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 Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 12:30 pm
heres my sample, i want to be in otokagure
after about 2 years in the forest, trying to find out who his family was he was almost there. he knew he was related to someone who had been murdered years ago. as he ran through the forests of konoha he suddenly tripped on something out of place. he stopped and picked it up. It was two white arm braces with holes in them. beside it was a letter dated hundreds of years ago. "here lies dosu my 4th victim in the chunnin exams, signed garra of the dessert" at that point he finally knew who his family was. he got up with the braces and ran back to get to his village of otokagure.
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Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 10:30 pm
Here's my example. I am so stoked that I can apply for the Waterfall village...
Amae sat on the roof of the academy. She had been nervous that she would be caught, but the fear ebbed quickly. The roof felt cool to the touch, and wasn't a very comfortable seat, but it didn't matter. Amae just needed a place to relax for a minute while she cooled off. The classmates had called her names for screwing up the exam. She bit her lip and suppressed tears. How could she screw up so badly?
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Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 6:39 am
I actually had gotten accepted once, but had to leave the guild for a month or so, and now that I've re-joined, I'll try again, okay? sweatdrop
She could see the small bear hiding as she crawled though the bush, her blue eyes gleaming in the cool sunlight. Suddenly, Inari jumped at the Poka's back and laughed. "You're it silly bear!"
She turned around, with her white hair flying, and dashed behind a tree. The bear in turn sat down and put its big paws over his eyes the way she had taught him so many times before. After a while he got up and took a big gulp of air through his nose. There was her smell! He turned and stalked quietly through the under brush to his prey.
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Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 12:44 pm
the names gray guess ill submit my sample RP and hope for the best
It was a cool crisp Sunday afternoon Gray the soon to be Genin was about to start the day with some ramen at the Ichiraku Ramen Bar as he was walking to Ichiraku he stopped to look at the sky "one day ill be one of the greatest ninja of all time and then I will have the strength to protect everyone around me then no one will ever be hurt cause of me again" with that said he proceeded to Ichiraku to cheer himself up
hope that was good enough for ya thanks in advance if i pass and no hard feelings if i don't
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Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 2:29 pm
Bio Current heres my sample, i want to be in otokagure after about 2 years in the forest, trying to find out who his family was he was almost there. he knew he was related to someone who had been murdered years ago. as he ran through the forests of konoha he suddenly tripped on something out of place. he stopped and picked it up. It was two white arm braces with holes in them. beside it was a letter dated hundreds of years ago. "here lies dosu my 4th victim in the chunnin exams, signed garra of the dessert" at that point he finally knew who his family was. he got up with the braces and ran back to get to his village of otokagure.
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Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 2:29 pm
PinkieKitty Here's my example. I am so stoked that I can apply for the Waterfall village... Amae sat on the roof of the academy. She had been nervous that she would be caught, but the fear ebbed quickly. The roof felt cool to the touch, and wasn't a very comfortable seat, but it didn't matter. Amae just needed a place to relax for a minute while she cooled off. The classmates had called her names for screwing up the exam. She bit her lip and suppressed tears. How could she screw up so badly?
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Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 2:30 pm
Lady Marena I actually had gotten accepted once, but had to leave the guild for a month or so, and now that I've re-joined, I'll try again, okay? sweatdrop She could see the small bear hiding as she crawled though the bush, her blue eyes gleaming in the cool sunlight. Suddenly, Inari jumped at the Poka's back and laughed. "You're it silly bear!" She turned around, with her white hair flying, and dashed behind a tree. The bear in turn sat down and put its big paws over his eyes the way she had taught him so many times before. After a while he got up and took a big gulp of air through his nose. There was her smell! He turned and stalked quietly through the under brush to his prey.
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Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 2:33 pm
DarknessReaperZero the names gray guess ill submit my sample RP and hope for the best It was a cool crisp Sunday afternoon Gray the soon to be Genin was about to start the day with some ramen at the Ichiraku Ramen Bar as he was walking to Ichiraku he stopped to look at the sky "one day ill be one of the greatest ninja of all time and then I will have the strength to protect everyone around me then no one will ever be hurt cause of me again" with that said he proceeded to Ichiraku to cheer himself up hope that was good enough for ya thanks in advance if i pass and no hard feelings if i don't
It was a cool, crisp Sunday afternoon. Gray, the soon to be Genin, was about to start the day with some ramen at the Ichiraku Ramen Bar.
Correct the rest of that post, or if you like, try again with a new RP angle. =3
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Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:33 pm
Umm.. I've double-checked everything, and I'm almost absoluetly positive this should go here..
Character's name is Nekumeru, and I'm still looking for a village, but hopefully i can get into Amegakure
Here goes::
The soft pad, pad, pad of feet hitting the ground seemed like thunder in the silent wood. Silver hair rippled out behind the running form of a male, his delicate muscles rippling under the strain of the summoning scrolls he had tied on his back.
"Come on.. Come on! Move!" The words were formed by his lips, his voice not bringing them to life. This mission was important, he had to deliver these scrolls for his Kage, and the anbu were never caught, but they were also swift, which is what he needed to be. His body moved gracefully over the ground, lithe like a cat, but swift and powerful like a wolf. Pausing not even a second, he launched into the trees and continued from branch to branch, hoping the leaves might hide him from prying eyes.
"Almost there.. A mile until I'm at the gates.." His mask hid his lips' movement. The mask was that of a cat, the markings on it were a beautiful light blue that represented his village.
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Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 6:45 am
sorry i guess im still not good enough anyway nice guild and i hope to see you around gaia
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 1:01 am
my Character is Higen Gouksai
here is my Rp sample
Higen was standing alone in the shade of the great oak tree in his front yard. He hardly noticed when the sun started to set, he was too consumed by the chain of thought he was having too notice. He was thinking about his last exam, he wasn’t thinking about the test it’s self. He was complaining too himself. About how easy it was.
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 4:39 pm
Soul EaterZ 2 Umm.. I've double-checked everything, and I'm almost absoluetly positive this should go here.. Character's name is Nekumeru, and I'm still looking for a village, but hopefully i can get into Amegakure Here goes:: The soft pad, pad, pad of feet hitting the ground seemed like thunder in the silent wood. Silver hair rippled out behind the running form of a male, his delicate muscles rippling under the strain of the summoning scrolls he had tied on his back. "Come on.. Come on! Move!" The words were formed by his lips, his voice not bringing them to life. This mission was important, he had to deliver these scrolls for his Kage, and the anbu were never caught, but they were also swift, which is what he needed to be. His body moved gracefully over the ground, lithe like a cat, but swift and powerful like a wolf. Pausing not even a second, he launched into the trees and continued from branch to branch, hoping the leaves might hide him from prying eyes. "Almost there.. A mile until I'm at the gates.." His mask hid his lips' movement. The mask was that of a cat, the markings on it were a beautiful light blue that represented his village.
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 4:40 pm
Kenshin5455 my Character is Higen Gouksai here is my Rp sample Higen was standing alone in the shade of the great oak tree in his front yard. He hardly noticed when the sun started to set, he was too consumed by the chain of thought he was having too notice. He was thinking about his last exam, he wasn’t thinking about the test it’s self. He was complaining too himself. About how easy it was.
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 6:16 pm
Here is my second try at this
This is hopefully the flashback in the history of my character
Higen awoke to the screams of his sister. "Oh god! Not this, not again!" He thought, Franticly jumping out of bed, he ran to his sister's room.fumbling and the door knob, he paused.The screaming had stopped. "Is she under control again?!" He thought, finally get the door to open. Shocked and Stunned he gazed into the room. seeing his sister laying in a pool of blood.Now knowing the reason for the newly found silence.He welcomed it for it was the only friend he had to share his sorrows with.
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 9:05 pm
Kenshin5455 Here is my second try at this This is hopefully the flashback in the history of my character Higen awoke to the screams of his sister. "Oh god! Not this, not again!" He thought, Franticly jumping out of bed, he ran to his sister's room.fumbling and the door knob, he paused.The screaming had stopped. "Is she under control again?!" He thought, finally get the door to open. Shocked and Stunned he gazed into the room. seeing his sister laying in a pool of blood.Now knowing the reason for the newly found silence.He welcomed it for it was the only friend he had to share his sorrows with.
Pass.
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