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 Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 10:15 pm
My Sample(assuming it has to be different than the one I applied with?)
Zentos walked along the seemingly peaceful street not caring much for the attractions that the street vendors were trying to pass off as "amazing" or "magical". He walked past all the fireworks and the ramen shops, and stopped for no reason in the middle of the street and turned to greet the person that had been following him for the past two streets, "Now are you going to tell me what you're doing or will we fight?" He said with a smirk, anticipating the coming fight.
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Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 4:14 pm
Zent0s My Sample(assuming it has to be different than the one I applied with?) Zentos walked along the seemingly peaceful street not caring much for the attractions that the street vendors were trying to pass off as "amazing" or "magical". He walked past all the fireworks and the ramen shops, and stopped for no reason in the middle of the street and turned to greet the person that had been following him for the past two streets, "Now are you going to tell me what you're doing or will we fight?" He said with a smirk, anticipating the coming fight.
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 11:09 am
“Mamoru, please, listen to me!" a old man called out, having gotten a low growl in return. "Why would me and Houka listen to an old geezer like you?" a young man's voice asked, a shot of red hair flowing about from the wind he kicked up from his running. On his head rested a small dog, probably a month or two old, covered in a brilliant golden fur. The boy's gentle, sapphire blue eyes shimmered with happiness and excitement. Today, he and Houka were graduating from the academy! After all these years, they were finally going to be real, certified Sunagakure Genin! It wouldn't be too long before they rose through the ranks into being Chuunin‘s, then onto being Jounins, just like his dad and his partner! Speaking of, he stopped in his tracks, hearing a deep growl coming from around the corner. “He he, Hi dad, hi Kin. When‘d you get back?” he asked with a nervous laugh, Houka cowering on his head.
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 11:14 am
Good!
I don't believe I can pass you, I don't have that power-- however I suggest you make your paragraph past-tense, Samurai~ Not in the present.
But well done. You'll get passed easy once you fix that. ;D
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 11:33 am
carlthefuzzy1 Good!
I don't believe I can pass you, I don't have that power-- however I suggest you make your paragraph past-tense, Samurai~ Not in the present.
But well done. You'll get passed easy once you fix that. ;D is it better now? I've never written in past tense before
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:27 pm
Aicirret Samurai carlthefuzzy1 Good!
I don't believe I can pass you, I don't have that power-- however I suggest you make your paragraph past-tense, Samurai~ Not in the present.
But well done. You'll get passed easy once you fix that. ;D is it better now? I've never written in past tense before
It's looks good to me madam! <3 Proto will prolly approve you in a bit, the little lady is taking a nap. Good-luck with your experience here. Join Konoha! We need people to become Genin before the time-skip to have more cells. :3
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:53 pm
Hi my character is from Konoha his name is Shinigami Uchiha, for those of you who don't know Shinigami means Death, He has jet black hair normally, though not in it he wears an Akatsuki cloak from the many Akatsuki members he's klilled anyway I still need that RP sample so I'll get to that.
RP Sample
Shinigami ran as fast as he could, even faster than his brother, Itachi who couldn't catch him even though Itachi was using chakra he needed to remember his brother's speed gives him the edge, needed to use chakra he really cared that fight really wore him down care he has way too little anyway. Itachi collapsed, Shingami stood over his limp body "Oh come on brother you can't be dead yet I haven't used any cakra or even tried yet." Shinigami said. "Dang this kid is fast." Itachi thought to himself. Kisame appeared behind Shinigami, with the help of the sharingan he activated while running, he jumped away casually and without haste. "Wow you're both slow but the blue one has potential." Shinigami said "Dontcha fish boy." "I'll get you for that!" Kisame yelled.
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 1:17 pm
Bloodwing Flare Hi my character is from Konoha his name is Shinigami Uchiha, for those of you who don't know Shinigami means Death, He has jet black hair normally, though not in it he wears an Akatsuki cloak from the many Akatsuki members he's klilled anyway I still need that RP sample so I'll get to that. RP Sample Shinigami ran as fast as he could, even faster than his brother, Itachi who couldn't catch him even though Itachi was using chakra he needed to remember his brother's speed gives him the edge, needed to use chakra he really cared that fight really wore him down care he has way too little anyway. Itachi collapsed, Shingami stood over his limp body "Oh come on brother you can't be dead yet I haven't used any cakra or even tried yet." Shinigami said. "Dang this kid is fast." Itachi thought to himself. Kisame appeared behind Shinigami, with the help of the sharingan he activated while running, he jumped away casually and without haste. "Wow you're both slow but the blue one has potential." Shinigami said "Dontcha fish boy." "I'll get you for that!" Kisame yelled.
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 2:06 pm
carl can you please stop posting here. nothing against you but i want to keep it crew only to prevent cluttering. if you want to offer advice then do it by pm.
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 2:08 pm
Aicirret Samurai “Mamoru, please, listen to me!" a old man called out, having gotten a low growl in return. "Why would me and Houka listen to an old geezer like you?" a young man's voice asked, a shot of red hair flowing about from the wind he kicked up from his running. On his head rested a small dog, probably a month or two old, covered in a brilliant golden fur. The boy's gentle, sapphire blue eyes shimmered with happiness and excitement. Today, he and Houka were graduating from the academy! After all these years, they were finally going to be real, certified Sunagakure Genin! It wouldn't be too long before they rose through the ranks into being Chuunin‘s, then onto being Jounins, just like his dad and his partner! Speaking of, he stopped in his tracks, hearing a deep growl coming from around the corner. “He he, Hi dad, hi Kin. When‘d you get back?” he asked with a nervous laugh, Houka cowering on his head. pass
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 2:11 pm
Bloodwing Flare Hi my character is from Konoha his name is Shinigami Uchiha, for those of you who don't know Shinigami means Death, He has jet black hair normally, though not in it he wears an Akatsuki cloak from the many Akatsuki members he's klilled anyway I still need that RP sample so I'll get to that. RP Sample Shinigami ran as fast as he could, even faster than his brother, Itachi who couldn't catch him even though Itachi was using chakra he needed to remember his brother's speed gives him the edge, needed to use chakra he really cared that fight really wore him down care he has way too little anyway. Itachi collapsed, Shingami stood over his limp body "Oh come on brother you can't be dead yet I haven't used any cakra or even tried yet." Shinigami said. "Dang this kid is fast." Itachi thought to himself. Kisame appeared behind Shinigami, with the help of the sharingan he activated while running, he jumped away casually and without haste. "Wow you're both slow but the blue one has potential." Shinigami said "Dontcha fish boy." "I'll get you for that!" Kisame yelled. your rp post is a pass. but about the whole akatsuki thing. thats gonna be a problem because our time line is 600 years after the death of naruto. so the akatsuki is completely wiped out.
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 8:28 pm
Okie Dokie...
Haru was anything but happy.
She was angry, mad, in the senpai of all bad moods. Sure she passed her graduation exam, but did that even matter once she arrived home to find not only HER house a mess, but Keiichi on HER couch, trading spit with some girl whose name escaped her. Keiichi looked up at her, quickly removed his hand from her... lower section and jumped off the couch.
"Little girls should not be watching me be affectionate!" He said.
"Older brothers shouldn't be doing this kind of thing in the front room. Of course it doesn't look like MY front room, you know the one i worked so hard to afford. No, it looks like a pigstey!" Haru was fuming, Keiichi was flustered, and the unnamed girl was just sitting there. Oh, poor helpless girl, you should have run when you had the chance... "And you! Don't ever think about doing that with my brother ever again! Keiichi where do you think your going? You and your girlfriend are going to pick up this mess NOW!" Haru screamed. Just an ordinary day in the Miyagi household. Even the neighboors were used to the constant screaming....
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 2:05 am
Captain Awseome Okie Dokie... Haru was anything but happy. She was angry, mad, in the senpai of all bad moods. Sure she passed her graduation exam, but did that even matter once she arrived home to find not only HER house a mess, but Keiichi on HER couch, trading spit with some girl whose name escaped her. Keiichi looked up at her, quickly removed his hand from her... lower section and jumped off the couch. "Little girls should not be watching me be affectionate!" He said. "Older brothers shouldn't be doing this kind of thing in the front room. Of course it doesn't look like MY front room, you know the one i worked so hard to afford. No, it looks like a pigstey!" Haru was fuming, Keiichi was flustered, and the unnamed girl was just sitting there. Oh, poor helpless girl, you should have run when you had the chance... "And you! Don't ever think about doing that with my brother ever again! Keiichi where do you think your going? You and your girlfriend are going to pick up this mess NOW!" Haru screamed. Just an ordinary day in the Miyagi household. Even the neighboors were used to the constant screaming.... pass
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:57 am
Shinja19 Finally got into a village...Cloud!!! whee Shido runs at top speed to catch his pray. He's been tailing the animal since the mountain pass and finally came to the grassy wide open planes. With the kunais in his mouth and both hands he becomes anxious to taste blood once again, but he didn't seem like he was getting closer to the deer. Actually it looks like it's pulling out further. "AHHHH!!!" Shido yells as he throws his left hand kunai, but the deer jumped and it hit the dirt. The deer getting close to the forest. "STOP MOVING!!!" Shido throws his right hand kunai only to realize that the deer reached the forest and it hit a tree. Shido stops at the edge of the forest knowing the deer is lost to him forever. "AAAHHHH!!! I HATE ANIMALS!!" Shido yells as he takes his last kunai in his mouth with his right hand and throws it at the dirt. *sighs* "Well.... it looks like I will have to become a vegetarian...." Shido starts his walk back home. from looking at this man's avatar i'd say he is a hacker Rp Sample: Ruuko sat atop the biulding he spent his days in on days of. the sun briskly shines on his face. a quick drink of his special elixer, he lets out a sigh of contempt. "ahh, what a wonderful day. dont you think kawa-chan." the white puff ball on top of his head smiled saying "Kawa^ ^". he then got up and yelled full of energy, "whats a great day with out something to do!". he jumped on the roof tops heading for the mission board.
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 3:15 pm
pirate_king999 Shinja19 Finally got into a village...Cloud!!! whee Shido runs at top speed to catch his pray. He's been tailing the animal since the mountain pass and finally came to the grassy wide open planes. With the kunais in his mouth and both hands he becomes anxious to taste blood once again, but he didn't seem like he was getting closer to the deer. Actually it looks like it's pulling out further. "AHHHH!!!" Shido yells as he throws his left hand kunai, but the deer jumped and it hit the dirt. The deer getting close to the forest. "STOP MOVING!!!" Shido throws his right hand kunai only to realize that the deer reached the forest and it hit a tree. Shido stops at the edge of the forest knowing the deer is lost to him forever. "AAAHHHH!!! I HATE ANIMALS!!" Shido yells as he takes his last kunai in his mouth with his right hand and throws it at the dirt. *sighs* "Well.... it looks like I will have to become a vegetarian...." Shido starts his walk back home. from looking at this man's avatar i'd say he is a hacker Rp Sample: Ruuko sat atop the biulding he spent his days in on days of. the sun briskly shines on his face. a quick drink of his special elixer, he lets out a sigh of contempt. "ahh, what a wonderful day. dont you think kawa-chan." the white puff ball on top of his head smiled saying "Kawa^ ^". he then got up and yelled full of energy, "whats a great day with out something to do!". he jumped on the roof tops heading for the mission board. your grammar needs some work. its very odd how you go from present tense to past tense. and your spelling could use some work. try again
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