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 Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 4:52 am
Jason Monstrona Arrancar, Arrancar, Arrancar, Espada?(I'm roleplaying as a youth named Hayato Michiyo) The sun shone down brightly on a village, the village was getting ready for some upcoming festival and two children were trying their best to help out. Hayato and his younger sister Kumiko, were helping getting the food prepared for the feast. Hayato grabs a small crate full of apples for the feast, he is walking back towards his sister when he runs into somebody. He falls to the ground hard and the the crate tips over as it hits the ground sending apples rolling and tumbling all over the ground. Hayato is about to yell at the person who he had run into but holds his tongue before he got into trouble, he did not like getting into trouble when Kumiko was around. Hayato looks up and noticed that it was Atsushi Ishimaru, one of the new chuunins in the village. "Sorry about that" Atsushi says offering his hand, Hayato takes his hand and quickly gets up, "no it's ok I should have seen where I was going" he says. Hayato then picks up the crate, he then knelt over and started to pick up the apples and place them back into the crate, Atsushi started helping him but Hayato slaps his hand away telling him that he that he did not need his help. Atsushi stands up, "well then ok, I'll leave you too it then" he says and walks off leaving Hayato to pick up the remainder of his apples. When Atsushi is out of sight Hayato looks up at where he disappeared, "what an idiot" he says to himself and once he finishes picking up the rest of the apples, he grabs the crate and and walks back over to his sister. How intriguing. Hueco Mundo is a treasure trove. not bad. pass.
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 2:43 am
Most of the night had gone by,the sun would start its ascent through the sky in just a few hours. Silence had befallen the town long ago. At least the only sound to reach my ears was the rustling of the wind. Why was I awake at such an hour? Evil doesn't sleep and according to the rest of my colleagues I'm under the false impression that I shouldn't either.
Jumping from rooftop to rooftop has taken its toll on me. A lifetime of fighting can do that to a man. Sometimes I wonder if all I do has a point. There will always be evil in the world. Why not succumb? In the end sometimes I think we can't win this war. For everyone of them we kill, ten rise in its place. While we keep losing numbers. The human race is in a losing battle.
A false step in a ledge causes me to momentarily lose my balance but reflexes tuned through time come as second nature and with a simple switch in my weight in the form of a flip allows me to land on the next rooftop unharmed. As I redirect my line of vision on the horizon I can see that the sun is just about to come up. I guess its time to go home. As I change directions to call it a night I catch something off my peripherals. How come every time I think the night will end without a hitch something happens. I head in the direction of danger again like I've done for so long. One of these nights I'll retire. It just won't be tonight.
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 12:49 pm
My Character names is Arashi.
Arashi climbs up on the top of his roof and stare up into the sky.He noticed this is the first night he has seen a Full Moon or the moon period,Hes still surprised as amazing the moon looks,He hates seeing rain every night and wonders why does he has to see sadness each night in the sky,as he watch the sky he notices a shadow watching him from a distance, Arashi stands, jumps off the roof and slowly walks to the door, and activates Rinnengan,looks, then walks into his home,...... He hears someone crack a twig, as soon as the shadow sees arashi the tries to run but before they could turn around arashi was already behind him with his Katana to the shadows neck"Who are you?"says Arashi "Thats none of your buis- Ahh! Before he finished his sentence Arashi had already slit his throat as he walks toward his home he says "Trash like you doesnt deserve to live"Arashi deactivates his rinnengan and walks into his home.
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 2:03 pm
(Okay, before you ask, I'm using an example character from my clan idea, where they all have names based on what branch their from, like Neko Atari, from the Neko branch, etc. This way, you'll be able to understand the differences in the naming scheme better, due to me liking the standard Japanese method more.)
Atari was confused as hell about what had happened. What he thought was a simple henge was nothing more than the Sexy Jutsu invented by the hero of Konoha! Not wanting to be raped by some sick perverted b*****d, he quickly undid the jutsu... with some repercussions from his mother, who thought that he was actually going to be the most perverted kid in the ninja academy!
"ATARI!! Get your perverted cat a** OVER HERE!!" yelled his mother from across the clearing, which was littered with land mines, caltraps, and other such booby traps to try and get his cat abilities tested fully.
Seeing that his mom found him out, his eyes widened before he said,"COMING, Mom, COMING!!" That was when a moment of Hell on Earth came right into him, as he accidently dropped his Power Limiter via a Kunai Launcher, he hurt his paws via the caltraps that were scattered across the clearing, and he accidently set off the Nuclear Land Mines, which turned him into something akin to barbaque when it was all done.
Four hours later, he had been taken care of by a medic-nin, given a proper bath (for the Neko branch, that involves hot water mixed with Catnip, because cats normally don't take baths), given a better training regime with his cousin in the Inu Branch, and then his meal and bedtime came right at the end of the day. All in all, however, his day was miserable.
(Reason being that he was born with a twin that was black-furred, which usually means bad luck to the sibling that actually has black fur, not the other one... he was just born later than his sister is how it happened.)
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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 9:11 pm
Manweru - Senpai Most of the night had gone by,the sun would start its ascent through the sky in just a few hours. Silence had befallen the town long ago. At least the only sound to reach my ears was the rustling of the wind. Why was I awake at such an hour? Evil doesn't sleep and according to the rest of my colleagues I'm under the false impression that I shouldn't either.
Jumping from rooftop to rooftop has taken its toll on me. A lifetime of fighting can do that to a man. Sometimes I wonder if all I do has a point. There will always be evil in the world. Why not succumb? In the end sometimes I think we can't win this war. For everyone of them we kill, ten rise in its place. While we keep losing numbers. The human race is in a losing battle.
A false step in a ledge causes me to momentarily lose my balance but reflexes tuned through time come as second nature and with a simple switch in my weight in the form of a flip allows me to land on the next rooftop unharmed. As I redirect my line of vision on the horizon I can see that the sun is just about to come up. I guess its time to go home. As I change directions to call it a night I catch something off my peripherals. How come every time I think the night will end without a hitch something happens. I head in the direction of danger again like I've done for so long. One of these nights I'll retire. It just won't be tonight. Pass, use third person though
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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 9:14 pm
iiDaisuke_Kyuuketsuki My Character names is Arashi.
Arashi climbs up on the top of his roof and stare up into the sky.He noticed this is the first night he has seen a Full Moon or the moon period,Hes still surprised as amazing the moon looks,He hates seeing rain every night and wonders why does he has to see sadness each night in the sky,as he watch the sky he notices a shadow watching him from a distance, Arashi stands, jumps off the roof and slowly walks to the door, and activates Rinnengan,looks, then walks into his home,...... He hears someone crack a twig, as soon as the shadow sees arashi the tries to run but before they could turn around arashi was already behind him with his Katana to the shadows neck"Who are you?"says Arashi "Thats none of your buis- Ahh! Before he finished his sentence Arashi had already slit his throat as he walks toward his home he says "Trash like you doesnt deserve to live"Arashi deactivates his rinnengan and walks into his home.
The grammar made this really hard to understand, your writing is really choppy, and you could definitely add more detail. How about try again, do you have spell check? Or a word program that can help you out? Maybe read over it a few times to see if you can catch any errors.
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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 9:19 pm
Xamusel Uzumaki (Okay, before you ask, I'm using an example character from my clan idea, where they all have names based on what branch their from, like Neko Atari, from the Neko branch, etc. This way, you'll be able to understand the differences in the naming scheme better, due to me liking the standard Japanese method more.) Atari was confused as hell about what had happened. What he thought was a simple henge was nothing more than the Sexy Jutsu invented by the hero of Konoha! Not wanting to be raped by some sick perverted b*****d, he quickly undid the jutsu... with some repercussions from his mother, who thought that he was actually going to be the most perverted kid in the ninja academy! "ATARI!! Get your perverted cat a** OVER HERE!!" yelled his mother from across the clearing, which was littered with land mines, caltraps, and other such booby traps to try and get his cat abilities tested fully. Seeing that his mom found him out, his eyes widened before he said, "COMING, Mom, COMING!!" That was when a moment of Hell on Earth came right into him, as he accidently dropped his Power Limiter via a Kunai Launcher, he hurt his paws via the caltraps that were scattered across the clearing, and he accidently set off the Nuclear Land Mines, which turned him into something akin to barbaque when it was all done. Four hours later, he had been taken care of by a medic-nin, given a proper bath (for the Neko branch, that involves hot water mixed with Catnip, because cats normally don't take baths), given a better training regime with his cousin in the Inu Branch, and then his meal and bedtime came right at the end of the day. All in all, however, his day was miserable. (Reason being that he was born with a twin that was black-furred, which usually means bad luck to the sibling that actually has black fur, not the other one... he was just born later than his sister is how it happened.) Pass, spare us the ooc with the parentheses in the posts, if it's that important that just include it in the description.
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 7:29 am
Okay, sorry about that, I had no idea it it was a prerequisite.
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 9:40 am
Hello, i still haven't decided about my character and what village to have,but here is an example of my Rping style: it's about a girl named Valkyrie in a team of girls facing Opponents, she controls the fire element..
she looked at the guards with their accomplices , they were preparing themselves to attack the group, meanwhile the girls were still are saving their powers for main villian,and weren't doing a thing to defend themselves, because they were confused and had no idea what to do after Messenger left them for their lack of teamwork. And because of that Valkyrie took charge of command and decided to defeat the opponents all by herself.
With fierce determination, Valkyrie dashed towards her foes, with extreme velocity, and all signs of rage and anger, her opponents tumbled with fear, taking several steps back to defend themselves from the incoming attack.
she rose up in the air , creating a mighty burning orb in her hand,it was sparkling and shining brightly,she throwed it towards them with all her strength ,creating a divistating blow that crashed into the ground,spreading them all in different directions unconsciously.
After that ,she dropped down to the ground with a wide grin in her face, showing how satisfied she was with herself. she glanced at the others while swiftly moving her hand through her hair." And that’s how it's done my friends…" she mocked them with those words and started walking forward.
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 11:03 am
Vidalena93 Hello, i still haven't decided about my character and what village to have,but here is an example of my Rping style: it's about a girl named Valkyrie in a team of girls facing Opponents, she controls the fire element.. she looked at the guards with their accomplices , they were preparing themselves to attack the group, while the girls were still are saving their powers for main villian,and weren't doing a thing to defend themselves, because they were confused and had no idea what to do after Messenger left them for their lack of teamwork. And because of that Valkyrie took charge of command and decided to defeat their opponents all by herself. With fierce determination, Valkyrie dashed towards her foes, with extreme velocity, with all signs of rage and anger, her opponents tumbled with fear, taking several steps back to defend themselves from the incoming attack. she rose up in the air and created a mighty burning orb in her hand,it was sparkling and shining brightly,she released it towards them,creating a divistating blow that crashed into the ground,spreading them all in different directions unconsciously. After that ,she dropped down to the ground with a wide grin in her face, showing how satisfied she was with herself. she glanced at the others while swiftly moving her hand through her hair." And that’s how it's done my friends…" she mocked them with those words. pass, just try and read over it again, to catch any mistakes ^_^
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 12:21 pm
yaaaay i pass crying crying crying *jumps out of happiness* xD xD xD sooo.. sweatdrop and yeah, i looked over it again and fixed some things...
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 11:56 pm
[[Not sure if I have to so I will lulululu.]]
[[Katagiri sakuya. planning to join Sunagakure, I'm afraid I think I have the order mixed up, so sorry.]]
It was a nice day, he thought. Well, it could be nicer. Looking up at the grey skies, Sakuya sighs. Really, He had gone through the trouble of putting on hair gel and making himself suitable for the town, only to be let down by this weather?
disappointing.
Sighing again, Sakuya grabs his weapon pouch from the kitchen counter, where his mother always placed it, so that Sakuya doesn't forget. Like usual. It is still empty because he hasn't done anything with it, and the Katagiri family has no need for weapons such as kunai or shuriken, since they only heal. They did keep few of course, but they were for emergencies only, and were not to be used. Of course, his older sister had some, but then again, she was gone to.. somewhere, where he had no idea and still has no idea, and really, doesn't have enough space in his cluttered mind to care.
Strapping his empty, light, flimsy weapon pouch to his pants, [they were getting ripped up, he would have to fix them.] he walks out of the door, looking back at the empty house and yelling a "Ittekimaaasu!" before slamming the door behind him. He is well aware that no one is home at this moment, but he feels a tiny bit lonely for not saying the greeting, but then again, he also feels stupid. Stupid or not, a caring personality was greatly appreciated, no? And Caring, Sakuya was. always.
Stopping himself from going on to a useless rant, he looks around the neighborhood, opening his flimsy weapon pouch to take out an equally flimsy piece of paper, shabby and crooked lines on the paper that was SUPPOSED to tell him the directions, but probably would not. Taking a hard long look at the paper he starts walking, positive, that this was is the way to the academy, his new school today, and--- he did not even notice that the academy could be seen if he just tilted his head up a little, and whatever, it wasn't important at all, that he was walking away from the academy.
Besides, Sakuya was Sakuya, He would look sexy even if he was wandering around lost.
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 3:26 pm
iiDaisuke_Kyuuketsuki My Character names is Arashi.
Arashi climbs up on the top of his roof and stare up into the sky.He noticed this is the first night he has seen a Full Moon or the moon period,Hes still surprised as amazing the moon looks,He hates seeing rain every night and wonders why does he has to see sadness each night in the sky,as he watch the sky he notices a shadow watching him from a distance, Arashi stands, jumps off the roof and slowly walks to the door, and activates Rinnengan,looks, then walks into his home,...... He hears someone crack a twig, as soon as the shadow sees arashi the tries to run but before they could turn around arashi was already behind him with his Katana to the shadows neck"Who are you?"says Arashi "Thats none of your buis- Ahh! Before he finished his sentence Arashi had already slit his throat as he walks toward his home he says "Trash like you doesnt deserve to live"Arashi deactivates his rinnengan and walks into his home.
Ouch crying Okay heres my second try: My Character name is Arashi. Arashi walks up to the top of his home’s stairs until he reached the top. He turns right and walks down the narrow hallway until he reached the only door in the hallway, at the end of the hallway. Arashi grabbed the knob, twisted, and pulled open the door. As Arashi slowly pulls open the door he sees the rain slowly pouring down. Arashi walks on onto the roof and sits on a curved brown wooden bench. Arashi lays back and closes his eyes, waiting patiently for someone to show up. A shadow suddenly appears in front of Arashi. Arashi says “What do you want Akuma? I’m waiting for someone...” Akuma slowly pulls out a kunai from the bag on his right leg and points the kunai at Arashi. Akuma says “Im here to kill you Arashi-sensei” Arashi slowly opens his eyes but doesn’t look at Akuma. “Is that so?” said Arashi. Akuma becomes angry at Arashi’s response and yells “Yes it is! Im tired of you treating Daisuke and me like s**t! So im going to kill because I believe your not worthy of being my sensei or a jonin of Amegakure” Akuma rushes at Arashi with the kunai, aiming for his heart and screams “Now Die!” Arashi opens his eyes with his sharingan activated and stares into Akuma’s and says “Tsukuyomi”, Akuma suddenly appears running in the middle of a foggy lake. Akuma is looking around confused and tries to run from the within the lake but he cannot move. Arashi suddenly appears in front of Akuma and says “You will learn to never challenge your master” The foggy lake suddenly turns from a foggy lake into inside of active volcano. Arashi stares into Akuma’s eyes and says “You cannot hope to defeat me.” Akuma’s feet start to melt into the volcano as the burning pain starts to run through Akuma’s body. Akuma gives out a horrid cry as he melts into the lava. Arashi releases the tsukuyomi and Akuma falls to the ground, making a splash in the water from the rain. Arashi looks down at Akuma with disgust and says “Hmph”.
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Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2009 12:31 pm
I'm confused on weather I'm supposed to make a character then post here, or just the reverse. Well, just let me know if I did this wrong.
My character is Rokiko Shima.
"Ten more minutes before the test is over", announced the instructor. Rokiko had long given up trying to solve the problems on the paper in front of her. They were too difficult and she thought it was pointless. Why are we taking "written" exams? We're supposed to be ninja! Rokiko clenched her pencil. There was no way for her to cheat. Of all misfortunes, he older brother is one of the many surveying ninja surrounding the room. She glanced to the right corner in the front of the room. He knew her tricks too well. He would easily catch her cheating. Peden, Rokiko's brother, smirked at her. Mocking her. Rokiko's anger flared. She clenched her hand too tight causing it to snap.
"Times up! Put your pencils down." The grizzly man stood from his desk and began to walk around the room slowly. He walked down the aisle Rokiko sat. He stopped next her, gazing at her empty paper. Why is your paper empty?" He asked her with his deep voice. She looked up at him. She glared at him unafraid. "Because, we're training to be ninjas, not secretaries." The instructor laughed with his booming voice. "Yes, and since you pointed that out you will pass on to the next exam. But you did miss the point of this written exam". Murmurs began to move through the students. "Oh yeah? What is it?" asked rokiko. "It was to test to see if you could gather information without getting caught doing it. But I like your attitude. I'd like to see how long you last."
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Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2009 2:27 pm
you all pass.(lavi, daisuke, and oni) but people please the example only needs to be a few sentences i have way to much to do and i don't have time to be reading these long pointless stories. not to offend anyone but rping is a skill either you can do or you cant and it only takes me a few sentences to tell if you can do it so please keep the examples between 4 and 8 lines please.
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