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 Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 7:53 am
Beauchene Well i just wrote the best rp sample i could to get the Kaguya bloodline but meh who knows i may get it i may not if i don't no biggy if i do get it sweet it will be helpful.
HOWEVER, everything else was GREAT! Some of your grammar is a little off and some of the word placement is slightly awkward, but overall I can tell that you really know what you're doing. I would personally approve you, but I don't want to step on any toes.
I would approve you though.
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:14 am
What do you mean Cobra? Bone Bullet formation jutsu? Is there even one i had the BL page up while typing that and well i didn't see any formation jutsu for it. Only moves they had for it was the Dances.
And yeah i'm not that great with grammar i try but i was never good in school with it. Shadowmancer can vouch for me he was in like 3 of my English classes.
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:23 am
Beauchene What do you mean Cobra? Bone Bullet formation jutsu? Is there even one i had the BL page up while typing that and well i didn't see any formation jutsu for it. Only moves they had for it was the Dances. Beauchene And yeah i'm not that great with grammar i try but i was never good in school with it. Shadowmancer can vouch for me he was in like 3 of my English classes.
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:28 am
I'm from the USA, The northern usa to be precise and I'm 19 years old But english wasn't my strong suit at all. I'm more of a science and history sort of guy.
And yeah i was gonna put that but i wasn't sure if they wanted it seeming as it doesn't say. I mean I use leafninja.com and thats one of the moves listed on The bloodline page.
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:36 am
I wonder why no one except me uses Narutopedia...
Oh well, so yeah, it shouldn't matter anyway. You clearly understand the bloodline and how it works, so if anyone tries to deny that application, you send them to me.
Fair enough on the grammar though. It's not like it's unreadable. it's very good RPing on it's own.
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:42 am
I don't like narutopedia that much its not as organized if that makes sense. I mean I know its organized but leafninja.com i think does the information organization a whole ton better. Its also constantly updated by narutards like all of us. XD
I'll send them to you but i think it was a good sample i should get it. Well if someone will look at it.
And yeah i'm doing my best to get better at grammar but it still doesn't sink in. And thanks for the compliment I've been on gaia for almost 6 years. I started out as the *Walks* type of rpers... Oh how I've evolved.
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:45 am
I started off the same way, one liner posts... some kind of failed attempt to be both a a character, and OOC at the same time through the RPC...
Looking back, it was all completely fail until about 2 years ago.
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:49 am
I agree if it wasn't for my Friend Shadow always doing better at posting then I do i never would have put just a bit more here and there until i reach what i can do now. I mean its not fantastic rping but hey its easy to read ( at times) Its pretty well thought out and well i love throwing in detail so i make its others can get something out of the post.
Some times though i miss the simple days where all i had to do was hit the shift key + the 8 key and all my actions go inbetween the other Shift and 8 key.
xD such simple times. Lol
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:51 am
Cobra_X I wonder why no one except me uses Narutopedia...
Oh well, so yeah, it shouldn't matter anyway. You clearly understand the bloodline and how it works, so if anyone tries to deny that application, you send them to me.
Fair enough on the grammar though. It's not like it's unreadable. it's very good RPing on it's own.
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 12:56 pm
I use Narutopedia sometimes..... >.>
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 3:15 pm
*Sigh.* Still waiting for my bloodline to be accepted. =/ Anyways, how is everyone's day so far?
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 3:18 pm
It was So-so..... I'm actually learning Japanese in school o.O I thought it would never happen.
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 3:19 pm
Cobra_X I wonder why no one except me uses Narutopedia... I use narutopedia ^.^
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 3:21 pm
Japanese langues is awesome, but kind of fast for me to keep up. @_@. But as for me, I was sick to the point that I had to stay home from school and bed rest from then to now. So I am wide awake. lol
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 3:23 pm
Demonic Slayer Wasuken Japanese langues is awesome, but kind of fast for me to keep up. @_@. But as for me, I was sick to the point that I had to stay home from school and bed rest from then to now. So I am wide awake. lol it actually isn't fast. it is just that it is basicly speaking in syllables. if you spoke it as fast as you speak english it wouldn't sound right. it is syylable for syllable, far slower than english.
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