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 Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 2:56 pm
Lu needs to look at this and let me know how it looks:
Gaia Name: Sakuran H
Character Name: Jio Chiyoko [Chee-yo-ko]
Clan: Jio
Element Affinity: Water
Age: 13
Sex: Female
Birthday: Fall 2, Year ???
Theme Song:
Physical Description: Chiyoko is a small, fragile looking girl. Her skin tone is a very tanned, warm color. For a 13 year old, her figure is just starting to show early signs of hitting puberty, in other words starting to fill out more in shape. She is about 5’3 in height and weights about 113 lbs. Her hair is short, about chin length, very messy, and pure black, often hanging in her face. Finally, her eyes are a deep golden, almost brown color.
Clothing: Simple is how one would describe Chiyoko’s clothing. She knows nothing of the current styles of clothing worn by these modern people. So her outfit is modeled after what Tomoko wears, a small grass skirt (though more modest then Tomoko’s) and a piece of blue cloth covering her very tiny bust. She doesn’t wear any jewelry or shoes, because she finds them to be very bothersome.
Personality: The female Jio is not a cruel hearted girl, but due to her brutal death, and the long term imprisonment of her delicate soul, she has become a very quiet girl, speaking very little to others. She has died once, and since Tomoko came along with her party in search of Dahn’s soul and brought her back, she doesn’t feel like dying again any time soon. Since she has been back, she is a paranoid girl, often speaking to herself in the third person. Thinking isn’t an internal process to her anymore, so whatever she is thinking, goes straight to her mouth. She finds it very hard to trust any new people, and is always uncomfortable around the Meho’s of the group, finding them the most untrustworthy group of people she will ever come into contact with. She is much of a loner, but when in a group, she will tend to try and stick to the sides of the other Jio’s, even if they find it annoying.
Background: Chiyoko lived back in the time when the Meho’s were taking complete control of Haha Island. The Meho warlord had set the Meho’s of the island free, sick of fighting amongst themselves, to take over the cities of Jio’s. It wasn’t long until the Meho’s had control over the island and the Jio’s had to go into hiding. So her and her family, along with the other few surviving Jio’s split up into many different, small encampments. Living away in these small encampments wasn’t very encouraging for a young, scared girl. Hiding and trying to stay positive was very hard, specially when all anyone was hearing about was more Meho attacks on other small encampments.
One dark night, massive hysteria broke out in Chiyoko’s small encampment. Meho’s discovered the whereabouts of the small group of Jio’s and as is their natured, continued to draw blood from every body they could find, mutilating everything in sight; men, women and children alike. Chiyoko was lucky, not having to see the brutal slaughtering of her parents, and she prayed for a quick death of her own. She didn’t know who it was that brought her life to an end, but before her life was taken, she had heard screams of the name Ikatsui-ago, and she knew someone was carrying the demon sword. Being a young child, she had cowered away, trying to flee from a bloody death, so she didn’t know who had killed her, or how. When her soul didn’t come to rest, it was clear it had been the Ikatsui-ago sword that had taken her life, and her soul would be forever trapped and tortured in the hell with all other souls of those that Ikatsui-ago had claimed.
Many years passed for the young girl, her only memories of the time where ones full of fear and pure terror, when a woman named Tomoko and her pack of people appeared in search of a trapped soul, the warlord Dahn. Living soul’s where never found here, so when she saw them coming, the girl pleaded for them to help her. [will edit more depending on how things go with getting out and such] She knows nothing of new world. It is nothing like the one she had known, so she is easily confused and intimidated by her new surroundings.
Other: Chiyoko- child of a thousand generations
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:39 am
YES! Talking to herself! AWESOME personality quirk. crying You make me so proud! ALRIGHT! For the background;
We could have Chiyoko be from Tomoko and Dhan's time. So, in the last Meho raid on the Jio's, Dhan would've bee the one to kill Chiyoko. xd its so beautiful!!!!!!!! So, her birth year would be Year 80. Her Death is Year 93. Her rebirth Year would be Year 105, so she spent 12 years in Ikatsui-Ago. Add those years to your profile and you'll be freaking set. As for your stats, you'll just have Jio stats for now.
I'm gonna set up the RP for Chiyoko's entrance and I'll give you an opening to post! xd this is gonna be awesome.
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 10:19 am
I'll get right on that Lu, hmmmm, Dahn is my wonderus killer, that should be interesting indeed! I'll finish that up and get my stats and jazz soon and get to my posting! 4laugh
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 11:44 am
Okay, Story and all that is checked, and I'm 99.9% sure the stats are right, so I added my profile already to the scroll under my other character. Just wanted to make sure, anyone can check the stats for me
smile
Gaia Name: Sakuran H
Character Name: Jio Chiyoko [Chee-yo-ko]
Clan: Jio
Element Affinity: Water
Age: 13
Sex: Female
Birthday: Fall 2, Year 80 Death: Year 93 Rebirth: Spring 2, Year 105
Theme Song:
Physical Description: Chiyoko is a small, fragile looking girl. Her skin tone is a very tanned, warm color. For a 13 year old, her figure is just starting to show early signs of hitting puberty, in other words starting to fill out more in shape. She is about 5’3 in height and weights about 113 lbs. Her hair is short, about chin length, very messy, and pure black. Finally, her eyes are a deep golden, almost brown color.
Clothing: Simple is how one would describe Chiyoko’s clothing. She knows nothing of the current styles of clothing worn by these modern people. So her outfit is modeled after what Tomoko wears, a small grass skirt (though more modest then Tomoko’s) and a piece of blue cloth covering her very tiny bust. She doesn’t wear any jewelry or shoes, because she finds them to be very bothersome.
Personality: The female Jio is not a cruel hearted girl, but due to her brutal death, and the long term imprisonment of her delicate soul, she has become a very quiet girl, speaking very little to others. She has died once, and since Tomoko came along with her party in search of Dahn’s soul and brought her back, she doesn’t feel like dying again any time soon. Since she has been back, she is a paranoid girl, often speaking to herself in the third person. Thinking isn’t an internal process to her anymore, so whatever she is thinking, goes straight to her mouth. She finds it very hard to trust any new people, and is always uncomfortable around the Meho’s of the group, finding them the most untrustworthy group of people she will ever come into contact with. She is much of a loner, but when in a group, she will tend to try and stick to the sides of the other Jio’s, even if they find it annoying.
Background: Chiyoko lived back in the time when the Meho’s were taking complete control of Haha Island. The Meho warlord had set the Meho’s of the island free, sick of fighting amongst themselves, to take over the cities of Jio’s. It wasn’t long until the Meho’s had control over the island and the Jio’s had to go into hiding. So her and her family, along with the other few surviving Jio’s split up into many different, small encampments. Living away in these small encampments wasn’t very encouraging for a young, scared girl. Hiding and trying to stay positive was very hard, specially when all anyone was hearing about was more Meho attacks on other small encampments.
One dark night, massive hysteria broke out in Chiyoko’s small encampment. Meho’s discovered the whereabouts of the small group of Jio’s and as is their natured, continued to draw blood from every body they could find, mutilating everything in sight; men, women and children alike. Chiyoko was lucky, not having to see the brutal slaughtering of her parents, and she prayed for a quick death of her own. She didn’t know who it was that brought her life to an end, but before her life was taken, she had heard screams of the name Ikatsui-ago, and she knew someone was carrying the demon sword. Being a young child, she had cowered away, trying to flee from a bloody death, so she didn’t know who had killed her, or how. When her soul didn’t come to rest, it was clear it had been the Ikatsui-ago sword, wielded by the Warlord Dahn himself that had taken her life, and her soul would be forever trapped and tortured in the hell with all other souls of those that Ikatsui-ago had claimed.
Many years passed for the young girl, her only memories of the time where ones full of fear and pure terror, when a woman named Tomoko and her pack of people appeared in search of a trapped soul, the warlord Dahn. Living soul’s where never found here, so when she saw them coming, the girl pleaded for them to help her. [will edit more depending on how things go with getting out and such] She knows nothing of new world. It is nothing like the one she had known, so she is easily confused and intimidated by her new surroundings.
Other: Chiyoko- child of a thousand generations
-Abilities-
Jio In-Game Stats
The Jio's are scholars who take pride in paying respect to the other realms and learning about sacred writings. They are by no means strong, but are very quick.
+1 per 5 levels to Agility
+ Character level to Fuin
+ Character level to Focus
-1 per 5 levels to Endurance
Rank: Academy Student
LV: 1
HP: 10 +1= 11
CP: 5 +1= 6
XP: 0/50
Chakra: 10+ 2 = 12
Charisma: 10+1= 11
Endurance: 10+2= 12
Agility: 10+ 4= 14
Intelligence: 10+ 2= 12
Strength: 10+1= 11
-Skills-
Chakra Mod: 1
Ninjutsu:
Control:
Charisma Mod: 0
Persuade: 1
Lie:
Seduce:
Handle Animal:
Sing:
Disguise:
Intimidate:
Endurance Mod: 1
Focus: 1 +1=2
Blacksmith:
Fortitude:
Rope:
Swim:
Agility Mod: 2
Dodge: 1
Sprint: 1
Escape:
Sneak Attack:
Balance:
Hide:
Dance:
Spy:
Tumble:
Intelligence Mod: 1
Genjutsu:
Detect:
Sense:
Fuuin: 1 +1=2
Trap:
Knowledge: 1
Alchemy:
Strength Mod: 0
Taijutsu:
Grapple:
Weapons
Sword:
Staff:
Melee:
Ninja:
Throwing:
Range:
Heavy:
-Techniques-
Taijutsu
Genjutsu
Ninjutsu
-Equipment-
Items:
Weapons:
5 Shuriken
Damage: 4 to 9 + Str Mod(1) + Throwing Bonus
Throwing: Agility
Blacksmith DC: 10
1 Kunai
Damage: 5 to 9 + Str Mod(1) + Melee Bonus
Melee: Strength Mod
Damage: 4 to 8 +Str Mod(1) +Throwing Bonus
Throwing: Endurance Mod
Blacksmith DC: 10
Valuables:
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 7:23 am
YAY! AWESOME! make sure you merge your points together for your abilities, so there's not all that math, just the last number. very nice intro post btw! THIS IS SO EXCITING
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 7:51 am
Okay, I merged the ability points, and all that jazz.
And thanks for the post compliment
4laugh
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:36 pm
Underconstruction
Gaia Name: Gemakun
Character Name: Radiuju Kyomura (kyo)
Clan: NA
Element Affinity: Earth
Age: 13
Sex: male
Birthday: Spring 3
Theme Song: MGMT - Time To Pretend
Physical Description: Very tale with blonde hair that falls around his head. He has very deep blue eyes that pop against his dark tan skin. He has a warming smile across his face. On His hands are very soft especially for a ninja.
Clothing: He wares a ivory white shirt with a high collar and cut off sleeves with brown trim. He has a matching pair of shorts that cut off at the knee. around his waist is a black belt that hold his items.
Personality: He is a very warm and caring person and is easily makes friends with. When the ones he cares about are in need he will to anything to help him he may not have very much common sense but he will fallow his friends anywhere and will help them in any way.
Background:
Other:
-Abilities-
Rank: Academy student
LV: 1
HP: 10
CP: 5
XP: 0/50
Chakra: 14
Charisma: 12
Endurance: 13
Agility: 13
Intelligence: 10
Strength: 10
-Skills-
Chakra Mod
Control: Earth
Charisma Mod
Persuade: 2
Lie:
Seduce:
Handle Animal: 2
Sing: 2
Disguise:
Intimidate:
Endurance Mod
Focus: 1
Blacksmith:
Fortitude:1
Rope: 2
Swim: 2
Agility Mod
Dodge:
Sprint:
Escape:1
Sneak Attack:
Balance:
Hide: 1
Dance:2
Spy: 1
Tumble:1
Intelligence Mod
Genjutsu: 1
Detect: 1
Sense:2
Fuuin: 1
Trap:
Knowledge:
Alchemy: 1
Strength Mod
Taijutsu:3
Grapple:3
Weapons
Sword: 1
Staff: 1
Melee: 3
Ninja: 1
Throwing:
Range:
Heavy:
-Techniques-
Taijutsu
Genjutsu
Ninjutsu
-Equipment-
Items:
Weapons:
Valuables:
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 8:23 am
read the red parts in the stat break-down guide and the skill guide in the Character Profile Creation Thread. If you don't understand how to put points in your abilities and skills after that, I'll help ya with them, because your numbers are wrong.
note: you start off with no techniques. and your techniques will not be listed underneath your skills, but in the Technique section of your profile.
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 12:26 pm
oh thank you! i had to post it because i had to go to bed, i should have put not finished at the top i think its good now
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 2:57 pm
Wait just a minute - I have a few things to add to this.
As far as this profile, Tategami are not ninja of the earth - they are taijutsu specialists who can only have the earth affinity. We have no clan earth jutsu, nor do we plan on ever making any. You cannot simply join the Tategami, Gemakun, you have to be tested thoroughly by the clan leader and then, if you survive, you can be adopted into the clan. The Tategami are not a bloodline clan - anyone can join should they prove worthy. Your story needs work and so does your personality.
Another note: NONE of the Tategami Clan Jutsu have been 'created' or at least learned by the current clan leader.
Lulu, I know I'm not the profile person, but seeing as how this one wants to be Tategami, I feel the need to give my say. The background is sloppy, the character is a carbon copy of most tales I've seen, and there's no depth to Kyomura. Please read the clan's history and how things are on Shimagakure before just saying any which thing suits your fancy. I would highly prefer Gemakun's character going through Karite's preparation, because it would be hypocritical of me to simply accept him when I had Karite tested over and over before I was sure he was good enough within the RP.
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 7:25 pm
Oh im sorry ill go back and fix it um if its not to much of a trouble will you please give some pointers? i've never done a profile this advanced.
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Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 4:44 am
Tategami Maya Wait just a minute - I have a few things to add to this.
As far as this profile, Tategami are not ninja of the earth - they are taijutsu specialists who can only have the earth affinity. We have no clan earth jutsu, nor do we plan on ever making any. You cannot simply join the Tategami, Gemakun, you have to be tested thoroughly by the clan leader and then, if you survive, you can be adopted into the clan. The Tategami are not a bloodline clan - anyone can join should they prove worthy. Your story needs work and so does your personality.
Another note: NONE of the Tategami Clan Jutsu have been 'created' or at least learned by the current clan leader.
Lulu, I know I'm not the profile person, but seeing as how this one wants to be Tategami, I feel the need to give my say. The background is sloppy, the character is a carbon copy of most tales I've seen, and there's no depth to Kyomura. Please read the clan's history and how things are on Shimagakure before just saying any which thing suits your fancy. I would highly prefer Gemakun's character going through Karite's preparation, because it would be hypocritical of me to simply accept him when I had Karite tested over and over before I was sure he was good enough within the RP.
its all crew member's responsibility to help approve profiles, so have at it.
<.<
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 6:18 pm
Well, it would be preferable for the character to choose the Tategami because of their lifestyle. They are physical kind of shinobi - both Karite and Maya tend to stray away from any heavy ninjutsu, and they are both still creating the Tategami Clan jutsu - at least, deciphering what is on a scroll that Shuga, the deceased and previous leader, left behind. Read through clan profile, my profile, and Karite's profile. Shape your history based on those. Since they will be your future clan members, you should see how they've made their ways.
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Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 11:40 am
Not to butt in Maya, but she is right. We are the only clan that uses two characters, one ninja and one animal, we are heavy Taijutsu users and aren't skilled in ninjutsu, our clan has no earth type jutsus but you can create them for your own personal use. I have already. If you need help with your profile ask either Maya or myself. She is the boss lady but I can lend a hand.
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Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 9:43 am
Gaia Name:Xeithx
Character Name:xeithx Ibazi
Clan: Ibazi
Element Affinity:Wind
Age:9
Sex:Male
Birthday:Summer 2 94
Theme Song:ANTHEM 4 PIPE DREAMS
Physical Description:He is 4'8" slim. His skin tone is a mulatto brown, his eye color is a white.His hair is a pure white, the style of his hair looks like he has just woken up. His facial features are that he has a moon shape scar on the right side of his face that stretches the top of his forehead to his chin. One last thing he has a huge burn mark on his back that resembles a zero that he received when he was a few days old.
Clothing:Know to stick with in a formal wear format, sandals, black, white, and black kimono.
Personality:He is tough seemingly calm when with others, he can show his bursts of energy when no one is look. His disrespectful to those around him on a constant base. He can be quiet, or he could talk forever, it depends upon the company he keeps.
Background:At birth, Xeithx was tough to be a wild child for he always seemed so full of energy and was thrilled by the curves and points of the objects around him. His parents wanted different then this foretelling, and they gave him constant chores to keep him obedient and out of trouble. From calligraphy to cleaning the house,he had to work.
Other:
-Abilities-
Rank:Academy Student
LV:1
HP:10
CP: 5
XP: 0/50
Chakra:2
Charisma:2
Endurance:2
Agility:2
Intelligence:2
Strength:2
-Skills-
Chakra Mod
Ninjutsu:1
Control:
Charisma Mod
Persuade:
Lie:
Seduce:
Handle Animal:
Sing:
Disguise:
Intimidate:1
Endurance Mod
Focus:1
Blacksmith:
Fortitude:
Rope:
Swim:
Agility Mod
Dodge:
Sprint:
Escape:
Sneak Attack:
Balance:
Hide:
Dance:
Spy:1
Tumble:
Intelligence Mod
Genjutsu:
Detect:
Sense:
Fuuin:
Trap:
Knowledge:2
Alchemy:
Strength Mod
Taijutsu:
Grapple:
Weapons
Sword:
Staff:
Melee:
Ninja:
Throwing:
Range:
Heavy:
-Techniques-
Taijutsu
Genjutsu
Ninjutsu
-Equipment-
Items:
Weapons:
Valuables:
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