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 Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 3:46 pm
(how about this? just trying to help)  she suddenly appeared before aki, her face close to his.
"so your aki huh?" she grinned
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:09 pm
Hana saw the girl with Aki. "Aki!"
Aki did not give the girl the satisfaction of letting her faze him. "Who are you?" he asked calmly.
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:16 pm
she placed a finger just beneath her lips. "me? hmmm. i'm devina, nice to meet you".
like a little girl she stuck out her tounge playfully and giggled.
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:21 pm
"What brings you here?" Aki asked. It was an innocent enough question, with nothing implied by it.
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:25 pm
Bjorn walked up behind the girl named Devina. He was charged with protecting Aki, and would continue to do so. The woman had been spying on them, so she couldn't be trusted...at least not by him.
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:27 pm
"who knows, had nothing to do, i guess". she crouched in front of him and placed her chin on her hands.
"just plain bored". she smiled, her eyes looked more relaxed then before. she felt the big guys presence behind her and chuckled. she stood and glanced bk not turning her head. "seems i've stirred up some tention".
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 7:38 pm
[Eragon xP Regardless, hentaro, I think that might kinda be bordering on godmodding, or at least PC controlling...you can't really force Devina to look at you unless you do it yourself, IE, with your character's hands.]
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 7:58 pm
okie dokie XD
I deleted it and I'll remake it. C:
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 8:04 pm
 Laptus Borielle Azure
Warrior/Mage/"Speak or Spells"/'Thoughts'/ Actions/Describing "My prayers go up to Bevaita..." The voice had disappated with the wind only to come back in the form of a human. It slowly approached the camp. He realized that it was a woman. As quickly as a hawk, Bjorn had his massive fist locked around the petite woman's shoulder. A quick exchange of words between the two resulted in the woman placed her palm on Bjorn and let loose a torrent of lightning. 'No incantation? She must be skilled' However the lightning seemed to have no effect on Bjorn. In that instant she dissolved into darkness once more only then to appear next to Aki. "So you're Aki?" she inquired playfully. Aki calmly replied "Who are you?". The woman giggled. "Me? Hmmm, I'm Devina, nice to meet you." Laptus gazed at the woman. Every inch of his fiber screamed at him to kill this woman here and now. The mere sight of her caused him great irritation. "It seems that I've stirred up some tension..." she remarked. Bjorn was now behind the woman clearly protective over Aki. It was clear that she was a threat and she was a great nusance to Laptus, it seemed adequit to get rid of her. He stood, drawing out his dual blades. He began to mutter his spell quietly "Adurna risa! Skoliro!" A shroud of water enveloped Aki, shielding him from the woman. He stepped closer to the woman. He slowly bore an uninterested look with each step. "Please understand. I don't like to share. Also, this place is really unsuitable for one as young as you CHILD. Allow me to show you the way out..." ((Better? Idk xD Srry bout earlier, LOL eragon))
(( writer block just pulled random things off the shelve xDDD)) "And may my heart bleed for you"
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 4:01 am
[Not really. The main problem is this line "She whriled around to face him, her face looking discontent and displeased." Devina is not your character, so you can't control her reaction. Just delete that line and you're good to go.]
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 10:41 am
(it's fine devina would have probably turned to him anyway) she then glanced at the boy beside her and grinned as she heard him mumble his incatation.
quick as the wind she glided over to him and had landed on his left blade, balanced perfectly. looking him in the eyes. "child?...coming from" she tapped her finger on his nose. "you"
Her eyes grew larger as she deeply laughed. "i dont need an escort, no matter how much of a Lady i am". she toyed with his words, making a mockery of him.
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 2:33 pm
((XD I just love how everyone wants to protect Aki, even though he is able to protect himself now.))
Hana stood protectively near Aki, ready to defend him at all costs.
((...That's all I gots. sweatdrop ))
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 3:16 pm
 Laptus Borielle Azure
Warrior/Mage/"Speak or Spells"/'Thoughts'/ Actions/Describing "My prayers go up to Bevaita..." As quick as he said his spell she quickly floated towards him. Clearly enjoying herself, Devina tapped his nose with a wide grin. "Child...coming from you?" she laughed. She continued as she jumped lightly onto his left blade "I don't need an escort, no matter how much of a Lady I am." She continued to laugh, enjoying every moment of it. Mocking him......how he loathed it. In a fit of anger he flung her back. ((Lazy, Thats all
"And may my heart bleed for you"
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 3:41 pm
she saw his frustration and giggled. as he flung her back she backflipped landing gracfully on a branch
"well, well" she laughed and blood trickled down from her right eye. "oops" her lips moved and her eyes widened suddenly a piercing pain shot through laptus' head quickly.
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