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 Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:13 pm
Antonio Inferni The Talented Fool Antonio Inferni The Talented Fool Antonio Inferni Okay. Can do, after we talk about the second one.... I could change the names and shiz...but I want to keep the power boosts that the transformations give...and the transformations. Like First form, Second form, Final form. Would that be good? No. So I can't have a blade, that transforms into different blades[2]. These transformations have a special ability, and they give him a stat boost in the process. Yup. Why is that, other then the fact it is Bleach related. Explain your non-biased reasoning. My weakness counters the boosts. Well I'll be honest that I'm biased against things that are way to close to something that already exits, my real problem with the weapon is the stat boosts (they're way to high), and the skills, (they're way too strong).
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:14 pm
Crimsondot Crimsondot Crimsondot RPC Name: Kai Blightwater RPC Rank: Student RPC Class: Warrior RPC Element: Earth Name of Weapon/Armor: Dusty Demon Pic:  Description: It is a longsword forged by a master blacksmith, as a parting gift from his father before he was murdered. It is made of steel, and when unsheathed, the gold colored part of the blade seems to become evenloped in dust particles. Kai can channel energy through the blade to control dust and transform it into forms to attack and defend. Rank: D Passives: If the blade breaks, Kai can spend a D rank energy to reform it, taking him a whole post. Skills: Dust Projectiles D Kai slashes with Dusty Demon, and in mid-slash, three shuriken or throwing knives are created and fly forward, slightly faster than if they were thrown. The projectiles are made from dust and harden in the air, ending up being as strong as iron on contact. Dust Impale D Rank Kai points Dusty Demon at a point on the ground, and a spike of dust about three feet tall and in the shape of a square pyramid is formed, and can be thrown telepathically by moving the sword. It is roughly the strength of Iron, and mushrooms out on impact for extra damage. The musroom effect expands the spike on contact about 2 feet in every direction, for extra damage and range. Rp Sample: Kai was walking peacefully down the street, when a drunk man approached him, taking a swing at his face. Kai took the nasty left hook, and staggered backwards. The man laughed, and charged again. Kai unsheathed the longsword on his left hip, performing a horizontal slash from left to right. The man stopped in his tracks, and looked down at his chest. Three knives were stuck in his torso. They were clearly made of dust, but they felt like metal knives, as they were formed and hardened with Kai's energy. The man coughed up blood, wounded by the attack. Kai pointed the type of his blade to the side of him, and created a large spike of dust, similar in nature to the knives. He raised the sword, and the spike floated in the air, tip pointed at the man. Kai motioned towards the man with the sword, and the spike flew at him, impaling him in the head, and exploding outward. Kai sheathed Dusty Demon and left. Fixed. Don't wanna be a pest it just seemed like it got buried some I'm posting it again. Okay it's approved.
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:14 pm
I'll fix that, then. RPC Name: Peace RPC Rank: Journeyman RPC Class: Marine RPC Element: Earth Name of Weapon/Armor: Seraph Description: This is a modification to the standard marine armor. Instead of the obtuse obstruction in the back, normally used for holding and storing weapons and ammo, the unit is open, capable of storing and protecting the wings of the Fallen inside. This unit is also capable of opening the sides of this container, allowing the wings to unfurl and become useful in battle, if so needed. This will also allow the character to glide for short distances, however, it is only gliding because of the sheer weight of the armor. There are also two sets of blades, totaling four in all. One in each arm, and two jagged ones that can come out of the greaves. When the wings are out and the blades are unsheathed, the entire ensemble mimics the appearance of the legendary Seraph Angels. Rank: B Passives: +1 speed Skills: Skill Name: Dicer Rank: B Description: A tricky combination of arm or leg movements spins through the air, dodging weapons and shields for a strike at the opponent. There is an off chance for a backlash with this attack, the result of an odd roll of three or five out of ten. Rp Sample: Peace knelt down, taking the brunt of the blast with the armor. The shock to the metal could be felt from inside. This bothered her more than the notion that she had been assaulted by an unfeeling cannon wielded by a fool. She pushed herself back to her feet, weapon set aside once more. She kept herself low as she started to run at the enemy. The back of the armor hissed as it released pressure, the sides of the back opening wide and allowing her gray wings to spread out. Gaining the properties of metal as they curled around her, they blocked more attacks. From here, she unclasped the blades attached to the gauntlets in the armor. They wished a fight, then so be it. The wings furled wide and she leapt to the side of the cannon, gaining a solid shot for the fool behind the controls.
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:18 pm
The Talented Fool Antonio Inferni The Talented Fool Antonio Inferni The Talented Fool Antonio Inferni Okay. Can do, after we talk about the second one.... I could change the names and shiz...but I want to keep the power boosts that the transformations give...and the transformations. Like First form, Second form, Final form. Would that be good? No. So I can't have a blade, that transforms into different blades[2]. These transformations have a special ability, and they give him a stat boost in the process. Yup. Why is that, other then the fact it is Bleach related. Explain your non-biased reasoning. My weakness counters the boosts. Well I'll be honest that I'm biased against things that are way to close to something that already exits, my real problem with the weapon is the stat boosts (they're way to high), and the skills, (they're way too strong). Then why didn't you say that in the first place. The weapon itself is SSS, the skills are SS, and SSS. I can lower the stat boost in bankai to +4 strength and +4 speed[or lower to +3/+3]. I'm giving up my class for this weapon....You should factor that in when judging this.
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:19 pm
@Rihenian ... Where is the speed coming from?
@Kidkage: I know, but how much are you planning to get out of your talent(s)?
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:31 pm
The Talented Fool @Rihenian ... Where is the speed coming from? @Kidkage: I know, but how much are you planning to get out of your talent(s)? Like +3/+3 or +4/+4. I want to be reach the maximum, then pass it by 1 or 2. I'm doing all this to be the strongest and fastest being on the planet, but I'm going to be a loyal servant to Lady Liliana. He's going to be kind, good natured, and not someone that would go out looking for a fight. One of his talents would give him a permanent +1/+1 to his stats[because he will be human.] So I'm figuring this. 6/6 Base 8/8 Sword form 2 10/10 sword form 3 6/6 + 4/4[talent] + sword form 1= 12/12 6/6 + 4/4[talent] +sword form 2= 14/14 I'm guessing the maximum will be fifteen, so I would acutally be just below the maximum. I wanted this character to have like 2-3 skills, the two sword skills[really high ranked.] and 1 other skill that would come from talent.
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:35 pm
Antonio Inferni The Talented Fool @Rihenian ... Where is the speed coming from? @Kidkage: I know, but how much are you planning to get out of your talent(s)? Like +3/+3 or +4/+4. I want to be reach the maximum, then pass it by 1 or 2. I'm doing all this to be the strongest and fastest being on the planet, but I'm going to be a loyal servant to Lady Liliana. He's going to be kind, good natured, and not someone that would go out looking for a fight. One of his talents would give him a permanent +1/+1 to his stats[because he will be human.] So I'm figuring this. 6/6 Base 8/8 Sword form 2 10/10 sword form 3 6/6 + 4/4[talent] + sword form 1= 12/12 6/6 + 4/4[talent] +sword form 2= 14/14 I'm guessing the maximum will be fifteen, so I would acutally be just below the maximum. I wanted this character to have like 2-3 skills, the two sword skills[really high ranked.] and 1 other skill that would come from talent. How but +1/1 from 2nd, then another +1/1 from 3rd stare
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:39 pm
The Talented Fool Antonio Inferni The Talented Fool @Rihenian ... Where is the speed coming from? @Kidkage: I know, but how much are you planning to get out of your talent(s)? Like +3/+3 or +4/+4. I want to be reach the maximum, then pass it by 1 or 2. I'm doing all this to be the strongest and fastest being on the planet, but I'm going to be a loyal servant to Lady Liliana. He's going to be kind, good natured, and not someone that would go out looking for a fight. One of his talents would give him a permanent +1/+1 to his stats[because he will be human.] So I'm figuring this. 6/6 Base 8/8 Sword form 2 10/10 sword form 3 6/6 + 4/4[talent] + sword form 1= 12/12 6/6 + 4/4[talent] +sword form 2= 14/14 I'm guessing the maximum will be fifteen, so I would acutally be just below the maximum. I wanted this character to have like 2-3 skills, the two sword skills[really high ranked.] and 1 other skill that would come from talent. How but +1/1 from 2nd, then another +1/1 from 3rd stare but with that there really wouldn't be a reason for me to loose class. 6/6 7/7 8/8 11/11 12/12
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:40 pm
Antonio Inferni The Talented Fool Antonio Inferni The Talented Fool @Rihenian ... Where is the speed coming from? @Kidkage: I know, but how much are you planning to get out of your talent(s)? Like +3/+3 or +4/+4. I want to be reach the maximum, then pass it by 1 or 2. I'm doing all this to be the strongest and fastest being on the planet, but I'm going to be a loyal servant to Lady Liliana. He's going to be kind, good natured, and not someone that would go out looking for a fight. One of his talents would give him a permanent +1/+1 to his stats[because he will be human.] So I'm figuring this. 6/6 Base 8/8 Sword form 2 10/10 sword form 3 6/6 + 4/4[talent] + sword form 1= 12/12 6/6 + 4/4[talent] +sword form 2= 14/14 I'm guessing the maximum will be fifteen, so I would acutally be just below the maximum. I wanted this character to have like 2-3 skills, the two sword skills[really high ranked.] and 1 other skill that would come from talent. How but +1/1 from 2nd, then another +1/1 from 3rd stare but with that there really wouldn't be a reason for me to loose class. 6/6 7/7 8/8 11/11 12/12 So then don't, problem solved. Your other stuff is gonna be nerfed too.
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:43 pm
The Talented Fool Antonio Inferni The Talented Fool Antonio Inferni The Talented Fool @Rihenian ... Where is the speed coming from? @Kidkage: I know, but how much are you planning to get out of your talent(s)? Like +3/+3 or +4/+4. I want to be reach the maximum, then pass it by 1 or 2. I'm doing all this to be the strongest and fastest being on the planet, but I'm going to be a loyal servant to Lady Liliana. He's going to be kind, good natured, and not someone that would go out looking for a fight. One of his talents would give him a permanent +1/+1 to his stats[because he will be human.] So I'm figuring this. 6/6 Base 8/8 Sword form 2 10/10 sword form 3 6/6 + 4/4[talent] + sword form 1= 12/12 6/6 + 4/4[talent] +sword form 2= 14/14 I'm guessing the maximum will be fifteen, so I would acutally be just below the maximum. I wanted this character to have like 2-3 skills, the two sword skills[really high ranked.] and 1 other skill that would come from talent. How but +1/1 from 2nd, then another +1/1 from 3rd stare but with that there really wouldn't be a reason for me to loose class. 6/6 7/7 8/8 11/11 12/12 So then don't, problem solved. Your other stuff is gonna be nerfed too. Really. I can't reach 14/14. In the process I'd loose all skills[but 3] and class.
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:44 pm
Antonio Inferni The Talented Fool Antonio Inferni The Talented Fool Antonio Inferni The Talented Fool @Rihenian ... Where is the speed coming from? @Kidkage: I know, but how much are you planning to get out of your talent(s)? Like +3/+3 or +4/+4. I want to be reach the maximum, then pass it by 1 or 2. I'm doing all this to be the strongest and fastest being on the planet, but I'm going to be a loyal servant to Lady Liliana. He's going to be kind, good natured, and not someone that would go out looking for a fight. One of his talents would give him a permanent +1/+1 to his stats[because he will be human.] So I'm figuring this. 6/6 Base 8/8 Sword form 2 10/10 sword form 3 6/6 + 4/4[talent] + sword form 1= 12/12 6/6 + 4/4[talent] +sword form 2= 14/14 I'm guessing the maximum will be fifteen, so I would acutally be just below the maximum. I wanted this character to have like 2-3 skills, the two sword skills[really high ranked.] and 1 other skill that would come from talent. How but +1/1 from 2nd, then another +1/1 from 3rd stare but with that there really wouldn't be a reason for me to loose class. 6/6 7/7 8/8 11/11 12/12 So then don't, problem solved. Your other stuff is gonna be nerfed too. Really. I can't reach 14/14. In the process I'd loose all skills[but 3] and class. I don't think you need to go past 10/10. Anything beyond that is pushing it too far.
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:48 pm
The Talented Fool Antonio Inferni The Talented Fool Antonio Inferni The Talented Fool How but +1/1 from 2nd, then another +1/1 from 3rd stare but with that there really wouldn't be a reason for me to loose class. 6/6 7/7 8/8 11/11 12/12 So then don't, problem solved. Your other stuff is gonna be nerfed too. Really. I can't reach 14/14. In the process I'd loose all skills[but 3] and class. I don't think you need to go past 10/10. Anything beyond that is pushing it too far. I'll take it. Anything else you wanna nerf.
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:49 pm
A fair question. I would attribute that to an upgrade in the armor, helping to attribute to its rank. The strength of the suit, in a way, is more wired to speed than to do damage to someone else. Should it not be there?
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 8:35 pm
Rihenian A fair question. I would attribute that to an upgrade in the armor, helping to attribute to its rank. The strength of the suit, in a way, is more wired to speed than to do damage to someone else. Should it not be there? Armor is armor, unless it has some kind of internal mechanism that acts like a second set of muscles, you shouldn't be getting any kind of boost. You have to realize most armor weighs down and/or limits the range of motion, which would reduce strength or speed, and not enhance it.
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 8:49 pm
I was hoping the mechanisms in the armor might be able to compensate for the weight. I'll take it down, then.
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