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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 6:43 pm
((ope.... looks like everyone is bringing envy back into the story...... kk.... *thinks of stuff to do.... evil stuff*))
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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 6:58 pm
Deep Despair ((ope.... looks like everyone is bringing envy back into the story...... kk.... *thinks of stuff to do.... evil stuff*)) ((You're scary. Waahh!! Jinni is scaring me! crying ))
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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 8:55 pm
Light_Ashtoreth ((Since no one seems to know who I am crying , here(again) is my bio. Name: Ashtoreth (Ashy or Reth are good nicknames) Age:14 Hair: Black with gold tips (usually braided) Eyes: violet with gold rims Cloths: A pair of baggy, black pants, a white shirt, and a white coat with black feathered wings insignia on back. Wears a serpent cross pendant to honor her teacher Izumi. Personality: Short-tempered, and likes to use sarcasm to deflate people's egos. She does have a nice side, but will only show it among friends. Likes music and alchemy. Background: Raised to be a great alchemist, Reth trained from childhood, when her family died in an accident, she trained to perfect her alchemy. Lost her eyes in a human transmutation, Reth got bionic replicas that have their own advantages. Occupation: Traveler, State Alchemist Alchemy type: Energy: Gathers energy from the surrounding area to create destructive blasts or heal minor and (to some extent) major wounds. Weakness: Tires quickly from alchemy use, extended use will cause her to faint.)) ((ah, i guess i wasn't specific. i found your bio on page 4, but what i failed to see was how you knew roy and riza on such a level as to casually speak to them using their first names when they...apparently have no idea who you are? eek in the bio on page 4 you said you were a state alchemist...but you're only 14! how in the world did you get to be one so young? and what's more, you said you trained with ed and al with izumi-sensei, but that is downright non-canon! not to mention healing is an extremely difficult form of alchemy that even a skilled full-grown man like dr. marcoh needed an amplification device to do it. not to mention the jintai rensei where she lost her eyes? uh...who? why? when? and for god's sake, how? she sounds way too much like an ed-esque mary-sue, IMO. you need to work on your character a little bit more before making such bold statements with nothing to back them up...))
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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 9:31 pm
Light_Ashtoreth Ashtoreth gave the man a cold look, "Ashtoreth Sora, energy alchemist. As for barging in on Mustang, we've got more pressing matters to attend to. Now if you'll excuse me First Lieutenant, I have somewhere to be." Havoc moved to grab her by the collar.
"Nani ittenda~!?" he growled. "How dare you take such a--"
He threw his hands up in the air before he touched her, the lighter still lit in his grasp, casting uneven shadows on the walls around them.
No...stop...check that temper, Jean...
The last thing he needed was to get reprimanded for assaulting a superior officer...even if she was just a kid. He gnawed on the cigarette and glared daggers into her defiant purple eyes.
Then he scoffed.
"Che~... Not worth my time..." he grumbled. "But I'll have my eye on you...k'sogaki..."Light_Ashtoreth With that said, Ash sprinted down the corridors. He watched her dash away, her venomous violet eyes still burning into his mind. He curled up his lip and shuddered.
Great...first Taishou...now this brat... HQ is getting overrun by rugrats! he mused grumpily to himself, and then turned on his heel to approach Mustang's office door. He knocked on it twice, then hesitantly turned the knob.
"Oi, Junshou? Irundeshou?" He poked his head inside. "Ore da...you busy?" He shone the lighter in the doorway and was happy to see that both Mustang and Hawkeye seemed to be all right. "Just wanted to make sure you guys were okay..." He waited for Mustang's nod of approval before stepping inside and saluting. "Er...Sir, there's...something you might be interested to know..." Havoc said. "It...seems someone who is claiming to be Taishou--er...that is, Edward Elric--has apparently been seen approaching the front desk..."
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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 9:40 pm
Lieutenant Havoc Light_Ashtoreth ((Since no one seems to know who I am crying , here(again) is my bio. ((ah, i guess i wasn't specific. i found your bio on page 4, but what i failed to see was how you knew roy and riza on such a level as to casually speak to them using their first names when they...apparently have no idea who you are? eek in the bio on page 4 you said you were a state alchemist...but you're only 14! how in the world did you get to be one so young? and what's more, you said you trained with ed and al with izumi-sensei, but that is downright non-canon! not to mention healing is an extremely difficult form of alchemy that even a skilled full-grown man like dr. marcoh needed an amplification device to do it. not to mention the jintai rensei where she lost her eyes? uh...who? why? when? and for god's sake, how? she sounds way too much like an ed-esque mary-sue, IMO. you need to work on your character a little bit more before making such bold statements with nothing to back them up...)) ((i...am afraid i have to agree with havoc on this. even ed and al don't refer to roy and riza by their first names, and they know them on a much closer level than your ashtoreth character can... hell, they hardly ever even refer to eachother that way...so i agree you need to fix that. in japan, to call someone by their first name in the workplace shows an extremely intimate level of freindship that seems to be completely one-sided in this case... you've given roy and riza nothing to go on to even base this acquaintanceship on other than the idea you are a state alchemist. i was under the impression this was the first time we had met... eek getting some major mary-sue vibes, hun, you may want to tone it down a bit.))
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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 10:23 pm
Riza Hawkeye Chuui Lieutenant Havoc Light_Ashtoreth ((Since no one seems to know who I am crying , here(again) is my bio. ((ah, i guess i wasn't specific. i found your bio on page 4, but what i failed to see was how you knew roy and riza on such a level as to casually speak to them using their first names when they...apparently have no idea who you are? eek in the bio on page 4 you said you were a state alchemist...but you're only 14! how in the world did you get to be one so young? and what's more, you said you trained with ed and al with izumi-sensei, but that is downright non-canon! not to mention healing is an extremely difficult form of alchemy that even a skilled full-grown man like dr. marcoh needed an amplification device to do it. not to mention the jintai rensei where she lost her eyes? uh...who? why? when? and for god's sake, how? she sounds way too much like an ed-esque mary-sue, IMO. you need to work on your character a little bit more before making such bold statements with nothing to back them up...)) ((i...am afraid i have to agree with havoc on this. even ed and al don't refer to roy and riza by their first names, and they know them on a much closer level than your ashtoreth character can... hell, they hardly ever even refer to eachother that way...so i agree you need to fix that. in japan, to call someone by their first name in the workplace shows an extremely intimate level of freindship that seems to be completely one-sided in this case... you've given roy and riza nothing to go on to even base this acquaintanceship on other than the idea you are a state alchemist. i was under the impression this was the first time we had met... eek getting some major mary-sue vibes, hun, you may want to tone it down a bit.)) ((I'm sorry, I don't want to seem like a party spoiler Ashtoreth, but I have to agree. If you wanted it to be where we knew you and whatnot, you should have at least considered PMing us and telling us. Also, it really is rude to refer to Roy and Riza by their first names. If you noticed, Roy and Riza normally referred to eachother as Junshou and Chuui. They are very close and they hardly use the first names. As far as knowing Ed and Al and training with Izumi... I've been under the impression that this RP is after the series and since six of us are RPing that it is after the series, there's not really a way you could know Ed and Al. Well, possibly Al if you happened to wander into him randomly somewhere. But Ed was gone from the time of the end of the series until a few days ago in the RP. I don't want to rain on your parade, but you should individualize yourself some. You're cracking up to be a female Ed clone, you should create you own achievements and whatnot. It'll be much more satisfying to you even, I believe. You have fine RPing skills, actually, they're quite good. It's just a matter of your character development. Please don't take this as harsh criticism, we're just trying to help and keep the RP integrity for the guild.))
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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 10:55 pm
Lieutenant Havoc "Oi, Junshou? Irundeshou?" He poked his head inside. "Ore da...you busy?" He shone the lighter in the doorway and was happy to see that both Mustang and Hawkeye seemed to be all right. "Just wanted to make sure you guys were okay..." His eyes went from Riza to Jean. Frowning a bit, he nodded that it was alright to come in and that they weren't busy. His mind was racing in several different ways and they all came to the came dead end. The one solution he had been hoping wouldn't surface. He was hoping that there would be peace for a bit, but according to all the scenarios his mind played out, each one of them ended with big red letters spelling out T-R-O-U-B-L-E.Lieutenant Havoc "Er...Sir, there's...something you might be interested to know..." Havoc said. "It...seems someone who is claiming to be Taishou--er...that is, Edward Elric--has apparently been seen approaching the front desk..." His eyes widening in surprise a bit he looked to Riza as if to make sure she had heard him too. The girl that had so abruptly stopped by had mentioned that the elder Elric brother was on the grounds, however, he hadn't really taken her word for it due to the fact she was a complete stranger. Knitting his brow together as two conflicting stories collided and sparked in his mind, he looked to Riza.
"Hawkeye-chuii, what do you make of this matter?" He himself was still trying to figure out just what was going on. He mused on the thought of how nice it would be to go home that night and soak his feet in the hot tub after a hard day at work. But enough of that, he thought, it was time for him to get back to work.
"Well, now two people have said they've seen Edward. Can you actually verify that Havoc-chuui? Did you see him with your own eyes?" He felt like he was bombarding the poor man with questions, but he had to know. Was Edward there or was he not? He waited a moment for him to answer and the he strode over to the door. "I'm going to go see with my own two eyes. You two are welcome to come along. Actually, I want you to come."
Roy tossed Jean a candle that was sitting on his desk. "Light it yourself, you've got a lighter this time, I see." He smirked and walked out the door. Briefly he stopped outside the door to wait on the other two.
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 12:17 am
Honoo no Renkinjutsushi Lieutenant Havoc "Oi, Junshou? Irundeshou?" He poked his head inside. "Ore da...you busy?" He shone the lighter in the doorway and was happy to see that both Mustang and Hawkeye seemed to be all right. "Just wanted to make sure you guys were okay..." His eyes went from Riza to Jean. Frowning a bit, he nodded that it was alright to come in and that they weren't busy. His mind was racing in several different ways and they all came to the came dead end. The one solution he had been hoping wouldn't surface. He was hoping that there would be peace for a bit, but according to all the scenarios his mind played out, each one of them ended with big red letters spelling out T-R-O-U-B-L-E. Riza looked from Roy to Havoc, then back to Roy. She knew exactly what was going through his mind...and she couldn't have agreed more...Honoo no Renkinjutsushi Lieutenant Havoc "Er...Sir, there's...something you might be interested to know..." Havoc said. "It...seems someone who is claiming to be Taishou--er...that is, Edward Elric--has apparently been seen approaching the front desk..." His eyes widening in surprise a bit he looked to Riza as if to make sure she had heard him too. The girl that had so abruptly stopped by had mentioned that the elder Elric brother was on the grounds, however, he hadn't really taken her word for it due to the fact she was a complete stranger. Knitting his brow together as two conflicting stories collided and sparked in his mind, he looked to Riza.
"Hawkeye-chuii, what do you make of this matter?" Riza shook her head. "Sir, I can't imagine anyone could mistake anyone else for Edward-kun..." She frowned. "But, I believe I can speak for all of us when I say he's got some explaining to do..."Honoo no Renkinjutsushi Roy tossed Jean a candle that was sitting on Riza's desk. "Light it yourself, you've got a lighter this time, I see." He smirked and walked out the door. Briefly he stopped outside the door to wait on the other two. Riza watched in amusement as Havoc attempted to catch the candle without dropping the lighter, and had great difficulty in doing so. She chuckled a little and hurried to his side to catch the candle in her hand before it fell to the floor.
"Come on, Havoc-chuui," she said with a small smile, "let's all go greeet Edward-kun..." She turned to Roy and nodded her head. "I think it's best we not get separated... The power is out because of the storm...but something tells me this is no ordinary storm. I think it would behoove us all to stay in groups..."
She followed Roy into the hall and saw him nod in response to her suggestion. Then the two liuetenants fell in step behind their commander, trekking down the long, dark hallway toward an old friend in the lobby.
But what would really be waiting for them when they got there? Riza dared make no guess...
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 12:36 am
Riza Hawkeye Chuui Honoo no Renkinjutsushi "Hawkeye-chuii, what do you make of this matter?" Riza shook her head. "Sir, I can't imagine anyone could mistake anyone else for Edward-kun..." She frowned. "But, I believe I can speak for all of us when I say he's got some explaining to do..." Havoc snorted and chewed on his cigarette.
"Damn right he does!"Honoo no Renkinjutsushi "Well, now two people have said they've seen Edward. Can you actually verify that Havoc-chuui? Did you see him with your own eyes?" He shook his head.
"A~...iya~~, Junshou, I haven't gone to check up on it yet," he said. "I figured I should tell you two first." He snickered. "Besides...I had a feeling you'd toast me for welcoming Taishou back without you..."Riza Hawkeye Chuui Honoo no Renkinjutsushi Roy tossed Jean a candle that was sitting on Riza's desk. "Light it yourself, you've got a lighter this time, I see." He smirked and walked out the door. Briefly he stopped outside the door to wait on the other two. Riza watched in amusement as Havoc attempted to catch the candle without dropping the lighter, and had great difficulty in doing so. She chuckled a little and hurried to his side to catch the candle in her hand before it fell to the floor. Havoc let out an undignified yelp at the candle that was abruptly tossed at him, and tried to catch it, nearly dropping his lighter. Another yelp as he floundered to then catch the lighter, burning his fingers and nearly dropping them both. With a cry of dismay, he managed to snag the lighter, but missed the candle...
...and puffed a sigh when Riza's hand snapped out and caught it for him.
"A~, domo..." he stammered, and plucked the candle from her, lighting it and snapping the lighter shut.Riza Hawkeye Chuui "Come on, Havoc-chuui," she said with a small smile, "let's all go greeet Edward-kun..." "Pff...and beat the snot out of him..." Riza Hawkeye Chuui "I think it's best we not get separated... The power is out because of the storm...but something tells me this is no ordinary storm. I think it would behoove us all to stay in groups..."
She followed Roy into the hall and saw him nod in response to her suggestion. Then the two liuetenants fell in step behind their commander, trekking down the long, dark hallway toward an old friend in the lobby. Havoc saluted comically with a big grin.
"Yes'm!" he exulted, and pulled out another cigarette. Lighting it with the candle, he took a long drag and puffed the smoke out through his teeth. Then he waited until she and Roy had both exited the office before pulling the door shut behind them and loping easily down the hallway toward the lobby.
Something told him today...was going to be a wierd day...
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 12:52 am
Light_Ashtoreth Ashtoreth gave the man a cold look, "Ashtoreth Sora, energy alchemist. As for barging in on Mustang, we've got more pressing matters to attend to. Now if you'll excuse me First Lieutenant, I have somewhere to be." With that said, Ash sprinted down the corridors. When near the door, Ash saw two figures. Letting her bionic implants switch to night vision, Ash sighed in relief to find Ed and Reina. "Ed! Go to Mustang's office, pretty sure he hasn't moved since you've been... away," She then turned to Reina, "Though you're not registered in the military, go with him, it's better to stay in large groups." Turning towards the door, she seemed to be thinking, "Oh! Ed, if I don't hear from three different sources that you were in that office, so help me, you'll wish Izumi-sensei was the one scolding you!" Then she ran into the storm. As Alphonse was opening the door to enter the large building he was grazed by someone who was running out. The person who ran past him seemed oddly familiar to him. He had just a moment to speak as the person ran into to rain and darkness. His eyes had to be playing tricks on him. For a moment he thought he saw a junior pupil from Izumi-sensei, one who had gone missing and was rumoured to be a state alchemist now. "Aren't you...? Wait!" He paused, considering going after Ashe for a moment. He could not see into the building as there were no lights on, so he turned from the open doorway and headed after his sensei's wayward pupil. I have to speak to her, and wark her about Izumi-sensei not being pleased with her. She should not have to deal with such a beating unawares. Becoming a "dog of the military" was not looked upon well by Izumi, and Al knew that. He was also here to find out information that might not be available to the general public, so there was a chance that Ashe might have some clue about where to go for answers. He ran back out the door after her, his suitcase trailing behind him as he went.
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 1:22 am
Golden orbs closed slowly once, twice, three times, slowly observing the hallways. The inside of the building was still ingrained in his memory.
He heard fast footsteps approaching, they were not heavy enough to belong to Roy nor anyone else he remembered being there. There was a younger girl running directly toward him. As she approached him, she started saying stuff. Frowning, he raised an eyebrow, trying to make out what she was saying. She seemed to be in some sort of hurry. He could barely make out her features in the almost pitch blackness that had decended upon the building with crash of thunder. She had spoken his name. His eyes narrowed to thin slits as he glared at her. "Who are you? How do you know me?" She had even referred to Izumi-sensei. Frowning more, he opened his mouth to ask a question but she was off running. "WAIT UP, DAMNIT! WHO ARE YOU? I HAVE A QUESTION FOR YOU!" he said rather loudly. But it was of no use. The intruder was gone.
Moments later he heard a very familiar voice call out. It sounded like his brother, however, it was too dark to see further than a few inches infront of ones face. He turned to head back toward the voice, however, he heard footsteps now coming from what had been Roy's office when he was there last. He stood against the wall listening. Sure enough, he heard Roy's voice speaking, as well as Riza and Havoc. His lips turned up into a smile at Havoc's random cries as he tried to catch something, but sounded as if he was horribly failing. Heh, they all sound the same still.
Apparently Havoc was back on two feet now. If he wasn't he'd have a hard time trying to catch what was being tossed at him for sure. Frowning, he for once didn't despise Havoc's smoking habits. He thought for once it would actually be handy to have a lighter on hand.
He decided to walk slowly ahead through the darkness toward the noises and candle lights that were coming from down the hall in the direction of Roy and the others. He was getting closer, but for some reason the candle lights that were ahead suddenly went out.
Thinking that he couldn't have caught up to them yet, he stood still. Each breath he took in was silent and he stood there ready for action Crouching down a bit, he waited. The noises subsided and he stepped forward quickly. However, when he did, he was met with a sickening thud and a sharp pain to the forehead. He squinted as a light was shone right in his face. He had one eye closed and squinting from the sharp pain he had trailing through his head right now. He reached up and ran his white gloved metal hand through his golden, wet, limp hair that had come loose from the braid.
"H..Havoc?" He managed to mutter as he looked at the others.
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 11:55 am
HaganeNoRenkinjutsushi "WAIT UP, DAMNIT! WHO ARE YOU? I HAVE A QUESTION FOR YOU!"
He decided to walk slowly ahead through the darkness toward the noises and candle lights that were coming from down the hall in the direction of Roy and the others. As they walked down the hallway, candles in hand, Riza suddenly stopped short, snapped an arm out, catching Roy in the stomach and causing him to make a surprised squawking sound as the three of them came to an abrupt halt in the corridor.
"Shh~!" she hissed before he could demand to know what the hell that was for. She lifted her candle and squinted in the darkness. "Didn't you hear that?"
There was a wordless sound of uncertainty from Havoc, but Roy said nothing. They all heard it now. Footsteps. Coming closer. Riza's hand moved to Roy's arm, and she instinctively pulled him behind her and reached for her gun.
The footfalls were uneven--one sounding different from the other. Someone with a limp? she wondered. Riza shook her head. No, that wasn't right. Roy sometimes forgot himself and walked with a favor to his old injury, it didn't sound quite right. It wasn't a limp, it was almost as if one foot was heavier than the other.
She analyzed the sounds a moment. If there was one thing to be said about Riza Hawkeye, it was that she was thorough. In everything she did, she spared no detail. There wasn't a voice in HQ she couldn't identify at a word...there wasn't a single officer's penmanship she couldn't pinpoint on a punctuation mark. And there wasn't a soul's footsteps she didn't know by heart as it plodded down these endless halways.
It wasn't Fuery...the footfalls were too straightforward. Fuery always hesitated to walk in dim light. The strides were too short for Farman, he had long legs. Breda's footfalls were heavier, and Armstrong's... Well, there was no mistaking Armstrong's...
But all in all...Riza was certain she had heard these footsteps before. They rang an old bell somewhere in the back of the lieutenant's mind...
She blew out her candle, reached behind her and snuffed Havoc's between her fingers--"And put out the damn cigarette!"--and watched as Roy extinguished his own candlestick.
Darkness fell heavy around them, and the footsteps stopped. Riza willed her eyes to see through the darkness. The intruder was right in front of them...HaganeNoRenkinjutsushi He was getting closer, but for some reason the candle lights that were ahead suddenly went out. Riza had had enough of the games. She opened her mouth to call out to the tresspasser when there was a yelp from Havoc. She whirled, thinking he had been struck, and was promptly hit in the arm with something. She swatted at it, startled at first, then realized it was his lighter having fallen from his grasp again--"Dammit, Havoc! You're such a klutz!"--and it soared from her flailing hand toward the intruder before them.
Digging into her pocket, fed up with all the nonsense, Riza pulled out a penlight and shone it directly in front of her to see just who the hell it was who found it so amusing to play games with the military....HaganeNoRenkinjutsushi The noises subsided and he stepped forward quickly. However, when he did, he was met with a sickening thud and a sharp pain to the forehead. He squinted as a light was shone right in his face. He had one eye closed and squinting from the sharp pain he had trailing through his head right now. He reached up and ran his white gloved metal hand through his golden, wet, limp hair that had come loose from the braid.
"H..Havoc?" He managed to mutter as he looked at the others. The sight that met Riza's startled chestnut eyes was not at all what she was expecting... Blond hair, soaked and dripping from the torrential rain, fell around slim shoulders cloaked in a black jacket she didn't recognize. Gloved hands were splayed across the individuals forehead where Havoc's wayward lighter had beaned him right between the eyes. The hands moved, and alarmed golden eyes searched through the blinding beam of the little flashlight to search for a familiar face in the darkness.
The jacket was alien to her...but the visage of the boy who wore it was surely not.
She felt her knees grow weak.
"E...Edward...-kun...?"
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 12:17 pm
Light_Ashtoreth Deep Despair ((ope.... looks like everyone is bringing envy back into the story...... kk.... *thinks of stuff to do.... evil stuff*)) ((You're scary. Waahh!! Jinni is scaring me! crying )) ((....why?!? eek i just need to plan something.... and im waiting for the right time to jump in... and since Envy-san is rp-ing as Envy, I will need to think of something evil... xd ))
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 2:07 pm
Yuriku "Heheh, you'd be surprised at the number of people who can't (read maps) either... Well where are you heading to?" Riku asked the other alchemist. "Well... that's the problem. I have NO idea," Kat answered, embarassed agian.
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 3:14 pm
Neko Kafweenu Yuriku "Heheh, you'd be surprised at the number of people who can't (read maps) either... Well where are you heading to?" Riku asked the other alchemist. "Well... that's the problem. I have NO idea," Kat answered, embarassed agian. "Well, then let's go to Central HQ together, I don't mind" Riku replied to Kat. She then folded her map and proceded to ask random people where HQ was. "The mail man said, ' Go two blocks down, make a right turn, and you can't miss it. C'mon let's go I thinks its gonna rain soon." she said running down the street.
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