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tetrasmaster

PostPosted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 5:53 pm


User ImageWow, Pink! You always have such nice pictures to give. x3
I love the lifestream one! Sooo cute. heart
PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 10:41 am


Twindream
Oh my....you're even dumber than I thought......for you not to even know what "right" and "wrong" means. I'm flabbergasted! eek You're obviously trying to get on my nerves.


What i not kno hows to readz?

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Twindream

PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 12:01 pm


That's it....I've had enough. Obviously you don't know who you are messing with. Considered yourself banned.
PostPosted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 1:00 pm


Haha, who would've thought I'd find Pink and Lunar here? xD *Waves*

Has anyone thought about the conflict Aerith and Sephiroth would have? I find it absolutely thrilling! Love without conflict is no love at all, but an easy street! Conflict makes a story worth while. n.n

Anyway, you do know that when Seph was going through his mental-state of madness that he wanted to save the Cetra? I mean, wouldn't it be possible to assume that he killed Aerith because she was foiling his plans AND she wouldn't join him? Think about it for a minute... It's the kind of "If I can't have you, no one can" thing.

I, personally, love it.

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Twindream

PostPosted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:37 pm


*Gasp* I never thought of that! Man....that makes a shiver run down my spine! heart That IS thrilling! eek Whoa....it's like a light hit me.....okay, I'm officially a fan of SephxAer now too. biggrin
PostPosted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:56 pm


Yeeees...! I want to write a fanfiction on that, if I ever get around to it. I'm so lazy about these things. ^ ^;

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tetrasmaster

PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 2:06 pm


User ImageHii! *waves at Sakuya*

Well, what I often like to think, is that while Sephiroth is in the lifestream, he returns to his stern and sweet-but-not-but-still-shows-that-he-cares-through-actions self. Like, how he was in the past, before he snapped.
I think sane SephyXAeris would be very cute. :]

But, about killing Aeris as for that other reason you mentioned, hey that's kind of a neat idea. XD
PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 3:04 pm


Yeah! I got a wave!!! n.n *Ish happy*

I know, it's very spiffy. ^-^ Insane SephyxAerith would be, like, being married to an abusive spouse with no way out, except through death. I mean, make him mad in any way, then he'll kill you or just plain hurt you.

Since Aerith is so strong-willed, she'd just leave him, knowing the danger, and probably stick to Cloud until she's caught alone!!! *gasp* Then-then- OH! I can't say it! I've just got a brilliant idea in my head for a chapter!!! *Squees* 4laugh

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Twindream

PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 3:41 pm


Then write!! xd Once you start it, you won't stop! Well.....for a certain range of time anyway....I'm hiatus right now for my fanfictions. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 9:56 pm


Haha! xDD

I'm debating right now whether to use first or third person... -_- I already wrote some examples of both. Would you like me to post them up here? They're only a few paragraphs.

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Twindream

PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 1:05 pm


Yeah! Please do! biggrin
PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 4:12 pm


Alrighty, then. And remember, these are just samples I've randomly written.


Third Person
Quote:
It was quiet. The wind was hushed from its gentle breathing, allowing the cold to creep in, just as the sun settled down for rest. The silence discomforted the young lady with her hair tied back in a pink ribbon, the ends poking out, similar to a bow. She was only 22, and already, her life was reaching its crisis. Her crisis was the planet's crisis, and vice versa. There was no escaping it, either way. Even if she ran away, he would find her.

Fear protruded the very recesses of her mind, causing her to fidget. Gripping the leg of her pink dress, she squeezed till her hands were pale of color.

He was here.

Footsteps stirred in the underbrush, small animals blazing past her feet. She turned around, her green eyes focused on the large shadow just up ahead. It was him. He was coming closer, disregarding the disruption of slumber he caused for the woods. The birds chirped angrily, only to be silenced the minute he passed them by.

In moments, he was standing before her. Sephiroth.


First Person
Quote:

It was quiet. The wind was hushed from its gentle breathing, allowing the cold to creep in, just as the sun settled down for rest. The silence was discomforting to me and the cold only made me shiver. It wasn't just the cold that caused a shiver to run up my spine. No, it was the thought that brought me out here in the middle of the woods. Out here after dark.

I could feel my heart pounding steadily quicker, the usual potence of salivation cutting short, cursing me with thirst. I was scared.
This particular time in my life, my 22 year life, was quickly coming to an end. I could already feel my life draining. For once, I was angry at the planet for making this decision for me. For allowing it to use me as a sacrifice for its own benefit. How selfish could you get?

But, no, I was the selfish one for thinking such things. I quickly dispelled the thoughts from my mind. The fear and uncertainty of what he would do once he got here protruded the recesses of my mind, causing my hands to grip tightly onto my skirt till they were drained of all color.

He was here. I could feel him so vividly. That cold, dark, malevolence that was unmistakably his aura was growing stronger.

Footsteps stirred in the underbrush, causing the disruption of sleep for the tiny woodland creatures. I felt nothing for them, only focusing on the fear heading my way.

The birds chirped angrily, only to be silenced the minute he passed by. In moments, the tall and flawless shadow had transformed into a God-like man. Standing before me, only an armlength's reach away from me, was Sephiroth. My one and only fear.



Comments? Suggestions? Anyone?

Also, I just wrote the first chapter.

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Twindream

PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:33 pm


Oh my....that was so beautifully written! crying I like first person better...it portrays emotions so much more powerfully. You are an excellent writer!
PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 9:39 pm


Thank you... sweatdrop

I try my best. I'm already working on the second chapter.

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Twindream

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 10:54 pm


Awesome! biggrin I should get back to writing too...I miss it. sweatdrop
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