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Haze_Double R Don

PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 8:08 pm


Their armadas wear prada so I guess I cast out devils
ayo but them niggaz rhymes is whack they wordz is like pebbles
so get on my level dawg its ok get at me
but dont try to attack me cuz my words are like crack B
don't distract me with ya attempts to be the hottest
i said ya skillz was ok but i was jus bein moddest
not many niggaz in the game can call them self an artist
you may discard this and think nothin of it
but to me rappin like skatin easy to pop shove it
and yes i love it wouldnt trade it for the world
the rap game is the clam and i'm the pearl
ima diamond in the rough that aint been found yet
but if the light hit me right i'll show ya the sunset
PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 10:51 pm


Quote:
but if the light hit me right i'll show ya the sunset


I shed light on ignorant who think they run sets.
Because a mob of the weak is a fragile army, AKA: done sets.
I don't need an AK despite whatever they say,
because I've been known to make cats mayday in my hey day.
I'm the realest you know, whether you like it or not.
And sometimes I've got to give a reminder to those who forgot.
No need to front, I'm not one to pull a foolish stunt
just to keep an image to prove I'm not some silly runt.
I know who I am, so ******** what you heard. You must be disturbed
to find out you fall short compared to someone this superb.

Jaiden Stryker
Vice Captain


Vicious_da_Cannibal

PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 12:38 am


Jaiden Stryker
Quote:
but if the light hit me right i'll show ya the sunset


I shed light on ignorant who think they run sets.
Because a mob of the weak is a fragile army, AKA: done sets.
I don't need an AK despite whatever they say,
because I've been known to make cats mayday in my hey day.
I'm the realest you know, whether you like it or not.
And sometimes I've got to give a reminder to those who forgot.
No need to front, I'm not one to pull a foolish stunt
just to keep an image to prove I'm not some silly runt.
I know who I am, so ******** what you heard. You must be disturbed
to find out you fall short compared to someone this superb.


Hit me wit a ginseng herb and I get active like a verb
Vitamin water oughta be equipped wit my supa dupa sperm
It's useless without my juices I'm moral oral on sherm
I guess I'm movin up then, cause I'm surpassin weezy
I'm ET flyin over the moon / pleaz believe me
I bring it back like receipt/ gamin like 3 E's
lyrics on all sides like toccara's torso ya seein 3-d
Moreso my hormones proceed to be hyper
But the porno is immortal my metaphorical rikers
I'm a ryder catch me in a black lac with jai stryker
Yo my flow is throwin up/ I think I just saw the Strifer
Dat sexy mc tempts me I'm bout to wife her
She's about three years younger but i still ******** it/ give me a camera and call me the pod piper
PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 3:05 pm


Vicious_da_Cannibal
Jaiden Stryker
Quote:
but if the light hit me right i'll show ya the sunset


I shed light on ignorant who think they run sets.
Because a mob of the weak is a fragile army, AKA: done sets.
I don't need an AK despite whatever they say,
because I've been known to make cats mayday in my hey day.
I'm the realest you know, whether you like it or not.
And sometimes I've got to give a reminder to those who forgot.
No need to front, I'm not one to pull a foolish stunt
just to keep an image to prove I'm not some silly runt.
I know who I am, so ******** what you heard. You must be disturbed
to find out you fall short compared to someone this superb.


Hit me wit a ginseng herb and I get active like a verb
Vitamin water oughta be equipped wit my supa dupa sperm
It's useless without my juices I'm moral oral on sherm
I guess I'm movin up then, cause I'm surpassin weezy
I'm ET flyin over the moon / pleaz believe me
I bring it back like receipt/ gamin like 3 E's
lyrics on all sides like toccara's torso ya seein 3-d
Moreso my hormones proceed to be hyper
But the porno is immortal my metaphorical rikers
I'm a ryder catch me in a black lac with jai stryker
Yo my flow is throwin up/ I think I just saw the Strifer
Dat sexy mc tempts me I'm bout to wife her
She's about three years younger but i still ******** it/ give me a camera and call me the pod piper



Posin ain't easy, no one can do it like her
You can hug her, love her, but please don't ever strike her
Rock my emo glasses like they meant to impress
never stress home boy's mess, or miss his caress
I can find a man to do much more for less
But here I digress
schoolin these boys like it's a SAT test
Searchin for the best
Lookin at lyrical families that spawn like incest
carefully planning to deliver my next move
On the lookout for he who has nothing to prove
or lose
These dudes
just don't know how to handle
can't hang with a girl who won't light his candle
Can't be with a chick who won't give it all
all or nothing and that's why the never call
Nobody around with patience
who wants to just make me better
All they want is relations
Already graded they letters
A "B" here and a "D" there, no "A"'s in the bunch
show respect and real love for the reserved and not the raunch.


Mandarr 3.0


Vicious_da_Cannibal

PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 9:54 pm


Mandarr 3.0
Vicious_da_Cannibal
Jaiden Stryker
Quote:
but if the light hit me right i'll show ya the sunset


I shed light on ignorant who think they run sets.
Because a mob of the weak is a fragile army, AKA: done sets.
I don't need an AK despite whatever they say,
because I've been known to make cats mayday in my hey day.
I'm the realest you know, whether you like it or not.
And sometimes I've got to give a reminder to those who forgot.
No need to front, I'm not one to pull a foolish stunt
just to keep an image to prove I'm not some silly runt.
I know who I am, so ******** what you heard. You must be disturbed
to find out you fall short compared to someone this superb.


Hit me wit a ginseng herb and I get active like a verb
Vitamin water oughta be equipped wit my supa dupa sperm
It's useless without my juices I'm moral oral on sherm
I guess I'm movin up then, cause I'm surpassin weezy
I'm ET flyin over the moon / pleaz believe me
I bring it back like receipt/ gamin like 3 E's
lyrics on all sides like toccara's torso ya seein 3-d
Moreso my hormones proceed to be hyper
But the porno is immortal my metaphorical rikers
I'm a ryder catch me in a black lac with jai stryker
Yo my flow is throwin up/ I think I just saw the Strifer
Dat sexy mc tempts me I'm bout to wife her
She's about three years younger but i still ******** it/ give me a camera and call me the pod piper



Posin ain't easy, no one can do it like her
You can hug her, love her, but please don't ever strike her
Rock my emo glasses like they meant to impress
never stress home boy's mess, or miss his caress
I can find a man to do much more for less
But here I digress
schoolin these boys like it's a SAT test
Searchin for the best
Lookin at lyrical families that spawn like incest
carefully planning to deliver my next move
On the lookout for he who has nothing to prove
or lose
These dudes
just don't know how to handle
can't hang with a girl who won't light his candle
Can't be with a chick who won't give it all
all or nothing and that's why the never call
Nobody around with patience
who wants to just make me better
All they want is relations
Already graded they letters
A "B" here and a "D" there, no "A"'s in the bunch
show respect and real love for the reserved and not the raunch.



i give it to ya raw like a monday night launch
when i smack it down you know it's gonna be explicit
the sinister cynicscissors turns boulders into biscuits
wit lyrics so sadistic / i got ya scrotum when i twist it
now bend ova backwards left hand green circle
i'll stab ya appendix and make ya slpeen hurt you
poisonous acids make my fascist tactics shine like facets
but sharp and savage the caltrop kid stickin nails in ya caskit
No ressurection / I halt tops kid like a pair of d's rackin
to my recollection scoreland is one click way in cyber miles
assholes are just one d**k away from catchin my fiber styles
i'd s**t on em but i'ma spare like a quarter to a begga
and disown em cant hear em nor see em like ms. helen keller
PostPosted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 12:59 am


Vicious_da_Cannibal
Mandarr 3.0
Vicious_da_Cannibal
Jaiden Stryker
Quote:
but if the light hit me right i'll show ya the sunset


I shed light on ignorant who think they run sets.
Because a mob of the weak is a fragile army, AKA: done sets.
I don't need an AK despite whatever they say,
because I've been known to make cats mayday in my hey day.
I'm the realest you know, whether you like it or not.
And sometimes I've got to give a reminder to those who forgot.
No need to front, I'm not one to pull a foolish stunt
just to keep an image to prove I'm not some silly runt.
I know who I am, so ******** what you heard. You must be disturbed
to find out you fall short compared to someone this superb.


Hit me wit a ginseng herb and I get active like a verb
Vitamin water oughta be equipped wit my supa dupa sperm
It's useless without my juices I'm moral oral on sherm
I guess I'm movin up then, cause I'm surpassin weezy
I'm ET flyin over the moon / pleaz believe me
I bring it back like receipt/ gamin like 3 E's
lyrics on all sides like toccara's torso ya seein 3-d
Moreso my hormones proceed to be hyper
But the porno is immortal my metaphorical rikers
I'm a ryder catch me in a black lac with jai stryker
Yo my flow is throwin up/ I think I just saw the Strifer
Dat sexy mc tempts me I'm bout to wife her
She's about three years younger but i still ******** it/ give me a camera and call me the pod piper



Posin ain't easy, no one can do it like her
You can hug her, love her, but please don't ever strike her
Rock my emo glasses like they meant to impress
never stress home boy's mess, or miss his caress
I can find a man to do much more for less
But here I digress
schoolin these boys like it's a SAT test
Searchin for the best
Lookin at lyrical families that spawn like incest
carefully planning to deliver my next move
On the lookout for he who has nothing to prove
or lose
These dudes
just don't know how to handle
can't hang with a girl who won't light his candle
Can't be with a chick who won't give it all
all or nothing and that's why the never call
Nobody around with patience
who wants to just make me better
All they want is relations
Already graded they letters
A "B" here and a "D" there, no "A"'s in the bunch
show respect and real love for the reserved and not the raunch.



i give it to ya raw like a monday night launch
when i smack it down you know it's gonna be explicit
the sinister cynicscissors turns boulders into biscuits
wit lyrics so sadistic / i got ya scrotum when i twist it
now bend ova backwards left hand green circle
i'll stab ya appendix and make ya slpeen hurt you
poisonous acids make my fascist tactics shine like facets
but sharp and savage the caltrop kid stickin nails in ya caskit
No ressurection / I halt tops kid like a pair of d's rackin
to my recollection scoreland is one click way in cyber miles
assholes are just one d**k away from catchin my fiber styles
i'd s**t on em but i'ma spare like a quarter to a begga
and disown em cant hear em nor see em like ms. helen keller


my fist are a dynamic duo like Penn & Teller.
so you know they'll have ya world spinnin like a coptor propeller.
i'm a jack n the box. twist me too many times, you'll hear a crackle
just as I snap and pop yo a** like a defensive tackle.
i don't spit raps, but the game itself. and ya'll on my playing field.
trying to cheat me will have you missing peices like Holyfield.
rip you to kibbles-n'-bits like Baraka nibblin'-tits.
where's my ritilin-fix!? i'm bout to start sicklelin' hicks!
no no! i'm calm now. got the flame under control.
no need to have the cops do yet ANOTHER patrol.
honest! i'ma good boy, just trying to burry my bone.
was that a dirty joke!? aww damn, just leave me alone
so i can atone for doing more sins than Al Capone.
even though it's hard, seeing that i was born just ta PWN!

Phoenix Fist


Mandarr 3.0

PostPosted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 9:32 am


Phoenix Fist
Vicious_da_Cannibal
Mandarr 3.0
Vicious_da_Cannibal
Jaiden Stryker
Quote:
but if the light hit me right i'll show ya the sunset


I shed light on ignorant who think they run sets.
Because a mob of the weak is a fragile army, AKA: done sets.
I don't need an AK despite whatever they say,
because I've been known to make cats mayday in my hey day.
I'm the realest you know, whether you like it or not.
And sometimes I've got to give a reminder to those who forgot.
No need to front, I'm not one to pull a foolish stunt
just to keep an image to prove I'm not some silly runt.
I know who I am, so ******** what you heard. You must be disturbed
to find out you fall short compared to someone this superb.


Hit me wit a ginseng herb and I get active like a verb
Vitamin water oughta be equipped wit my supa dupa sperm
It's useless without my juices I'm moral oral on sherm
I guess I'm movin up then, cause I'm surpassin weezy
I'm ET flyin over the moon / pleaz believe me
I bring it back like receipt/ gamin like 3 E's
lyrics on all sides like toccara's torso ya seein 3-d
Moreso my hormones proceed to be hyper
But the porno is immortal my metaphorical rikers
I'm a ryder catch me in a black lac with jai stryker
Yo my flow is throwin up/ I think I just saw the Strifer
Dat sexy mc tempts me I'm bout to wife her
She's about three years younger but i still ******** it/ give me a camera and call me the pod piper



Posin ain't easy, no one can do it like her
You can hug her, love her, but please don't ever strike her
Rock my emo glasses like they meant to impress
never stress home boy's mess, or miss his caress
I can find a man to do much more for less
But here I digress
schoolin these boys like it's a SAT test
Searchin for the best
Lookin at lyrical families that spawn like incest
carefully planning to deliver my next move
On the lookout for he who has nothing to prove
or lose
These dudes
just don't know how to handle
can't hang with a girl who won't light his candle
Can't be with a chick who won't give it all
all or nothing and that's why the never call
Nobody around with patience
who wants to just make me better
All they want is relations
Already graded they letters
A "B" here and a "D" there, no "A"'s in the bunch
show respect and real love for the reserved and not the raunch.



i give it to ya raw like a monday night launch
when i smack it down you know it's gonna be explicit
the sinister cynicscissors turns boulders into biscuits
wit lyrics so sadistic / i got ya scrotum when i twist it
now bend ova backwards left hand green circle
i'll stab ya appendix and make ya slpeen hurt you
poisonous acids make my fascist tactics shine like facets
but sharp and savage the caltrop kid stickin nails in ya caskit
No ressurection / I halt tops kid like a pair of d's rackin
to my recollection scoreland is one click way in cyber miles
assholes are just one d**k away from catchin my fiber styles
i'd s**t on em but i'ma spare like a quarter to a begga
and disown em cant hear em nor see em like ms. helen keller


my fist are a dynamic duo like Penn & Teller.
so you know they'll have ya world spinnin like a coptor propeller.
i'm a jack n the box. twist me too many times, you'll hear a crackle
just as I snap and pop yo a** like a defensive tackle.
i don't spit raps, but the game itself. and ya'll on my playing field.
trying to cheat me will have you missing peices like Holyfield.
rip you to kibbles-n'-bits like Baraka nibblin'-tits.
where's my ritilin-fix!? i'm bout to start sicklelin' hicks!
no no! i'm calm now. got the flame under control.
no need to have the cops do yet ANOTHER patrol.
honest! i'ma good boy, just trying to burry my bone.
was that a dirty joke!? aww damn, just leave me alone
so i can atone for doing more sins than Al Capone.
even though it's hard, seeing that i was born just ta PWN!


You wrong
for that, boy You shoulda known
I'm not gonna fight but disrespect I won't condone
for that but lets not start it like this
we're all cool to the group no need to hit and miss
this diss
is just not how I had planned it to be
this kiss
just ain't the way you said it would be,
should be, no sparks were a flyin
no props for lyin and no props for tryin
just drop it all and keep your sorry excuses
stay away from real women, to them you're just useless
call truces
like nations in WWII
diggin up old bones, just do it the way you do
I knew as we grew this generation's clue
was clue-less,
full of distress
and much mess
this is just what I guess.
Let's keep it on the real
I won't tell you what I'm doin but I'll tell you how I feel
keep me sane and keep it truethful.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 11:47 pm


Mandarr 3.0

Let's keep it on the real
I won't tell you what I'm doin but I'll tell you how I feel
keep me sane and keep it truthful.


Oh word?

So I'll produce a plan to maintain truth and sanity
tryna lose my vanity of flossin this proof of mastery
Forgive the arrogance but its so apparent that
You think my words are crack,but in fact, my flow is heroin
Other rappers hear my words and develop a real fear of em
If I got you lost, allow me to make it clearer then.....

Many make it to top but never does their power last
The fame'll sour fast like a 1/4 of a hour glass
Then theres a few like me way ahead the game
Never fall from the top always steadily reign
With a focused mind capacity tryin to rhyme a rhapsody
Design a hot line to ignite the cypher after me

Syllvurr


Mandarr 3.0

PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 7:15 am


Syllvurr
Mandarr 3.0

Let's keep it on the real
I won't tell you what I'm doin but I'll tell you how I feel
keep me sane and keep it truthful.


Oh word?

So I'll produce a plan to maintain truth and sanity
tryna lose my vanity of flossin this proof of mastery
Forgive the arrogance but its so apparent that
You think my words are crack,but in fact, my flow is heroin
Other rappers hear my words and develop a real fear of em
If I got you lost, allow me to make it clearer then.....

Many make it to top but never does their power last
The fame'll sour fast like a 1/4 of a hour glass
Then theres a few like me way ahead the game
Never fall from the top always steadily reign
With a focused mind capacity tryin to rhyme a rhapsody
Design a hot line to ignite the cypher after me


If you see me smile, excuse me for my laughter B
I've heard your story before, it's def. not a masterpeice
We'll see how far you make it in this world as a rapper unoticed
Too many lean on a career where a big ego gets more bloated
When half of them don't even know the rules of the game
All they lookin for is the cars, the jewels and the fame
Little boys grow up with big dreams of spittin rhymes like Biggie
It wouldn't be a problem if they didn't spit rhymes worse than 50
Show me a lyrical monsoon or typhoon of the realest s**t
spit it to me raw and bleedin and it's a big hit
I don't wanna hear how you have a new wave to bring into an old mix
Let me listen to this new sound and just stop talkin about it
Don't tell me something that a million times I've heard before
Bring me something new that won't be played out, burnt out or ignored.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 11:22 am


Mandarr 3.0
Syllvurr
Mandarr 3.0

Let's keep it on the real
I won't tell you what I'm doin but I'll tell you how I feel
keep me sane and keep it truthful.


Oh word?

So I'll produce a plan to maintain truth and sanity
tryna lose my vanity of flossin this proof of mastery
Forgive the arrogance but its so apparent that
You think my words are crack,but in fact, my flow is heroin
Other rappers hear my words and develop a real fear of em
If I got you lost, allow me to make it clearer then.....

Many make it to top but never does their power last
The fame'll sour fast like a 1/4 of a hour glass
Then theres a few like me way ahead the game
Never fall from the top always steadily reign
With a focused mind capacity tryin to rhyme a rhapsody
Design a hot line to ignite the cypher after me


If you see me smile, excuse me for my laughter B
I've heard your story before, it's def. not a masterpeice
We'll see how far you make it in this world as a rapper unoticed
Too many lean on a career where a big ego gets more bloated
When half of them don't even know the rules of the game
All they lookin for is the cars, the jewels and the fame
Little boys grow up with big dreams of spittin rhymes like Biggie
It wouldn't be a problem if they didn't spit rhymes worse than 50
Show me a lyrical monsoon or typhoon of the realest s**t
spit it to me raw and bleedin and it's a big hit
I don't wanna hear how you have a new wave to bring into an old mix
Let me listen to this new sound and just stop talkin about it
Don't tell me something that a million times I've heard before
Bring me something new that won't be played out, burnt out or ignored.


LoL, Silver, you cant respond to this, you're the peacekeeper right rofl

jceaz


Mandarr 3.0

PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 2:45 pm


jceaz
Mandarr 3.0
Syllvurr
Mandarr 3.0

Let's keep it on the real
I won't tell you what I'm doin but I'll tell you how I feel
keep me sane and keep it truthful.


Oh word?

So I'll produce a plan to maintain truth and sanity
tryna lose my vanity of flossin this proof of mastery
Forgive the arrogance but its so apparent that
You think my words are crack,but in fact, my flow is heroin
Other rappers hear my words and develop a real fear of em
If I got you lost, allow me to make it clearer then.....

Many make it to top but never does their power last
The fame'll sour fast like a 1/4 of a hour glass
Then theres a few like me way ahead the game
Never fall from the top always steadily reign
With a focused mind capacity tryin to rhyme a rhapsody
Design a hot line to ignite the cypher after me


If you see me smile, excuse me for my laughter B
I've heard your story before, it's def. not a masterpeice
We'll see how far you make it in this world as a rapper unoticed
Too many lean on a career where a big ego gets more bloated
When half of them don't even know the rules of the game
All they lookin for is the cars, the jewels and the fame
Little boys grow up with big dreams of spittin rhymes like Biggie
It wouldn't be a problem if they didn't spit rhymes worse than 50
Show me a lyrical monsoon or typhoon of the realest s**t
spit it to me raw and bleedin and it's a big hit
I don't wanna hear how you have a new wave to bring into an old mix
Let me listen to this new sound and just stop talkin about it
Don't tell me something that a million times I've heard before
Bring me something new that won't be played out, burnt out or ignored.


LoL, Silver, you cant respond to this, you're the peacekeeper right rofl


I'm not trying to start any kind of battle, I'm just telling him that that rhyme he came up with touches on a lot of others I've heard before, and I'd like to see him do better. I wanna see what his best looks like. That last was unoriginal.

Constructive Criticism.

Not a diss.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 10:59 pm


Mandarr 3.0
jceaz
Mandarr 3.0
Syllvurr
Mandarr 3.0

Let's keep it on the real
I won't tell you what I'm doin but I'll tell you how I feel
keep me sane and keep it truthful.


Oh word?

So I'll produce a plan to maintain truth and sanity
tryna lose my vanity of flossin this proof of mastery
Forgive the arrogance but its so apparent that
You think my words are crack,but in fact, my flow is heroin
Other rappers hear my words and develop a real fear of em
If I got you lost, allow me to make it clearer then.....

Many make it to top but never does their power last
The fame'll sour fast like a 1/4 of a hour glass
Then theres a few like me way ahead the game
Never fall from the top always steadily reign
With a focused mind capacity tryin to rhyme a rhapsody
Design a hot line to ignite the cypher after me


If you see me smile, excuse me for my laughter B
I've heard your story before, it's def. not a masterpeice
We'll see how far you make it in this world as a rapper unoticed
Too many lean on a career where a big ego gets more bloated
When half of them don't even know the rules of the game
All they lookin for is the cars, the jewels and the fame
Little boys grow up with big dreams of spittin rhymes like Biggie
It wouldn't be a problem if they didn't spit rhymes worse than 50
Show me a lyrical monsoon or typhoon of the realest s**t
spit it to me raw and bleedin and it's a big hit
I don't wanna hear how you have a new wave to bring into an old mix
Let me listen to this new sound and just stop talkin about it
Don't tell me something that a million times I've heard before
Bring me something new that won't be played out, burnt out or ignored.


LoL, Silver, you cant respond to this, you're the peacekeeper right rofl


I'm not trying to start any kind of battle, I'm just telling him that that rhyme he came up with touches on a lot of others I've heard before, and I'd like to see him do better. I wanna see what his best looks like. That last was unoriginal.

Constructive Criticism.

Not a diss.


Oh s**t, she said

"Step ya game up *****, you wack as rofl

jceaz


Mandarr 3.0

PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2007 4:02 pm


jceaz
Mandarr 3.0
jceaz
Mandarr 3.0
Syllvurr
Mandarr 3.0

Let's keep it on the real
I won't tell you what I'm doin but I'll tell you how I feel
keep me sane and keep it truthful.


Oh word?

So I'll produce a plan to maintain truth and sanity
tryna lose my vanity of flossin this proof of mastery
Forgive the arrogance but its so apparent that
You think my words are crack,but in fact, my flow is heroin
Other rappers hear my words and develop a real fear of em
If I got you lost, allow me to make it clearer then.....

Many make it to top but never does their power last
The fame'll sour fast like a 1/4 of a hour glass
Then theres a few like me way ahead the game
Never fall from the top always steadily reign
With a focused mind capacity tryin to rhyme a rhapsody
Design a hot line to ignite the cypher after me


If you see me smile, excuse me for my laughter B
I've heard your story before, it's def. not a masterpeice
We'll see how far you make it in this world as a rapper unoticed
Too many lean on a career where a big ego gets more bloated
When half of them don't even know the rules of the game
All they lookin for is the cars, the jewels and the fame
Little boys grow up with big dreams of spittin rhymes like Biggie
It wouldn't be a problem if they didn't spit rhymes worse than 50
Show me a lyrical monsoon or typhoon of the realest s**t
spit it to me raw and bleedin and it's a big hit
I don't wanna hear how you have a new wave to bring into an old mix
Let me listen to this new sound and just stop talkin about it
Don't tell me something that a million times I've heard before
Bring me something new that won't be played out, burnt out or ignored.


LoL, Silver, you cant respond to this, you're the peacekeeper right rofl


I'm not trying to start any kind of battle, I'm just telling him that that rhyme he came up with touches on a lot of others I've heard before, and I'd like to see him do better. I wanna see what his best looks like. That last was unoriginal.

Constructive Criticism.

Not a diss.


Oh s**t, she said

"Step ya game up *****, you wack as rofl


Man.

You just WANT to see something happen here, don't you?
PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2007 5:53 pm


Mandarr 3.0
Syllvurr
Mandarr 3.0

Let's keep it on the real
I won't tell you what I'm doin but I'll tell you how I feel
keep me sane and keep it truthful.


Oh word?

So I'll produce a plan to maintain truth and sanity
tryna lose my vanity of flossin this proof of mastery
Forgive the arrogance but its so apparent that
You think my words are crack,but in fact, my flow is heroin
Other rappers hear my words and develop a real fear of em
If I got you lost, allow me to make it clearer then.....

Many make it to top but never does their power last
The fame'll sour fast like a 1/4 of a hour glass
Then theres a few like me way ahead the game
Never fall from the top always steadily reign
With a focused mind capacity tryin to rhyme a rhapsody
Design a hot line to ignite the cypher after me


If you see me smile, excuse me for my laughter B
I've heard your story before, it's def. not a masterpeice
We'll see how far you make it in this world as a rapper unoticed
Too many lean on a career where a big ego gets more bloated
When half of them don't even know the rules of the game
All they lookin for is the cars, the jewels and the fame
Little boys grow up with big dreams of spittin rhymes like Biggie
It wouldn't be a problem if they didn't spit rhymes worse than 50
Show me a lyrical monsoon or typhoon of the realest s**t
spit it to me raw and bleedin and it's a big hit
I don't wanna hear how you have a new wave to bring into an old mix
Let me listen to this new sound and just stop talkin about it
Don't tell me something that a million times I've heard before
Bring me something new that won't be played out, burnt out or ignored.


It's natural that a lyricist feels tighter than the last writers.
To hunt like a spider, and prove brighter than low-class biters.
So I'm past lighters, but an inferno that's make your soul perspire
as you realize that you're rhymes have long expired.
Easy to describe greatness before you've displayed your own.
But I've got eyes that see all, and I've x-rayed your bones,
and discovered the feebleness of your bar's interior.
With hollow insides, it seems you've only dressed the exterior.
Observe your fingers when you point. What do you see?
At LEAST three of your own pointing right back. You cannot flee
from the truth reality constantly shoves into your face.
You can blindfold yourself, but doesn't mean the truth left the place.

Jaiden Stryker
Vice Captain


Mandarr 3.0

PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2007 7:09 pm


Jaiden Stryker
Mandarr 3.0
Syllvurr
Mandarr 3.0

Let's keep it on the real
I won't tell you what I'm doin but I'll tell you how I feel
keep me sane and keep it truthful.


Oh word?

So I'll produce a plan to maintain truth and sanity
tryna lose my vanity of flossin this proof of mastery
Forgive the arrogance but its so apparent that
You think my words are crack,but in fact, my flow is heroin
Other rappers hear my words and develop a real fear of em
If I got you lost, allow me to make it clearer then.....

Many make it to top but never does their power last
The fame'll sour fast like a 1/4 of a hour glass
Then theres a few like me way ahead the game
Never fall from the top always steadily reign
With a focused mind capacity tryin to rhyme a rhapsody
Design a hot line to ignite the cypher after me


If you see me smile, excuse me for my laughter B
I've heard your story before, it's def. not a masterpeice
We'll see how far you make it in this world as a rapper unoticed
Too many lean on a career where a big ego gets more bloated
When half of them don't even know the rules of the game
All they lookin for is the cars, the jewels and the fame
Little boys grow up with big dreams of spittin rhymes like Biggie
It wouldn't be a problem if they didn't spit rhymes worse than 50
Show me a lyrical monsoon or typhoon of the realest s**t
spit it to me raw and bleedin and it's a big hit
I don't wanna hear how you have a new wave to bring into an old mix
Let me listen to this new sound and just stop talkin about it
Don't tell me something that a million times I've heard before
Bring me something new that won't be played out, burnt out or ignored.


It's natural that a lyricist feels tighter than the last writers.
To hunt like a spider, and prove brighter than low-class biters.
So I'm past lighters, but an inferno that's make your soul perspire
as you realize that you're rhymes have long expired.
Easy to describe greatness before you've displayed your own.
But I've got eyes that see all, and I've x-rayed your bones,
and discovered the feebleness of your bar's interior.
With hollow insides, it seems you've only dressed the exterior.
Observe your fingers when you point. What do you see?
At LEAST three of your own pointing right back. You cannot flee
from the truth reality constantly shoves into your face.
You can blindfold yourself, but doesn't mean the truth left the place.


You can't/ blame a critique,
I'm not/ aimin to please
I'm just/ tryin'a be me
so just/ watch and you'll see
I'm not hidin my soul from these eyes who seek so desperately
what you see is what you get 'cause the surface reflects within me
I know my lines ain't as bright or as right as the ones who came before
I know I can't bring new things to those already inside of the door
I just want to help out those who have already realized their goal
I don't wanna see none suffer when they don't properly play they're role
If I had said it in plain english instead of rhymin like I been taught to
It wouldn't have even been nothing so please don't make it into

((That one was so weak...))
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