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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2016 8:56 pm
Divine Entropy All is well, speaking of posting i'll prob throw vince some where just to get a lil more activity somewhere. And Leon again if marshmallow has nothing more to say lol That's up to you. I just really wish I could have posted today. I just can't get myself to focus though no matter how hard I try to. Ah well, I just hope I can focus tomorrow. I'm sure I will be fine, or I think I will but I guess we'll find out. lol
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2016 8:58 pm
xX-Abyss-Rayne-Xx Divine Entropy All is well, speaking of posting i'll prob throw vince some where just to get a lil more activity somewhere. And Leon again if marshmallow has nothing more to say lol That's up to you. I just really wish I could have posted today. I just can't get myself to focus though no matter how hard I try to. Ah well, I just hope I can focus tomorrow. I'm sure I will be fine, or I think I will but I guess we'll find out. lol I dont know if it does you any good, but often listening to video game music or songs that remind me of my character or put me in a writing mood to help me focus lol.
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Divine Entropy Vice Captain
Star-Crossed Lightbringer
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2016 9:13 pm
Divine Entropy xX-Abyss-Rayne-Xx Divine Entropy All is well, speaking of posting i'll prob throw vince some where just to get a lil more activity somewhere. And Leon again if marshmallow has nothing more to say lol That's up to you. I just really wish I could have posted today. I just can't get myself to focus though no matter how hard I try to. Ah well, I just hope I can focus tomorrow. I'm sure I will be fine, or I think I will but I guess we'll find out. lol I dont know if it does you any good, but often listening to video game music or songs that remind me of my character or put me in a writing mood to help me focus lol. Well sometimes it does help me, but I tried that this time around, and it for some reason didn't seem to help. I can always try again and see if it might work now, but I'm not really sure if it will. I may go and get some hot tea as well...Maybe that will help too.
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2016 9:17 pm
Ah, perhaps the tea will help indeed vu v
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2016 11:08 pm
Divine Entropy Ah, perhaps the tea will help indeed vu v It may have helped yes, though for now I haven't posted, I more edited Craith's post code again. I'm not sure if I like what I did with the lyrics though..hmm.
Once I am sure I am alright with his code, I will try and post again. I don't feel as unfocused anymore, so I may be able to do it. lol
Edit: The main issue there may be lies with the lyrics above his name and below his code name..Not sure how I feel about their placement.
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2016 11:35 pm
xX-Abyss-Rayne-Xx Divine Entropy Ah, perhaps the tea will help indeed vu v It may have helped yes, though for now I haven't posted, I more edited Craith's post code again. I'm not sure if I like what I did with the lyrics though..hmm.
Once I am sure I am alright with his code, I will try and post again. I don't feel as unfocused anymore, so I may be able to do it. lol
Edit: The main issue there may be lies with the lyrics above his name and below his code name..Not sure how I feel about their placement. Gosh putting lyrics on is the worst, like im not even sure I like how I did vince's but i forced my self to stop playing with it lol. But at least you're more focused now pffft- Still on that topic I accidentally wrote a novel for vince OTL
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2016 11:45 pm
Divine Entropy xX-Abyss-Rayne-Xx Divine Entropy Ah, perhaps the tea will help indeed vu v It may have helped yes, though for now I haven't posted, I more edited Craith's post code again. I'm not sure if I like what I did with the lyrics though..hmm.
Once I am sure I am alright with his code, I will try and post again. I don't feel as unfocused anymore, so I may be able to do it. lol
Edit: The main issue there may be lies with the lyrics above his name and below his code name..Not sure how I feel about their placement. Gosh putting lyrics on is the worst, like im not even sure I like how I did vince's but i forced my self to stop playing with it lol. But at least you're more focused now pffft- Still on that topic I accidentally wrote a novel for vince OTL Hey, I don't mind novels! I mean, look at most of my posts. XD And you know how my character sheets can get! And yeah, I got a notification that someone posted in one of my topics so I went to check it out, and saw the post. You pretty much chose where I was going to post as Craith XD I was either going to post there, or the bizarre. And the post is good by the way. ^^
If you wanna take a look at the post code though, this should take you to it. I think I've stared at it too long, so I don't know what to think. lol I need someone elses opinion
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2016 11:56 pm
xX-Abyss-Rayne-Xx Divine Entropy xX-Abyss-Rayne-Xx Divine Entropy Ah, perhaps the tea will help indeed vu v It may have helped yes, though for now I haven't posted, I more edited Craith's post code again. I'm not sure if I like what I did with the lyrics though..hmm.
Once I am sure I am alright with his code, I will try and post again. I don't feel as unfocused anymore, so I may be able to do it. lol
Edit: The main issue there may be lies with the lyrics above his name and below his code name..Not sure how I feel about their placement. Gosh putting lyrics on is the worst, like im not even sure I like how I did vince's but i forced my self to stop playing with it lol. But at least you're more focused now pffft- Still on that topic I accidentally wrote a novel for vince OTL Hey, I don't mind novels! I mean, look at most of my posts. XD And you know how my character sheets can get! And yeah, I got a notification that someone posted in one of my topics so I went to check it out, and saw the post. You pretty much chose where I was going to post as Craith XD I was either going to post there, or the bizarre. And the post is good by the way. ^^
If you wanna take a look at the post code though, this should take you to it. I think I've stared at it too long, so I don't know what to think. lol I need someone elses opinion Yeah lol. Im glad I don't write as much anymore when it comes to interactions cause it just doesnt feel natural for some reason. In terms of passage of time I mean. I was gonna throw him in his shop but I was like, not much to do there yet.But damn I got Craith sensors /shot. But dude, I think that looks good /o/
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Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2016 12:04 am
Divine Entropy xX-Abyss-Rayne-Xx Divine Entropy xX-Abyss-Rayne-Xx Divine Entropy Ah, perhaps the tea will help indeed vu v It may have helped yes, though for now I haven't posted, I more edited Craith's post code again. I'm not sure if I like what I did with the lyrics though..hmm.
Once I am sure I am alright with his code, I will try and post again. I don't feel as unfocused anymore, so I may be able to do it. lol
Edit: The main issue there may be lies with the lyrics above his name and below his code name..Not sure how I feel about their placement. Gosh putting lyrics on is the worst, like im not even sure I like how I did vince's but i forced my self to stop playing with it lol. But at least you're more focused now pffft- Still on that topic I accidentally wrote a novel for vince OTL Hey, I don't mind novels! I mean, look at most of my posts. XD And you know how my character sheets can get! And yeah, I got a notification that someone posted in one of my topics so I went to check it out, and saw the post. You pretty much chose where I was going to post as Craith XD I was either going to post there, or the bizarre. And the post is good by the way. ^^
If you wanna take a look at the post code though, this should take you to it. I think I've stared at it too long, so I don't know what to think. lol I need someone elses opinion Yeah lol. Im glad I don't write as much anymore when it comes to interactions cause it just doesnt feel natural for some reason. In terms of passage of time I mean. I was gonna throw him in his shop but I was like, not much to do there yet.But damn I got Craith sensors /shot. But dude, I think that looks good /o/ Hmm yeah I guess that makes sense, though I can't really help how I post unfortunately. I can try and write less and it's generally pretty difficult for me to do so. Most of the time though, even if the post seems a bit more drawn out, for me pretty much all of what happens in there, like thoughts and all that happen in the span of a few seconds or minutes depending on how long it takes my character to actually respond to what someone says. In reality when I look at something my observations are pretty quick, and my thoughts are as well, I have like a million thoughts flying through my mind at once pretty much so I guess it kinda just comes through in my writing.
Then again, in my posts I usually try and make sure it's somewhat clear how much time has passed between my characters responses. I don't know if I succeed but I've not had anyone complain yet really. I mean it's not like I don't try and tone my posts down...I do it just never really works XD
Oh and you think it's alright? Thank you. ^^ It was driving me insane. lol
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Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2016 12:17 am
xX-Abyss-Rayne-Xx Divine Entropy xX-Abyss-Rayne-Xx Divine Entropy xX-Abyss-Rayne-Xx It may have helped yes, though for now I haven't posted, I more edited Craith's post code again. I'm not sure if I like what I did with the lyrics though..hmm.
Once I am sure I am alright with his code, I will try and post again. I don't feel as unfocused anymore, so I may be able to do it. lol
Edit: The main issue there may be lies with the lyrics above his name and below his code name..Not sure how I feel about their placement. Gosh putting lyrics on is the worst, like im not even sure I like how I did vince's but i forced my self to stop playing with it lol. But at least you're more focused now pffft- Still on that topic I accidentally wrote a novel for vince OTL Hey, I don't mind novels! I mean, look at most of my posts. XD And you know how my character sheets can get! And yeah, I got a notification that someone posted in one of my topics so I went to check it out, and saw the post. You pretty much chose where I was going to post as Craith XD I was either going to post there, or the bizarre. And the post is good by the way. ^^
If you wanna take a look at the post code though, this should take you to it. I think I've stared at it too long, so I don't know what to think. lol I need someone elses opinion Yeah lol. Im glad I don't write as much anymore when it comes to interactions cause it just doesnt feel natural for some reason. In terms of passage of time I mean. I was gonna throw him in his shop but I was like, not much to do there yet.But damn I got Craith sensors /shot. But dude, I think that looks good /o/ Hmm yeah I guess that makes sense, though I can't really help how I post unfortunately. I can try and write less and it's generally pretty difficult for me to do so. Most of the time though, even if the post seems a bit more drawn out, for me pretty much all of what happens in there, like thoughts and all that happen in the span of a few seconds or minutes depending on how long it takes my character to actually respond to what someone says. In reality when I look at something my observations are pretty quick, and my thoughts are as well, I have like a million thoughts flying through my mind at once pretty much so I guess it kinda just comes through in my writing.
Then again, in my posts I usually try and make sure it's somewhat clear how much time has passed between my characters responses. I don't know if I succeed but I've not had anyone complain yet really. I mean it's not like I don't try and tone my posts down...I do it just never really works XD
Oh and you think it's alright? Thank you. ^^ It was driving me insane. lol To be fair, part of it is because ive gotten rusty and just developed a new style that summed it all up in smaller sentences but still was enough at the same time xD Like its all still really good and its understood to have happened in a matter of seconds. Or at least it should be pfft. But ye your posts are always good and nice to read *Q* I do, its got nice symmetry going on~
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Divine Entropy Vice Captain
Star-Crossed Lightbringer
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Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2016 12:31 am
Ah thought I should ask, though I think we had come up with a decision before. Did you want Vince...er..Octavian to be already in the gang, or do you want him to be recruited? lol I don't mind either way.
I'd just like to know if, if we have him already in the gang, he had met Craith as The Wandering Crow, and if maybe Craith had told him he would see if he could get the leader to let him into the gang, or if maybe Craith had told him that he had "brought him up to the leader of the gang" in order to get him to invite him into it? Like after they maybe had talked for some time, like a few days or however long you want it to have been?
Or if we don't have him already in the gang, we could always have it where either he has met him before and they've talked a few times or something and he's slowly beginning to see he appears to know a lot more than perhaps most people do (or should know? lol) and that could eventually lead to either Octavian revealing he at least knows Craith is in the gang (even if he doesn't know what his actual position is) and trying to get into it. Or maybe as stated above, he decides to pretend to get "the leaders permission to invite him in" because he sees how valuable of a member he could be (also by then he'd probably see him as a friend of sorts)
Or heck he might even catch him in the act of doing something for the gang, whether it's something serious or not, and threaten to use that as blackmail in order to get accepted in. XD Not sure he'd do that but hey, never know right? If you have anymore suggestions I am willing to hear them out. I think either way we could come up with something interesting.
And now i seem to be writing mini novels in the ooc....great.
Edit: In response to your response. I can understand that. Honestly a little rusty on rp myself...so the quality of my posts isn't too great yet. It's not going to be easy to get back into character or into character for the first time with a lot of them because of that as well. Though also I still write even when not rping so I guess I am not completely rusty. lol
Also I don't mind smaller posts that manage to say a lot in such a little amount. It's nice. I just have difficulties responding to small posts that don't give much to go off of when responding. lol I've never really had that problem with your posts before though. XD
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Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2016 12:52 am
xX-Abyss-Rayne-Xx Ah thought I should ask, though I think we had come up with a decision before. Did you want Vince...er..Octavian to be already in the gang, or do you want him to be recruited? lol I don't mind either way.
I'd just like to know if, if we have him already in the gang, he had met Craith as The Wandering Crow, and if maybe Craith had told him he would see if he could get the leader to let him into the gang, or if maybe Craith had told him that he had "brought him up to the leader of the gang" in order to get him to invite him into it? Like after they maybe had talked for some time, like a few days or however long you want it to have been?
Or if we don't have him already in the gang, we could always have it where either he has met him before and they've talked a few times or something and he's slowly beginning to see he appears to know a lot more than perhaps most people do (or should know? lol) and that could eventually lead to either Octavian revealing he at least knows Craith is in the gang (even if he doesn't know what his actual position is) and trying to get into it. Or maybe as stated above, he decides to pretend to get "the leaders permission to invite him in" because he sees how valuable of a member he could be (also by then he'd probably see him as a friend of sorts)
Or heck he might even catch him in the act of doing something for the gang, whether it's something serious or not, and threaten to use that as blackmail in order to get accepted in. XD Not sure he'd do that but hey, never know right? If you have anymore suggestions I am willing to hear them out. I think either way we could come up with something interesting.
And now i seem to be writing mini novels in the ooc....great.
Edit: In response to your response. I can understand that. Honestly a little rusty on rp myself...so the quality of my posts isn't too great yet. It's not going to be easy to get back into character or into character for the first time with a lot of them because of that as well. Though also I still write even when not rping so I guess I am not completely rusty. lol
Also I don't mind smaller posts that manage to say a lot in such a little amount. It's nice. I just have difficulties responding to small posts that don't give much to go off of when responding. lol I've never really had that problem with your posts before though. XD Recruited~ I think it'll be more interesting/add more to it lol Honestly, I think vince has heard of the gang going about in some way already (extremely vague and general details if anything) , but has no real interest in joining them at least not on the spot anyway. So there could be something that he hears or already have heard that caught his interest that decides to look into for personal gain. but uses black mail as a bluff (for whatever reason, maybe they threaten him for knowing to much? idk,lol) cause hes an a** pfft- which could lead into things like you mentioned like craith (or another gang member) seeing that he could be valuable to them. But yeah we should probably work on what we want to do with that lol xD Pfffffffff- its all good~ Yeah i started writing outside of rp so its not to horrible getting back to it.like the only thing is I just have to focus on one person and not an arrange of people. I think as long as the short post, has a lot of meat for being short its still manageable, at least for me. which is what i'm hoping that my style turned into so people can still work with it xD if not then i'll probably work back up to long interactions posts,but its good to know you didnt have issues with my posts ;o;
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Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2016 1:13 am
Divine Entropy xX-Abyss-Rayne-Xx Ah thought I should ask, though I think we had come up with a decision before. Did you want Vince...er..Octavian to be already in the gang, or do you want him to be recruited? lol I don't mind either way.
I'd just like to know if, if we have him already in the gang, he had met Craith as The Wandering Crow, and if maybe Craith had told him he would see if he could get the leader to let him into the gang, or if maybe Craith had told him that he had "brought him up to the leader of the gang" in order to get him to invite him into it? Like after they maybe had talked for some time, like a few days or however long you want it to have been?
Or if we don't have him already in the gang, we could always have it where either he has met him before and they've talked a few times or something and he's slowly beginning to see he appears to know a lot more than perhaps most people do (or should know? lol) and that could eventually lead to either Octavian revealing he at least knows Craith is in the gang (even if he doesn't know what his actual position is) and trying to get into it. Or maybe as stated above, he decides to pretend to get "the leaders permission to invite him in" because he sees how valuable of a member he could be (also by then he'd probably see him as a friend of sorts)
Or heck he might even catch him in the act of doing something for the gang, whether it's something serious or not, and threaten to use that as blackmail in order to get accepted in. XD Not sure he'd do that but hey, never know right? If you have anymore suggestions I am willing to hear them out. I think either way we could come up with something interesting.
And now i seem to be writing mini novels in the ooc....great.
Edit: In response to your response. I can understand that. Honestly a little rusty on rp myself...so the quality of my posts isn't too great yet. It's not going to be easy to get back into character or into character for the first time with a lot of them because of that as well. Though also I still write even when not rping so I guess I am not completely rusty. lol
Also I don't mind smaller posts that manage to say a lot in such a little amount. It's nice. I just have difficulties responding to small posts that don't give much to go off of when responding. lol I've never really had that problem with your posts before though. XD Recruited~ I think it'll be more interesting/add more to it lol Honestly, I think vince has heard of the gang going about in some way already (extremely vague and general details if anything) , but has no real interest in joining them at least not on the spot anyway. So there could be something that he hears or already have heard that caught his interest that decides to look into for personal gain. but uses black mail as a bluff (for whatever reason, maybe they threaten him for knowing to much? idk,lol) cause hes an a** pfft- which could lead into things like you mentioned like craith (or another gang member) seeing that he could be valuable to them. But yeah we should probably work on what we want to do with that lol xD Pfffffffff- its all good~ Yeah i started writing outside of rp so its not to horrible getting back to it.like the only thing is I just have to focus on one person and not an arrange of people. I think as long as the short post, has a lot of meat for being short its still manageable, at least for me. which is what i'm hoping that my style turned into so people can still work with it xD if not then i'll probably work back up to long interactions posts,but its good to know you didnt have issues with my posts ;o; Okay, that works for me. lol We can try and figure it out more in detail later though. XD
Also I am trying to write a post but it is like 4:00 in the morning for me so it's a bit difficult to write, this time not because of a lack of focus, but rather, because I am getting tired. lol I'm still going to try and get the post out, but I can't make any promises for tonight. I really hope I can manage a post though. XD
And I'm sure you'll be fine. lol I've always enjoyed your posts, no worries. And also, Vince at some point may even run into Liam. XD since he lives in the same city, but he isn't in the gang. He is a civilian. lol He refuses to join any of the gangs, though he'll still make stuff for them if they ask.
That doesn't mean his loyalties don't mostly lie with Reim though. They do, but yeah. He also, luckily, isn't the sort to sell information to people. So what he is usually told by any of the gangs, he doesn't tell others. XD Usually anyways.
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Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2016 1:20 am
xX-Abyss-Rayne-Xx Okay, that works for me. lol We can try and figure it out more in detail later though. XD
Also I am trying to write a post but it is like 4:00 in the morning for me so it's a bit difficult to write, this time not because of a lack of focus, but rather, because I am getting tired. lol I'm still going to try and get the post out, but I can't make any promises for tonight. I really hope I can manage a post though. XD
And I'm sure you'll be fine. lol I've always enjoyed your posts, no worries. And also, Vince at some point may even run into Liam. XD since he lives in the same city, but he isn't in the gang. He is a civilian. lol He refuses to join any of the gangs, though he'll still make stuff for them if they ask.
That doesn't mean his loyalties don't mostly lie with Reim though. They do, but yeah. He also, luckily, isn't the sort to sell information to people. So what he is usually told by any of the gangs, he doesn't tell others. XD Usually anyways. Eyyy at lest we have a format so thats a start /o/ lol, dont force yourself if its getting to that point of being tired xD to bad him and vince wont be the same goobs, even if they met before by some off chance ;o; hackers will forever haunt me
at least liam knows how to play it smart by doing that. like honestly being a civilian its probably better to be like that xD
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Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2016 2:41 am
Divine Entropy xX-Abyss-Rayne-Xx Okay, that works for me. lol We can try and figure it out more in detail later though. XD
Also I am trying to write a post but it is like 4:00 in the morning for me so it's a bit difficult to write, this time not because of a lack of focus, but rather, because I am getting tired. lol I'm still going to try and get the post out, but I can't make any promises for tonight. I really hope I can manage a post though. XD
And I'm sure you'll be fine. lol I've always enjoyed your posts, no worries. And also, Vince at some point may even run into Liam. XD since he lives in the same city, but he isn't in the gang. He is a civilian. lol He refuses to join any of the gangs, though he'll still make stuff for them if they ask.
That doesn't mean his loyalties don't mostly lie with Reim though. They do, but yeah. He also, luckily, isn't the sort to sell information to people. So what he is usually told by any of the gangs, he doesn't tell others. XD Usually anyways. Eyyy at lest we have a format so thats a start /o/ lol, dont force yourself if its getting to that point of being tired xD to bad him and vince wont be the same goobs, even if they met before by some off chance ;o; hackers will forever haunt me
at least liam knows how to play it smart by doing that. like honestly being a civilian its probably better to be like that xD Yeah, it's sad but unfortunately true. T^T And I know! So sad. I miss it so much.
And yeah true. lol
I'm still trying on the post, but it's slowing down a bit. I sometimes hate intro posts cause for me, mine tend to feel a bit filler-ish. But I guess a lot of intro posts tend to be that way. To set the feel and such. XD If anything I may have to finish the post tomorrow. I can always leave an empty post to make sure people know I am responding to you though, and then finish the post tomorrow...er later today. It's almost 6 now. Being tired is making me take longer to post than I'd like. lol
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