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 Posted: Tue Mar 16, 2010 9:30 am
Luna: I would prefer if you put more detail into the fight, because quite frankly saying "you hit his vital spots" without telling me what those spots are doesn't tell me a whole lot, but I'll look past that as long as you make sure to keep that in mind when fighting in the actual rp. APPROVED!!! be sure and send 1000g to me to make it official
Elven: Well first things first, it's the "sharingan" not "sharingun", but that's not a big deal. I would like to see a bit more, the rp sample is just a bit to sparse for me to make a decision. Make me believe that you know this bloodline inside and out.
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Posted: Tue Mar 16, 2010 5:14 pm
Lance Fulgurant Elven: Well first things first, it's the "sharingan" not "sharingun", but that's not a big deal. I would like to see a bit more, the rp sample is just a bit to sparse for me to make a decision. Make me believe that you know this bloodline inside and out. "Try this," the enemy had told Vincent, "Kagebunshin No Jutsu!" All around clones had appeared in puffs of white clouds. Vincent closed his eyes and opened them and activated his Sharingan. His vision had changed from the colors, lights and shadows of the world seen with normal eyes to the world filled only with the light and colors of Chakra. He looked out at the numerous enemy and saw that they were mere outlines. They were literally shadows. Except for one. The one that was radiating with chakra like a human fire. Keeping the Sharingan activated he moved through the crowd of clones, hitting and punching his way through them as if they were nothing but air. The eyes had given him the clearest of vision as if he had been given the eyes of a hawk. He looked to see the human fire that was his enemy move about the numerous clones. "You can't hide." He said, "I see right through all of you." [OOC: Is that enough?]
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 2:08 pm
Alright I appreciate that you're trying, but this is quite possibly one of the strongest bloodlines in the Naruto-verse, so I'm a little tough when it comes to this bloodline.
First things first, the sharingan allows the user to see chakra, but not to the extent that they would be able to tell the difference between a clone and the real deal, especially a kage-bunshin as not even the byakugan can tell the difference between a kage-bunshin and the actual person. (as seen when naruto fought neji in the chunin exams)
Basically the sharingan allows the user to see chakra, but they cannot see chakra levels, however they can see chakra flow, so when someone uses a jutsu the sharingan can tell that the user is about to use a jutsu.
It is also true that the sharingan can see chakra through solid matter (as shown by sasuke when he fought deidara and could see all of his land-mines)
So here is what I want you to do, write up a brief summary of what the sharingan can do, and more importantly what it can't do, so I know you know how it works, it should be at least two good paragraphs, roughly 4-6 sentences per paragraph
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 2:30 pm
Lance Fulgurant Alright I appreciate that you're trying, but this is quite possibly one of the strongest bloodlines in the Naruto-verse, so I'm a little tough when it comes to this bloodline. First things first, the sharingan allows the user to see chakra, but not to the extent that they would be able to tell the difference between a clone and the real deal, especially a kage-bunshin as not even the byakugan can tell the difference between a kage-bunshin and the actual person. (as seen when naruto fought neji in the chunin exams) Basically the sharingan allows the user to see chakra, but they cannot see chakra levels, however they can see chakra flow, so when someone uses a jutsu the sharingan can tell that the user is about to use a jutsu. It is also true that the sharingan can see chakra through solid matter (as shown by sasuke when he fought deidara and could see all of his land-mines) So here is what I want you to do, write up a brief summary of what the sharingan can do, and more importantly what it can't do, so I know you know how it works, it should be at least two good paragraphs, roughly 4-6 sentences per paragraph Okay then. The first of the Sharingan's powers is being able to see the chakra flow. Secondly it allows a user to have incredible clarity of perception, allowing them to easily recognize genjutsu and different forms of chakra, though not to the same extent as the Byakugan. And because the Sharingan can copy techniques it doesn't just stop with Jutsu. It can also allow a person to mimic physical abilities such as Taijutsu (Sasuke's encounter with Rock Lee) or Pencil movements (written part of the Chunnin Exam). However, this is one of the limits to the copy ability. The user must have the skill and/or abilities to perform them. Such as, if the person is not in peak physical shape then they may not have the ability to copy a taijutsu technique. The Sharingan cannot copy Summoning Techniques either since summonings require a contract. This is also true of other bloodline limits since these techniques are more part of a persons genetics rather than a simple skill that can be imitated. Another ability of the Sharingan is to do a type of "hypnosis" which can also be seen as a type of genjutsu. Another disadvantage of the sharingan is that unlike the Byakugan it cannot see in all directions. (I hope this is enough.)
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 2:47 pm
I'll say alright, gratz you are APPROVED!!!
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 2:51 pm
Lance Fulgurant I'll say alright, gratz you are APPROVED!!! Thank you. Now I need to send you the gold for it, right?
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 3:38 pm
Rpc Name: Ruuji Hyuuga
Village: hidden sand
Rank:unknown
Bloodline or Clan applied for:Byakugan
Rp Sample Ruuji dashes across Sunagakure. "hmmmmmm maybe i should train a bit, it has been some time since i activated the bayakugan" He goes to an old training ground and stands in the center of the training ground and starts to ready his stance. "bayakugan" "64 palm strikes" He moves through the air in amazing speed throwing strikes in the air.
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 12:57 am
Rpc Name: Kano Tenshi
Village: Cloud
Rank: Academy
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Tendril Bloodline
What you know about the clan/bl: (If you put everything it will be denied on the spot) This Bloodline is where the user has a body made up of thread like things called "Tendrils" which is used for many purposes such as reattatching limbs on both the user and any ally who may need this hel, it can be used to steal hearts from other shinobi's which can then be kept in reservation for when needed, also is said to give the user the ability to use that type of jutsu such as stealing someone with a fuuton chakra you take his heart and you can now do wind type jutsu's, this blood line also lets you be able to make these wierd shadow type tendril creatures who have the abilities of the shinobi where the heart came from. (Idk if you consider this to be "Everything but this is just from what i know not copy and paste or anything)
Rp Sample (at least 2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan) Kano walks onto the forest with a slight paranoia feeling. He stops and does a double take looking behind him, continues to walk as he says "Come out i know your here" after realizing he is not alone, kano waits as he is attacked, the ninja confused as kano stands still while the ninja wastes no time cutting off my limbs, kano begins to laugh slightly asthe ninja stands their in confusion, Kano takes off his cloack and jacket only to reveal tendrils sewing back my limbs. Out of fear the ninja quickly rushes in for a strike against my heart as a tendril charges out of my body with the intent to kill and retrieve his heart, the ninja quickly dodges as he begins to head for the hills. Kano not being interested in a chase continues forward toward his destination.
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 6:32 am
RPC Name // Shinsui Suou
Village // Pending
Rank // Pending
Bloodline or Clan Applied For // Chakra Mouths
What You Know About This Bloodline // I understand the main feautures of the Bloodline such as the ability to mold and form clay into different, movable shapes that can explode on command. The user also gets an Eye Enhancement that negates the effects of Genjutsu by removing the property of direct eye contact.
RP Sample // Coming Soon
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:42 pm
iAsakura Rpc Name: Ruuji Hyuuga Village: hidden sand Rank:unknown Bloodline or Clan applied for:Byakugan Rp Sample Ruuji dashes across Sunagakure. "hmmmmmm maybe i should train a bit, it has been some time since i activated the bayakugan" He goes to an old training ground and stands in the center of the training ground and starts to ready his stance. "bayakugan" "64 palm strikes" He moves through the air in amazing speed throwing strikes in the air. Asakura, this does not show that you can properly use the byakugan properly in rp. No offense, but Lance is really tough on these and he would kill me if I approve this
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:44 pm
l Kano I Rpc Name: Kano Tenshi Village: Cloud Rank: Academy Bloodline or Clan applied for: Tendril Bloodline What you know about the clan/bl: (If you put everything it will be denied on the spot) This Bloodline is where the user has a body made up of thread like things called "Tendrils" which is used for many purposes such as reattatching limbs on both the user and any ally who may need this hel, it can be used to steal hearts from other shinobi's which can then be kept in reservation for when needed, also is said to give the user the ability to use that type of jutsu such as stealing someone with a fuuton chakra you take his heart and you can now do wind type jutsu's, this blood line also lets you be able to make these wierd shadow type tendril creatures who have the abilities of the shinobi where the heart came from. (Idk if you consider this to be "Everything but this is just from what i know not copy and paste or anything) Rp Sample (at least 2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan) Kano walks onto the forest with a slight paranoia feeling. He stops and does a double take looking behind him, continues to walk as he says "Come out i know your here" after realizing he is not alone, kano waits as he is attacked, the ninja confused as kano stands still while the ninja wastes no time cutting off my limbs, kano begins to laugh slightly asthe ninja stands their in confusion, Kano takes off his cloack and jacket only to reveal tendrils sewing back my limbs. Out of fear the ninja quickly rushes in for a strike against my heart as a tendril charges out of my body with the intent to kill and retrieve his heart, the ninja quickly dodges as he begins to head for the hills. Kano not being interested in a chase continues forward toward his destination. Kano, good, you seem to know how the bloodline works. One question though...what is one of the weaknesses for the hearts?
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:57 pm
Zane Hajime l Kano I Rpc Name: Kano Tenshi Village: Cloud Rank: Academy Bloodline or Clan applied for: Tendril Bloodline What you know about the clan/bl: (If you put everything it will be denied on the spot) This Bloodline is where the user has a body made up of thread like things called "Tendrils" which is used for many purposes such as reattatching limbs on both the user and any ally who may need this hel, it can be used to steal hearts from other shinobi's which can then be kept in reservation for when needed, also is said to give the user the ability to use that type of jutsu such as stealing someone with a fuuton chakra you take his heart and you can now do wind type jutsu's, this blood line also lets you be able to make these wierd shadow type tendril creatures who have the abilities of the shinobi where the heart came from. (Idk if you consider this to be "Everything but this is just from what i know not copy and paste or anything) Rp Sample (at least 2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan) Kano walks onto the forest with a slight paranoia feeling. He stops and does a double take looking behind him, continues to walk as he says "Come out i know your here" after realizing he is not alone, kano waits as he is attacked, the ninja confused as kano stands still while the ninja wastes no time cutting off my limbs, kano begins to laugh slightly asthe ninja stands their in confusion, Kano takes off his cloack and jacket only to reveal tendrils sewing back my limbs. Out of fear the ninja quickly rushes in for a strike against my heart as a tendril charges out of my body with the intent to kill and retrieve his heart, the ninja quickly dodges as he begins to head for the hills. Kano not being interested in a chase continues forward toward his destination. Kano, good, you seem to know how the bloodline works. One question though...what is one of the weaknesses for the hearts? well like any hearts they can be destroyed by piecering through the masks which the masks resemble each of his hearts and once all the masks are destroyed hes a gone bird idk if thats the weakness your talking about but i would consider that a weakness ninja
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 6:04 pm
Yes good answer, but don't forget, that each heart is extremely vunerable to their opposing element, ie when Kakashi destroyed the earth heart with Chidori (Epicness!) other than that, approved. Send trade of 1000 to the captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 6:09 pm
Oh ok yah sounds good ill send it right now
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 9:23 pm
RPC Name // Shinsui Suou
Village // Kumogakure
Rank // Jounin //Auto-Ranked//
Bloodline or Clan Applied For // Chakra Mouths
What You Know About This Bloodline // I understand the main feautures of the Bloodline such as the ability to mold and form clay into different, movable shapes that can explode on command. The user also gets an Eye Enhancement that negates the effects of Genjutsu by removing the property of direct eye contact.
RP Sample //
Suou was supposed to be taking care of the Village Academy for the day. He wore his usual outfit. Yellow dress shirt with black stripes on the cuffs and and black vest with a red stripe down the center. He complemented this with his fancy, black slacks. He wore an odd looking hat that had a long strap that covered the left eye. He looked around and noticed two Shinobi that were dressed in light battle attire and wearing straw hats. He was supsicious. He performed a couple handsigns and sunk into the ground with the Earth Military Movement Jutsu. He spied on them for a short while. They were headed to the Raikage's Office. He couldn't let that happen. He allerted the students of a possible danger and told them to take cover. Suou usually made his battles pretty chaotic and..."explosive" pretty much every time.
Suou now appeared in front of the intruders. He was the only thing stopping them from reaching the Raikage's Office. "Who the hell are you, boy?" one man said. "Obviously a good for nothing Shinobi who needs to learn that he should never just sneak up on us." The first man was a bit taller than the other. About 3in. taller. The shorter one looked much faster though. His short stature could give him and advantage in Taijutsu Battles. The taller one suddenly appeared behind Suou and sent a roundhouse kick to Suou's head. "What the-?!" Suou was hit directly in the back of the head, but it wasn't really him. The man's leg was lodged deep into the skull of whatever he had hit. It quished and sunk a bit. The form then became a pale-white color. "What?! A clay clone?" Suou then burst from the ground and wrapped his arms around the man's lower body and pulled him in. He had used the Headhunter Jutsu to sneak under him and then trap him in the ground. only his head remained above the ground. The clone the collapsed on top of the man and Suou was suddenly gone. He reappeared about 20ft. away. He then performed a handsigns and shouted, "KATSU!!!!" The clay released a massive explosion that tore the man to shreds.
"No..." the shorter man said. "...I only know of one person who has this ability. You must be...be...SHINSUI SUOU!!!" Suou smiled and dove under ground. He had been collecting clay from underground this whole time to use for the clay clone. Now he gathered more and he devoured it by using two odd-looking mouths that were located on his palms.
The shorter man looked around to try to find Suou, but Suou wasn't around him. He scanned the area and tried to find some sort of way to find Suou. He noticed that a small section of the ground was bulging slightly and he performed a few hadnsigns with great speed. He launched a massive fireball at the bulge only to realize that Suou was right behinnd him. His left hand was squirming a bit and his right was balled up in a fist. Suou sent a punch directly at the man's jaw and Suou unhinged it on contact. The man spun around slightly and saw another attack coming at him. He was stunned and was unable to react at all. It was over. Suou punched at the man's eyes, but he had two senbon between his fingers. He stabbed them into the man's eyes and plucked them from his skull.
The man fell to his knees. Blood and tears flowed through his empty eye sockets and the vommited from the pure pain. He released a mass quantity of blood as he vommited. The man sat up on his knees and Suou grasped him by the hair on the back of his head, pulling the man's head back so he faced upward. Suou held his left hand over the man's face and then the mouth opened up, releasing 5 clay centipedes that rushed at the man. 3 of them crawled down his throat and the other two split up and went through each eye socket. Suou then released him and sunk underground with Earth Military Movement saying, "Now have a good day sir!!"
Suou was standing atop the Raikage's Tower with the Raikage himself. "Sir, I've prepared a little show for you." Suou said politely. "I can see that... Tell me, did you place him in a Genjutsu of pure pain before you got here?" the Raikage said as he looked down to see the man bleeding from his mouth and eye sockets as he was writhing in pain and letting loose a blood curdling scream. "No, sir. I the pain is real. This is actual torture. But, sir, let me show you what I was planning." Suou flipped up the strap over his eye and revealed a device that covered his left eye. He removed it and handed it to the Raikage who then grabbed it and looked through, getting a much better view of the man. "I love my job!! heart " Suou said as he performed a handsign and shouted, "KATSU!!!!" The only thing left in that area was a smoky crater and blood-stained earth.
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