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Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 5:05 am
I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 9:07 pm
Chapter Sixteen - Briefing.
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 9:11 pm
O RLY?!
YA RLY!!!
NO WAIIII!!!!!1111oneoneoneoneone >=O xd
awesome update... if somewhat short >_> but awesome =)
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Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 5:05 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 5:10 pm
Nice chapter. It was funny.
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Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 9:10 pm
I agree. the O RLY part was awesome. I like how he waxed poetical too. That was a nice touch, I thought.
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Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 11:13 pm
Man that was funny, nice update Betman.
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Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 11:45 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 6:16 am
I just read it ,it was goodXD
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 8:55 pm
Agh, guys, I really haven't started working on chapter 17, but I"m going to see if I can get on it soon. Lots of stuff going on at my house.
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 9:13 pm
Betman Agh, guys, I really haven't started working on chapter 17, but I"m going to see if I can get on it soon. Lots of stuff going on at my house. I can't blame ya, I need to update my story as well, but I've been too busy to even write it out on paper yet, I have it circulating in my head, but I still don't have the time.
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 4:34 am
It's all good, I shouldnt be writing mine and doing my homework, but I am passing everthing so I dont worry to much.
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Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 11:09 am
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Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 11:31 am
Great chapter. I love the humor in your story. xd
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Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 2:29 pm
Nice chapter, glad to see this again.
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