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 Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:33 pm
The Criticizer Inferni: Tsukiakari:
- Is there any particular reason why exactly those elements as its weaknesses? Also, give it a Taijutsu defense as well. How many slashes/taijutsu strikes would it take to break your sword?
- We'll see what Cobra has to say on your technique there, last time he did not let a similar technique, so we have to wait for his decision. Water, because light is distorted by water, fire because well, fire melts metal. As to taijutsu. It would depend on the rank. I know Nothing under C rank could destroy it in one hit. Maybe like 3. C rank would be 2. All others would be 1. Is that good?
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2011 2:40 am
Quote: Name of Weapon: Rageblade Who Owns the Weapon: Goruko Shinado Where it Was Found?/ Who Made it? Goruko's great grandfather made it as a family heirloom. It is a traditional styled sword from the Grass Country. Range: 4 1/2 ft. Weakness: * One-sided blade * Short ranged * Bulky. (Stealth -) Weapon Description: The rage-blade is a scimitar that is common in the Grass Country. This weapon has the Shinado's insigma, making it a high honor to the wielders of this fine blade. It was made for the soul purpose of defending the Shinado Honor. Special Properties/Abilites: Shinado's Rage: When the user of this weapon is on his/her last leg, he raises his sword in front of him and says "Shinado's Rage", activating a fury of cuts and slashes that last for 5 post while decreasing the stamina loss by half. Rp Sample: I think the ability is pretty self-explanatory. Quote: Name of Weapon: Dagger Who Owns the Weapon: Goruko Shinado Where it Was Found?/ Who Made it? Goruko's father gave it to him when he left the Grass Country. Range: 1 1/2 ft. in hand / 30 yards thrown Weakness: * VERY Short * Unable to use class ability Weapon Description: This dagger was hand crafted by Goruko's father. It resembles the rageblade, but is at least one-third of the size. Special Properties/Abilites: Father's Blessing: When using the dagger, if the user comes to a point where the user has to escape, the dagger's ability is able to cloak the user for three post, while stumping scouts up to Chuunin rank. Rp Sample: Ability is self-explanatory.
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 6:08 am
Customs will be responded to in this order: (Working on it...)The Criticizer Weapon:The Green Shield (Name by Tyson) Electric Parfait Name of Weapon: Flash Flood TrafalgarHyozo Name of Weapon: Hyouzou's Nodachi Antonio Inferni Name of Weapon: Tsukiakari [Moonlight
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 6:26 am
Cobra_X Customs will be responded to in this order: (Working on it...)The Criticizer Weapon:The Green Shield (Name by Tyson) Electric Parfait Name of Weapon: Flash Flood TrafalgarHyozo Name of Weapon: Hyouzou's Nodachi Antonio Inferni Name of Weapon: Tsukiakari [Moonlight Mine isn't done/Under Construction. I'll Quote it when finished.
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 6:36 am
iKaze Arashi Name of Weapon: Mekajiki [Sword Fish] iKaze Arashi Weakness: Mekajiki is defeated by Fuuton jutsu which aim directly at her. Fuuton ninjutsu that are able to push her and her wielder back. iKaze Arashi Mekajiki is highly water resistant, even able to cut through Suiton ninjutsu one rank above her wielder's rank, stopping the ninjutsu in its tracks. Her natural design is made to decimate Suiton jutsu all together. Her shape is all custom made for human bodies as well, cutting through them with ease.
Cutting through Techniques below your rank: D-rank, Costs 3 Chakra and 2 Stamina... requires a 1 post cooldown before being used again.
Cutting through a technique at your rank: C-rank, Costs 5 chakra and 3 stamina... requires a 2 post cooldown.
Cutting through a technique (up to one rank above your own): A-rank cost, 10 chakra and 7 stamina... requires a 3 post cooldown.
...Cooldown must be respected at all times and the user cannot use this ability again until the required posts are fulfilled. So, if you slice through something above your rank, you cannot slice through something below your rank until the 3 post cooldown is completed.iKaze Arashi Her wielder is able to change her shape with chakra. Although, not in the same method as Hiramekarei was able to. Mekajiki is able to extend only (up to a maximum length of 2ft). iKaze Arashi Mekajiki is also able to channel Raiton through herself,allowing her to be called "The Single Kiba", simply meaning while she extends, its covered in Raiton, giving it more cutting power. iKaze Arashi When charged with Raiton chakra, Mekajiki vibrates violently, like anything else charged with Raiton chakra. Only those she is familiar with are able to even hold her steady. This ability is called excitement because she is always mid-battle when charged with Raiton, and she has become 'excited'.
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 9:25 am
The Criticizer The Gauntlet form's only ability is an Active Move or technique which costs one chakra point. The technique allows the two blades in the front to violently shake, such creating a Bleeding Effect. He can use this ability only twice per battle, and the Effect comes when tearing the enemy's muscles. Even after the blades are out of the body, the enemy suffers a loss of one stamina point for the next five posts.
...I would however add an effect however, saying that the Stamina drain from multiple wounds stack, and each wound has it's own post counter. So if it strikes an opponent twice, one post after the other, the Stamina drain would stack from 1 to 2.
...I would also increase # of uses to 3.The Criticizer To transform to the Shield Form Kenzo pays one chakra point. It can block up to A-Rank nin/ken jutsu, while up to B-Rank Taijutsu. The Shield form's ability costs five chakra points. By running chakra through the shield, the lines between 'tiles' glow the color of Kenzo's chakra. This intensifies the shield and can ignore a side of an attack. For example, if this would absorb an A-Ranked Taijutsu it would ignore a side of the attack, such taking the enemy another two attacks to destroy the shield. Or would ignore half of the S-Rank's attack, such needing another attack [Or another half] of the same rank to destroy it. After using this, the shield returns to the original form. The shield can be held active for five posts, while Kenzo would have to wait for another three posts to be able to activate again.
... So during that time, the Shield blocks any ninjutsu A-rank or below for free?
That is so insanely broken.
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 12:12 pm
1. Remember that it is IF the attack lands, and I probably have a fifty-fifty percent chance of hitting with this ability.
On your second offer, I don't know if we're on the same ground. If I hit you while using this ability, for the next three posts you're gonna loose a stamina point. Or did you mean that if I hit you twice in a row you would loose two stamina points for the next three posts? But yes, We'll increase the number of uses to three and the drain time to three posts as well.
2. I do understand that it seems OP, but it is also the only reason of the weapon really. We could also put a weakness to the shield that once it receives an A-Rank attack or above it closes instantly, if it receives a S-Rank it breaks. Sounds better?
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 12:38 am
Cobra_X iKaze Arashi Name of Weapon: Mekajiki [Sword Fish] All your other points have the chakra and stamina cost added. Raiton Ability: Is there any idea you have for this? I could remove adding more cutting power, adding in numbing due to the electricity. But anyone could easily see how easy it would be to cut someone down with an extremely sharp blade that numbs, y'know? Weakness: Hmm. When I said defeated, I meant when they're hit by it it throws them off our something like this. I made the weakness Fuuton simply because of the Raiton ability, then realized the Raiton ability really wasn't going to effect the blades usage. So,... I've run out of ideas for this.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 12:57 pm
The Criticizer 1. Remember that it is IF the attack lands, and I probably have a fifty-fifty percent chance of hitting with this ability. The Criticizer On your second offer, I don't know if we're on the same ground. If I hit you while using this ability, for the next three posts you're gonna loose a stamina point. Or did you mean that if I hit you twice in a row you would loose two stamina points for the next three posts? But yes, We'll increase the number of uses to three and the drain time to three posts as well.
Someone is hit by the ability: For the next three posts they will take one point of Stamina drain
On the next post, they are hit again: For the next three posts, the user will take one point of Stamina drain.
...now, each wound is a separate wound which causes Stamina drain for a certain number of rounds... so actually for 2 posts, you'll receive 2 stamina drain (1 from each wound)... and on the third post, once one of the wounds stops bleeding, the victim will only take 1 stamina point drain... until the next post when they take none (Since both wounds stop bleeding)
...that's what I mean by additive stacking.The Criticizer 2. I do understand that it seems OP, but it is also the only reason of the weapon really. We could also put a weakness to the shield that once it receives an A-Rank attack or above it closes instantly, if it receives a S-Rank it breaks. Sounds better?
But I'm sorry, even what you proposed is too strong. I cannot allow a shield to simply block all ninjutsu below A-rank on a whim. I am okay with allowing you to block ninjutsu occasionally with it, but I can't let you do more then that. You'll have to think of some other way to balance the weapon... applying some kind of cooldown between uses or additional costs.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 1:01 pm
iKaze Arashi Raiton Ability: Is there any idea you have for this? I could remove adding more cutting power, adding in numbing due to the electricity. But anyone could easily see how easy it would be to cut someone down with an extremely sharp blade that numbs, y'know? iKaze Arashi Weakness: Hmm. When I said defeated, I meant when they're hit by it it throws them off our something like this. I made the weakness Fuuton simply because of the Raiton ability, then realized the Raiton ability really wasn't going to effect the blades usage. So,... I've run out of ideas for this.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 1:07 pm
I'm still going to have to say no to canceling projectile types, because it's already doing enough imo and giving it much more would be too powerful. I think you should stick with the after effects in terms of deflecting projectile based weapons and damaging the opponent. I think that should be plenty strong for your tastes.-o-Havik-o- How about this for A and S ranks... A ranked after effect: At this rank smaller Shinobi (Any one at 180 or less) can be lifted off the ground by the gale and thrown for several meter. It will also feel as though the nin were struck by a dull blade which mimics the power of the Kenjutsu strike used. S ranked: This level any one can be thrown by the gale, they will be thrown hard, almost enough to go through a tree. The gale will also carry 2/3 the force Havik sword normally would, and it will mimic the kenjutsu strike used.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 1:12 pm
With what we've been discussing in PMs, do you still want this sword?
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 1:22 pm
The Range of a weapon is not the same as it's Blade length. The range is the maximum distance away from yourself that the weapon can strike.Antonio Inferni Weakness: This blade is extremely weak against Suiton and Katon. They do extra damage to it.[E-->D, D-->C, etc] Antonio Inferni Tsuki no hikari [Rays of the Moon]
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 1:50 pm
Cobra_X I'm still going to have to say no to canceling projectile types, because it's already doing enough imo and giving it much more would be too powerful. I think you should stick with the after effects in terms of deflecting projectile based weapons and damaging the opponent. I think that should be plenty strong for your tastes.-o-Havik-o- How about this for A and S ranks... A ranked after effect: At this rank smaller Shinobi (Any one at 180 or less) can be lifted off the ground by the gale and thrown for several meter. It will also feel as though the nin were struck by a dull blade which mimics the power of the Kenjutsu strike used. S ranked: This level any one can be thrown by the gale, they will be thrown hard, almost enough to go through a tree. The gale will also carry 2/3 the force Havik sword normally would, and it will mimic the kenjutsu strike used.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 2:33 pm
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2. I like the idea, just something. The wound does not stop it's bleeding totally after three posts, simply the 'shaving' effect leaves then. Normally, the wound is not healed after so it still bleeds.
3. So, what do you think it would block for sure? C-Rank and below? Remember that I took care so I cannot spam it to block each jutsu, it has a cooldown.
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