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 Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 1:11 pm
Alright, feed back xD
It's way too cluttered
Definitely take off the portal and the Jinxi's Charm
With those gone we can focus on the avi and give it a little more..
The wings need to go.. you already have sooo much purple.
When you are making an avi you need to set out and pick your color themes before you start.. and if you need to rearrange your colors you can.
This is just to give you an idea of what you are aiming for instead of just.. doing whatever.
Now lets try and add in a few colors..
Make sure that the colors go well together.. they can't fully blend or clash..
maybe try a red.. or a green. ( anything.. just make sure it looks nice xD )
Always use the same color tones... if the colors don't match it just looks messy.
We don't want that.
The colors need to be evened out on the avi.. that means top, middle, and bottom.
If you're going to add an item that isn't on the avi.. make sure its an accent to the avi.. and not just something that distracts you from the avi.
Try not to use colors close together.. for instance.. with the way you did your avi.
the purple clothes and the purple hair.. that doesn't go well... why?
because it blends.. you want it to pop :3
Hope that helps some
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 1:17 pm
Just... when exactly are we going to decide on a winner?
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 2:10 pm
I've been wondering that too..
The captain hasn't been in here for a while..
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Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 8:38 am
BreeHale my new yin yang twins, hope they are better than the last.... a little more pricey in my opinion, but not over 1 mil
boy:
girl:
feedback?
resubmitting for feedback.... what can i improve? what should i get rid of?
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Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 11:30 am
BreeHale BreeHale my new yin yang twins, hope they are better than the last.... a little more pricey in my opinion, but not over 1 mil
boy:
girl:
feedback? resubmitting for feedback.... what can i improve? what should i get rid of?
I really think you could add more to the avi's themselves.
I don't think they have to be exactly alike.. but as long as you play along with the theme correctly you should be okay
Maybe change the girls hair? o.o
And I don't know why.. but for me .. it bothers me so much when girl avis have pants x.x
It makes them seem shorter.. if that makes sense.
... it probably doesn't <.< oh well
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Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 11:32 am
Lady Kira X Alright, feed back xD
It's way too cluttered
Definitely take off the portal and the Jinxi's Charm
With those gone we can focus on the avi and give it a little more..
The wings need to go.. you already have sooo much purple.
When you are making an avi you need to set out and pick your color themes before you start.. and if you need to rearrange your colors you can.
This is just to give you an idea of what you are aiming for instead of just.. doing whatever.
Now lets try and add in a few colors..
Make sure that the colors go well together.. they can't fully blend or clash..
maybe try a red.. or a green. ( anything.. just make sure it looks nice xD )
Always use the same color tones... if the colors don't match it just looks messy.
We don't want that.
The colors need to be evened out on the avi.. that means top, middle, and bottom.
If you're going to add an item that isn't on the avi.. make sure its an accent to the avi.. and not just something that distracts you from the avi.
Try not to use colors close together.. for instance.. with the way you did your avi.
the purple clothes and the purple hair.. that doesn't go well... why?
because it blends.. you want it to pop :3
Hope that helps some thanks for the advice. as you can see i m a fan of purple. i just wanted to see what people think of it. but i think I will change it a bit. thanks
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Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 12:16 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 12:26 pm
BreeHale BreeHale my new yin yang twins, hope they are better than the last.... a little more pricey in my opinion, but not over 1 mil
boy:
girl:
feedback? resubmitting for feedback.... what can i improve? what should i get rid of? try to add more color instead of just white and black.
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Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 1:10 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 12:24 pm
they look good. I dont think you need to add anything.
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 2:30 pm
Lady Kira X BreeHale BreeHale my new yin yang twins, hope they are better than the last.... a little more pricey in my opinion, but not over 1 mil
boy:
girl:
feedback? resubmitting for feedback.... what can i improve? what should i get rid of?
I really think you could add more to the avi's themselves.
I don't think they have to be exactly alike.. but as long as you play along with the theme correctly you should be okay
Maybe change the girls hair? o.o
And I don't know why.. but for me .. it bothers me so much when girl avis have pants x.x
It makes them seem shorter.. if that makes sense.
... it probably doesn't <.< oh well
adding to the avis.... like playing with hair and eye color? and i can possibly give the girl a skirt or something
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 2:32 pm
Saphirre_Sky BreeHale BreeHale my new yin yang twins, hope they are better than the last.... a little more pricey in my opinion, but not over 1 mil
boy:
girl:
feedback? resubmitting for feedback.... what can i improve? what should i get rid of? try to add more color instead of just white and black.
black and white is the theme.... i did state it was "yin yang" twins.... not meaning to sound rude, sorry if i sound it
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 3:33 pm
changed the twins up a bit.... again... mainly the girl.... i hope they might be better this time... more to people's standards
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Posted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 12:20 pm
cn i get some feed back pwezz >.<
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Posted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 2:40 pm
Polar Opposites. Without the price tag. D: But I can promise that I did not go over the 1mil. Limit. C:  Princess Charles &  Prince Catherine
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