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 Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:13 pm
heart i love it i love it i love it a lot.
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:26 pm
Hehe fanservice. <3
Also I was thinking it could probably be fun if someday Jun and Katie met. But that just might be me thinking Katie is starved for interaction. =<
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thunderbolts_and_sunshine
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:27 pm
I VANT TO ARPEE WITH YOU, TESSIE. 8D
(oh and i just remembered, he'd probably go wild if he found out her mother's a fashion designer, ha)
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:36 pm
thunderbolts_and_sunshine Hehe fanservice. <3
Also I was thinking it could probably be fun if someday Jun and Katie met. But that just might be me thinking Katie is starved for interaction. =< Yeah I figured why not add the little tags around that paragraph. lol
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:38 pm
That would be great though she'd probably get annoyed at him if he acted all squeeing fanboy. X3
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:53 pm
so truth be told im still not sure what im doing, so ill continue telling my own story...ya well onto route 114 i go than
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:54 pm
yay new page in the RP which means I GET TO POST! *zoom* heart
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:55 pm
Venerax so truth be told im still not sure what im doing, so ill continue telling my own story...ya well onto route 114 i go than Hey you remembered. smile Well just go with what you want for now. If you're going to be the water master. Contests and badges are some easy to follow goals. At least until you run into someone else.
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 9:25 pm
DrakeEvancore Venerax so truth be told im still not sure what im doing, so ill continue telling my own story...ya well onto route 114 i go than Hey you remembered. smile Well just go with what you want for now. If you're going to be the water master. Contests and badges are some easy to follow goals. At least until you run into someone else. Ya Ya name stealer. razz
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 9:28 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 9:32 pm
i posted tell me what u think drake
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 9:36 pm
Yay post finished. *waits for half of the page to be filled so she can post again*
By the way, nice posting Venerax.
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 9:38 pm
Maybe add a bit of description in the final bout of conversation. Like...
"Breaker jumped in slight surprise."
Things like that. Describing motions or facial expression that are happening during the conversation. Otherwise good. I bit more time on description and your post would be just awesome.
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 9:44 pm
ya i got a good posting revue and a you could do better from the guy who stole me name XD
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 9:47 pm
You asked me what I thought! I generally assume you're looking for constructive critism. Just a splash more description and it would completely rock. I never said it was bad. razz
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