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 Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 7:21 pm
Camwen Wow - dark and definitely sexy in a very disturbing way 3nodding It's quite good! And honesty.. about the emo stuff.. It seems to me that even the happiest people have a dark side that is fun to explore now and then. Would cynicism qualify as happy? Then it would be me rofl . Also thank you for the compliments.
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 8:26 pm
humble_gypsy_traveller Camwen Wow - dark and definitely sexy in a very disturbing way 3nodding It's quite good! And honesty.. about the emo stuff.. It seems to me that even the happiest people have a dark side that is fun to explore now and then. Would cynicism qualify as happy? Then it would be me rofl . Also thank you for the compliments. Well as I don't know much about you I can't comment on what your personal state of mind is. wink I just meant that I agree with your comment on not assuming someone is emo just because they can write something so deliciously dark.
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 9:13 pm
Here's one that I did in a writing group which, though it was accepted, it was met with indifference. xd
There was once a woman who liked creme
Everytime she ate it, she wanted to scream
She was accused of her lust unjust
Because she did her Johns by a stream
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 3:06 pm
humble_gypsy_traveller Here's one that I did in a writing group which, though it was accepted, it was met with indifference. xd There was once a woman who liked creme Everytime she ate it, she wanted to scream She was accused of her lust unjust Because she did her Johns by a stream lol I can see how it would be more difficult to respond to this one. hehe - Are you sure it was indifference? Maybe they just didn't know what to say. wink
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 3:13 pm
Camwen humble_gypsy_traveller Here's one that I did in a writing group which, though it was accepted, it was met with indifference. xd There was once a woman who liked creme Everytime she ate it, she wanted to scream She was accused of her lust unjust Because she did her Johns by a stream lol I can see how it would be more difficult to respond to this one. hehe - Are you sure it was indifference? Maybe they just didn't know what to say. wink Poetry groups should never suggest doing limericks and not be prepared for something tongue in cheek. xd
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 3:19 pm
humble_gypsy_traveller Camwen humble_gypsy_traveller Here's one that I did in a writing group which, though it was accepted, it was met with indifference. xd There was once a woman who liked creme Everytime she ate it, she wanted to scream She was accused of her lust unjust Because she did her Johns by a stream lol I can see how it would be more difficult to respond to this one. hehe - Are you sure it was indifference? Maybe they just didn't know what to say. wink Poetry groups should never suggest doing limericks and not be prepared for something tongue in cheek. xd If it's a limerick it's pretty much expected isn't it? rofl rofl Otherwise you're not doing it right.
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 3:35 pm
Camwen humble_gypsy_traveller Camwen humble_gypsy_traveller Here's one that I did in a writing group which, though it was accepted, it was met with indifference. xd There was once a woman who liked creme Everytime she ate it, she wanted to scream She was accused of her lust unjust Because she did her Johns by a stream lol I can see how it would be more difficult to respond to this one. hehe - Are you sure it was indifference? Maybe they just didn't know what to say. wink Poetry groups should never suggest doing limericks and not be prepared for something tongue in cheek. xd If it's a limerick it's pretty much expected isn't it? rofl rofl Otherwise you're not doing it right. Well I didn`t have a flagon of beer in hand either stumbling snockered out of my gord...so I REALLY wasn`t doing it right. rofl
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 4:53 pm
humble_gypsy_traveller Camwen humble_gypsy_traveller Camwen humble_gypsy_traveller Here's one that I did in a writing group which, though it was accepted, it was met with indifference. xd There was once a woman who liked creme Everytime she ate it, she wanted to scream She was accused of her lust unjust Because she did her Johns by a stream lol I can see how it would be more difficult to respond to this one. hehe - Are you sure it was indifference? Maybe they just didn't know what to say. wink Poetry groups should never suggest doing limericks and not be prepared for something tongue in cheek. xd If it's a limerick it's pretty much expected isn't it? rofl rofl Otherwise you're not doing it right. Well I didn`t have a flagon of beer in hand either stumbling snockered out of my gord...so I REALLY wasn`t doing it right. rofl *snort* You have a point..
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 5:26 pm
well since it is so silent in here i might as well share one of my terrible poems
if nothing else at least i can make you all laugh at my attempts for poetry xp
A petal falls to the floor
And life withers away
A gentle tap at the door
Without her he can no longer stay
Death comes to all
But too soon to some
Her death is his down fall
Now she knows he will come
He questions his actions
But it’s far too late
Death awaits without distraction
Today is his date
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Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2011 8:56 am
dagonss46 well since it is so silent in here i might as well share one of my terrible poems if nothing else at least i can make you all laugh at my attempts for poetry xp A petal falls to the floor And life withers away A gentle tap at the door Without her he can no longer stay Death comes to all But too soon to some Her death is his down fall Now she knows he will come He questions his actions But it’s far too late Death awaits without distraction Today is his date Yeah this is one of the quieter threads since not a lot a people write poetry and fewer still want to share it. But It's completely worth it when they do!! Thanks for posting yours. I liked it a lot 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2011 3:46 pm
Camwen dagonss46 well since it is so silent in here i might as well share one of my terrible poems if nothing else at least i can make you all laugh at my attempts for poetry xp A petal falls to the floor And life withers away A gentle tap at the door Without her he can no longer stay Death comes to all But too soon to some Her death is his down fall Now she knows he will come He questions his actions But it’s far too late Death awaits without distraction Today is his date Yeah this is one of the quieter threads since not a lot a people write poetry and fewer still want to share it. But It's completely worth it when they do!! Thanks for posting yours. I liked it a lot 3nodding it was actually based on a short story that i wrote, i tend to write just about anything and everything im going to try and start writing short stories weekly or bi-weekly and sharing them of course to do that i need to get to know my audience and find out what it is that they want to read if you have any suggestions you can let me know
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2012 11:56 pm
i love you ,an i hate you
love you ,but i hate you
i love you for all those time you've helped me out
an i hate you for the smug look on your face everything id called you
acting like you knew id come back to ask you for help again
i love you for the fact that you care about me enough to get mad at
for doing stupid stuff
i hate you when your angry because then you don't listen to me an you get even more mad at me because i think your cute when you get mad
i love it when you just come over an vist me even
i hate it tho because you haven't in along while come to see me
an all these feeling i have just want to burst out of my chest sometimes
even tho ive never told you "i love you " my heart pounds
when you are near i also hate it because its against the rules
i love that cocky grin you get when you know youve won the argument
an i hate it when you rub it in my face that you won
why is it so hard to tell you 3 simple words i- love - you it should be that hard but it seems like a albatross around my tongue i always go to say it then i stop myself because i know what could happen having to consider other peoples feelings
i hate it when you make me cry or feel lonely or dont talk to me sclinces is the loudest sound in the world to me
i love it when you tell me i believe in you ,you can do this i even love you for scolding me tho not at the time why do i have to be so spilt to love more then one person at the same time in the same way it is so very very hard
an i love it when you check up on me to just see how im doing an above all i love that your my friend but i hate that there can never be anything more the in unrequited love ~
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Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2012 12:40 pm
Hi there. Thought I would share some poetry. Of course all my poetry is copyrighted. At times I want to go back to you I want to love you like I did once But the words you spoke to me stop it. At times I'm lonely and want someone with me. But I wonder if it would be like last time? It was one sided on my side I tried my best to communicate, but nothing happened. At time I think it was my fault and I did everything wrong, but I didn't. I know that now.
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