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 Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 8:57 am
((Here ya go, this is my post, hope you enjoy it, sorry if its long, I can't stand short posts.))
Sado was walking through the forest, his senses turned on high, keeping a lookout of the area surrounding him. It was quiet day in the forest, almost too quiet. Sado stopped in his tracks. He looked around out of the corners of his eyes, waiting for the slightest hint of movement, his ears waiting for the slightest sound. Then he heard it. Sado qucikly withdrew a kunai, throwing it into the bushes next to him. The sound of metal piercing flesh could be heard as the kunai made it's way through the bushes.
Sado walked over to the bush, blood covering the plant. He looked behind it only to find out that he had killed a rabbit. A rouge ninja was hiding behind a tree, waiting for his target to come his way. "That was too close..." The ninja said to himself as he kept an eye on Sado. A kunai was suddenly at the ninja's throat, as Sado stood behind the man. The man's eyes widened. "Wh-When did you-?" The ninja said. Sado smiled before he said, "I knew you were here from the start." He ripped the kunai across the assassins throat, and dropped the man to the floor.
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 5:32 pm
Well here I go:
Where did he go..? Kaori's trained eyes darted from bush to tree, and back again; searching for a significant sign to her Chunin's whereabouts. He couldn't have gone far! Her expression remained stoic; a result of her many years in training. Kaori's frustration was working it's way to her nerves, making her anxious. Forcing her thoughts of anxiety to the back of her mind, she heard movement behind her. It was a bird. The movement having been too light to have been her Chunin, He's not exactly the lightest man around, she thought to herself humorously. Then it happened. The small Snap! that gave an instinctual boost of adrenaline in her veins.
Darting to the right, several kunai missed Kaori's cheek by centimeters, Damn! A dozen more accompanied the first few, all of them whizzing past her and missing by a hair's length. Using her own kunai, she shot a few from the air; changing their course. Using the brief moment of opportunity, Kaori leapt from her perch in the trees and landed gracefully on the floor. An unmistakable Creak errupted on her left and right; two grown trees, yanked fom their roots, were coming at her. a small gasp escaped her full lips, as she jumped. A deafening Bang! echoed throughout the training grounds from the tree trunks' collision. A large flurry of movement at the corner of her eye caught her attention. "Got you," she whispered, ejecting her last kunai from her sleeve. The soft whistling sound her kunai made as it soared through the air stopped, meeting it's target dead-on. Her Chunin, Roku, smiled in satisfaction, "I thought you would never get it right."
"Neither did I."
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 4:19 pm
Sado Shimizu ((Here ya go, this is my post, hope you enjoy it, sorry if its long, I can't stand short posts.))
Sado was walking through the forest, his senses turned on high, keeping a lookout of the area surrounding him. It was quiet day in the forest, almost too quiet. Sado stopped in his tracks. He looked around out of the corners of his eyes, waiting for the slightest hint of movement, his ears waiting for the slightest sound. Then he heard it. Sado qucikly withdrew a kunai, throwing it into the bushes next to him. The sound of metal piercing flesh could be heard as the kunai made it's way through the bushes.
Sado walked over to the bush, blood covering the plant. He looked behind it only to find out that he had killed a rabbit. A rouge ninja was hiding behind a tree, waiting for his target to come his way. "That was too close..." The ninja said to himself as he kept an eye on Sado. A kunai was suddenly at the ninja's throat, as Sado stood behind the man. The man's eyes widened. "Wh-When did you-?" The ninja said. Sado smiled before he said, "I knew you were here from the start." He ripped the kunai across the assassins throat, and dropped the man to the floor. Pass
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 4:20 pm
kenia11595 Well here I go: Where did he go..? Kaori's trained eyes darted from bush to tree, and back again; searching for a significant sign to her Chunin's whereabouts. He couldn't have gone far! Her expression remained stoic; a result of her many years in training. Kaori's frustration was working it's way to her nerves, making her anxious. Forcing her thoughts of anxiety to the back of her mind, she heard movement behind her. It was a bird. The movement having been too light to have been her Chunin, He's not exactly the lightest man around, she thought to herself humorously. Then it happened. The small Snap! that gave an instinctual boost of adrenaline in her veins.
Darting to the right, several kunai missed Kaori's cheek by centimeters, Damn! A dozen more accompanied the first few, all of them whizzing past her and missing by a hair's length. Using her own kunai, she shot a few from the air; changing their course. Using the brief moment of opportunity, Kaori leapt from her perch in the trees and landed gracefully on the floor. An unmistakable Creak errupted on her left and right; two grown trees, yanked fom their roots, were coming at her. a small gasp escaped her full lips, as she jumped. A deafening Bang! echoed throughout the training grounds from the tree trunks' collision. A large flurry of movement at the corner of her eye caught her attention. "Got you," she whispered, ejecting her last kunai from her sleeve. The soft whistling sound her kunai made as it soared through the air stopped, meeting it's target dead-on. Her Chunin, Roku, smiled in satisfaction, "I thought you would never get it right."
"Neither did I."Pass. Kaori is the name of my main characters mom.
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:07 pm
cheerios18 kenia11595 Well here I go: Where did he go..? Kaori's trained eyes darted from bush to tree, and back again; searching for a significant sign to her Chunin's whereabouts. He couldn't have gone far! Her expression remained stoic; a result of her many years in training. Kaori's frustration was working it's way to her nerves, making her anxious. Forcing her thoughts of anxiety to the back of her mind, she heard movement behind her. It was a bird. The movement having been too light to have been her Chunin, He's not exactly the lightest man around, she thought to herself humorously. Then it happened. The small Snap! that gave an instinctual boost of adrenaline in her veins.
Darting to the right, several kunai missed Kaori's cheek by centimeters, Damn! A dozen more accompanied the first few, all of them whizzing past her and missing by a hair's length. Using her own kunai, she shot a few from the air; changing their course. Using the brief moment of opportunity, Kaori leapt from her perch in the trees and landed gracefully on the floor. An unmistakable Creak errupted on her left and right; two grown trees, yanked fom their roots, were coming at her. a small gasp escaped her full lips, as she jumped. A deafening Bang! echoed throughout the training grounds from the tree trunks' collision. A large flurry of movement at the corner of her eye caught her attention. "Got you," she whispered, ejecting her last kunai from her sleeve. The soft whistling sound her kunai made as it soared through the air stopped, meeting it's target dead-on. Her Chunin, Roku, smiled in satisfaction, "I thought you would never get it right."
"Neither did I."Pass. Kaori is the name of my main characters mom. cool ^^
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Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 12:05 am
cheer when you do the academy don't forget to update the first page.
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Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 2:13 pm
I didn't, in fact I did it twice because I accidentally pressed quote instead of edit, but look I even changed the month and everything, just because you said not to forget to update it crying .
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Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 3:11 pm
Hiruzen entered the room and looked around to see if any familiar faces around, but none stood out. He started to go towards his seat when suddenly he tripped and fell flat on his face. He stayed there for about thirty seconds in humiliation and got up. Hiruzen suddenly found himself scared out of is mind and stared at his toes wondering what the future was going to bring him. Nervously he headed towards the door, doubting himself like always and thinking of other possibilities for a occupation like becoming a fisherman or something of that nature. Then a thought flashed in his head. This flash was of the rival clan in the village and how there was a boy around his age that his parents told him he had to fight. He turned around with a fire in his eyes that could burn the desk he was staring at. He strutted across the room with pride and sat in his desk awaiting the proctor's instructions.
so how was it
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Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 8:54 pm
(Okay Just letting you know right now is that im Dyslexic <-said disorder explains the spelling of that word... ^-^' so I appologise if the spelling is hacked up into a million little pieces)
RP Preview
Shika stood pressing her body up agaist the think trunk of the tree. Her heart thumped in her chest, her limbs shook with fatigue, her breath was short and shallow as she faild to fill her lungs with life sustaining air, and she had lost a lot of blood. Shika was in trouble.
"Where are you..?" Shika asked herself peeking around the trunk of the tree out infront of her. She couldn't sence his chakra but she knew she hadn't lost him. She knew he was watching her,with that same blood thirsty smile still painted on his pale lips. Shika's stomach did and uncomfertable backflip when she remebered the mans face. His lips pulled back against his teeth in that sick, twisted grin.
All Shika could do now, was pray that she survived this.
But in the back of her mind she doughted that even god himself could save her now.
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Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 8:31 pm
'I can't even catch my breath' thought the desperate shinobi as he hid behind a rock, wiping the rain from his weary eyes. He coughed, trying to take in air, rubbing his face harder, as if trying to think or plan. With desperation he scanned the valley, his light gray eyes scanning the various dislocated rocks and shrubs. This place was in the wake of his mission. This place was devastated. Saito pressed his back against the rock, finally pulling the last of his kunai. He grasped as best as his burnt fingers would allow and looked down. He heard nothing as he closed his eyes once more, only the rain beating against his sage-green ninja jacket. Suddenly, with sheer will, the jounin jumped to the side, the rock behind him exploding. He groaned and quickly turned, throwing a shuriken. A clash of metal was heard.
The shuriken fell uselessly to the ground as the debris cleared. "Yes, I remember who you are. Konoha's Cauterizer. Saito.", the large missing-nin muttered, motioning to his seared right-arm. Saito coughed, watching his blood mix with the brown mud his body was now drenched in.
(( Done. I'm sorry if that wasn't so great. I tried to get a passing grade! My character, I'm hoping will be a Jonin in Konoha named Saito Yakedo or Saito the Cauterizer. ))
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Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:22 pm
Onix, if you will be a sweetheart, update the graduates for me... IncogNegro757 Hiruzen entered the room and looked around to see if any familiar faces around, but none stood out. He started to go towards his seat when suddenly he tripped and fell flat on his face. He stayed there for about thirty seconds in humiliation and got up. Hiruzen suddenly found himself scared out of is mind and stared at his toes wondering what the future was going to bring him. Nervously he headed towards the door, doubting himself like always and thinking of other possibilities for a occupation like becoming a fisherman or something of that nature. Then a thought flashed in his head. This flash was of the rival clan in the village and how there was a boy around his age that his parents told him he had to fight. He turned around with a fire in his eyes that could burn the desk he was staring at. He strutted across the room with pride and sat in his desk awaiting the proctor's instructions. so how was it With the exception of definitely needing to break up paragraphs, it's a pass. Remember, if you write blocks of giant paragraphs as your rp response, people are less likely inclined to read through the whole thing. It dulls out effectiveness, quality-wise.
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Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:22 pm
Shikakuru_of_the_dark (Okay Just letting you know right now is that im Dyslexic <-said disorder explains the spelling of that word... ^-^' so I appologise if the spelling is hacked up into a million little pieces) RP PreviewShika stood pressing her body up agaist the think trunk of the tree. Her heart thumped in her chest, her limbs shook with fatigue, her breath was short and shallow as she faild to fill her lungs with life sustaining air, and she had lost a lot of blood. Shika was in trouble. "Where are you..?" Shika asked herself peeking around the trunk of the tree out infront of her. She couldn't sence his chakra but she knew she hadn't lost him. She knew he was watching her,with that same blood thirsty smile still painted on his pale lips. Shika's stomach did and uncomfertable backflip when she remebered the mans face. His lips pulled back against his teeth in that sick, twisted grin. All Shika could do now, was pray that she survived this. But in the back of her mind she doughted that even god himself could save her now. Try to make breaks between paragraphs/single effect lines more obvious. All else is good. It's a pass.
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Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:31 pm
carlthefuzzy1 'I can't even catch my breath' thought the desperate shinobi as he hid behind a rock, wiping the rain from his weary eyes. He coughed, trying to take in air, rubbing his face harder, as if trying to think or plan. With desperation he scanned the valley, his light gray eyes scanning the various dislocated rocks and shrubs. This place was in the wake of his mission. This place was devastated. Saito pressed his back against the rock, finally pulling the last of his kunai. He grasped as best as his burnt fingers would allow and looked down. He heard nothing as he closed his eyes once more, only the rain beating against his sage-green ninja jacket. Suddenly, with sheer will, the jounin jumped to the side, the rock behind him exploding. He groaned and quickly turned, throwing a shuriken. A clash of metal was heard. The shuriken fell uselessly to the ground as the debris cleared. "Yes, I remember who you are. Konoha's Cauterizer. Saito.", the large missing-nin muttered, motioning to his seared right-arm. Saito coughed, watching his blood mix with the brown mud his body was now drenched in. (( Done. I'm sorry if that wasn't so great. I tried to get a passing grade! My character, I'm hoping will be a Jonin in Konoha named Saito Yakedo or Saito the Cauterizer. )) Pass. Beautifully done, but keep in mind for rping in this guild, try to avoid directly stating results of your attacks. It's left open-ended, and then the opponent responds: your next post is based on whether the opponent successfully dodged or was indeed hit by your attack. So it goes like this: Post 1: You make your attack. [The following two steps sometimes can be condensed by choice. Dice Roll is done by Post Action -> Roll Dice -> Select Dice -> 20 sided -> Put in the number of dices you are allowed to roll at your respective character level] Dice Roll before Post 2: Opponent rolls to see if they dodged or not based on your attack's Dice Check (we roll now to dodge, but incorporation haven't officially started yet so currently we skip this part). If the DC is equal to or higher, the opponent dodges. If otherwise, he/she is hit. (Dodge Bonus on the profile is used for dodging, in the future, the dice roll will simply be added to the Dodge Bonus.) Post 2: The opponent make his/her post based on the DC result and counter-attacks. Post 3: Only here you can reference (written-wise) if your attack from Post 1 has indeed struck the opponent. All prior mentions must be left open ended. E.g. 'if this strike hits, he will be sent flying'. Any questions?
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Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 10:47 pm
k ill do it in a sec im on the phone XD
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