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Rajeshri Anjal

PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 12:33 am


@ TalioAngelus. Wow I loved that .. quite a few parts in there where I felt a kick of emotion and it flows really well too. Quite beautiful in a fiery kind of way and I don't really think that the feeling of underlying depression is that totally self-pitying kind. So yes, I enjoyed reading it .. thrice 3nodding
PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 1:50 am


Rajeshri Anjal
@ TalioAngelus. Wow I loved that .. quite a few parts in there where I felt a kick of emotion and it flows really well too. Quite beautiful in a fiery kind of way and I don't really think that the feeling of underlying depression is that totally self-pitying kind. So yes, I enjoyed reading it .. thrice 3nodding


Thanks for the comment =)

When I first saw your avatar I thought to myself "Holy Crap! That's a lot of matching stuff!"

Also, thanks for recognizing the lack of self-pity in the poem... A lot of my writing includes a great deal of self-loathing.. Hence why I dislike most of what I have written.

Thanks again! Maybe I'll track down some more hehe.

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Rajeshri Anjal

PostPosted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 1:40 am


lol yeah its the first time I've tried to do a really cluttered matching avi .. although my gay mardi-gras raver avi was pretty cluttered too XP

And yes .. do post more poems once you track them down 3nodding
PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 11:44 pm


Do poets class rap (thats in a context and means something) as a form of poetry??
It has always made me wonder

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ErinsChaos

PostPosted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 4:41 pm


Just posting these in here to make sure they don't get lost in the shuffle of a guild clean up..

From the 2009 St. Patty's Day Limerick Contest

By Rogue Angel Kiara

To AGA's mods, I ask pronely
Your vices are getting quite lonely
Things are now changing
The guild's rearranging
So for heaven's sake, visit 'Crew Only'!


By Camwen (this first one of hers won btw)

While searching around for a guild,
To make life in Gaia fulfilled,
I was invited to play,
In the AGA
For which I was genuinely thrilled.



There are so many people to thank!
But I'll first take my gold to the bank.
I can now buy some shoes,
or some funky tattoos,
Or put a new fish in my tank!
PostPosted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 2:40 pm


Hermosa, me duelen en mi corazon porque de ti.

Beautiful, it hurts in my heart because of you.
To gaze upon your skin, so soft, so delicate,
so unwrothy am I to even brush my weathered finger tips upon it.
But what hurts most is to be caught gazing at such beauty
and then to be chided at gazing at such perfection as if it was non existent.
To only see you through my eyes would you understand
how you were created in perfection.

JoeEuphonium


ErinsChaos

PostPosted: Sun Apr 05, 2009 8:45 pm


wow...

that was beautiful joe...
PostPosted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 2:49 am


i agree!^^ good job! 4laugh

pretty leela



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PostPosted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 11:09 pm


I guess I'll post this. I have posted it I think in the chatterbox awhile ago, but here it is:

The Forest Rose

There once was a forest rose, sweet of scent and gorgeous of beauty. Her glory was so severe that it would make the eyes of those who looked upon her shed tears of scarlet. And in time, few would tread forth to look upon her, for fear of the pain her glory wrought, and she began to wither. As she withered, so did her world, the trees, the grass, the streams ran dry, the animals turned to cadaverous forms.

Seeing her world decay, those who tread and those who loved faced her thorns. They were cut and slashed and grievously wounded by the thorns that tried to keep them away. Some, hurt too deeply and lacking the love for the love did turn back, but a few pressed on to the heart of the rose's realm.

Facing the terrors of her thorns, those who loved held her close as those who tread gently removed her roots from the soil that could no longer support her – for she was long too delicate for her world. With care from the bleeding and battered ones, the rose was spirited away to a tower with walls of stone and steel, mighty and imposing, and placed within a vaulted, crystal enclosure at the top of its highest tower where the sun shined brightly upon her every day.

She was cared for my everyone, loved and nurtured, but ultimately imprisoned within a room of glass with hundreds of feet of rock and stone between her roots and the open earth. She grew weak, wilted, and ever more thorny as she tried to push away those who loved her – yet imprisoned her to keep her with them as long as they could. But however thorny her branches became, no matter how much those who loved her suffered, they would not let her go. And the rose succumbed to madness.

She tried to protest, to pierce and scratch and cut and slash! But her strength had left her and all she did was harm herself. Her branches tattered, her petals fell, her leaves burned, and her thorns, once imposing and dreadful, softened and waned. The ones who loved and the ones who treaded, blinded by love, pruned the rose's branches back until she was but a shadow of her former glory below a single, blood-red bloom. They took turns guarding her from herself, as she wished to wither and die away, keeping her at bay.

This went on for many years until one day a young man came up from the village far below the tower built by those who loved and those who tread. He wandered the vaulted halls of the tower and finally emerged upon the moonlight bathed pinnacle of the tower where the rose slept. Upon seeing the rose, he fell in love with her, just as those who loved and those who tread did. But the rose refused to believe the young man and asked how anyone could love such a tangled and vile bush with wilted leaves and battered branches and burned petals. The young man told the rose because it was still strong as he pointed to her thick, regal roots; still lovely as he pointed to her hips and entered the enclosure; and still possessed of the scent of the wild roses that once graced this land as he breathed deeply of her perfume.

The man returned each night to visit the rose for many years. He would challenge her doubts and embrace her like none of those who loved or those who tread ever dared. He told her of his love and of how he could not live without her, his life had grown to entangle within the vines of hers, a thorny place that if he was to but withdraw a little from her, it would rend his very soul with the depths of its cuts.

The rose eventually started to grow stronger, her soil enriched by a true love that fortified her own, a soul that reflected the beauty it saw in her back for her to see. And one day, the man came to the rose with tools from his family's farm and told her it was time for her to be free once more. The world outside had finally changed and so had the rose, so against the fears of loss that held the hearts of those who loved and those who tread, the man carefully uprooted the rose. He was not cut, he was not scratched, for he had long become one with the rose and her barbs could no longer hurt him.

Under the moonlight, the man carried the rose away and brought her to a clearing, atop a hill, amidst young and jubilant trees who were all glad to meet her and to be her friends. But there were no roses... The forest roses had all long since disappeared and she was the last.

The man smiled and told her she was wrong. The soul of the forest rose was not something so humble as to lie about in such a floral shell, it was a soul that lived not to love, not to be loved, but to manifest love and passion, sadness and melancholy – it was the soul of a single heart and all hearts.

The next morning, the people of the village awoke to the smell of roses on the air, sweet and pungent. As those who loved and those who tread wept, the villagers treaded out from their homes. Overnight, a thousand, thousand rose bushes, with blooms beyond count, spread out across the hills and through the forests around them. And, on the top of a hill, surrounded by young saplings, stood two rose bushes, forever entangled and entwined atop a sea of unmovable, anchoring roots - growing together ever after.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 5:29 pm


*brushes a thick layer of dust from the thread*

-Ahem-

Note: This is freestyled something I just write quickly without thought (does not mean without emotion) and spellcheck sometimes editing but just enough to make it make sense..

Quote:
Me and my pen

Breathe deep...
take it all in
Close your eyes we're about to begin

The words rise quickly
and gather at the top
The flow won't stem
it'll never stop.
The buckets overflowing now.
the words fall to the ground.
Never to be uttered.
never to have sound.
They try to swim away.
the majority drowns.

The letters left separate and slowly dirft apart
all cohesion's lost, as the chaos slowly starts
the poet tenses slightly, as they're tugging at his heart.

the pool darkens slightly another shade of gray.
a million words all wasted but nothing left to say

his pen still moves quickly across another page.
he closes his eyes tightly pushing back his rage.
searching for solutions. yearning for a way.
The letters form more tightly now.
as he prays for them to stop.
The mass of words are sinking.
he's watching as they drop.
Plugging up the pipeline.

Forming lyric clots.



Secondary note: I never said it would be good <3 xD

Davis Shadenhand


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PostPosted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 5:54 pm


That's awesome Davis. It really paints a vivid picture of the writer.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 5:56 pm


Camwen
That's awesome Davis. It really paints a vivid picture of the writer.
Thank you, there's a lot more in one of the guilds I own but I'm far too lazy to dig out a link to it, but my profiles open and the guilds public methinks xP. /lazy

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:38 pm


@ErinsChaos: I loved your piece "Puff doesn't live here". Tearjerker for sure! heart
PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:41 pm


My style lately has been quite dark and macabre...but please, PLEASE don't mistaken me for being emo...I don't appreciate it. I hope you like this piece...comments well received.

Some of my other writings can be found here...Fiction Press

Step Into My Parlour

Mere words can't explain
How the pain gives pleasure
Watching in the distance
As thoughts of sadistic joy venture
Cutting deep into the soul

Leaving a trail so that admirers may follow
Leading into catacombs so vast and hallow
Where pain and pleasure play

And it is your soul that I wish to swallow
Leading it deep into a dark space
Drinking it deep
Savouring the taste
That ecstatic torment emanates
Letting every drop linger
Licking the remains from my fingers

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Camwen

Distinct Dabbler

PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 3:46 pm


Wow - dark and definitely sexy in a very disturbing way 3nodding

It's quite good! And honesty.. about the emo stuff.. It seems to me that even the happiest people have a dark side that is fun to explore now and then.
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