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 Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 4:52 pm
I think this was one of the least funny chapters I've written, actually.
Next to chapter five. >_>;
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Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 6:43 am
lol it maybe 'unfunny', but it's a good chapter. really sets up a bit of suspense. like: Just what DID Betman do? Will the escape? What's going on with Zen?
those kinda questions. The ones that end with the cheesy voice saying "Tune in next time to The Seven Year Void to find out!" wink xd
awesomeness though, Betman.
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Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 7:02 am
Yes! Cheesy voice announcer! Those are my favorite.TUNE IN NEXT TIME TO SEE ZEN DO SOMETHING!
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Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 7:26 am
Betman Yes! Cheesy voice announcer! Those are my favorite.TUNE IN NEXT TIME TO SEE ZEN DO SOMETHING!
yeah. those are the best
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 1:43 am
Great stuff Betman. Sorry I didn't see this until now.
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Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 1:12 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 3:33 pm
Well, here\'s my thing: I have abut three readers, and if people other than the ones I know do read it, then they don\'t comment, which is really what I\'m looking for. I\'m only writing half of this story for your enjoyment, because the other half is for my improvement in writing. So, until I get a few more comments or something, I don\'t know when the next update will be.
That, and my writers block is crazy right now.
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Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 3:47 pm
Oh, well i like it so far. mrgreen
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Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 4:39 am
But I still wanna see new chapters! rofl ~goes to mule accounts to leave more comments~
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Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 7:13 pm
I've read it. only just recently though. it's pretty good.
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 11:33 pm
BY THE POWER VESTED IN ME, I NECRO THIS THREAD. Expect an update in a few days, if not sooner.
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 10:10 am
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 10:16 am
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 12:34 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 12:38 pm
surprised awesomeness!!
... in all honesty, this was one of my favorite stories, Betman. you've got a VERY good writing style. I was missing it.
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