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PostPosted: Fri Aug 07, 2015 10:45 pm


Creator: Anikielen
RPC Using Technique: Nai Přežírat Mateřské

Jutsu Name: Uwagi 上着 [Coat Seal]
Rank: B-S+
Element: N/A
Classification: Fuuinjutsu
Description: Like the Hiku seal the Uwagi seal is used to bring elements to the object that has been marked. Unlike the Hiku, the Uwagi coats the object as thinly as possible making it great for close combat use without residual damage to the area. Fire and chemicals will still harm the user unless properly protected.

B: Coats surface of 1sq ft.
A: Coats surface of 5sq ft.
S: Coats surface of 10sq ft.
S+: Coats surface of 20sq ft
Requirements:
Range: Contact
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: Yes

Jutsu Name: Kon 混 [Mixing Seal]
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Classification: Fuuinjutsu
Description: A technique developed by Nai to mix chemicals up safely via seals. The seal can only be used on chemicals to help prevent caustic mixtures during battle from being activated involuntarily.
Requirements: The raw chemicals must be sealed separately to have use this seal.
Range: X
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No


Jutsu Name: Kirifuki 霧吹き [Spray Seal]
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Classification: Fuuinjutsu
Description: A seal similar to the Explosive seal the Himatsu Seal allows for a chemical to be sprayed out over a small area without causing an explosion.
Requirements: Must be prepared with the chemical wanting to be released.
Range: 5sq ft area
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: Yes


Jutsu Name: Sukkiri 鮮明[Clearing Seal]
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Classification: Fuuinjutsu
Description: Using the same principle as Hiku, Sukkiri pulls the element towards it and then sucks the element into the Seal. Once it has retrieved enough of the element it destroys itself. This is a seal that is great for removing small amounts of the elements and poisons in the area.
Requirements: Needs a determining element next to the seal to work.
Range: 5sq ft area
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: Yes

Jutsu Name: Satsu 殺 [Split Seal]
Rank: C-S+
Element: N/A
Classification: Fuuinjutsu
Description: The Satsu is a Fuuinjutsu seal that diminishes the strength of other seals by halving their strength. The seal will also split resources within a seal such as Phosphorus in one seal will be cut into half allowing for a more delicate use of the Kon seal. Due to creating another seal along with the original one must use the chakra for the appropriate level of the jutsu as well as chakra for the new seal.

C: Halve Seals of C LvL
B: Halve Seals of B LvL
A: Halve Seals of A LvL.
S: Halve Seals of S LvL
Range: Contact
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: Yes

Jutsu Name: Kontserun 勠[Combine Seal]
Rank: C-S+
Element: N/A
Classification: Fuuinjutsu
Description: The Kontserun is a Fuuinjutsu seal that bolsters the strength of other seals by doubling their strength. Due to the need of another seal along with the original one, the user must use the chakra for the appropriate level of the jutsu as well as chakra for the new seal.

C: Doubles Seals of C LvL
B: Doubles Seals of B LvL
A: Doubles Seals of A LvL.
S: Doubles Seals of S LvL
Range: Contact
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: Yes
PostPosted: Sat Aug 08, 2015 9:32 pm


Creator: Kazuraii
RPC Using Technique: Xanos Castell
Jutsu Name: Earth Sphere Distortion
Rank: C
Element: Doton/Sight
Classification: Genjutsu/Ninjutsu
Description: The user would encase himself in a weak earth wall (D rank) this hides the user from the view of the target. Once their eyes witness the complete earth sphere they are now in the genjutsu. What this genjutsu does is it visually convinces them that this earth sphere exists and cannot be destroyed. What convinces them of this is if they attack the sphere it will quickly be destroyed but they will always see it standing. The only way for the target to escape the genjutsu is to discover it is a genjutsu and kai out or to not look at the earth sphere for two entire posts. Until one of the two are done the target will continue to believe that the user is still within the earth sphere and it does not yield to damage. The user can leave the earth sphere at will and the target will not see his escape due to the genjutsu.
Note: If the user makes an action to convince the target he is not inside the sphere anymore the genjutsu will automatically break.
Requirements biggrin oton
Range: Eye sight
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No

Creator: Kazuraii
RPC Using Technique: Xanos Castell
Jutsu Name: Charged Gaia
Rank: C Rank
Element: Doton/Raiton
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: Xanos is capable of making doton weapons and creations (no larger than his body) that are hyper charged with Raiton. These techniques will explode upon impact outwards towards what caused the impact, Like an electrified shrapnel bomb. This would cause great pain, cuts and deep wounds from the chunks of stone that explode outward as well as the electricity explosion that would cause the targets blood and skin to sizzle from the shocks. What is created is up to the users discretion
Requirements biggrin oton and Raiton
Range: Made stationary or carried
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No

Creator: Kazuraii
RPC Using Technique: Xanos Castell
Jutsu Name: Tri Weapon Defense Orb
Rank: B Rank
Element: Maruton/Bukijutsu
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: Xanos stabs his Katana and Wakizashi into the ground on his left and right side, Then stabs his claymore into the ground infront of him. This weapon along with a charge of raw chakra between the three tools creating a dome of maruton with a translucent shield repelling strong physical up to S rank techniques for a duration of three [3] posts.
Requirements: Three chakra steel weapons.
Range: Self
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 08, 2015 10:58 pm


Kazuraii
Creator: Kazuraii
RPC Using Technique: Xanos Castell
Jutsu Name: Earth Sphere Distortion
Rank: C
Element: Doton/Sight
Classification: Genjutsu/Ninjutsu
Description: The user would encase himself in a weak earth wall (D rank) this hides the user from the view of the target. Once their eyes witness the complete earth sphere they are now in the genjutsu. What this genjutsu does is it visually convinces them that this earth sphere exists and cannot be destroyed. What convinces them of this is if they attack the sphere it will quickly be destroyed but they will always see it standing. The only way for the target to escape the genjutsu is to discover it is a genjutsu and kai out or to not look at the earth sphere for two entire posts. Until one of the two are done the target will continue to believe that the user is still within the earth sphere and it does not yield to damage. The user can leave the earth sphere at will and the target will not see his escape due to the genjutsu.
Note: If the user makes an action to convince the target he is not inside the sphere anymore the genjutsu will automatically break.
Requirements biggrin oton
Range: Eye sight
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No

Creator: Kazuraii
RPC Using Technique: Xanos Castell
Jutsu Name: Charged Gaia
Rank: C Rank
Element: Doton/Raiton
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: Xanos is capable of making doton weapons and creations (no larger than his body) that are hyper charged with Raiton. These techniques will explode upon impact outwards towards what caused the impact, Like an electrified shrapnel bomb. This would cause great pain, cuts and deep wounds from the chunks of stone that explode outward as well as the electricity explosion that would cause the targets blood and skin to sizzle from the shocks. What is created is up to the users discretion
Requirements biggrin oton and Raiton
Range: Made stationary or carried
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No

Creator: Kazuraii
RPC Using Technique: Xanos Castell
Jutsu Name: Tri Weapon Defense Orb
Rank: B Rank
Element: Maruton/Bukijutsu
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: Xanos stabs his Katana and Wakizashi into the ground on his left and right side, Then stabs his claymore into the ground in front of him. This weapon along with a charge of raw chakra between the three tools creating a dome of maruton with a translucent shield repelling strong physical up to S rank techniques for a duration of three [3] posts.
Requirements: Three chakra steel weapons.
Range: Self
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No


Approved.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 09, 2015 10:45 am


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RPC Using Technique: Torgrita Uchiha

Jutsu Name: Unintended Side-effect
Rank: Variable - D rank for learning purposes [ Actual cost varies with highest jutsu rank achievable. Must be retrained once per every rank up to accommodate changing limitations ]
Element: n/a
Classification: Eiseijutsu
Description: Unintended Side-effect is a custom Torgrita used when thinking about what she would do if she got caught in a serious battle and what her last option would be, and this was it. Uninteded Side-effect inverses the effects of any Eiseijutsu used within 15 feet of Torgrita for 5 posts. Offensive eiseijutsu become defensive eiseijutsu and defensive jutsu become offensive. As an example, Poison removal would no longer draw poisons from the body but push them deeper in, and healing hands wouldn't mend skin but make wound worse.
Requirements: Must be of the Medical Subclass
Range: 15 ft
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No


Jutsu Name: Medical Sealing
Rank: D-rank for learning purposes [ Actual cost is determined by the jutsu being sealed, you must pay that rank of jutsu twice. Once to write the seal and the second time to preform the actual jutsu ]
Element: n/a
Classification: Fuinjutsu
Description: A completely stable sealling process, Tor has learned how to seal away any Eiseijutsu technique inside a scroll. Unlike normal sealing, she has to first write the seal, then preform the jutsu for it to be sealed. She can then, with a simple hand seal, call it forth again at any point. This is a massive improvement on normal sealing. The seals themselves are intricate and are different across the board, often changing with the jutsu and how strong it is, but one similarity is held. Each of the seals are a two ringed circle with a medical plus sign in the middle, of which has the kanji for "healer" written on top of it.
Requirements: In order for the eiseijutsu to be sealed, it must be your own. On top of that you must be able to both learn eiseijutsu and fuinjutsu to preform this seal. The jutsu sealed can only be used once, though once a seal is made you can replenish it outside of battle by preforming the jutsu in front of the seal again.
Range: x
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: Yes


I'm sorry, something was brought up to my attention, so I'm going to have to postpone the approval of the first jutsu until I have a question answered. In reference to the reversal of the medical jutsu, does this include A-S+? Because if it does, the rank of this jutsu will need to go up. If not, please put the rank limitations in the description for me.

Again, I'm sorry for the inconvenience, I'm only human and looked this over right before going to work the other day, so I might have read this wrong.

Gah, s**t, I didn't even think about the higher ranks. Dx
Uhm... crap I don't even know what to do about that... should I make it a variable rank? Or maybe only be able to use it for A+ jutsu after I've retrained it or something? Because if I have to boost it to S-rank that's gonna be a pain in the a** and I wont be able to use it till konin. o n o


I wouldn't mind it being an X rank, variable with how much chakra you use, but can only be used up to your current rank, so B rank at Genin, A at Chunnin, etc. But you can train it for a D rank amount of posts (I know training is a b***h sometimes.) But you will need to retrain it at the higher ranks, for the higher training costs.

Tis edited above. :3

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 09, 2015 11:41 am


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Creator: I Tortured Sleep I
RPC Using Technique: Torgrita Uchiha

Jutsu Name: Unintended Side-effect
Rank: Variable - D rank for learning purposes [ Actual cost varies with highest jutsu rank achievable. Must be retrained once per every rank up to accommodate changing limitations ]
Element: n/a
Classification: Eiseijutsu
Description: Unintended Side-effect is a custom Torgrita used when thinking about what she would do if she got caught in a serious battle and what her last option would be, and this was it. Uninteded Side-effect inverses the effects of any Eiseijutsu used within 15 feet of Torgrita for 5 posts. Offensive eiseijutsu become defensive eiseijutsu and defensive jutsu become offensive. As an example, Poison removal would no longer draw poisons from the body but push them deeper in, and healing hands wouldn't mend skin but make wound worse.
Requirements: Must be of the Medical Subclass
Range: 15 ft
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No


Jutsu Name: Medical Sealing
Rank: D-rank for learning purposes [ Actual cost is determined by the jutsu being sealed, you must pay that rank of jutsu twice. Once to write the seal and the second time to preform the actual jutsu ]
Element: n/a
Classification: Fuinjutsu
Description: A completely stable sealling process, Tor has learned how to seal away any Eiseijutsu technique inside a scroll. Unlike normal sealing, she has to first write the seal, then preform the jutsu for it to be sealed. She can then, with a simple hand seal, call it forth again at any point. This is a massive improvement on normal sealing. The seals themselves are intricate and are different across the board, often changing with the jutsu and how strong it is, but one similarity is held. Each of the seals are a two ringed circle with a medical plus sign in the middle, of which has the kanji for "healer" written on top of it.
Requirements: In order for the eiseijutsu to be sealed, it must be your own. On top of that you must be able to both learn eiseijutsu and fuinjutsu to preform this seal. The jutsu sealed can only be used once, though once a seal is made you can replenish it outside of battle by preforming the jutsu in front of the seal again.
Range: x
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: Yes


I'm sorry, something was brought up to my attention, so I'm going to have to postpone the approval of the first jutsu until I have a question answered. In reference to the reversal of the medical jutsu, does this include A-S+? Because if it does, the rank of this jutsu will need to go up. If not, please put the rank limitations in the description for me.

Again, I'm sorry for the inconvenience, I'm only human and looked this over right before going to work the other day, so I might have read this wrong.

Gah, s**t, I didn't even think about the higher ranks. Dx
Uhm... crap I don't even know what to do about that... should I make it a variable rank? Or maybe only be able to use it for A+ jutsu after I've retrained it or something? Because if I have to boost it to S-rank that's gonna be a pain in the a** and I wont be able to use it till konin. o n o


I wouldn't mind it being an X rank, variable with how much chakra you use, but can only be used up to your current rank, so B rank at Genin, A at Chunnin, etc. But you can train it for a D rank amount of posts (I know training is a b***h sometimes.) But you will need to retrain it at the higher ranks, for the higher training costs.

Tis edited above. :3


Then approved.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 09, 2015 12:00 pm


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Creator: Anikielen
RPC Using Technique: Nai Přežírat Mateřské

Jutsu Name: Uwagi 上着 [Coat Seal]
Rank: B-S+
Element: N/A
Classification: Fuuinjutsu
Description: Like the Hiku seal the Uwagi seal is used to bring elements to the object that has been marked. Unlike the Hiku, the Uwagi coats the object as thinly as possible making it great for close combat use without residual damage to the area. Fire and chemicals will still harm the user unless properly protected.

B: Coats surface of 1sq ft.
A: Coats surface of 5sq ft.
S: Coats surface of 10sq ft.
S+: Coats surface of 20sq ft
Requirements:
Range: Contact
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: Yes


Jutsu Name: Kon 混 [Mixing Seal]
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Classification: Fuuinjutsu
Description: A technique developed by Nai to mix chemicals up safely via seals. The seal can only be used on chemicals to help prevent caustic mixtures during battle from being activated involuntarily.
Requirements: The raw chemicals must be sealed separately to have use this seal.
Range: X
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No


Jutsu Name: Kirifuki 霧吹き [Spray Seal]
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Classification: Fuuinjutsu
Description: A seal similar to the Explosive seal the Himatsu Seal allows for a chemical to be sprayed out over a small area without causing an explosion.
Requirements: Must be prepared with the chemical wanting to be released.
Range: 5sq ft area
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: Yes


Jutsu Name: Sukkiri 鮮明[Clearing Seal]
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Classification: Fuuinjutsu
Description: Using the same principle as Hiku, Sukkiri pulls the element towards it and then sucks the element into the Seal. Once it has retrieved enough of the element it destroys itself. This is a seal that is great for removing small amounts of the elements and poisons in the area.
Requirements: Needs a determining element next to the seal to work.
Range: 5sq ft area
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: Yes

Jutsu Name: Satsu 殺 [Split Seal]
Rank: D-S+
Element: N/A
Classification: Fuuinjutsu
Description: The Satsu is a Fuuinjutsu seal that diminishes the strength of other seals by halving their strength. The seal will also split resources within a seal such as Phosphorus in one seal will be cut into half allowing for a more delicate use of the Kon seal. Due to creating another seal along with the original one must use the chakra for the appropriate level of the jutsu as well as chakra for the new seal.

D: Halve Seals of D LvL
C: Halve Seals of C LvL
B: Halve Seals of B LvL
A: Halve Seals of A LvL.
S: Halve Seals of S LvL
S+: Halve Seals of S+ LvL
Range: Contact
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: Yes

Jutsu Name: Kontserun 勠[Combine Seal]
Rank: D-S+
Element: N/A
Classification: Fuuinjutsu
Description: The Kontserun is a Fuuinjutsu seal that bolsters the strength of other seals by doubling their strength. Due to the need of another seal along with the original one, the user must use the chakra for the appropriate level of the jutsu as well as chakra for the new seal.

D: Doubles Seals of D LvL
C: Doubles Seals of C LvL
B: Doubles Seals of B LvL
A: Doubles Seals of A LvL.
S: Doubles Seals of S LvL
S+: Doubles Seals of S+ LvL
Range: Contact
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: Yes


Okay, all of these are approved, but I'd say that you would need to cap it at S rank, not S+. As for the ones that you are going to let the guild have, thank you, they will be moved to the Fuinjutsu listing soon.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 26, 2015 12:29 pm


Creator: Me! =D
RPC Using Technique: Artemis Uchiha
Jutsu Name: Altar of Memories
Rank: B rank
Element: Maruton
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: A technique created by Artemis when she was still in the academy, the Altar is more of a figure of speech. This allows her to project her memories into a visible plane, playing them in front of her as if they are ghostly videos. The Altar in question is a floating sphere made of chakra and before it can be used; a memory must be placed into it through another jutsu. The memories therein can be used for any purpose the user sees fit.
Requirements: None
Range: Personal
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No

Creator: Me again! =D
RPC Using Technique: Artemis Uchiha
Jutsu Name: Tribute of the mind
Rank: C rank
Element: Maruton
Classification: Ninjutsu / Forbidden Ninjutsu
Description: A technique developed for educational reasons can be used for much more nefarious ones. The user or target must be thinking of something that happened in their past that they witnessed. Upon touching their temple a white whispy substance will come away on Artemis's fingers. This is that memory. The target or user can no longer pull this memory to their own mind and for all intents and purposes is destroyed in their minds eye.

However, this memory can still be used. The substance can be both bottled for later use through the Altar of Memories. These memories are the perfect recollection of events past. Any attempt to give an alternate memory will show a static like interference in the memories playback. Only Artemis can manipulate these memories from their bottle once collected.
Requirements: To store memories: 10 chakra semi-permanently reduced to keep the memory "fresh" in a bottle. This chakra can be restored when you discard of the memory. Stacks per memory stored
Range: Touch
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No
PostPosted: Wed Aug 26, 2015 6:57 pm


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Creator: Me! =D
RPC Using Technique: Artemis Uchiha
Jutsu Name: Altar of Memories
Rank: B rank
Element: Maruton
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: A technique created by Artemis when she was still in the academy, the Altar is more of a figure of speech. This allows her to project her memories into a visible plane, playing them in front of her as if they are ghostly videos. The Altar in question is a floating sphere made of chakra and before it can be used; a memory must be placed into it through another jutsu. The memories therein can be used for any purpose the user sees fit.
Requirements: None
Range: Personal
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No

Creator: Me again! =D
RPC Using Technique: Artemis Uchiha
Jutsu Name: Tribute of the mind
Rank: C rank
Element: Maruton
Classification: Ninjutsu / Forbidden Ninjutsu
Description: A technique developed for educational reasons can be used for much more nefarious ones. The user or target must be thinking of something that happened in their past that they witnessed. Upon touching their temple a white whispy substance will come away on Artemis's fingers. This is that memory. The target or user can no longer pull this memory to their own mind and for all intents and purposes is destroyed in their minds eye.

However, this memory can still be used. The substance can be both bottled for later use through the Altar of Memories. These memories are the perfect recollection of events past. Any attempt to give an alternate memory will show a static like interference in the memories playback. Only Artemis can manipulate these memories from their bottle once collected.
Requirements: None
Range: Touch
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No


Altar of Memories: The only way I can approve this, is if the jutsu only allows the user to see the memories, and show them, not use them in any other way. Think R2D2's hologram messages here. And it would need to be S rank at least, since you classify the accompanying jutsu as a Forbidden jutsu. Anything labeled as Forbidden is instantly at least an S, if not S+ jutsu.

Tribute of the mind: As for this second jutsu, I'm going to have to say no. Blocking, or even temporarily removing/changing a memory is a high rank jutsu, so for a genin to have access to this would be unheard of, not even a Yamanaka genin has access to anything this powerful. For this to be passed, you will need to put a duration on both, a heavy duration on this last one, and the memories can not be completely erased/inaccessible forever. And this one will need to be an S+, since not everyone is an all-knowing headmaster.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 26, 2015 7:07 pm


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Creator: Ikari1
RPC Using Technique: Sougo Hakemoto
Jutsu Name:
Rank:S
Element: Elemental
Classification: Kenjutsu
Description: With a swift movement sougo unsheathes his blade in a swift movement. As soon as his blade in unsheathed both of his elements coat the blade and two other ethereal copies of him for trapping the target in a triangle and cuts the target at the same time in the exact same spot.
Requirements: Shigure soen ryu
Range: Close range
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?:
Ahahaha no


Currently Pending for a more in depth review
PostPosted: Wed Aug 26, 2015 7:59 pm


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Creator: Me! =D
RPC Using Technique: Artemis Uchiha
Jutsu Name: Altar of Memories
Rank: B rank
Element: Maruton
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: A technique created by Artemis when she was still in the academy, the Altar is more of a figure of speech. This allows her to project her memories into a visible plane, playing them in front of her as if they are ghostly videos. The Altar in question is a floating sphere made of chakra and before it can be used; a memory must be placed into it through another jutsu. The memories therein can be used for any purpose the user sees fit.
Requirements: None
Range: Personal
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No

Creator: Me again! =D
RPC Using Technique: Artemis Uchiha
Jutsu Name: Tribute of the mind
Rank: C rank
Element: Maruton
Classification: Ninjutsu / Forbidden Ninjutsu
Description: A technique developed for educational reasons can be used for much more nefarious ones. The user or target must be thinking of something that happened in their past that they witnessed. Upon touching their temple a white whispy substance will come away on Artemis's fingers. This is that memory. The target or user can no longer pull this memory to their own mind and for all intents and purposes is destroyed in their minds eye.

However, this memory can still be used. The substance can be both bottled for later use through the Altar of Memories. These memories are the perfect recollection of events past. Any attempt to give an alternate memory will show a static like interference in the memories playback. Only Artemis can manipulate these memories from their bottle once collected.
Requirements: None
Range: Touch
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No


Altar of Memories: The only way I can approve this, is if the jutsu only allows the user to see the memories, and show them, not use them in any other way. Think R2D2's hologram messages here. And it would need to be S rank at least, since you classify the accompanying jutsu as a Forbidden jutsu. Anything labeled as Forbidden is instantly at least an S, if not S+ jutsu.

Tribute of the mind: As for this second jutsu, I'm going to have to say no. Blocking, or even temporarily removing/changing a memory is a high rank jutsu, so for a genin to have access to this would be unheard of, not even a Yamanaka genin has access to anything this powerful. For this to be passed, you will need to put a duration on both, a heavy duration on this last one, and the memories can not be completely erased/inaccessible forever. And this one will need to be an S+, since not everyone is an all-knowing headmaster.


How would you go about making this usable for a character that specializes in genjutsu? I wish to make it usable as genin and the intention was to simply use it for training and spying purposes.

As for being a forbidden technique, the reason i classified it as that was simply the destruction of the memory in question, meaning it has a negative effect on the person its used on that is psychologically damaging.

Lily the Forgotten


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PostPosted: Wed Aug 26, 2015 8:40 pm


Lily the Forgotten
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Creator: Me! =D
RPC Using Technique: Artemis Uchiha
Jutsu Name: Altar of Memories
Rank: B rank
Element: Maruton
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: A technique created by Artemis when she was still in the academy, the Altar is more of a figure of speech. This allows her to project her memories into a visible plane, playing them in front of her as if they are ghostly videos. The Altar in question is a floating sphere made of chakra and before it can be used; a memory must be placed into it through another jutsu. The memories therein can be used for any purpose the user sees fit.
Requirements: None
Range: Personal
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No

Creator: Me again! =D
RPC Using Technique: Artemis Uchiha
Jutsu Name: Tribute of the mind
Rank: C rank
Element: Maruton
Classification: Ninjutsu / Forbidden Ninjutsu
Description: A technique developed for educational reasons can be used for much more nefarious ones. The user or target must be thinking of something that happened in their past that they witnessed. Upon touching their temple a white whispy substance will come away on Artemis's fingers. This is that memory. The target or user can no longer pull this memory to their own mind and for all intents and purposes is destroyed in their minds eye.

However, this memory can still be used. The substance can be both bottled for later use through the Altar of Memories. These memories are the perfect recollection of events past. Any attempt to give an alternate memory will show a static like interference in the memories playback. Only Artemis can manipulate these memories from their bottle once collected.
Requirements: None
Range: Touch
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No


Altar of Memories: The only way I can approve this, is if the jutsu only allows the user to see the memories, and show them, not use them in any other way. Think R2D2's hologram messages here. And it would need to be S rank at least, since you classify the accompanying jutsu as a Forbidden jutsu. Anything labeled as Forbidden is instantly at least an S, if not S+ jutsu.

Tribute of the mind: As for this second jutsu, I'm going to have to say no. Blocking, or even temporarily removing/changing a memory is a high rank jutsu, so for a genin to have access to this would be unheard of, not even a Yamanaka genin has access to anything this powerful. For this to be passed, you will need to put a duration on both, a heavy duration on this last one, and the memories can not be completely erased/inaccessible forever. And this one will need to be an S+, since not everyone is an all-knowing headmaster.


How would you go about making this usable for a character that specializes in genjutsu? I wish to make it usable as genin and the intention was to simply use it for training and spying purposes.

As for being a forbidden technique, the reason i classified it as that was simply the destruction of the memory in question, meaning it has a negative effect on the person its used on that is psychologically damaging.


The reason that this can't be learned at Genin is because, the way you have this written, your character could technically wipe all memories of any and all jutsu from someone else's mind. This is unacceptable for a Kage, much less a genin to have this much power. It is simply too dangerous, and at genin, would more than likely backfire on all but the most talented of genjutsu users, not saying that your RPC isn't, just stating that that's how something like this would work. I simply can't let this go with anything less than an S rank slapped on it.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 27, 2015 2:23 am


Nyx_Nightshade_7656
Lily the Forgotten
Nyx_Nightshade_7656
Lily the Forgotten
Creator: Me! =D
RPC Using Technique: Artemis Uchiha
Jutsu Name: Altar of Memories
Rank: B rank
Element: Maruton
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: A technique created by Artemis when she was still in the academy, the Altar is more of a figure of speech. This allows her to project her memories into a visible plane, playing them in front of her as if they are ghostly videos. The Altar in question is a floating sphere made of chakra and before it can be used; a memory must be placed into it through another jutsu. The memories therein can be used for any purpose the user sees fit.
Requirements: None
Range: Personal
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No

Creator: Me again! =D
RPC Using Technique: Artemis Uchiha
Jutsu Name: Tribute of the mind
Rank: C rank
Element: Maruton
Classification: Ninjutsu / Forbidden Ninjutsu
Description: A technique developed for educational reasons can be used for much more nefarious ones. The user or target must be thinking of something that happened in their past that they witnessed. Upon touching their temple a white whispy substance will come away on Artemis's fingers. This is that memory. The target or user can no longer pull this memory to their own mind and for all intents and purposes is destroyed in their minds eye.

However, this memory can still be used. The substance can be both bottled for later use through the Altar of Memories. These memories are the perfect recollection of events past. Any attempt to give an alternate memory will show a static like interference in the memories playback. Only Artemis can manipulate these memories from their bottle once collected.
Requirements: None
Range: Touch
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No


Altar of Memories: The only way I can approve this, is if the jutsu only allows the user to see the memories, and show them, not use them in any other way. Think R2D2's hologram messages here. And it would need to be S rank at least, since you classify the accompanying jutsu as a Forbidden jutsu. Anything labeled as Forbidden is instantly at least an S, if not S+ jutsu.

Tribute of the mind: As for this second jutsu, I'm going to have to say no. Blocking, or even temporarily removing/changing a memory is a high rank jutsu, so for a genin to have access to this would be unheard of, not even a Yamanaka genin has access to anything this powerful. For this to be passed, you will need to put a duration on both, a heavy duration on this last one, and the memories can not be completely erased/inaccessible forever. And this one will need to be an S+, since not everyone is an all-knowing headmaster.


How would you go about making this usable for a character that specializes in genjutsu? I wish to make it usable as genin and the intention was to simply use it for training and spying purposes.

As for being a forbidden technique, the reason i classified it as that was simply the destruction of the memory in question, meaning it has a negative effect on the person its used on that is psychologically damaging.


The reason that this can't be learned at Genin is because, the way you have this written, your character could technically wipe all memories of any and all jutsu from someone else's mind. This is unacceptable for a Kage, much less a genin to have this much power. It is simply too dangerous, and at genin, would more than likely backfire on all but the most talented of genjutsu users, not saying that your RPC isn't, just stating that that's how something like this would work. I simply can't let this go with anything less than an S rank slapped on it.


Ok I understand what your saying here but i think there is a mistranslation in play. I dont want to delete all memories of a target, in fact the deletion of the memory was supposed to be the downside for extracting my own memories to review them. I just want it as sort of a video recorder that will tell no lies. Would that be doable?

Lily the Forgotten


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 27, 2015 9:32 am


Lily the Forgotten
Nyx_Nightshade_7656
Lily the Forgotten
Nyx_Nightshade_7656
Lily the Forgotten
Creator: Me! =D
RPC Using Technique: Artemis Uchiha
Jutsu Name: Altar of Memories
Rank: B rank
Element: Maruton
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: A technique created by Artemis when she was still in the academy, the Altar is more of a figure of speech. This allows her to project her memories into a visible plane, playing them in front of her as if they are ghostly videos. The Altar in question is a floating sphere made of chakra and before it can be used; a memory must be placed into it through another jutsu. The memories therein can be used for any purpose the user sees fit.
Requirements: None
Range: Personal
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No

Creator: Me again! =D
RPC Using Technique: Artemis Uchiha
Jutsu Name: Tribute of the mind
Rank: C rank
Element: Maruton
Classification: Ninjutsu / Forbidden Ninjutsu
Description: A technique developed for educational reasons can be used for much more nefarious ones. The user or target must be thinking of something that happened in their past that they witnessed. Upon touching their temple a white whispy substance will come away on Artemis's fingers. This is that memory. The target or user can no longer pull this memory to their own mind and for all intents and purposes is destroyed in their minds eye.

However, this memory can still be used. The substance can be both bottled for later use through the Altar of Memories. These memories are the perfect recollection of events past. Any attempt to give an alternate memory will show a static like interference in the memories playback. Only Artemis can manipulate these memories from their bottle once collected.
Requirements: None
Range: Touch
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No


Altar of Memories: The only way I can approve this, is if the jutsu only allows the user to see the memories, and show them, not use them in any other way. Think R2D2's hologram messages here. And it would need to be S rank at least, since you classify the accompanying jutsu as a Forbidden jutsu. Anything labeled as Forbidden is instantly at least an S, if not S+ jutsu.

Tribute of the mind: As for this second jutsu, I'm going to have to say no. Blocking, or even temporarily removing/changing a memory is a high rank jutsu, so for a genin to have access to this would be unheard of, not even a Yamanaka genin has access to anything this powerful. For this to be passed, you will need to put a duration on both, a heavy duration on this last one, and the memories can not be completely erased/inaccessible forever. And this one will need to be an S+, since not everyone is an all-knowing headmaster.


How would you go about making this usable for a character that specializes in genjutsu? I wish to make it usable as genin and the intention was to simply use it for training and spying purposes.

As for being a forbidden technique, the reason i classified it as that was simply the destruction of the memory in question, meaning it has a negative effect on the person its used on that is psychologically damaging.


The reason that this can't be learned at Genin is because, the way you have this written, your character could technically wipe all memories of any and all jutsu from someone else's mind. This is unacceptable for a Kage, much less a genin to have this much power. It is simply too dangerous, and at genin, would more than likely backfire on all but the most talented of genjutsu users, not saying that your RPC isn't, just stating that that's how something like this would work. I simply can't let this go with anything less than an S rank slapped on it.


Ok I understand what your saying here but i think there is a mistranslation in play. I don't want to delete all memories of a target, in fact the deletion of the memory was supposed to be the downside for extracting my own memories to review them. I just want it as sort of a video recorder that will tell no lies. Would that be doable?


I understand what you're trying to get at, but the way it's written, that is still possible. You will need to edit it so that literally ALL this can do is store memories for a limited time, not permanently, and play them back like a hologram made of chakra, And I'd sat something like one or two posts max for this jutsu to be a B and C rank. Otherwise these are just too powerful as is. I like the idea of them, but the way they read, they are S-S+ ranks.

Change the wording so that nothing is permanent, put in the post limits, and have it so that it can only be used to show others the memories taken, and I'll look over it once more, I'm sorry this is becoming a process for you.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 27, 2015 2:47 pm


Nyx_Nightshade_7656
Lily the Forgotten
Nyx_Nightshade_7656
Lily the Forgotten
Nyx_Nightshade_7656
Lily the Forgotten
Creator: Me! =D
RPC Using Technique: Artemis Uchiha
Jutsu Name: Altar of Memories
Rank: B rank
Element: Maruton
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: A technique created by Artemis when she was still in the academy, the Altar is more of a figure of speech. This allows her to project her memories into a visible plane, playing them in front of her as if they are ghostly videos. The Altar in question is a floating sphere made of chakra and before it can be used; a memory must be placed into it through another jutsu. The memories therein can be used for any purpose the user sees fit.
Requirements: None
Range: Personal
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No

Creator: Me again! =D
RPC Using Technique: Artemis Uchiha
Jutsu Name: Tribute of the mind
Rank: C rank
Element: Maruton
Classification: Ninjutsu / Forbidden Ninjutsu
Description: A technique developed for educational reasons can be used for much more nefarious ones. The user or target must be thinking of something that happened in their past that they witnessed. Upon touching their temple a white whispy substance will come away on Artemis's fingers. This is that memory. The target or user can no longer pull this memory to their own mind and for all intents and purposes is destroyed in their minds eye.

However, this memory can still be used. The substance can be both bottled for later use through the Altar of Memories. These memories are the perfect recollection of events past. Any attempt to give an alternate memory will show a static like interference in the memories playback. Only Artemis can manipulate these memories from their bottle once collected.
Requirements: None
Range: Touch
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild?: No


Altar of Memories: The only way I can approve this, is if the jutsu only allows the user to see the memories, and show them, not use them in any other way. Think R2D2's hologram messages here. And it would need to be S rank at least, since you classify the accompanying jutsu as a Forbidden jutsu. Anything labeled as Forbidden is instantly at least an S, if not S+ jutsu.

Tribute of the mind: As for this second jutsu, I'm going to have to say no. Blocking, or even temporarily removing/changing a memory is a high rank jutsu, so for a genin to have access to this would be unheard of, not even a Yamanaka genin has access to anything this powerful. For this to be passed, you will need to put a duration on both, a heavy duration on this last one, and the memories can not be completely erased/inaccessible forever. And this one will need to be an S+, since not everyone is an all-knowing headmaster.


How would you go about making this usable for a character that specializes in genjutsu? I wish to make it usable as genin and the intention was to simply use it for training and spying purposes.

As for being a forbidden technique, the reason i classified it as that was simply the destruction of the memory in question, meaning it has a negative effect on the person its used on that is psychologically damaging.


The reason that this can't be learned at Genin is because, the way you have this written, your character could technically wipe all memories of any and all jutsu from someone else's mind. This is unacceptable for a Kage, much less a genin to have this much power. It is simply too dangerous, and at genin, would more than likely backfire on all but the most talented of genjutsu users, not saying that your RPC isn't, just stating that that's how something like this would work. I simply can't let this go with anything less than an S rank slapped on it.


Ok I understand what your saying here but i think there is a mistranslation in play. I don't want to delete all memories of a target, in fact the deletion of the memory was supposed to be the downside for extracting my own memories to review them. I just want it as sort of a video recorder that will tell no lies. Would that be doable?


I understand what you're trying to get at, but the way it's written, that is still possible. You will need to edit it so that literally ALL this can do is store memories for a limited time, not permanently, and play them back like a hologram made of chakra, And I'd sat something like one or two posts max for this jutsu to be a B and C rank. Otherwise these are just too powerful as is. I like the idea of them, but the way they read, they are S-S+ ranks.

Change the wording so that nothing is permanent, put in the post limits, and have it so that it can only be used to show others the memories taken, and I'll look over it once more, I'm sorry this is becoming a process for you.


What would be an acceptable duration?

Also what were the issues that you needed sorted about the first one? Its literally just a pensive from the um...potter...universe ><

Lily the Forgotten

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