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 Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 7:38 pm
klamachpin I think I have finially figured out what I want to make my Uchiha's first Make-up be... Salamander: This is a Ninjutsu based technique developed by Sango utilizing the fire element. Salamander allows her to burn through almost any foe or object. While Sango is activating the technique her body become enveloped by an fire force. This force is her chakra altered in nature to appear as a flame to the naked eye. By altering the shape of the force of the technique, Sango can decide the power of the attack to limit the damage to a target if she wants. After focusing the chakra into her palm, Sango will quickly approach her opponent and thrust the Salamander into her target with an extended forearm. The chakra ball super-heats an air within it, cause an explosion when coliding with its target. so basicly the ability to shoot shrapnel-less grenades. if that is so than I pass it. Or do you become a human torch with your chakra?
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 7:41 pm
It was basically a Chidori that is based on the fire element instead of lighting. Thus it will be weaker than a Chidori as well.
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 7:42 pm
klamachpin It was basically a Chidori that is based on the fire element instead of lighting. Thus it will be weaker than a Chidori as well. Passed thought you could have just learn the element change in the heaven village.
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Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 10:29 am
Komenusai noir_kama Komenusai noir_kama Evolution Shot-
Seeing as the spirit current known as Adonis Mercury has had experience with the strange devices known as "Chakra Rifles" in lives as both in part of the clan of great builders and those who destroy to only recreate what was destroyed the Akasun and the Howards Adonis has superior knowledge of the inner workings of the objects. In his previous life as Shiro Howard he was able to perfect the science of creating and replicating the weapons known as chakra rifles. He went so far as to modify and improve the existing design to better incorporate aspects of his alchemical abilities into the weapon. Though this single modified rifle proved it's usefulness it didn't stop Shirokarasu from creating something new, this powerful weapon was known as the Chakra Revolver, lacking the range and raw power of the rifle, this newly developed pistol had the advantages of a lightweight one handed wielding and massive versatility. This invention is the final evolution in the chakra rifle technology. using this smaller compact gun Adonis now uses Alchemy to utilize the Evolution Shot as opposed to the Infinite Shot used by his predecessor. This compact weapon of death has 6 different settings which can be accessed through a slide wheel where the thumb rests. By pulling the trigger back, the top part of the trigger slides forward completing a Alchemical Circle launching the bullet selected at the opponent.
Chakra Bullet-
The base setting, the most dangerous, but also consumes the most energy. This bullet is formed of compacted chakra at high amounts making it highly volatile. It isn't easily stopped with metal or even armor and takes a similar caliber of chakra to stop. If the bullet strikes an opponent not only they receive sizable physical damage they also incur serious damage to the chakra circulatory system near the injury.
Katon Bullet-
The bullet with the shortest range this seemingly small orb of fire emerges from the travels in a searing straight line for about five feet before separating into 25 similar orbs. This attack has the power of your standard assault Shotgun and has a heavy recoil value. The ignition source is a small store of oil used to spark the initial reaction.
Suiton Bullet-
This bullet draws in water vapor from the air condensing it into one hard swirling ball. When fired from the revolver this bullet achieves the highest velocity of those available, but unlike the other bullets this one causes no outward or inward physical damage to the victim. It's usefulness comes in that one it strike a target it sticks like adhesive and it draws in more water vapor from the air and freezes weighing down the opponent and in some cases sticking them to the ground or other nearby objects.
Doton Bullet-
This bullet is the most limited in supply, but the most powerful when it comes to piercing armor. It will shatter any metal, rock, mineral, or similar substance with ease even doing substantial to damage to specially developed armors. The compartment that holds the earthen ammunitions only holds enough material to fire fiver bullets. Theses bullets strike with stupendous force putting holes in the opponent much larger then the actual bullet itself.
Fuuton Bullet-
The most deadly bullet in terms of assassination purposes, not only is this ammunition infinite, but it is also for all intents and purposes invisible. This bullet can be fired just as quickly as the user can pull the trigger. This bullet has average power and relies on the fact that many can be fired in rapid succession with the opponent unable to see the path of the bullets.
Raiton Bullet
A bullet both powerful and deceptive the Raiton Bulllet is actually two bullets fired in quick succession. They appear as two large balls of electrical energy connected by a single stream of lightning energy. This bullet always curves to the meaning that it almost always comes from the left or from behind the opponent depending on angle fired. This twin shot of electrical energy works in the nature of the Bola wrapping and snaring the opponent wrapping them up, or often just tying their feet together. While in contact with the electrical energy the opponent would of course feel the appropriate shocks and burns across their skin where the tendrils of energy course. The ammunitions for this attack can be found in a store of metal shavings, only a small amount is required to focus the electrical energy, but at best a skilled user can get off fifty twin shots with the available ammunitions.
I think it's very inventive. but When are we going to stop in the guns section ^^;;;; when we finally invent machine guns or repeating laser pistols ^^;;; Bone already has Gatling, Shotgun and normal bullets. Drago has his Shotgun. Besides them and I'm not even sure how Bone got the technology the only people with Firearm Technology would be myself and Drago and Dr. E (in a limited sense). I know the author never meant for guns to enter the series, but really this is just a way of focusing and channeling alchemy. It's just been one of my little hobbies advancing musket technology since I wiped out the Testing Grounds with Drago. XDDD icic. ehhh guess I'll be seeing full auto guns in the near future. XDD Technically Tamao has a small arsenal of firearms. Only technically, though. They're accessories for her Basic Summon, and as such, utterly unusable in any real sense. But she does have them.
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Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 8:04 pm
15k Made Up Slot
Electric Flying Screen Step
This technique comes in the form of four metallic balls that are 1 inch in diameter that hover near the user's ankle's and both should blades. Each of these metallic balls has a slit that opens and closes with use. When the metallic balls are in use they cause the slits to appear and leak out chakra that is controlled in amounts by the user. It will allow the user to create blades or wings from the slits that will allow the user movement at the speed of lightning and hover or fly depending on how much chakra is spent. This technique creates the illusion and allows the user to fly and move quickly for evasive maneuavers as well as fight from a tactical advantage.
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Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 8:18 pm
Hedoro Koutai Komenusai noir_kama Komenusai noir_kama Evolution Shot-
Seeing as the spirit current known as Adonis Mercury has had experience with the strange devices known as "Chakra Rifles" in lives as both in part of the clan of great builders and those who destroy to only recreate what was destroyed the Akasun and the Howards Adonis has superior knowledge of the inner workings of the objects. In his previous life as Shiro Howard he was able to perfect the science of creating and replicating the weapons known as chakra rifles. He went so far as to modify and improve the existing design to better incorporate aspects of his alchemical abilities into the weapon. Though this single modified rifle proved it's usefulness it didn't stop Shirokarasu from creating something new, this powerful weapon was known as the Chakra Revolver, lacking the range and raw power of the rifle, this newly developed pistol had the advantages of a lightweight one handed wielding and massive versatility. This invention is the final evolution in the chakra rifle technology. using this smaller compact gun Adonis now uses Alchemy to utilize the Evolution Shot as opposed to the Infinite Shot used by his predecessor. This compact weapon of death has 6 different settings which can be accessed through a slide wheel where the thumb rests. By pulling the trigger back, the top part of the trigger slides forward completing a Alchemical Circle launching the bullet selected at the opponent.
Chakra Bullet-
The base setting, the most dangerous, but also consumes the most energy. This bullet is formed of compacted chakra at high amounts making it highly volatile. It isn't easily stopped with metal or even armor and takes a similar caliber of chakra to stop. If the bullet strikes an opponent not only they receive sizable physical damage they also incur serious damage to the chakra circulatory system near the injury.
Katon Bullet-
The bullet with the shortest range this seemingly small orb of fire emerges from the travels in a searing straight line for about five feet before separating into 25 similar orbs. This attack has the power of your standard assault Shotgun and has a heavy recoil value. The ignition source is a small store of oil used to spark the initial reaction.
Suiton Bullet-
This bullet draws in water vapor from the air condensing it into one hard swirling ball. When fired from the revolver this bullet achieves the highest velocity of those available, but unlike the other bullets this one causes no outward or inward physical damage to the victim. It's usefulness comes in that one it strike a target it sticks like adhesive and it draws in more water vapor from the air and freezes weighing down the opponent and in some cases sticking them to the ground or other nearby objects.
Doton Bullet-
This bullet is the most limited in supply, but the most powerful when it comes to piercing armor. It will shatter any metal, rock, mineral, or similar substance with ease even doing substantial to damage to specially developed armors. The compartment that holds the earthen ammunitions only holds enough material to fire fiver bullets. Theses bullets strike with stupendous force putting holes in the opponent much larger then the actual bullet itself.
Fuuton Bullet-
The most deadly bullet in terms of assassination purposes, not only is this ammunition infinite, but it is also for all intents and purposes invisible. This bullet can be fired just as quickly as the user can pull the trigger. This bullet has average power and relies on the fact that many can be fired in rapid succession with the opponent unable to see the path of the bullets.
Raiton Bullet
A bullet both powerful and deceptive the Raiton Bulllet is actually two bullets fired in quick succession. They appear as two large balls of electrical energy connected by a single stream of lightning energy. This bullet always curves to the meaning that it almost always comes from the left or from behind the opponent depending on angle fired. This twin shot of electrical energy works in the nature of the Bola wrapping and snaring the opponent wrapping them up, or often just tying their feet together. While in contact with the electrical energy the opponent would of course feel the appropriate shocks and burns across their skin where the tendrils of energy course. The ammunitions for this attack can be found in a store of metal shavings, only a small amount is required to focus the electrical energy, but at best a skilled user can get off fifty twin shots with the available ammunitions.
I think it's very inventive. but When are we going to stop in the guns section ^^;;;; when we finally invent machine guns or repeating laser pistols ^^;;; Bone already has Gatling, Shotgun and normal bullets. Drago has his Shotgun. Besides them and I'm not even sure how Bone got the technology the only people with Firearm Technology would be myself and Drago and Dr. E (in a limited sense). I know the author never meant for guns to enter the series, but really this is just a way of focusing and channeling alchemy. It's just been one of my little hobbies advancing musket technology since I wiped out the Testing Grounds with Drago. XDDD icic. ehhh guess I'll be seeing full auto guns in the near future. XDD Technically Tamao has a small arsenal of firearms. Only technically, though. They're accessories for her Basic Summon, and as such, utterly unusable in any real sense. But she does have them. O_o??? am I the only guy that doesn't have a gun? jeez...
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Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 7:39 am
I don't have a gun ... I got a bow >> even better >>
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Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 4:25 pm
Made Up Slot: Free since I got the Hidden Message.
Senrei Gloves
These gloves are of dark royal blue color in hue and have white stripes on them with four holes that are punctured into each of them. The Senrei Gloves will attach onto the user's dominant hand that is used for long ranged archery and will stay on permanently unless otherwise removed. The Senrei Glove that is attached will double the user's overall Chakra Points permanemently and will triple if the user removes them for a limited amount of time. The Senrei Gloves comes with its own special bow that is created from the user's own chakra that is compressed down to become a dense more durable bow that can fire arrows made of chakra like the user's Bow Manifestation technique. If the glove is ever removed the user will enter a state that will triple their power but can only last for 1 Gaian Post taking the users's base amount of Chakra Points (without the doubling effect of the Senrei Gloves) divided by 1000. Once the state can no longer be maintained, the user loses all Chakra Points for the rest of the day until they recuperate and can put back on the Senrei Glove.
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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 4:03 pm
Tin200 15k Made Up Slot Electric Flying Screen StepThis technique comes in the form of four metallic balls that are 1 inch in diameter that hover near the user's ankle's and both should blades. Each of these metallic balls has a slit that opens and closes with use. When the metallic balls are in use they cause the slits to appear and leak out chakra that is controlled in amounts by the user. It will allow the user to create blades or wings from the slits that will allow the user movement at the speed of lightning and hover or fly depending on how much chakra is spent. This technique creates the illusion and allows the user to fly and move quickly for evasive maneuavers as well as fight from a tactical advantage. Techniques that use that much speed only allow so in short bursts (ex. Body Flicker) Even flying thunder god is limited to certain places. If I gave you that much speed without any limits, no one would be able to keep up therefore too powerful. If you limit the lightning speed to short burst then we're good but no more than 5 times per battle. If you agree to these terms, then clear. Tin200 Made Up Slot: Senrei GlovesThese gloves are of dark royal blue color in hue and have white stripes on them with four holes that are punctured into each of them. The Senrei Gloves will attach onto the user's dominant hand that is used for long ranged archery and will stay on permanently unless otherwise removed. The Senrei Glove that is attached will double the user's overall Chakra Points permanemently and will triple if the user removes them for a limited amount of time. The Senrei Gloves comes with its own special bow that is created from the user's own chakra that is compressed down to become a dense more durable bow that can fire arrows made of chakra like the user's Bow Manifestation technique. If the glove is ever removed the user will enter a state that will triple their power but can only last for 1 Gaian Post taking the users's base amount of Chakra Points (without the doubling effect of the Senrei Gloves) divided by 1000. Once the state can no longer be maintained, the user loses all Chakra Points for the rest of the day until they recuperate and can put back on the Senrei Glove. Denied. Way too powerful.
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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 4:10 pm
Entropy: Uh...
Electric Flying Screen Step: Can I be allowed to only use it for battle purposes as in attacking 5 times and then the rest are small bursts that are only for evasion?
Senrei Glove: I guess I can tone it down by a lot then to: Doubles total Chakra Points in battle only.
And I'll save the other stuff at a later time ^^ will that be more acceptable?
If so I will go and edit in the changes in bold and ask for a last look.
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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:09 pm
Attacking/flying I have no problem with. Its the speed that needs limits. If I give you free range of it, its implying that your so fast you never get hit D:
As for Senrei....the Double/triple total chakra thing was the whole reason I denied it sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 6:51 pm
Okay so..
Electric Flying Screen Step: How about I limit it to just the ability to move at half the speed of lightning, like small bursts that are controlled?
Senrei Gloves: Um... it's only in combat and if the triple thing is allowed. I guess I could go with it's limiter is base CPs (total CPs without doubling effect) divided by 5000 CPs.. so currently it's 19,100/5000 = 3. sonthing so it lasts for a total of 3 Gaian Posts before I lose all of my CPs for the rest of the day... not allowing me to re-equip the Senrei Glove at all until the next day. The doubling effect only lasts during combat and will only activate if a bow is formed. Will that work? If not I will jus rephrase and submit again.
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The reason I had it originally at 1000 CPs was because well I do not know how long a battle lasts and well I do not know how long it takes for someone to reply to me and it's under my assumption that battles will drag out and that 1 gaian post = fast paced so.. lol xD
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 12:03 pm
x_X this is why I don't do made ups xD Its getting too complicated for me. Just repost them and have another mod take a look at them.
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 3:56 pm
lol xD this is why I am afraid to enter my own made ups.. since I can overwhelm due to my own techniques from Elites sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 9:29 pm
i wanted something to do so i made a technique for Metalos when he reaches 15k
flaming needles of suture- this is a technique that involves a needle and thread and a corpse. when Metalos finds a corpse he is given the ability to fix any wound with a needle and thread. once he stitches a would he can instantly heal it while the stitches dissolve and heal the would completely no matter what the wound is. if he does this to a corpse where the soul has left he can take the body for himself reviving it with a false soul. the body of someone that he revived with this technique will seem like a stitched doll more then a person. (yep a healing/revival technique)
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