his side was Dragon, his handgun which he mainly used for ranged combat, although right now it didn't matter. He destroyed a ton of heartless when he utilized one of his own basic attacks, Dragon Slash, where he charged Ryuugasen with some of his bio-electricity, causing it to possess a extremely powerful paralysis effect on it, but it had the strange effect of doing massive damage to a heartless, and Hikaru wondered if this was because of the electricity or something else.
They were getting closer and there seemed to be no end to them, and then he rapidly held Ryuugasen in a single hand and pulled Dragon out of its holster, he pulled down on the trigger, releasing a burst of pure energy which struck the ground and released an energy shock-wave heading out of the alleyway, which cleared out all the heartless, and Hikaru decided to take this chance "NOW!" Hikaru said as he grabbed his sister's wrist, and Kira, his twin brother grabbed her wrist as well, and they ran out of the alleyway and into the streets, but they were still chased by Heartless, who were running after them and Hikaru feared that there would be no end to them, but as they ran past other people, Hikaru wondered why the heartless weren't attacking those other people, as there was nothing special about Hikaru and his family that would make them an interesting target for the Heartless.
((Its not finished but it should do for now...)) pass. for future reference your past guild info doesnt matter. nobody cares how many guilds your in or what rank you are. not being rude just dont want others to think you have to be a captian to be any good.
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Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 10:23 pm
onixdragon Crystalline Seraphim ((Meh... this is just an example of me role-playing solo in a Kingdom Hearts RP Guild... which I am a Vice Captain in... he's a Dragoon/Gunner...))
Hikaru was walking alone through the streets of a city in the world known only as The World That Never Was, and he couldn't remember why he was here anyway, all he remembered of anything related to this place was a man telling him to come here by the train system that had been designed to go through the different worlds, as inter-world travel was extremely common these days, and he didn't know whether it was a blessing or not, since the heartless were still a risk, and he could tell his Nobody persona was a member of that accursed Organization XIII, and Hikaru just smiled. Hikaru could barely remember how his Nobody had been formed but he remembered it none the less, and his Nobody was unique, similar to how unique that Roxas or Namine were, from all the rumours he had heard about them, and his eyes looked towards the sky as he wondered why the heart-shaped moon was still doing there, and he continued to wall through the Dark City, wondering why the Heartless hadn't appeared to attack him yet, and it was entirely possible that something was holding them back somehow. Ryuugasen, the spear his grandfather had given him was glistening in the limited light streaming from the moon, and Dragon, his handgun was safe in its holster, another gift his grandfather had given him, although he continued to wonder why his grandfather had worked for a while with Organization XIII, forging weapons and other things for them, but it didn't matter, what was done was done, and there was no changing it. And then he began to remember how his Nobody had been formed, as if the flashback he was experiencing was happening in the real world at that very second, although he kind of wondered a lot at times, and he wondered how he had kept on fighting even after loosing his heart that time before he got it back.
There were dark inky black creatures everywhere, and his sister was right behind him, as the young Hikaru was trying to protect her and his twin brother from them, and all three of them were in an alley way in their home town, a brick wall to their backs, and Hikaru was wielding a razor sharp spear at the ready, and that spear was Ryuugasen and in its holster by his side was Dragon, his handgun which he mainly used for ranged combat, although right now it didn't matter. He destroyed a ton of heartless when he utilized one of his own basic attacks, Dragon Slash, where he charged Ryuugasen with some of his bio-electricity, causing it to possess a extremely powerful paralysis effect on it, but it had the strange effect of doing massive damage to a heartless, and Hikaru wondered if this was because of the electricity or something else.
They were getting closer and there seemed to be no end to them, and then he rapidly held Ryuugasen in a single hand and pulled Dragon out of its holster, he pulled down on the trigger, releasing a burst of pure energy which struck the ground and released an energy shock-wave heading out of the alleyway, which cleared out all the heartless, and Hikaru decided to take this chance "NOW!" Hikaru said as he grabbed his sister's wrist, and Kira, his twin brother grabbed her wrist as well, and they ran out of the alleyway and into the streets, but they were still chased by Heartless, who were running after them and Hikaru feared that there would be no end to them, but as they ran past other people, Hikaru wondered why the heartless weren't attacking those other people, as there was nothing special about Hikaru and his family that would make them an interesting target for the Heartless.
((Its not finished but it should do for now...)) pass. for future reference your past guild info doesnt matter. nobody cares how many guilds your in or what rank you are. not being rude just dont want others to think you have to be a captian to be any good.
But does how much cake and pie could lol? JK... thanks...
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Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 12:26 am
onixdragon Rathmostofar66 ---I'm still looking over the Forums trying to find where I can put the application for the Village Hidden in the Mist. There's so much stuff around here I kinda got lost...anyway, here is my RP piece...--- "Rain...it has been too long..." Zabudo quietly spoke to himself as he walked through his village in the rain...
A crack of lightning shot through the sky, illuminating the empty streets around him that were being poured on by the relentless storm. He loved to take walks like this in the rain. It calmed his thoughts and calmed his body, usually sore from his training. His clothes were soaked down to his bones and his long, silvery hair had turned gray from the on-pouring clouds...
His feet sloshed through the ankle deep water as he came to the edge of the district, coming to the large lake bed that surrounded the village. He smiled lightly as he slowly removed his shirt and jeans, letting them rest on the bank as his crimson eyes gazed over the pool, wearing nothing more then his boxers now as he slipped off his shoes...
He turned his head to see a young girl, about his age with a yellow, rain suit on and an umbrella above her head. Her body was slightly muddy from the bank as she slowly turned her head to him, looking at him through her crystalline eyes that were marked by dark bags under them...
He could sense a deep sorrow from her. A gaping may of pain in her expression that told him that she was longing for someone at her side...longing for a friend...
Realizing this, he slowly made his way to her and gently sat on the muddy bank beside her. Her lips lightly parted as she breathed, speaking in a quiet voice, "You'll....catch a cold...if you continue like this..."
Zabudo blinked a few times as he was caught off guard by her statement. She was in no better condition then he was...she was the one who seemed sick. Without realizing it, he placed his hand on her knee as she looked up at him, her eyes needing someone to care...
"You will be the one ill if you stay...do not worry about me..."
She lightly smiled as she held his hand, her cold hands feeling deathly and bony. Her eyes then slowly turned away as she looked out to the lake, her hand lightly gripping his hand tighter as she chanted, "Then before I become more ill...let me swim out there again...take me with you..."
He grinned more as she turned her face towards him, still looking at him through a pool of sorrow and instantly he knew that he needed to oblige. He slowly helped her up as she dropped her umbrella, letting it roll to the edge of the bank as she then unbuttoned her rain jacket and revealed her skimpy swim suit of plain white and a blue flower pattern.
In the center of her cleavage lay a necklace, a simple metal chain was put through a beautiful, multi-colored conch shell about the size of his thumb, its spirally surface as smooth as her skin and glowed dully with multi-colored light.
She held his hand tighter as they then ran down the bank and broke into the water, its ice cold claws digging into them, snapping them awake as they began to swim through it. The surface gleamed like hundreds of jewels as they swam deeper, taking in all that was around them as they examined the lake floor and watched the many creatures swim by and around them...
For a slow hour, they swam and played together, occasionally going back to the surface for air as they enjoyed this leisurely time. The longer time that passed, the more happier the woman became until she was ecstatic, more alive then she ever seemed as they swam gracefully through the waters before they soon became tired and swam back to the bank...
But something was wrong...her youthful energy was slowly fading as he had to carry her a few steps on the bank, her body feeling limp and frail against his. His eyes were wide with worry as she looked up at him, a small smile across her face as her eyes were half open...
She slowly fumbled her hands on her neck and took off her beautiful conch necklace and placed it around his neck as he held her close. Surprisingly then, she lightly kissed him, soft and wet it was and brief as she then looked up into his eyes...
"Thank you..." She barely whispered, her hand holding his cheek weakly, "Do not....forget...the love of the....water....we.....s-shared...."
Her head then slumped back as her eyes closed, her body like slush against him, weak and unmoving. His heart curled up in his throat as he began to sob, slowly standing as he carried her in his arms. He could not speak, he could not howl in pain. He barely knew her yet he felt as if he has lost a dear lover to him...he did not even know her name...
As he slowly carried her away, his cheeks flared with red as his eyes clamped shut with the tears that flowed down his cheeks...but no one would ever know that he cried...for the rain erased it all...
The Sorrowful Tears of the Water Maiden...cried upon him now...and forever...pass. not bad Not bad??? Are you kidding me!? burning_eyes Unless I took a chapter out of the book I am trying to write there's no way I could use a sample that big...
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:44 pm
I'm from Belguim so i can't speak English very well but i will try.
My RP:
'Homaru Mikachi': Said a man that was standing in front of a group. A young strong boy came out of the group. The boy had long hair and green eyes. The big man took a headband that was lying on a bench and gave it to the boy. 'congratulations Homaru.': Said the man while the rest of the croud was clapping in there hands. 'Thank you sensei.': Said the young boy he turned around and walked back in the croud.
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