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 Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 9:38 am
Hehe, catching up to Lenair, huh Kurai? xp
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 9:42 am
Michio
Length and Pacing: Bare backbone fighting scene. Pacing was perfect for this matter. :/ and the length is suprisingly just right for that.
Grammar: Couldn't Spot any errors here.O-o;
Personality: Dissapointing. As much as i was proud that you used a DnD sort of structure and all. Ria high is a place where you RP, not show DnD like fights. I strongly urge you to make your character come to life as much as possible. Peferebaly thoughts and more desciption on the monster. And of course, how your character looks like. Please keep that in mind in your next post.
Use of environment: wasn't even sure if you were in the Testing room here. Where did this 'other door' come from for the other monster? And what happened to our basic metal room for our Testing room? The Tentacle attacks were pretty nice. But was dissapointed to see that you used a DnD manual to describe the shroom. Come on man. Lets see your creative juice flow!
Details: I actually enjoyed the monsters attack and how the hits flow and all. That is one pretty kewl monster from DnD. But lets bring that monster to more life shall we? with sound! and maybe some oooooze. That would be kewl XD.
You have a good basic fight, but.. lets add some creativity and life into it next time okies? ^^
3.5/8
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 9:52 am
Zero (Siav)
Length and Pacing: Wow. Just wow. I absoutly loved reading this XD. Very good length, didn't feel myself to be bore at all. Would love to RP with you sometimes. I have to give this a word of perfection XP.
Grammar: As much as i would want to say there is nothing wrong with saying colour, i will have to admit its wrong XP. But really as long as the grammer dosen't obscure the reader. I see nothing wrong with it XD!!
Personality: Bishie boy attitude XD!! love it! All calm and cool in the fight and very determined to kick a**. An awsome personality indeed. Its like the ideal fighter attitude. He should of kicked that scrap metal's a** XD!
Use of environment: haha Oh my gar. That has got to be the best way to change the scenery to a jungle. I have to use that for future reference of descriptions in Ria XD!! Beatiful beatiful. Love the fight and the robots description.
Details: Aweeee.. Zero got a boo booo XP. beatiful Beatiful pain XD!!!
So this is why those two gurls were giving you such a good score.. XD.
8/8
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 9:56 am
>.>
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Ma...maybe...
Nehoo! XD. Finally every Test has been graded at least twice! Now we just wait for any other judges who want to judge for this one more day. And then on Sunday we hand out stars!! ::tosses them around:: XD!!! wee! MORE WORK FOR ME!!! ::Falls to ground sobbing::
But at least after that there will also be a new team of mods to be announced! ::Flare in eyes:: yeehoO!
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 10:02 am
Kya!!!!! Hehe, you have one more test to grade! >.< O_o Tomorrow is Sunday isn't it? Ahh, sweet Sunday. The day I get a hot fudge Sundae then have a sugar rush!!!!!
-pats Kurai on the back- It's okay! If you do more work over the summer, you won't be a lazy bum when the school year starts again!
OoOoh! New moddy-ness! -runs around the room, then bumps into a completely random pole- Oww. X.X | XP
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 12:10 pm
Hana
Length and Pacing: The like was nice, not too long but not too short, but it was more leaning towards a long length than a short length if i say so myself. I liked how you seperated the paragrapths from each other. It had more space that way and i enjoyed reading your test as well. Very refreshing.
Grammar: There was a few grammer issues here and there, but remember never be afraid to use Microsoft Word's dictionary, spell check, or looking up words. Though, i caught a few words mispelled, but it didn't kill your post either.
Personality: I agree with Lenair, your characters personality shined throughout the beginning and the ending, not so much in the middle. All i caught was her attacks and the monsters discription. Maybe next time you could shine her personality more also i would love for you type more about your characters. I would love to learn more about her.
Use of Environment: The discription of the terrain brought my mind to an ease. I love the idea of a jungle and the vine effect was done quite well. But for some odd reason, the area reminded me of one of my favorite songs "Welcome to the Jungle" by Guns N' Roses. But that is a good thing. I also loved how you didn't use to dome and clearly used your imagination just like how i did on my test.
Details: You did pretty well with discription, other than your character. You didn't leave me out of the blue so thats a good thing. Still i think you should put more discription on your character, like what she is wearing, her feelings, everything. BUt the dicription of the reptilian creature got me going especially when you discribed the slime part.
Heh, so far i love reading your posts. Keep up the good work ^_^
6/8
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 1:05 pm
Seyla
Length and Pacing: Well, your length got me going but it cutt close towards my test...*wipes off some sweat* It took me a while to finish reading your post. It was quite refreshing to know that someone like you would have one of the longiest tests, maybe you're on the top three. I think. Since there is Fairie Sakura who is practically a literate RPier and one of the best i know so far, so is Lenair. She types long posts too. You might give me a run for my money if you keep up with the great Rp skills you already have. But still, your great so far.
Grammar: I caught that mispelled didn't, but not to worry, everyone can type a typo. Sometimes it happens to me. There may have been one capitalization error and a few commas that were needed. But you mainly needed commas between words and such.
Personality: I caught alot of your characters personality with the facial expressions and the conversations and what she felt. I loved the idea of an icy oppenent, it reminds me of one of my sister's characters she made up. *sigh* i should get her to join gaia at some point. You did well when she entered the cold room and the icy dome. I should give you a cookie for this.
Use of environment: Like i said before, i love the icy environment you decided to do. It was probably as created as my Wonderland arena XP and the ice maiden was cool, probably as cool as my Madhatter oppenent. But for some reason i thought of a refridgerator, how you keep food cold in that box. Great invention..*cough* anyhow...i loved the environment..i wished i thought of it.
Details:Man, i gotta say my favorite part was when you destroyed the ice maiden and how she died. Until you got to the part when she turned into ashes, i thought if ice melts it turns into water not ashes, unless the ice maiden is not all icy. ALmost like that ice queen in Narnia or something like that. And how you put into the details of your character and the surrounding area. I thought your post was very fasinating.
Thus, since you remind me sooo much of my favorite twin sister and icy arena (since i live in the cold region of the US i have a love for snow and iceskating) I give you:
8/8
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 6:29 pm
-glomps kurai and sakura ai- wow thanks a lot guys. Yeah I shoulda made her melt Xx ha ha
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 10:35 pm
Test has Ended!no: All results are rounded to the nearest full number. (Unless the result has a .5 ending) Results:
Outlaw_elf: Final: 4/8
Elpinoine: Final: 8/8
Cevian: Final: 4/8
IkumiAngel: Final: 7/8
Siav: Final: 8/8
Daratronic: Final: 4/8
zero-jt: Final: 6.5/8
Senquis: Final: 6.5/8
Komlon: Final: 5/8
Kaitae: Final: 6/8
Passing score for everyone was 1. Everyone passed. Elpinione and Siav recieves 2 stars for getting a remarkable final score of over 7.5. Congrats you two! oh and all Judges will receive 2 stars ^^ For their hard work and dedication! the new mods will soon be announced after some review and all. And thanks everyone for participating this month Star test! it was fun XD!
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 10:40 pm
Wait, does that Mean that Kait gets 3 stars? Lucky!
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 10:46 pm
HEHE, dang I was so close to getting two stars blaugh . Only .5 off from getting two. That just means that I will have to try harder next time. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 11:05 pm
Can't... remember those who don't have sigs... erk.. Those who tested just post here so i can make sure everyone got a star. Just well.. ehh post how you thought of the test.
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 11:06 pm
I liked my test, was hping for a better score though... but my fault.
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 11:11 pm
I liked my test, but I could of done better. I especially need to use word processing next time, and make my person have more personality towards the middle of the test as well.
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 8:29 am
I thought the test would be a good warm up for the Tourny, especially cause Miki can't use his powers yet sweatdrop
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