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 Posted: Mon Feb 06, 2017 7:08 am
Living Eternally The-Misunderstood-Vampire Don't forget to fill in their Affinities and Magics! They can't be judged until that point. All done love. heart
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Posted: Tue Feb 07, 2017 1:11 am
The-Misunderstood-Vampire Thanks for the submissions! There are just a couple things I'd like to address with them~
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-If you could please make the images right aligned as they are in the skeleton. That'd be greatly appreciated.
-Bio: What is Denota? A kingdom? A continent? Terra is the world in which this RP takes place [, home to only six continents: Yainder [where Nevermore takes place], Zira, Hron, Roenna, Vrosen, and Handerell. If you'd like for your characters to be from any of these, that's fine, but know that they will not be accessible in the RP.
Ariel
-Spells: Healing Splash and Hydra Phantom don't feel like illusion spells to me. Both fall more under the School of Conjuration rather than the School of Illusion. My suggestion to remedy this without changing everything around too much is to have her major in Conjuration and minor in Illusion. That way, there won't be much changing required to her spells.
Tenchi
-Spells: Sharp Gust, I think would be more appropriately ranked at C for a mid-level spell. It has both conventional uses and combat uses that make it above a D, I think.
That's all I see. Unless the Vice Captain, Rengato, thinks of anything, that should be it^^
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Posted: Tue Feb 07, 2017 4:32 am
Username: the-misunderstood-vampire
Name: Tenchi Yukio
Nickname: Demon of Denota
Race: Vampire
Ethnicity: Causation
Gender: Male
Orientation: Straight
Alignment: Neutral... He cares little about anything.
Affinity: Air
Age: 570
Birthday: March 17th, 1584
Height: 5'4"
Weapon:
Magic: School of Evocation
Stinging Wind: He compresses the air around him into 20 dense projectiles. They can be easily dodged for they do not hone in on targets. It doesn't cost extra energy to keep them around. So he doesn't have to use them immediately. He is unable to use any other magic while there are projectiles active and is a bit slower because to must focus on keeping them solidified.
Posts- 2-5
Energy- 20%
Damage- 5-15%
Rank- C+
Sharp Gust: Tenchi waves his hand, sending a fast sharp wave able to cut through trees. The larger the wave, the more energy it uses. The range is maxed out at 30 ft before vanishing into nothing more then a strong gust of wind
Posts- 1
Energy- 5-25%
Damage- 20%
Rank- C+
Sharp Wind: Tenchi forms a sharp dense blade of air in his hand. He can form it no bigger then a typical katana. He is unable to use any other magic ability while this is active.
Posts- 1-5
Energy- 10% per post
Damage- 1%-15%
Rank- B-
Relationships:
❖ Twin brother to Ariel Yukio
Strengths:
✔ Wise judgment
✔ Calm head
✔ Observant
✔ Gains energy and health when he feeds.
Weaknesses:
✘ Easily trusts
✘ Fire
✘ Light
Likes:
✔ Rainy days
✔ Fresh blood of a supernatural being
✔ Chocolate
✔ His Sister
✔ Reading
✔ Classic music
✔ Sleeping
Dislikes:
✘ The sun
✘ Fire
✘ People looking for a fight. (typical douche bags)
✘ People threatening his sister
Personality:
❖ Tenchi is a kind-hearted soul. Hes usually quiet and keeps to himself. He rarely makes friends and socializes but hes loyal to those he does associate with. Once he gets cozy and use to someone, He opens up, showing his sarcastic playful side.
History:
❖ Back in the far land of Zira, a kingdom called Denota, he was born into nobility with his twin sister, Ariel. As the son and daughter of the clan leader, their childhood was pretty easy going to say the lest. Their early years were full of laughter and peace.
Once the war with a demon clan came to their kingdom, he was a young adult at that point. In love with the idea of fighting, he tossed his nobility aside and joined in to protect the kingdom. Tenchi soon learned he was a natural at killing. He would often loose himself in the fight, letting the vampire instincts fully take over. He blurred the lines between an animal and a soldier. Often times, going out on his own and attempting to take down enemy bases. He was feared by demons and fellow vampires alike, earning the title Demon of Denota.
Soon after the war, he settled down and looked back at how he was. Over the course of a few years, he came to hate the title he earned. It was more of a burden then a name. With that and the new king he didn't like, he chose to leave the clan in search of his sister. Soon after he left, the clan collapsed, falling into a civil war that broke the bonds that kept the kingdom together.
This was around the time he found his sister. The news of the clan didn't seem to faze her. He was glad. Tenchi loved his sister and wished not to be the bearer of bad news for her. Now shes the only person he holds dear. The only family he has and with her, he set out to find a new place to call home.
Outfits:
❖ Casual #1
❖ Casual #2
Items:
❖ Single Katana on his left hip
❖ 2 small vial of emergency blood (+25 energy & health when used)
Other:
❖ Family crest on the back of his left hand.
Themes:
❖ Main Theme: Spice and wolf s1 opening
❖ Battle Theme: Tower for a Requrium - Escala
❖ Emotional Theme: Dark Night- Philip Weasly
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Posted: Tue Feb 07, 2017 4:36 am
Username: the-misunderstood-vampire
Name: Ariel Yukio
Nickname: Raven
Race: Vampire
Ethnicity: Causation
Gender: Female
Orientation: Bisexual
Alignment: neutral evil.. looks out for her self.
Affinity: Water
Age: 570
Birthday: March 17th, 1584
Height: 5'4"
Weapon:
Magic: School of Conjuration and School of Illusion
Invisibility: She uses the humidity to bent the light around her, allowing her to become invisible to the normal eye. This ability has no effect on her scent, sound or presence. Obviously it cant be used if shes not around any water or in dry air.
Posts- 1-5
Energy- 5 per post
Damage- N/A
Rank- C-
Healing Splash: Pulling water forma larger source (lake, pond, etc), shes able to coat a small minor injury in a thin coat of water. This water is infused with magic properties and will heal a wound in a matter of minutes with the help of the vampire's healing properties. She can only use this ability 2 times a day due to the amount of focus it takes. while this is active, she is unable to use any other magic abilities.
Posts- 3-6
Energy- 50%
Damage- N/A
Rank- D+
Hydra Phantom: Requires a large body of water ( lake, pond, etc). She pulls together water to form a hydra shape. From this point, the hydra will move off of Ariel's thoughts for commands. The hydra will also protect her without being told to do so. once formed, the hydra can detach from the water source and travel along with Ariel. This uses more energy. If the hydra is destroyed, Ariel is able to pull it back together but this requires for her to use the cast amount of energy and the hydra is half the size do to the ground/ environment soaking up the water.
Posts- 5
Energy- 25% to cast 15% to detach
Damage- 25%-30%
Rank- B+
Relationships:
❖ Twin sister to Tenchi Yukio
Strengths:
✔Quick thinking
✔ Good judgment
✔ Observant
✔ Gains energy and health when she feeds.
Weaknesses:
✘ Short fused
✘ Cocky/ Underestimates
✘ Low stamina
Likes:
✔ Rainy days
✔ Fresh blood of a supernatural being
✔ Chocolate
✔ Her brother
Dislikes:
✘ The sun
✘ Fire
✘ People making a fool of her
✘ People threatening her brother
Personality:
❖ Ariel is cold hearted. shes extremely smart and tactical. Manipulative and quiet. On the inside, she's a little cry baby and a spoiled brat but rarely shows it. She's blunt and wont hesitate to be honest. Even if it hurts your feelings.
To put it short, shes a b***h ^^
History:
❖ Her and her twin brother, Tenchi, were born into the powerful Yukio clan. A clan formally called Denota. There, they grew and lived an amazing childhood. A childhood of nobility. The clan was in a far off continent of Zira. One that was scared from thousands of years worth of war and death. For most of their childhood, they lived in peace. Their clan have been at war against a rival Demon clan for more then just bragging rights.
Excited at this new concept, Ariel and Tenchi joined the ranks. While Tenchi took the noble knight rout, Ariel became an assassin and a damn good one. Wielding 2 black daggers, she would slip through any defense, any fort, any kingdom and vanish, leaving VIPs and other enemy nobles dead.
After the war, she left the clan on her own will. She was considered an adult now and didn't care for the politics to take the throne next. Being the daughter of the Clan leader, she was in the running but she rather become a contract assassin. She loved it too much.
A couple hundred years or so will pass before she will hear about the fall of the Yukio clan from Tenchi. He fled, years before the fall. He saw the revolt coming and saw't to find his sister. All she was told was that the new king was apparently hated and was over taken by a rebel group.
Secretly, she missed her brother dearly. He was the only family she cared for and tolerated. Even from their childhood, they did everything together. It was hard for her to leave the Clan without him. But now they were rejoined at last and seek a new place to possibly call home.
Outfits:
❖ Assassin outfit
❖ Casual #1
❖ Casual #2
Items:
❖ Dual black daggers.
❖ 3 Small vials of emergency blood. (+25 Energy & Health boost when used)
Other:
❖ Family crest on her back.
Themes:
❖ Main Theme: Pale- Within Temptation
❖ Battle Theme: Last Ride of the Day
❖ Emotional Theme: The Fighter- In This Moment
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Posted: Tue Feb 07, 2017 6:21 am
Living Eternally The-Misunderstood-Vampire Thanks for the submissions! There are just a couple things I'd like to address with them~
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-If you could please make the images right aligned as they are in the skeleton. That'd be greatly appreciated.
-Bio: What is Denota? A kingdom? A continent? Terra is the world in which this RP takes place [, home to only six continents: Yainder [where Nevermore takes place], Zira, Hron, Roenna, Vrosen, and Handerell. If you'd like for your characters to be from any of these, that's fine, but know that they will not be accessible in the RP.
Ariel
-Spells: Healing Splash and Hydra Phantom don't feel like illusion spells to me. Both fall more under the School of Conjuration rather than the School of Illusion. My suggestion to remedy this without changing everything around too much is to have her major in Conjuration and minor in Illusion. That way, there won't be much changing required to her spells.
Tenchi
-Spells: Sharp Gust, I think would be more appropriately ranked at C for a mid-level spell. It has both conventional uses and combat uses that make it above a D, I think.
That's all I see. Unless the Vice Captain, Rengato, thinks of anything, that should be it^^ Oh my. You can blame my brother for Tenchi.. i had nothing to do with him ^^. but we fixed them both. i apologize for the "Denota" thing. we basically use the same bio and background info for our characters for every RPing guild we are in. it was just habit ^^
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Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2017 6:01 pm
The-Misunderstood-Vampire Oh my. You can blame my brother for Tenchi.. i had nothing to do with him ^^. but we fixed them both. i apologize for the "Denota" thing. we basically use the same bio and background info for our characters for every RPing guild we are in. it was just habit ^^ Both are fine, meow^w^
Accepted! Thank you for the submissions! Feel free to create your character thread and begin posting!
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2017 5:35 pm
Hey, lady!
One quick thing, is all for Nashta: she seems... a tad bit more resilient than one would be without being buffed by a mage. I'd either turn down the OP when it comes to her regeneration or wait on something like until your Knight makes a contract with a Mage. Perhaps that'd be a little more feasible with mana~
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2017 6:19 pm
Living Eternally Hey, lady!
One quick thing, is all for Nashta: she seems... a tad bit more resilient than one would be without being buffed by a mage. I'd either turn down the OP when it comes to her regeneration or wait on something like until your Knight makes a contract with a Mage. Perhaps that'd be a little more feasible with mana~
Just kidding, Cap! How 'bout I make it mana-dependent and nerf it a little bit when the time comes? 3nodding For now, she'll just be slightly-less effected by physical damage (not to the point where it warrants an ability) while still highly-susceptible to mana. Sound cool?
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2017 7:16 pm
Johto Crisp Whaaaat?! Laaaaaaame!
Just kidding, Cap! How 'bout I make it mana-dependent and nerf it a little bit when the time comes? 3nodding For now, she'll just be slightly-less effected by physical damage (not to the point where it warrants an ability) while still highly-susceptible to mana. Sound cool?
heart Super-cool^~^ Accepted once you've done that!
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2017 7:12 pm
Username: fireshadow0908
Name: Takuya Nakamura
Nickname: N/A
Race: Half Elf
Ethnicity: Caucasian
Gender: Male
Orientation: Heterosexual
Alignment: Neutral Good
Affinity: Spirit/Fire
Age: 20
Birthday: June 4
Height: 5'10"
Weapon: Sword along with a dagger
Mage: TBD
Natural Abilities: (Name and Rank)
❖ True Sight - Takuya has the ability to sense the life force/mana of creatures within a fifty meter radius around him. He's able to distinguish the alignment and affinity of a person. It does drain a lot of energy if used for long periods of time though C+ Rank
❖ Pyrokinesis - Has the ability to create fire and manipulate it to his will. It doesn't take much concentration to actually use the ability, although this is when the fire is at it's weakest. The more concentration that is put into this, the hotter the fire is. That being said, the more powerful the flame the more energy that is drained from him. The fire can also burn him if it gets too intense for him. B- Rank
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Magus Abilities: (Name and Rank)
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Unison Abilities: (Include Description and Rank)
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Relationships:
❖ Lilian Lockwood - Grandmother
❖ Aria Nakamura - Sister {Former Magus/Deceased}
❖ Luna Nakamura - Mother {Former Magus/Deceased}
❖ Takashi Nakamura - Father {Deceased}
Strengths:
✔ Agility - Takuya is naturally faster due to his heritage and physique. He favors speed or strength to dodge, attack, or move around the battle field to keep an opponent off balance
✔ Culinary Arts - Although not show at first, the young knight enjoys making delicious meals to keep him fed, which especially helps when on the road
✔ Intelligence/Strategical - Takuya is a fairly smart individual, although no genius, but he does love to use his intellect in a battle of wits, or actual combat by employing different strategies
✔ Combat Prowess - Because of his line of work, the young man is skilled in several areas of combat. Mainly focused on blade and hand to hand combat. He knows how to use ranged weapons, but doesn't prefer to use them.
✔ Strong Willed - Strong spirited, he's not one to give into or give up things easily. If anything he'll push forward regardless of how bleak it looks as if he's trying to prove something.
Weaknesses:
✘ Raw Strength - Although he isn't considered weak, he doesn't focus on raw strength. In other words a powerhouse would be able to break through with their power ignoring any attempts for him to normally block attacks
✘ Long Range Combat - Takuya doesn't have much defense to long range attacks save for trying to close the distance and attempting to dodge
✘ Stubbornness - The downside to his strong will is that it can lead to a stubborn side. This could put potentially him in life threatening danger if he's not too careful
✘ Flavorful meals - Takuya is a huge sucker for a delicious meal made by someone other than himself to the point that he would forgive most things within reason. If anything he takes on a more childish personality as he enjoys his food.
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Likes:
✔ Starry Nights
✔ Training
✔ Learning New Things
✔ Reading a good book
Dislikes:
✘ Burnt Food
✘ Humid Weather
✘ Irresponsibility
✘ People being taken advantage of
Personality:
❖ Noctis can be considered a generally calm and mature young man for his age. That's not too say he doesn't enjoy having fun, which he does. He isn't one really too prone to violence, and at times can be seen as lazy for his lack of resolve to jump into a fight. He'd rather try to solve things first by talking before resulting to violence, but doesn't mind using his fist to solve a problem if needed. Noctis is generally respectful to his elders and peers for the most part. It's only if he knows the person well enough that he'll make blunt comments to them as well as little quips. If anything he enjoys teasing those that he's close to in some way or form. The young man is fiercely loyal and protective of his friends, family, and allies willingly to do anything for their safety even if it came at the risk of his own safety. A soft spot for kids is obvious if he's ever caught, and even a timid side can be seen if someone is able to get him to that point. This generally comes out due to anything involving romantic situations or a form of praise. Prone to getting into childish arguments with certain people, which even displays his stubborn side. That being said he can be blunt in giving responses not really caring for beating around the bush, especially if he feels that it'll only hinder the person for not telling the truth
In battle, he displays a more serious and calculating manner willing to not hold back if it means coming out alive. Although, that is mainly against enemies that threaten things important to him. In spars, he's more laid back, and even throwing playful insults to attempt to get the upper hand. Some have described it as a cocky side that he has, but if anything it's all thanks to his mother's teaching to get his opponent to slip up to gain an advantage. One of his bigger fears is getting lost to anger, and losing control of his emotions causing him to make more ruthless and dark decisions. Unfortunately he has experienced this. He doesn't really care for talking about his past considering it is a sensitive subject for him. This doesn't stop him from forging bonds by making new friends or getting closer to the ones he already has some form of relationship with. If anything he tries to enjoy life as much as possible.
History:
❖ Born to a human civilian father and an eleven Magus mother, Takuya was the oldest out of two children being two years older to his younger sibling. He taking after his mother in terms of appearance, yet his father's personality, while his sister did the opposite. Unfortunately, his parents died in a bandit raid at the village they were living when the boy was only seven. His mother had been gravely wounded getting her children to safety, before succumbing to her wounds. This left them in the care of his maternal grandmother Lilian. The boy would've spiraled into a dark persona, but it was thanks to his sister's bright personality and the knowing she was still alive that kept him afloat.
It was a couple of years later that changed his life when Aria decided she wanted to be a Magus like her late mother to help people. Luckily, the girl had inherited her mother's skills in terms of magic, so she was well on her way to achieving her goal with the help of Lilian. Takuya wasn't into the idea at first, but eventually gave in, and even found someone to help train him to be a Knight so he could be around to help his little sister. Things took a grim turn though when Aria contracted a terminal illness at fourteen years of age. Naturally, Takuya was shocked to his core, and was ready to leave everything behind to help take care of her, but his stubborn sister wouldn't let him. She made him promise that he would continue his training, which he reluctantly agreed on. The girl didn't live to see another year, but in his grief the boy set all his emotions and devotion in training to keep his promise. After years of harsh training and finally coming to terms with Aria's passing, he was deemed ready to hold the title Knight at the age of nineteen. The boy hasn't found a mage to be bound to yet due to the fact that the ones he met hadn't embodied the qualities he was looking for.
Outfits:
❖ Travelling/Normal
❖ Casual
Items:
❖ A scarf that had been made for him by his sister
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Other:
❖ His mother was once a Magus, and his late sister inherited those qualities from his her.
Themes:
❖ Main Theme: The Wolf And The Moon
❖ Battle Theme: Into A Dark Dawn
❖ Emotional Theme: Stand By Me (Florence + The Machine Cover)
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2017 1:32 pm
Living says that you're approved. Go ahead and make your character topic, friend.
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2017 8:39 pm
Username: Iced Espresso
Name: Ilryana Previel
Nickname: Rye
Race: Elf
Ethnicity: White
Gender: Female
Orientation: Bisexual
Alignment: Neutral
Occupation: Book Store Proprietress
Age: 24
Birthday: Early Spring
]Height: 5 feet
Relationships:
❖ Adoptive Parents - Eyre and Twinella Previel (Deceased)
Strengths:
✔ Intrapersonal Skills
✔ Cleanliness
✔ Multi-tasking
Weaknesses:
✘ Easily Irritable
✘ Gets Headaches Often
✘ Scatterbrained
Likes:
✔ Coffee
✔ Chocolate
✔ Books
✔ Singing
Dislikes:
✘ Loud noises
✘ White Suits
✘ Drunks
✘ Things Breaking
Personality:
❖ Extrovert, Intuitive, Empathetic, Perceptive, Submissive
History:
❖ Ilryana grew up in a foster household after her parents died in a shipwreck at the age of 4. She retains no memory of her parents. However it did not keep her from having a loving relationship with her elderly caretakers. She grew up feeling loved and made others around her feel full of love as well. Rye feel in love with literature in school and decided to dedicate her life to it thanks to the support from her adoptive parents. During her studies she developed a talent for growing plants. She attributes that to her elvish nature. Her adoptive parents died of old age before she was able to finish her studies. They had their home sold in their will, with all the money left to Rye. To honor them once she finished her schooling, Rye opened up a bookstore named after them, "Twyre".
Outfits:
❖ Casual
❖ Formal
Items:
❖ Tea Set
❖ Crystal Collection
Other:
❖ None
Themes:
❖ Main Theme: Take Me To Church
❖ Battle Theme: Heroics
❖ Emotional Theme: Stay With Me
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2017 10:58 pm
Username: DaMetaEX
Name: Niraya Hutsmith
Nickname: Railgun
Race: Kitsune Homunculi
Ethnicity: Caucasian
Gender: Female
Orientation: Straight, Bi-curious
Alignment: Neutral Good
Affinity: Fire
Age: 21
Birthday: July 10th
Height: 6' 2"
Weapon: Railgun (electromagnetic manipulation)
Magic: Magic school of Fire, and minor in Conjuration
❖Static charge A - Uses stored bio electricity to charge the air around her. She has lots of practice. Great for charging dead batteries, or shocking someone who is touching her. can be focused into an electric blast but drains her of energy for a few minutes.
❖Railgun C+ - Manipulate the gavitational effect on a metal object. The smaller the object the easier it is to send it to and exceeding the speed of sound. (common ammo for this skill is an iron coin) Takes a few seconds to charge enough energy to fire the coin/ammunition at that speed. She will need time to recover between shots. 8 shots is the cap she can send out before needing to rest.
❖Iron Sand blade D- - This skill manipulates ferrus metal like iron that is within sand or from pulverized iron. These tiny metal paticles act like a super abbrasive wall. Due to it being forced into a shape it will slice through most materials with ease. But requires the users full focus to maintain the shape, and to prevent self injury. It has 3 forms. Sword, Sandstorm, and wall. Sword mode can slice through an inch of steel like it was soft butter, Sandstorm whips up a sandstorm of these metal particles causing anyone caught in it be cut up by it. Wall condences the metal particles into a wall to either block and attack (fire will force them to weld together preventing them from being used by her.) or block someone's path. If her consentration is broken the iron sand will fall onto the ground but can be picked up again.
❖Overload C+ - This skill can charge up all of her skills to its full potential. but requires her to be struck by lightning. (will not use in RP unless thunderstorm is specified by another person.) If railgun was expended it will recharge it back up to 8 shots but charge time is halfed.
❖Electric heal D+ - Over time injuries are healed by the steady electricity applied to the injury. Halves natural healing time and boosts healing effects. Only works on Self.
Relationships:
❖ Dr. J.R. Williston *Deceased*
Strengths:
✔ Brave
✔ Curious
✔ Quick Recharge (from eating)
✔ Sharp Eyes (can see at night and through light cover)
Weaknesses:
✘ Scared of Lightning (when not in serious mode)
✘ Gets angered easily
✘ Curious (its both a good and bad thing)
Likes:
✔ Candy
✔ Cooked Tyrano meat
✔ A good Story
✔ Discovering new things
✔ Spa day.
Dislikes:
✘ Hates her "father"
✘ People picking on her
✘ Rainy Days
✘ People fondling her
Personality:
❖ Usually very energetic, can get a bit moody at times, But always try to enjoy the day for what it is.
History:
❖ Niraya was "born" in a lab. Test tube baby would be more accurate. Dr. J.R.Williston had created her in hopes to growing a test subject able to be used as a mold for a clone army. All of them wielding powerful magic at will.
At the age of 10 She learned of this truth when she found a clone of herself. In her fear of what she was seeing she accidently kills the clone. The Dr. had punished her for what she had done but putting her through extremly dangerious training. at the age of 18 she had enough when she had an opening she fired a full power railgun shot through the protective window and into the Dr.'s head. He died that day and she ensured no one would continue his research. She burned it all down and killed every clone she could find.
She leaves the Lab the only place she had ever known. She stumbles into the next town where she is picked up by a guild that respected Kitsunes. They treat her injuries and bring her back to good health from her week of walking from the lab. The Guild teaches her about being a mercenary to help out with various requests that come in to the guild. for the next 3 years she worked for them and gained the nickname Railgun for her signature attack, but she wanted more in her life and went on a journey to find what she was missing in her life.
Outfits:
❖ Every day outfit.
❖ Combat gear (summoned through a magic spell minus the bow)
Items:
❖ small sack of iron coins
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Other:
❖ [any other information not covered by the stuff above]
Themes:
❖ Main Theme: RWBY: This will be the day.
❖ Battle Theme: Black Tar - Xenoblade Chronicals X
❖ Emotional Theme: .hack// Aura Theme
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2017 11:21 pm
Thanks so much for the submission! Accepted!
Feel free to create your character page and begin posting, but don't forget to sign the rules first! ;3
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Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2017 9:53 am
Hey, there! Thanks for the submission!
There are just a few things I'd like to address/suggest regarding your character:
- Race: Given your character's backstory, their a homunculus, an artificially created humanoid. They can be a kitsune-based homunculus, but that's the vibe your backstory is giving off.^^;
- Affinity/School: There is no electricity Affinity or School of Magic. If you'd like to know more about schools and Affinities, please visit The Lore and World Book.
Clearly, something like this would have a lot of changes to consider afterward, but I have a suggestion where you wouldn't have to change the essence of your character's magic: take a Fire Affinity with either an Elemental School of Fire or major in Evocation and minor in Conjuration [which would be my main suggestion given your character's spells]. This way, there wouldn't be any necessary changes to your spells due to your character's Affinity/School.
-Iron Sand Blade: We'd suggest a re-wording of this spell [mostly just a mentioning of the electromagnetic fun altering, very specifically, the metal bits WITHIN sand rather than sand itself]. We understand what you mean, but if you could clear that up within the wording of the spell for those who may not, that'd be great.
That's about all I can see for now, though^w^ Let us know when you've made appropriate changes, and we'll look it over again right away! Also, don't forget to read and sign the Guild Rules!
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