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Posted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 5:34 pm
§ujin  There alone, far hidden in the path of the mountains, Sujin lay. His eyes stained read, and his heart beating on the ground, a tiny vibration sent through the path. His unconscious body was exposed to the cold air, only his robe covering his bottom half. All was quiet and still for well over an hour, until far off behind him. A rumble, a crunch, and the din of a wagon pulled through the trees. The wheels rumbled and crushed stopping just before the boy who lay in the cold. Large boots stopped and small voices bubbled up in the silence.
"Is he dead daddy?" "Sure looks dead to me!"
"Would you to hush?" A thick deep voice spoke, kneeling over Sujin and pressing his fingers against his neck. A small beat and than another. Quietly thinking, the man sighed. Grabbing Sujin's arm and throwing him up over into wagon, where two small children each the same height and age stupped over him.
"So he's not dead than?" They said together, poking him. One a girl wearing a neutral green, with short curly hair, not daring to touch such a pretty specimen, while the other a boy decked in blue with thicker shorter hair contently jabbed at his face feeling how cold he was. "Wow, he's cold daddy. You sure he's not dead?"
"Now you two, leave this poor kid alone. Use some of those blankets to cover him up." This was all he said before strapping up on the seat behind a dark, ragamuffin mule who carried on gently down the road. Travel:5/10
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**Since we're probably going to be using this one soon...** **Posts preserved** PostPosted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 5:34 pm §ujin There alone, far hidden in the path of the mountains, Sujin lay. His eyes stained read, and his heart beating on the ground, a tiny vibration sent through the path. His unconscious body was exposed to the cold air, only his robe covering his bottom half. All was quiet and still for well over an hour, until far off behind him. A rumble, a crunch, and the din of a wagon pulled through the trees. The wheels rumbled and crushed stopping just before the boy who lay in the cold. Large boots stopped and small voices bubbled up in the silence. "Is he dead daddy?" "Sure looks dead to me!" "Would you to hush?" A thick deep voice spoke, kneeling over Sujin and pressing his fingers against his neck. A small beat and than another. Quietly thinking, the man sighed. Grabbing Sujin's arm and throwing him up over into wagon, where two small children each the same height and age stupped over him. "So he's not dead than?" They said together, poking him. One a girl wearing a neutral green, with short curly hair, not daring to touch such a pretty specimen, while the other a boy decked in blue with thicker shorter hair contently jabbed at his face feeling how cold he was. "Wow, he's cold daddy. You sure he's not dead?" "Now you two, leave this poor kid alone. Use some of those blankets to cover him up." This was all he said before strapping up on the seat behind a dark, ragamuffin mule who carried on gently down the road. Travel:5/10 Weaver of Worlds cheerios18 Offline cheerios18 Offline PostPosted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 7:12 pm The small wagon rumbled down the mountain for hours. Finally coming into long flat plains, huge trees spurting up around them. Their leaves golden as if they had been baking. A whole ocean of yellow hovering above them. The two children, playing and laughed, poking each other. While in front of them their father, a large man who was worn with age. He worn a dark brown beard and his skin was wrinkled with use. Lines on his face formed from many smiles. But now he sat shaking slightly with the movement and thinking of the boy he had picked up. Now covered with blankets in the back. What reason would a boy have been laying like this in the middle of the road?
"Daddy, he's still shaking." the small boy said looking down at Sujin who even though covered with all of the blankets in the wagon was shaking. His eyes closed fast, unwilling to open to the world. The sun played across his face, and his chest. The small girl curious at his perfectly formed muscle. Both children were endlessly fascinated with the ornate, gold design that had been inked into his skin. The young boy turned to his sister, "Tough it, the golden part if so cool." he whispered so that his father wouldn't turn and stop their exploring. The small girl, smiled but was hesitant, sticking her small finger out and looming over Sujin's skin before sliding her finger over him gently. A tickle on her finger, turned her face bright red. "He's warm." she said before setting another finger on his bicep.
Sujin choked up air from his lungs as he woke with a start, his eyes shooting up into the sun. Quickly he turned grabbing his face.
"AH!" they both shouted with a start. Quickly, the man rolled back, pulling his mule hard and looking back to his children. Sujin curled, his back exposed to them. He wailed with agony as he returned to reality, before becoming quiet and still his back heaving with each breath he took.
"Hey, boy. You're okay, you're okay." The man reached forward trying to touch Sujin, who seemed to be in need of comfort. "Boy you here me? Are you okay? You hurt?"
Sujin turned slowly, trying to figure out were he was. Exposing his eyes slowly to the blue sky above him tears broke his eyes. Soon he made it to the small faces that stared at him in awe or in fear he couldn't tell. Pulling his gaze toward the man, he realized he must have passed out and they had picked him up. The only thing that he could manage was, "Where... where is Mugendai?"
The man shook his head, was Mugendai a person? No, it meant infinity. Was this kid completely bonkers? Either way, he had taken him in,he had to deal with it. But suddenly, The man noticed his daughter leaning forward. "Ten, no." She didn'y listen, in stead she pushed forward a plate still wrapped with a golden string, the symbol infinity on it, it slid across the wood and touched Sujin's fingers. The boy looked up with relief, quickly grabbing it and holing it close to his chest. "Thank you." he looked to the little girl before leaning back. Where he had been placed his head facing the sky. "Where am I?"
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"You're in the fire country." The man said back to Sujin, who now lay still, with Mugendai clung to his chest. At the words he closed his eyes tightly. This land was forbidden, this place he knew in his heart he shouldn't be there. The headband at his waist throbbing like a tell-tale heart.
"We picked you up. You were freezing in the middle of the road, out cold. What were you doing?"
Sujin thought for a moment, his mind still shook lightly, it was as if he had been on drugs from what he remembered, the rest of it he regressed. "I-I don't know. But thank you, thank you for taking me away. Where are you going?" He still didn't look at them, only keeping his eyes up.
The man was quiet before giving a large sigh. "Konoha boy. We've just come back from a trade in the rice." Sujin felt sick to his stomach, a ninja village.
"Eh, what's this?" The small boy broke into the conversation having lost interest. He held a blue book in his hands. Sujin didn't turn to see this.
"Hey, Chikyuu. Put that back where you found it."
"No, daddy please." The man flung his hand up with a huff. Before turning back to Sujin.
"Boy, what's your name?"
Sujin sighed into the sky that had started to move past him, the mule getting anxious. "Sujin, sir." The man turned to drive the kart.
"No last name?"
"No sir."
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Offline PostPosted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 7:51 pm §ujin The small boy huffed hutching next to his sister, each of their noses stuck in the book. "I don't get it."
"Get what?" their father said.
The small boy lifted up his chest to read out loud. "Flying in Otogakure Haiku."
Sujin's heart stopped, his poem book. Tears sept from his eyes again. What had he done?
"Sky so young and free, I wish I could soar up high. To be with spirits." The boy said, with much trouble.
"It's a poem boy. A pretty one. You see the lines must have 5 syllabus 7 and than 5. Count them out." Each of the children held up their fingers and smiled as they reached the end. Suddenly the girl spoke up.
"That's not all though. But all men must fall. For we have not wings to fly. And must only dream." She ended it as if a question, her reading much more efficient than her brothers.
The man in front sighed. "A wise poet." he flicked his eyes back toward Sujin. "It's best you two stop now."
"Ah wha, Dady why?"
Travel:8/10 Weaver of Worlds PostPosted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 8:26 pm §ujin Sujin closed his eyes to the sun and the sound on the grinding ground under the wagon. The children played with each other and read through his poems silently. Feeling the sun on his face, Sujin let his mind run over everything that had happened that day. He thought about Kasuke and what would happen when he found the note. He thought of his mother and grandfather, yes even of his father. There were so many things that he had left behind, and it terrified him so. Yet... far from everything that happened it felt good, freeing like he could put it all behind him and start over new.
"Who are you?" Sujin croaked through his lips, but it broke the silence none the less.
"Hm?" The man turned back. "Oh yes, I forgot myself. My name is Taiyoo Mabushii, and these two rascals, these are my twins Chikyuu and Tengoku." The two beamed brightly, their faces dark with that of days spent under the sun. Sujin smiled as well.
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Offline PostPosted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 9:32 pm §ujin Sujinsat up slowly, still holding the blankets over him. They were warm in the cool breeze. He looking down at the children interpreting his poems and smiled, he didn't want to think about them at all but seeing, Chikyoo and Tengoku happily lean over the blue book he couldn't help it. Sitting up now, his head was still dizzy but Sujin was thankful to be so far away. He just wanted to keep going on forever. And that's what it seemed like, the hours went on and on. While he sat in silence. Listening to the huge forests they didn't have trees like this in Rice. He thought through the hours and felt a deep guilt in his gut at leaving his home, his duty, a life that he had swore he would never abandon. He still loved his country, he just wasn't there anymore....
Soon it came to be that Taiyoo looked back to them. "You all. We're here, you know." The twins instantly burts into an uproar standing in the back and leaning over the plank that kept them and their father seperated. A huge gate grew from the forest. An old and powerful gate that Sujin knew had stood for many ages. It was not quiet like oto's, and it was an odd feeling. He felt like he had betrayed his country now. Still thinking like a ninja the boy, untied his headband below the blankets and stuck it in his pack, also taking his poem book, and wrapping Mugendai up as if it were a fine dinner plate.
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Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:02 am
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Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:12 am
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