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 Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 11:39 am
Gaia Name: Bob_In_Black!
Character Name: Kraven
Gender: male
Age: 29
Race: human
Character Description: my avi in dark blue claok
Home Planet: aseraff
Starting Planet: talus
Relations: brought himself up after killing his own family
Character History terribly evil and injoyes to seee death and suffering. at a young age learned hw to make blasters and was found and trainded by the sith are the age of 20
Alignment: sith
Occupation assasin/bounty hunter
Skills: double sided light saber and technoigy(blaster making, space ship fixing)
Weapons: blaster and double light saber
Ship U/K
Personal Belongings: a small toy robot
Roleplay Sample *as Kraven sat meditating he heard thescurring of small mice Kraved activated his light saber and dystored the mouse with one foul swoop*
"that wiil teach it to disteb me"
"master Kraven the ship is ready for you to board"
"good you are no longer needed now"
"but who will fly the ship"
"me" *with that Kraven killed the ships captin and strolled of towords his new ship*
Uh, No.
Why?
-Grammar and spelling... where is it?
-The RP structure, look at the structure some other use, try making some longer posts of it ((''he killed the captain and wandered off''"but something like "An evil grin appeared on Kravens face as he drew his weapon... "I will" he said to the captain amusingly while he rose his blaster. Before the astonished captain knew what happened to him, he was down with a hole between his eyes.. Kraven returned his blaster to his belt and went to see his ship))
-Your skills, you cannot use a lightsaber before you have had training IN the guild, you already use it in RP. Make sure you get training first.
Change it and I''ll review -MrM
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 5:18 pm
Gaia name:crazynative
Jedi name:mace
weapons:2 heavy blasters 1 green lightsaber 1 blue short light saber
clothing:jedi robe
items:5 medpacks
Age:27
rank:Jedi knight
race tw'leck
Gender:male
description:Mace has been in jedi training for years from apprentice to padowan to knight his skills are remarkable he has lots of force and loves to be taught more.
force powers:knight speed,battle meditation,throw lightsaber,
Home planet:Manaa
Skills:matery in 2 weapon fighting electronics,master pilot
Ship a new improved ebon hawk
Ralationships:none
family:stepbrother
I think thats all for now.
I think your forgetting something. Better check the things needed in the App. -Veg
Vegi is just being nice. This roleplay application is bad. just plain plain plain BAD. UGH. Do it again, but do it way better. ~~~Merissa
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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2005 3:16 am
Gaia Name: Harukoson
Character Name: Lindsay Smith
Gender: Female
Age: 28
Race: Humans
Character Description:
Home Planet: Kuat
Starting Planet: Space
Relations: Nope
Character History: Lindsay was born into an Average familiy on Kuat. And that ment on any other planet, they were wealthy. She quickly grew bored of her average life, so once she finished school she used her parent's wealth to travel. She went from system to system learning about the different cultures of the galaxy. While on Corellia Lindsay met a brash young bounty hunter and listened to his stories about Mandalorian warriors, and the Great Bounty Hunters Jango and Boba fett. She instantly knew what she wanted to do with her life. She would go out and buy a ship, and some weapons, and get some training. The training came first ofcourse. Three weeks before she was finshed with her courses in Tracking, Armed Combat, and Piloting she recived a message informing her that her parents were both killed in a space accident. Their ship's sublight drive imploded and killed them. Her parents left her their money, their house, and everything they owned. The Manufacturer of the ship; Kuat Drive Yards also paid four million credits to their next of kin. That was ofcourse Lindsay. She finished her courses and went home. After a year of preperation she was ready to begin. She went shopping. She Bought some Replica Advanced Durasteel Mandalorian Armor, two modified DC-17m blasters, Some Vibroblades, a matching jet pack for her armor, and lastly her ship; a KDY Limited Edition Firespray. And so she started her bounty hunting career.
Alignment: Neutral
Occupation: Bounty Hunter
Skills: Fighting, Piloting, and Marksmanship
Weapons: Two DC-17m blasters, Two short Vibroblades, and one Regular Vibroblade
Ship: Modified KDY Firespray
Personal Belongings: Replica Advanced Durasteel Mandalorian Armor(whip cord, flamethrower, and poison darts included), and a matching self recharging jetpack.
Roleplay Sample
Lindsay spotter her prey in her digital visor read out. The visor matched the man's face with a wanted photo of him, it displayed what he was wanted for, if he was armed, and how much he was wanted for. She already knew that though. He was her mark. She slowly walked towards him, but it was hard to act casual in Mandalorian armor. The man spotted her and his eyes almost poped out of his head. He turned around and started to run. Lindsay saw where he was running to. There was a small shuttle parked at the end of the street. While he ran, she walked. He pushed through a crowd of people, but the visor kept locked on him. He appeared with a red outline around his now moving body. Once he got to his ship, he entered the access code and got inside. Lindsay then activated her jetpack and rocketed above the crowds. She zipped forward only to drop a couple of seconds later. She dropped on purpose though, on top of the man's shuttle. She used her helmet computer's selector to activate the cutting tourch on her gauntlet. There was a sparking sound as the cutter started up. She crouched and pressed the gauntlet against the hull then made a large square infront of her. She then turned off the cutter and stood up. With a quick hop onto the square she was inside the shuttle, standing on the part of hull she cut. Lidnsay drew both her DC-17m Blasters and pointed them at the man who was just coming out of the cockpit to run. "Freeze dirt bag!" The man froze in place and threw his hands above his head. That was easy, she thought.
Your accepted Haru. Your probally the only Bounty Hunter in this guild, so good luck. - Veg
W00t! Thanks Veggah!
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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 9:07 am
Gaia Name: <<<
Character Name: Kebal Chloor
Gender: M
Age: 19
Race: Givin
Character Description: Like all Givin, the skeleton of Kebal is on the outside of his body, scaring loads of people. Therefor, Givin always carries a suit cloacking as much of his body as possible, as well as large sunglasses so that his face was hardly visible
Home Planet: Coruscant
Starting Planet: Korriban
Relations: Parents (left alone on coruscant)
Character History He and his parents always lived in the poor parts of Coruscant, and while his parents attempted to make some sort of living, Kebal himself however couldn't care less... It wouldn't be long before he fell into drugs and small time crime..soon to become worse, and more reckless...murder, explosives, he did it all without feeling a thing. After he heard about the dark jedi, he was determined to become one. Kebal stole a spaceship with a few mates and travelled to Korriban to seek them out...
Alignment: Dark side
Occupation Dark jedi student
Skills: Emotionless and shock-causing, speed, sniper skills
Weapons: Laser-sniper rifle and medium blaster pistol, vibroknife
Ship Small unarmed 2-person spaceship
Personal Belongings: 2000 credits, repeating blaster on board of his ship, small medpac, standart stuff ((clothing and all)) scanwatch with message system
Roleplay Sample
Kebal twisted his blaster and looked at the bleeding body in front of him.. he finally took care of Terek Wert, the last person that could be in his way to Korriban.
True, Terek was his friend, and he aided Kebal in stealing the starship, but that also ment he owned half of it. And he couldn't use Terek on his next quest, he would only be in the way... Wasn't that the world? A bit of giving, and a lot of taking? The strongest survive and the useless die, and Terek was among the last... Without feeling a thing Kebal walked over to his trophy, a small transport craft.
Kebal inspected the craft, it seemed to be in fine state and ready to fly. Now it was time to pick up some of his stuff, medical equipment, weapons and cloating, before he would head for korriban.
"And there...I can finally have my influence at this galaxy...this is my time, Kebal will be a name long remembered" The givin grinned and entered the craft. The crafts controls were pretty standart, they held no secrets for him..within moments, he was in the air and heading home for the last time, possibly
*accepts*
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Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2005 2:00 pm
Veggehs back. Gaia Name: Duh. Character Name: Vegilla Coltar Gender: Male Age: 50 Race: Human Character Description: Height: 6'2 Weight: 173lbs Eye Colour: Blue Hair Colour: Black and gray (from age) Marks/Tattoo's/Etc.: Large hand print on my rear. Source: unknown ninja Veggy wears his Jedi outfit all the time. His hair is spiked despite his age. He keeps in shape, so even though he is fifty, he can move like he's twenty five. He has a permanent burn mark on his right wrist from a lightsaber fight, and a burn mark on his left thigh from long range blaster rifle. Home Planet: Coruscant Starting Planet: Its a secret. wink Relations: mad Character History Veg was born on Coruscant. His family was killed in a spacing accident early in his life. At age ten he was dodging the police and stealing to keep alive. He was one day found sleeping by a Jedi knight(who shall remain nameless) that noticed him while passing by an ally way on his way to the temple. He felt the boy's presensein the force while Veg was having a nightmare. So he woke him and offered to take him in. Veg happily accepted. Blah blah blah Jedi training and fighting. You all should know of his history in this guild. And now its teh now time. Alignment: Good guy. Factional Allignment? Nuetral. Occupation Wandering Jedi Master Skills: Piloting, Saber fighting, and being cool? Weapons: Two Lightsabers; Right hand orange, Left hand blue. Ship Nope. Personal Belongings: Nope. Roleplay Sample Pfffffffffffft.... Wow, weird. I lick way more a**. Accepted. ~ Sephi Yes, I'm sure he kicks more a** then us all. ~ MrMI agree. He does the most pwning in this GGN. ~~~MerissaYes, Veg is the king of us all. - K Thanks guys. - Veg ninja VEGGEH! You know I -always- type in SIZE NINE! (except, of course, when I DON'T). If you're gunna go under my name, at least make it look like I did it. xDD ~ OOber K
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Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2005 2:45 pm
(ive edited this so take a look)
Gaia Name: TheCrimsonBehemoth
Character Name: Skye Draxen
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Race: Human
Character Description: Looks like Riku from Kingdom Hearts except his hair is jet black.
Home Planet: Tatooine
Starting Planet:coruscant
Relations: none living
Character History. Skye was always a rogue. he loved mayhem and chaos. Thats why he murdered his family just so he could get payed from a debtor. He found an old firespray and updated it and flew off towards coruscant, there his employer got him the hunter necessities, and got help to update his firespray. hes been a bounty hunter ever since
Alignment: neutral but closer to alliance
Occupation: Bounty hunter/ assasin
Skills razz iloting, Sharpshooting, and Stealth
Weapons: a sniper rifle, blaster pistol, bounty hunter armor that RESEMBLES mandalorian armor but is not, and a couple of viroblades
Ship Your character''s starship. an illegaly modified firespray complete with a hidden light cannon, cluster missiles, ion cannon , and proton bombs
Personal Belongings: Any significant items like droids, heirlooms etc. an assasin droid, and a blood red lightsaber
Roleplay Sample. Skye crawled across the rooftop. His target was identified, Jakarth Tyb''len. Male, Human, wanted dead for the murder of 200 people. He dropped down onto the street. He followed his query like a Rankor following his prey. He walked carefully with every step, but he kicked a rock by accident. Jakarth turned around and saw him, and he looked like he was shot in the chest. he ran off inside a bar to try and hide from the hunter. "Damnit" Skye said to himself and walked into the bar. He saw his target walk out onto the street, and he casually walked out the opposite door even when several people stared at the man in the strange armor. Skye saw his victim headed for a corellian cruiser and said, "I dont think so tubby". Skye fired his grappling cord at the vessel and slammed into the side. he unslung some time bombs and attached them to the hull and set it for 30 seconds. he jumped off the cruiser and landed hard back on the ground. He watched as the cruiser was engulfed in a ball of flame and walked off towards a rundown building. it was time to collect his reward.
to start with, your RP sample could be a bit longer, and since you had no jedi/DJ training, you can''t use that lightsaber yet
And, it seems very unlikely that rebel alliance, or better, republic troops attacked a village on NAboo, one of the many planets they are keeping the peace for over 100 years again...
Change it please
~MrM
A few things are better now... The Rp sample is better..
But the history is worse.. We're playing 150 years after the battle of Yavin, so 159 would be more like your age if you've seen the destruction of Aldaraan. In other words, we don't allow connection with movie/book characters/events... you have to choose another history..Also, madalorians are gone for centuries, and their armors with them...
Oh, and the fact you can't use a lightsaber doesn't mean you can't posses one... you just have to join the dark jedi or jedi to learn how to use it
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 9:38 am
Gaia Name: Shining Tidus
Character Name: Hazar Star
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Race: human
Character Description: he has black hair with red highlights, his eyes are brown, he resembles a pretty boy, his build is okay but he is a little skiny.
Home Planet: Dantooine
Starting Planet: Korriban
Relations: His foster dad, aka.(jedi master outcast).
Character History: As a child he lived peacefully in Dantooine with his father and mother. His father was a jedi knight, as in this case when hazar was born hazar had great potiental to become a powerful jedi. But whenever he turned 4 his father had been sent on a mission to spy on the sith and come back with any leads on the sith. His father never came back and was never able to train Hazar.
His mother died of a desease and had one to live with. Hazar was gonna be sold to the huts on Nar Shadaa but a Mysterious Jedi came and bought him from the slave traders. He then was adopted by that jedi, he new Hazar had great potiental to become a worthy jedi.
As years went by hazar became a powerful jedi. Even his foster father was amazed to see such growth in him with the force. His foster dad was a great mentor but was strict. Hazar become arrogrant and careless as he turned 16, he thought he could take on a bounty hunter with mandalorean blood in him. Hazar bout lost his arm that day but the bounty hunter pityed him so he let Hazar go. another year went by and turned 17. He now is on Korriban the sith planet looking for his father that disapeared 13 years ago. Now Hazar is on korriban looking for his father.
Alignment: Republic, light side
Occupation: Jedi
Skills:weapns building, healing, and lightsaber mastery skill
Weapons: Two lightsabers, and a blaster pistol.
Ship: battered abandoned Ebon Hawk
Personal Belongings: 3 battle droids, 1 astromech droid, and 3p0 unit.
Roleplay Sample: *Hazar walks on the surface of Dantooine looking out to see if their is any trouble.* hmph...seems like today there isn't any trouble.
* Then two minutes later he heard blaster rifle sounds across the meadow, he then runs to see what the commotion is.*
*hazar creeps up to see who is over there.* What in the world are bounty hunters doing here? Wait, no there is an old guy over there.
Now old man where is that jedi that is here, said one of the bounty hunters.
I'll never tell you where he is, said the old man.
Then get ready to die old man, said one of the bounty hunters.
No you will not hurt him.
*Then Hazar uses force jump to get over were the bounty hunters were.* you leave him alone you scum.
oh yeah who's gonna make us, said the bounty hunters.
Me *then Hazar ignites his lightsaber and attacks them* * Hazar then eliminated all the bounty hunters were from that area* You can go home now
Thank you kind sir, said the old man *the old man than runs home.*
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Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 1:37 pm
gaia name: kyoko84
character name: kaia skywalker
gender: f
race: humen
description: flameing orenge hair bright green eyes blac tunic 110 pounds five feet tall strong bild
home planet: tatooine
starting planet:
relitives: grandfather great ant mom dad uncles.
history: i was taken at age two to the jedi temple i grow up there learning the ways of the jedi with memorys of family.
alignment: republic
occupation: jedi
skills: electronics repair and weapen forgeing.
weapens: one light saber with blue beem
ship: my grand fathers old X wing
personal belongings: one carving of fancy dizine that my grandfather clamed would bring good fortune.
incomplete and terrible history
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Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 3:58 pm
Gaia Name:animefreak372
Character Name:Bryan
Gender:Male
Age:23
Race:Human
Character Description: 6'2", 190lbs, muscular, rest like avi
Home Planet:Hoth
Starting Planet:Naboo
Relations:None
Character Histor:Abandoned by parents and became a theif until he found that one can get paid to kill
Alignment:Neutral
Occupation:Bounty Hunter
Skills:Stealing
Weapons: Katanana, and blaster
Ship:X-Wing
Personal Belongings: Fathers watch
incomplete and terrible history
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The Artic Mercenary generated a random number between
1 and 20 ...
9!
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Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 5:39 pm
Gaia Name:Electricdragon
Character Name:Reese Windu
Gender:Male
Age:18
Race:Human
Character Description: Reese Is a powerful, agile fighter who is trained with dual Purple sabers and twin Laser colts. He is loyal to all who ask of him and will fight to the death of what he feels right. He is considered a Cowboy but wont drink.
Home Planet:Tatooine
Starting Planet:Coruscant
Relations:He is not related to anyone...(That He knows of)
Character History:Reese was born on Tatooine where he was forced to train with a sub par Sith faction. He was forced to train until he turned 16 when he slaughtered them all.
Alignment:Republic
Occupation: Jedi/ Military spy
Skills: Incredible saber skills and pistol accuracy. Is a veteran of 2 wars and has military/ Jedi training.
Weapons biggrin ual Purpe LightSabers, Dual laser Colts.
Ship: Millenium Dragon.(A Ship that looks like the millenium falcon except has massive energy cannons for battle and two automatic turrets.)
Personal Belongings: A cowboy hat, his sabers,pistols and a locket of his first and only love.
Roleplay Sample: "Lets go!" Reese had to hurry. His troops were in trouble and he had to get them out. " ill stay. Get the hell out!" His troops continued out as Reese rounded on the pursuers. Igniting his sabers, He began to repel the lasers the opponent's were firing. "Take this you b*****d!" As a Clone got too close. "Ahhhhhh!" Reese got shot above the shoulder. "s**t!" Reese Thought as he turned and began running. Deactivating his sabers, Reese pulled out his colts and eliminated two of them." The final clone is blasted away by Reese's troops.""Thanks boys." smiling stupidly As he passed out...
Ohhhh HELL no. DId you even think before creating this application? You're a cowboy but don't drink? Your character has a cowboy hat, duel purple lightsabers, and dual colts..... right. NOT! THis is a bad application. *Pictures john wayne wielding a lightsaber* UGH. This is totally NOT acceptable. And you can't even come up with an original ship? And your roleplay sample leaves MUCH MUCH MUCH to be desired. No seperation between thought, action and environment.
Do it again but do it better.~~~Krome_devil
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 4:53 pm
Gaia Name: GohexHenaru
Character Name: Shinen Haro
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Race: Human
Character Description: Medium length, dark blue hair with bangs that fall over his face. The bangs leave room for his blood red eyes to peer through, which are a bit sunken back in his pale face. He stands at about 5'6 adn has a medium build with his weight at about 165 lb. He wears a black, sith Robe, although he's not with them.
Home Planet: Corisant
Starting Planet: This is a scret
Relations: He has no family left and no loved ones.
Character History: He was born on Corisant to a Jedi father. His mother had died giving birth to him, it had been a forbidden love. Shinen was trained by his father through the years when he was younger. He learned about Jedi and what they were, the powers they used and the weapons they took as their own. His father died a few years before a jedi Master came to the planet and found him, taking him in for training. It has been 10 years since then and now he is out on his own and making his own choices, for better or for worse.
Alignment: Neutral, but fights for the Republic mainly.
Occupation: Jedi
Skills: Dueling (Lightsabers); Crafting Weapons; Piloting.
Weapons: Lightsabers ( One Red, One Blue)
Ship: The Darkside (No it's not a hint at alignment)
Personal Belongings: A necklace of his family crest. In the shape of a cross with a dragon twisted around it. A droid by the name TS 250 (He named it Ray)
Roleplay Sample: The night was cold and Shinen stood upon a building, looking down upon a few sith that stood in teh street below. "Come on...give me some information.." he said, listing hard. He had cloaked his powers so that they wouldnt sense him, so he moved even closer, Ray circling around the other side. He creot even closer, kicking a can across the street by accident. "Oh...s**t.." he said as the Sith turned their heads towards him. "A SPY! GET HIM!" Shinen blinked as they ran towards him and he hesitated before turning and running the other way. "God...i always seem to be doing that lately.." he said as he turned a corner.
The sith rounded the corner and looked around, not seeing him. Shinen watched them from above, his lightsabers in hand, not yet ignited. There were three of them total. I can take them... He thought to himself with a smirk, dropping down from above and landing behind them as his lightsabers ignited into being. The sith pulled out theirs lightsabers and ignited them as well, slashing violently at him over and over. Shinen dodged a blocked again and again, just as Ray circling aroudn them from behind, a blaster in his hands. He shot the first Sith in teh back, making him fall way to the ground, giving Shinen a chance to strike. Shinen slashed upwards at the first sith on the right just as he slashed horizontally at the sith on his left. The Sith on his right side fell, dead, to teh ground. The second sith blocked, coming aroudn with another slash. Shinen moved, but the Lightsaber caught the chain of his necklace, ripping it away. "Ok, that's it..i liked that necklace!' he said, jumping over the sith and turning, slashing Horizontally with both sabers, cuttign the legs from the sith. Ray came up and pointed the blaster at him head, the Sith's lightsaber coming up adn cutting off his arm. "Damnit..move ray.." Shinen said as he moved foward and shoved his lightsaber into his chest.
Shinen and Ray arrived at their ship a few minutes later, grinning broadly. "Another job well done, screwed up...but well done.." he said as they took off form the planet.
(Thank you thank you..anways...i hope you like!)
~ Ok guys...keep ion kind...yes he's using his lightsabers...but it's just for the purpose of the RP example....~ Thanks-Gohex
looks good, sorry it took so long to accept you ^^
Not the most original history, but that doesn't really matter, go ahead -Mr.M
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