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 Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 8:21 pm
Generic character, I haven't decided yet on my character's name/gender/etc. though the personality will be along these lines:
No place is safe.
Not even his home village. Kai keeps his hand poised over his kunai pouch at all times, often unconsciously, the result of retaining that posture all the time. His former teammates used to tease him for his extreme paranoia, but it was this habit they mocked that kept him from joining them on the memorial stone. His ears pick up on footsteps behind him, and his shoulders tense. A bead of sweat trails down his cheeks, and a multitude of thoughts run through his head.
What if it's an attacker? What if it's a missing nin? Where will they attack? With what? Should he duck behind that trash can if kunai are thrown? Wait, but what if the attacker has an accomplice hiding behind it? What if exploding tags are attached? He does not consider the possibility of a harmless civilian. That kind of careless thought would get you killed.
Yet a nine year old girl runs past him, and he watches her from the corner of his eyes intently. It could be a henge, or a distraction. Dilated eyes flit rapidly around his surroundings but always straying back to the girl. His hands remained floating precariously over his kunai pouch. It isn't until she turns around the corner that his eyes double checked the area again. Nothing has happened.
... yet.
He checks the corner one more time, as he passes it. Then, he steps inside the Kage tower.
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 3:33 pm
Jeimuzu walked down the street, hands in his pocket, mind off in space. As he walked, he heard footsteps tapping behind him. He shrugged and decided that it was a street, other people were bound to walk on it. He continued to walk when he noticed a penny on the ground. He bent to pick it up, but as he did, it vanished into thin air. Suspicious, he straightened his back and looked around. He began to walk with a purpose down the street when he heard the footsteps again. Still suspicious, he looked behind him and saw nothing, but still heard the steps coming toward him. He began to run down the street trying to escape the phantom steps when he tripped. Jeimuzu jumped up, cursing himself when he felt someone behind him. And they had a kunai to his back. He turned slowly and saw... nothing. He still felt the kunai, but saw nothing. Then, Jeimuzu felt the point jerk up and into him. He fell and right before he hit, he woke up. He looked around, eyes groggy and fell back on his bed, then fell back onto his bed, and started to drift back to sleep.
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 6:29 pm
My characters name is Adrianna Koromononoko.
Above the leaves of the Great Oak within the forest of the hidden leaf on a visit, sat Adrianna, with a cotton skirt making peace with the dried green moss of the tree, rays of sunlight peaking through as if trying to spy on someone and the birds and animals in sync with natures music. She was reading a book on the beguile misrepresentation of genjutsu's and how easy it would be to train your mind into becoming a private institution of solace and immune to the effects of genjutsu, with special training ofcourse and for the appropriate shinobi. However just the knowledge the book provides is enough for a great reading. A beautiful cool and comfortable breeze runs through the forest, through Adrianna's gorgeous silken golden brown hair. The breezes escalate and through a stage of metamorphosis become violent torrents and fierce winds. The branches of the trees bend and twist like leaves in the wind and Adrianna is found falling to the ground unbalanced and scared. "WHAAAAAAAA" her scream echos through the wind and hollow of the trees while her boyd makes impact with the soiled earth and grass. "It must be a storm brewing, I have to head back to the hotel before sensei beats my behind" she stated to herself while making her way back. Remnants of her scent covers the forests as she runs her way back to the village......all while leaving her book....who would have thought?
Note: Ending doesn't match up, I was improvising. Also i'm very wordy, but I can work on it....Hope I graduate. smile
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 7:06 pm
umm.......not sure if Im doing this right..gonna try
My Character's name: Kichirou Noda
Gender: Both! xd ( no seriously she's two people, it's a curse )
Age: 15
RP Example:
Kichirou had been walking the road for a few days now, and was begginning to tire. She was on her way to Konoha and she hoped to get there by the end of the moon cycle, after all she had come all the way from the waterfall village. Kichirou sighed, it was getting close to the time of month (not what you think, yes she is a girl but I'm not meaning that kind thing) and she was worried. If she got to Konoha early than there would be some serious problems, but if she took it a little slower,maybe she would be able to pass that time before she got there....
I hope you liked it! Sorry if it's a bit confusing I like making really complicated storylines sweatdrop and the stuff in the parentheses is not part of it, it's just to inform a little more so no misconceptions take place mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 9:06 pm
Stiggle Oomi was laying in a small patch of grass, enjoying his time outside. He needed to go to class, but he was too busy enjoying the insects that he was walking. He solemnly placed his finger down on the ground; A ladybug crawled up his finger and to his knuckle. He brought the ladybug close to his face and stared at it oddly. "Oh..That's right, I must go to class..." Oomi placed his finger back on the ground. The ladybug, fluttered its wings in response. He raised his eyebrow, and looked down oddly at the bug. "..I'll be back after class, now go..I'm already late." The ladybug fluttered its wings again, and scuttled down his index finger and onto a blade of grass. Once the bug was stationary. Oomi slowly rose to his feet. He took this time to sink his face into the collar of his coat; everything from his nose up was visible. He pushed his sunglasses up with his left index finger. Oomi gradually made his way into the classroom. He tried his best to blend in with his surroundings, and made his way to the back corner of the room. pass
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 9:08 pm
Steliana96 Ok, I want to graduate first, and I hope to enter the Otogakure village, so let's say I'm there. wink And my character's name is Meisai Hitoshirezu. Role play sample:
Meisai woke up excited that morning, because it was her first day in the village. After drinking her glass of water and eating her sandwich, Meisai left. She locked the door quickly, and ran outside.
The sunlight was very warm and pleasant. The first thing Meisai thought to do was to walk around the village and find the nicest place to relax. After a few minutes of walking past many shops and houses, Meisai found the training ground, a spot in the forest, but not too far from the village. "This place is amazing... It's so beautiful....", Meisai thought. But, it started to get late, and Meisai should be going to meet her team at the Otogakure mission central.
Meisai ran to a big building, with a kanji meaning "Oto". Once she got there, she rushed to the floor where she was supposed to meet her team. Meisai reached the door, stopped and took a deep breath. She took a cool pose and entered the room. There were two other kids there, probably her team mates, and another older person, who was certainly the teacher. pass.
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 9:12 pm
MiniMidget Generic character, I haven't decided yet on my character's name/gender/etc. though the personality will be along these lines: No place is safe. Not even his home village. Kai keeps his hand poised over his kunai pouch at all times, often unconsciously, the result of retaining that posture all the time. His former teammates used to tease him for his extreme paranoia, but it was this habit they mocked that kept him from joining them on the memorial stone. His ears pick up on footsteps behind him, and his shoulders tense. A bead of sweat trails down his cheeks, and a multitude of thoughts run through his head. What if it's an attacker? What if it's a missing nin? Where will they attack? With what? Should he duck behind that trash can if kunai are thrown? Wait, but what if the attacker has an accomplice hiding behind it? What if exploding tags are attached? He does not consider the possibility of a harmless civilian. That kind of careless thought would get you killed. Yet a nine year old girl runs past him, and he watches her from the corner of his eyes intently. It could be a henge, or a distraction. Dilated eyes flit rapidly around his surroundings but always straying back to the girl. His hands remained floating precariously over his kunai pouch. It isn't until she turns around the corner that his eyes double checked the area again. Nothing has happened. ... yet. He checks the corner one more time, as he passes it. Then, he steps inside the Kage tower. pass. be sure to follow the rp guidelines though. use italics for thoughts, and "quotes" for speech.
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 9:13 pm
Jeimuzu Denkou Jeimuzu walked down the street, hands in his pocket, mind off in space. As he walked, he heard footsteps tapping behind him. He shrugged and decided that it was a street, other people were bound to walk on it. He continued to walk when he noticed a penny on the ground. He bent to pick it up, but as he did, it vanished into thin air. Suspicious, he straightened his back and looked around. He began to walk with a purpose down the street when he heard the footsteps again. Still suspicious, he looked behind him and saw nothing, but still heard the steps coming toward him. He began to run down the street trying to escape the phantom steps when he tripped. Jeimuzu jumped up, cursing himself when he felt someone behind him. And they had a kunai to his back. He turned slowly and saw... nothing. He still felt the kunai, but saw nothing. Then, Jeimuzu felt the point jerk up and into him. He fell and right before he hit, he woke up. He looked around, eyes groggy and fell back on his bed, then fell back onto his bed, and started to drift back to sleep. pass
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 9:15 pm
Adrianna_Naveen My characters name is Adrianna Koromononoko. Above the leaves of the Great Oak within the forest of the hidden leaf on a visit, sat Adrianna, with a cotton skirt making peace with the dried green moss of the tree, rays of sunlight peaking through as if trying to spy on someone and the birds and animals in sync with natures music. She was reading a book on the beguile misrepresentation of genjutsu's and how easy it would be to train your mind into becoming a private institution of solace and immune to the effects of genjutsu, with special training ofcourse and for the appropriate shinobi. However just the knowledge the book provides is enough for a great reading. A beautiful cool and comfortable breeze runs through the forest, through Adrianna's gorgeous silken golden brown hair. The breezes escalate and through a stage of metamorphosis become violent torrents and fierce winds. The branches of the trees bend and twist like leaves in the wind and Adrianna is found falling to the ground unbalanced and scared. "WHAAAAAAAA" her scream echos through the wind and hollow of the trees while her boyd makes impact with the soiled earth and grass. "It must be a storm brewing, I have to head back to the hotel before sensei beats my behind" she stated to herself while making her way back. Remnants of her scent covers the forests as she runs her way back to the village......all while leaving her book....who would have thought? Note: Ending doesn't match up, I was improvising. Also i'm very wordy, but I can work on it....Hope I graduate. smile pass. wordy is good as long as its interesting...BUT BE SURE TO SEPARATE YOUR PARAGRAPHS. nobody likes trying to read a wall of text.
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 9:17 pm
Silent_Whysper umm.......not sure if Im doing this right..gonna try My Character's name: Kichirou Noda Gender: Both! xd ( no seriously she's two people, it's a curse ) Age: 15 RP Example: Kichirou had been walking the road for a few days now, and was begginning to tire. She was on her way to Konoha and she hoped to get there by the end of the moon cycle, after all she had come all the way from the waterfall village. Kichirou sighed, it was getting close to the time of month (not what you think, yes she is a girl but I'm not meaning that kind thing) and she was worried. If she got to Konoha early than there would be some serious problems, but if she took it a little slower,maybe she would be able to pass that time before she got there.... I hope you liked it! Sorry if it's a bit confusing I like making really complicated storylines sweatdrop and the stuff in the parentheses is not part of it, it's just to inform a little more so no misconceptions take place mrgreen pass. when you do a rp example that's all it is. an example its only purpose is to show me that you can rp fairly well. that's it. you only need descriptive info when you join a village and make your character.
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Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 9:32 am
Woohoo, thanks. I'll think about that next time. smile
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Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 1:37 pm
onixdragon Stiggle Oomi was laying in a small patch of grass, enjoying his time outside. He needed to go to class, but he was too busy enjoying the insects that he was walking. He solemnly placed his finger down on the ground; A ladybug crawled up his finger and to his knuckle. He brought the ladybug close to his face and stared at it oddly. "Oh..That's right, I must go to class..." Oomi placed his finger back on the ground. The ladybug, fluttered its wings in response. He raised his eyebrow, and looked down oddly at the bug. "..I'll be back after class, now go..I'm already late." The ladybug fluttered its wings again, and scuttled down his index finger and onto a blade of grass. Once the bug was stationary. Oomi slowly rose to his feet. He took this time to sink his face into the collar of his coat; everything from his nose up was visible. He pushed his sunglasses up with his left index finger. Oomi gradually made his way into the classroom. He tried his best to blend in with his surroundings, and made his way to the back corner of the room. pass Thanks!
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Posted: Thu Oct 15, 2009 7:27 pm
My name is Takeshi Sasaki, of the Keigoku Clan, and I was hoping to apply to Konoha, but I'm not sure which sub-forum is the one where they say whether or not they are accepting.
RP Sample:
Takeshi looked around, he was trapped. The forest ended abruptly 200 yards in the direction he was heading, and the enemy ninja had him surrounded at all angles. Though he could not see them, he could feel the charkra they let off from moving at high speeds; he could sense that they were roughly 150 feet away and closing.
It was time, he had no choice. Though he was just beginning to experience his clans Kekke Genkai; he could use it, though the strain on his eyes adjusting was painful. He focused the charkra into his eyes, and opened them, instantly seeing a new world. His bloodline trait had not fully developed, limiting the time and extent he could use his ability. Time seemed to slow down, and he was able to see his opponents coming out from hiding, second by second.
The first came from his center left, holding a kunia in his hand, aimed at his head. Takeshi ran forward, grabbed the man by his wrist where the back of his hand was almost on top of Takeshi's head, twisted the man's arm, causing him to release the kunai, and threw his enemy into the bushes to his right. Sure enough, another ninja emerged from the bushes, just to be knocked back in by her comrade. While the kunai was in mid-air, Takeshi grabbed it, spun it into a defensive position and ran towards the bushes in between where the other two ninjas had emerged. He jumped so that he was parallel to the ground and spun, causing him to slip by his third enemy, which had tried to lunge at Takeshi. After his enemy had gone by, he looked back to the ninja, and threw back the kunai he had grabbed, this time with an explosive tag attached. The enemy had just regroupped with his comrades, when BOOM!
Takeshi did not look back, small droplets of blood splashing on the back of his garb. Instead he looked forward, the way his enemies had came, his exit. He released his Kekke Genkai, and almost immediately fell to one knee, the pain from his eyes surging through his head. The shook it off, and continued running, back to his village, with news of the coming attack...
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Posted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 11:58 am
ArrancarVizard 94 My name is Takeshi Sasaki, of the Keigoku Clan, and I was hoping to apply to Konoha, but I'm not sure which sub-forum is the one where they say whether or not they are accepting. RP Sample: Takeshi looked around, he was trapped. The forest ended abruptly 200 yards in the direction he was heading, and the enemy ninja had him surrounded at all angles. Though he could not see them, he could feel the charkra they let off from moving at high speeds; he could sense that they were roughly 150 feet away and closing. It was time, he had no choice. Though he was just beginning to experience his clans Kekke Genkai; he could use it, though the strain on his eyes adjusting was painful. He focused the charkra into his eyes, and opened them, instantly seeing a new world. His bloodline trait had not fully developed, limiting the time and extent he could use his ability. Time seemed to slow down, and he was able to see his opponents coming out from hiding, second by second. The first came from his center left, holding a kunia in his hand, aimed at his head. Takeshi ran forward, grabbed the man by his wrist where the back of his hand was almost on top of Takeshi's head, twisted the man's arm, causing him to release the kunai, and threw his enemy into the bushes to his right. Sure enough, another ninja emerged from the bushes, just to be knocked back in by her comrade. While the kunai was in mid-air, Takeshi grabbed it, spun it into a defensive position and ran towards the bushes in between where the other two ninjas had emerged. He jumped so that he was parallel to the ground and spun, causing him to slip by his third enemy, which had tried to lunge at Takeshi. After his enemy had gone by, he looked back to the ninja, and threw back the kunai he had grabbed, this time with an explosive tag attached. The enemy had just regroupped with his comrades, when BOOM! Takeshi did not look back, small droplets of blood splashing on the back of his garb. Instead he looked forward, the way his enemies had came, his exit. He released his Kekke Genkai, and almost immediately fell to one knee, the pain from his eyes surging through his head. The shook it off, and continued running, back to his village, with news of the coming attack... pass. if your trying to get into konoha you need to send your application to proto.
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 8:19 am
Well, as a sample I will just use an old post of mine that I loved, and well, i hope you enjoy reading it. Sample Post Michyo stared her opponent down angrily, the fury clearly visible in the narrow slit of her eyes. Her mind was racing with ideas, and she could feel the evil impulse of her darker side fading in to them. She looked at her opponent once more, however it was in a more savage, sadistic manner. Crawling onto her face was the sly smile known quite well by her family, that marked a quick end arriving. "Say hello to my demon." she spoke darkly, referring to her darker personality as the demon. The victim of her attack turned around in fear rather quickly. To them the sky had turned black and they were frozen in place by an unknown force the moment they turned. Piercing blue eyes gazing at them coldly through the darkness. Slowly they feel the fingers cracking into little fragments as they are snapped and cut at with what feel like claws. This continuing up their arms and legs, allowing her the pleasure of hearing them scream in pain. Finally with one swift blow the watch as the sky clears and a massive human fox like creature run at them blood lust in its eyes as it shoves its hand through the victim and pulls it out. In reality Michyo was laughing hysterically as the person dropped to the ground a look of terror on their face. As she returned to her normal state. Fear instilled itself with in her leaving her knelt beside the now dead victim pleading for forgiveness. Her eyes filling with tears, but a smile visible on her face a mixture of laughter and true sorrow clearly heard in her voice as it fades quieter and quieter.
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