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 Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 8:11 pm
Lostinur_smile Before I start editing I want to run something by you. What if Margo's limitation is she can't transform into a tiger like her brother can because she has a sickness and she is really frail so that would cause her to die. Would you be able to explain why it would cause her to die?
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 8:13 pm
Looks good. But, the only available slots at the moment are on team three. The game is unbalanced right now. I can't accept any other team at the moment. You can either wait for a slot on team one, or rewrite your character for team three. =3
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 8:37 pm
Miss Fruit Loops There is no small village in the forest. Ans for a limitation, I would have to say these things would be immobilized by something as comment as water. Your character is way too powerful right now. The scrolls are with the other game objects hidden in territories. that is fine however i would like to change it from complete immobilization to only partial because otherwise my character will never be able to cross rivers because he is too heavy to travel by boat. in other words it would slow him down allot but it won't completely immobilize him. plus even though he has five different souls in him he can only be controlled by one at a time, and he can only switch between them once per day. making it so that way he isn't as powerful and it limits what he can do. i can even make it so that since he doesn't need to eat sleep or breathe that he has something like a habit that he has to do during the night or whenever that takes up his time and makes it so he can't battle until he is finished. I'm not trying to under power him just trying to come up with alternatives that don't totally screw me. this way he is still powerful in his own right but yet balanced with everyone else. ^^
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 8:46 pm
Deathrider888 Miss Fruit Loops Deathrider888 Finished Editing and use the main one, the other two are just looks. The main one is The Necromancer pic. And I'm a little confused. If's he's just a demon that practices necromancy, why does he have a demon and a necromancer appearance? Shouldn't he have just one? Oh man i should have explained it. The Necromancer appearance is just what he looks like from far away, when the hood is up or when nuts with magic power. Now the Demon Appearance is a transformation, an abnormality gotten from his mother being human and a demon father. Plus his insanity adding it up, equals a second body or more likely a second persona, a darker version of Damien. Something nobody can control. And he has a blood of a demon running in his veins, he's not a demon, only a Half Demon, he's more human than any other demons only, yet he's kind of the only demon who has two persona. A More Human one And a More Dark and Demonic one. Hope that explains it. Tiefling much?
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 8:47 pm
Aeronathe Miss Fruit Loops There is no small village in the forest. Ans for a limitation, I would have to say these things would be immobilized by something as comment as water. Your character is way too powerful right now. The scrolls are with the other game objects hidden in territories. that is fine however i would like to change it from complete immobilization to only partial because otherwise my character will never be able to cross rivers because he is too heavy to travel by boat. in other words it would slow him down allot but it won't completely immobilize him. plus even though he has five different souls in him he can only be controlled by one at a time, and he can only switch between them once per day. making it so that way he isn't as powerful and it limits what he can do. i can even make it so that since he doesn't need to eat sleep or breathe that he has something like a habit that he has to do during the night or whenever that takes up his time and makes it so he can't battle until he is finished. I'm not trying to under power him just trying to come up with alternatives that don't totally screw me. this way he is still powerful in his own right but yet balanced with everyone else. ^^ I think he should at least need to rest for so many hours a day. Would you make the changes and repost your character here?
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 8:54 pm
Aeronathe Deathrider888 Miss Fruit Loops Deathrider888 Finished Editing and use the main one, the other two are just looks. The main one is The Necromancer pic. And I'm a little confused. If's he's just a demon that practices necromancy, why does he have a demon and a necromancer appearance? Shouldn't he have just one? Oh man i should have explained it. The Necromancer appearance is just what he looks like from far away, when the hood is up or when nuts with magic power. Now the Demon Appearance is a transformation, an abnormality gotten from his mother being human and a demon father. Plus his insanity adding it up, equals a second body or more likely a second persona, a darker version of Damien. Something nobody can control. And he has a blood of a demon running in his veins, he's not a demon, only a Half Demon, he's more human than any other demons only, yet he's kind of the only demon who has two persona. A More Human one And a More Dark and Demonic one. Hope that explains it. Tiefling much? Tiefling? I like to make my chars miserable that's all
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 9:07 pm
Miss Fruit Loops I would like to see some more elaboration on this character. The idea is interesting and I really want to accept him, but I just don't understand him very well. I also need either a team or a role. I don't know where to put him! DX And could you make a race description with a limitation? War forged isn't something I can easily research and make a description for. This sounds like something you've made up out of your own head. =3 This includes most of the information you need to know about the race as a whole. so that way you can hold others to this standard. my character is a warforged of custom design which is why he is different. Warforged
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 9:08 pm
Miss Fruit Loops Aeronathe Miss Fruit Loops There is no small village in the forest. Ans for a limitation, I would have to say these things would be immobilized by something as comment as water. Your character is way too powerful right now. The scrolls are with the other game objects hidden in territories. that is fine however i would like to change it from complete immobilization to only partial because otherwise my character will never be able to cross rivers because he is too heavy to travel by boat. in other words it would slow him down allot but it won't completely immobilize him. plus even though he has five different souls in him he can only be controlled by one at a time, and he can only switch between them once per day. making it so that way he isn't as powerful and it limits what he can do. i can even make it so that since he doesn't need to eat sleep or breathe that he has something like a habit that he has to do during the night or whenever that takes up his time and makes it so he can't battle until he is finished. I'm not trying to under power him just trying to come up with alternatives that don't totally screw me. this way he is still powerful in his own right but yet balanced with everyone else. ^^ I think he should at least need to rest for so many hours a day. Would you make the changes and repost your character here? yes i sure can ^^
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 9:10 pm
Deathrider888 Aeronathe Deathrider888 Miss Fruit Loops Deathrider888 Finished Editing and use the main one, the other two are just looks. The main one is The Necromancer pic. And I'm a little confused. If's he's just a demon that practices necromancy, why does he have a demon and a necromancer appearance? Shouldn't he have just one? Oh man i should have explained it. The Necromancer appearance is just what he looks like from far away, when the hood is up or when nuts with magic power. Now the Demon Appearance is a transformation, an abnormality gotten from his mother being human and a demon father. Plus his insanity adding it up, equals a second body or more likely a second persona, a darker version of Damien. Something nobody can control. And he has a blood of a demon running in his veins, he's not a demon, only a Half Demon, he's more human than any other demons only, yet he's kind of the only demon who has two persona. A More Human one And a More Dark and Demonic one. Hope that explains it. Tiefling much? Tiefling? I like to make my chars miserable that's all
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 9:17 pm
Aeronathe Deathrider888 Aeronathe Deathrider888 Miss Fruit Loops Deathrider888 Finished Editing and use the main one, the other two are just looks. The main one is The Necromancer pic. And I'm a little confused. If's he's just a demon that practices necromancy, why does he have a demon and a necromancer appearance? Shouldn't he have just one? Oh man i should have explained it. The Necromancer appearance is just what he looks like from far away, when the hood is up or when nuts with magic power. Now the Demon Appearance is a transformation, an abnormality gotten from his mother being human and a demon father. Plus his insanity adding it up, equals a second body or more likely a second persona, a darker version of Damien. Something nobody can control. And he has a blood of a demon running in his veins, he's not a demon, only a Half Demon, he's more human than any other demons only, yet he's kind of the only demon who has two persona. A More Human one And a More Dark and Demonic one. Hope that explains it. Tiefling much? Tiefling? I like to make my chars miserable that's all Yeah i'm tiefling. Except Aiona was raped by a demon, she didn't sell her soul
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 9:28 pm
 N a m e Fa-Qi, Rossotum, Za, Quelin, Bodut N i c k n a m e The Guardian, Divine Protector, Inescapable Justice, All seeing sentinel, Master Fabricator A g e Uknown G e n d e r N/A R a c e Warforged R o l e Gaurdian P e r s o n a l i t y Fa-Qi: Calm, collected, reasonable. He is quick witted and very punctual he tends to only deal with what he deems is the most important issue at the current time. he very difficult to anger and considered rude for he is not a conversationalist. He is very righteous when it comes to enforcing the laws and believes that no one person should be above the law. nor does he condone the bending nor breaking of laws. He is swift to punish any lawbreakers who are aware of the laws of the place they are currently in.
Rossotum: arrogant, prideful, theatrical. He looks down on all others regardless of their size or status and is very prideful to a fault. He doesn't care to listen to the problems of others and he is very wrathful when it comes to crossing him.He feels that his time is best spent either researching magic or fighting a foe who is worthy of his time and effort.
Za: loves to fight, often times flying into a rage or frenzy(whichever you wish to call it) and knows only two words, his name and the word "Finally"; kills indiscriminately and without hesitation.
Quelin: Boisterous, focused, and methodical. Loves to tinker with items of all kinds, both magical and not.Constantly trying to improve what already exists regardless of whether it need it or not.
Bodut: peaceful, unphased, simple. He enjoys the simple things in life and doesn't care much for fighting. He does however like to be useful and will do what ever he can to try and help others B i o A long time ago Quelin the clever artificer was working on trying to create the perfect warrior. Using his studies of magic and technology he managed to create a creation forge which he kept hidden from the rest of the world. Over the rest of the course of his life he spent time gathering the souls of powerful beings and placing them in phylacteries which he was intending to use for a greater purpose. Along his travels he had discovered an unknown metal that he deemed to be star metal as it has come from a meteor that had crash landed on the planet. Taking as much of this rare metal as he could get his hands on The artificer did one last thing, he sealed his own soul into a Phylactery and placed each of them into a massive 12' tall hulking golem made of star metal. The golem was the product of his creation forge. he had used it to create a lifeless Warforged whom he bestowed life to with the Use of his Phylacteries.
For thousands of years this said gollem has stood dormant at the entrance to a small village. many of the people praising and worshiping it though they have no clue where it came from or how long ago it was created or by whom it was created. The village people know however that because of it's strange presence nothing bad ever seems to happen to their town. O t h e r He has five souls that reside within his body;Fa-Qi: The Monk, Rossotum: The Archmage, Za: The Barbarian, Quelin: The Artificer, Bodut: The Minotaur. Each soul has their own abilities and powers unique to them. he can only be controlled by one soul at a time and must rest for at least 8 hours a day even though he doesn't need to sleep. Bodily afflictions such as fatigue, poison, and disease do not affect him. However he still needs to rest to replace whatever energy he has used during the day. As for the abilities of each of his souls.
Fa-Qi: he is a simply monk but he is very balanced when in comes to fighting and would prefer to fight using his bare hands versus using a weapon.
Rossotum: is a very powerful archmage that can cast many spells, i will not list them all because the list is rather long an extensive. i'll simply state that when it comes to arcane magic no one knows more that he.
Za: is just a barbarian that can rage for quite long periods of time as has no qualms of using his fists or what ever he can get his hands on as a weapon.
Quelin: is very adept at using magic to create and destroy magical items but does not have much for offensive magic. His talents are more useful when it comes to crafting new and wondrous things.
Bodut: his only remarkable talent is that he can never get lost. he knows where he is at all times even without a map, and can navigate mazes however he is severely lacking when it comes to fighting.
Only one of the five souls can be in control of the body at one time and they can only switch control once per day. However each soul has different markings and colors of the markings to show which soul is currently in control.
Three Traits: Stalwart, Heavy, and Silent 0oC: ignore the shield and sword in the picture he doesn't have them.
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 9:30 pm
Deathrider888 Yeah i'm tiefling. Except Aiona was raped by a demon, she didn't sell her soul you don't have to sell your soul, it just means that there is demonic blood in your lineage whether it be because your mother was raped or because your grandparents were devils. that was just one possibility of how you could become a Tiefling if not one by birth.
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 10:14 pm
I lied lol I'll post tomorrow, What do i need to include in my posting layout so i can do that tonight. It'll be ready in the morning and I'll post maybe about 5, oh can i have Ysuran just arriving at the games?
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 10:45 pm
xXGenetic UndergroundXx I lied lol I'll post tomorrow, What do i need to include in my posting layout so i can do that tonight. It'll be ready in the morning and I'll post maybe about 5, oh can i have Ysuran just arriving at the games? Team, picture, and name. Locations are good to add as well. It makes things easier. =3 You may have him just arriving.
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 10:50 pm
I would be willing to accept him at 8 feet tall and a non-magic user. I will also need you to put him on a team. There is no place for a guardian in this roleplay. The only slots left are on team three. Is that alright?
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