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 Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2018 9:45 am
I believe I am ready for inspection.
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Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2018 12:16 pm
Weeamoo Alright! Sorry for the wait! It's midterm time, so things are a little hectic right meow.
Anyway~ There are only two things I see/wanna know:
1. Night Vision doesn't have to be listed under her Semblance seeing as how it comes naturally [due to being a faunus I can only imagine].
2. Mind elaborating on enhanced senses? I could see enhanced vision as a semblance, but too many things from one semblance gets a little complicated. Anyway, if you could just describe it a little, it'd be greatly appreciated. Hey, Lupa! I don't think you've gotten a chance to change the sword style part of the semblance, but I also wanna mention something: I think the effects of eating a grimm would be interesting if they lasted until he ate another. So like...exchanged them upon eating another. That way, he doesn't stack up the strength of seven ursa or something. As a mod, that simply makes us nervous^^;; Sorry. ALSO! Don't let me forget! I wanted to bring up something about your character count, so if I don't mention it today, quote me when you read this xD I haven't gotten a chance to change the sword style part yet,had enough time for the weight a bit ago so i did that,and i guess the effect lasting temporarily would be more fair since an ursa would be stronger than a regular bear,so it'll be a temporary thing i think.And the character count thing has been addressed,i cleared out the sheets except for Blitz and i'll add this one once its approved,if you're wondering why i didn't leave anyone else its cause i have one more character i really like planned out. Edit:I think that way or writing works,i changed the human part of the consumption too to not entirely remove the purpose of eating people,tell me if thats okay.
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High-functioning Allegiant
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Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2018 7:42 pm
Weeamoo Alright! Sorry for the wait! It's midterm time, so things are a little hectic right meow.
Anyway~ There are only two things I see/wanna know:
1. Night Vision doesn't have to be listed under her Semblance seeing as how it comes naturally [due to being a faunus I can only imagine].
2. Mind elaborating on enhanced senses? I could see enhanced vision as a semblance, but too many things from one semblance gets a little complicated. Anyway, if you could just describe it a little, it'd be greatly appreciated. Hey, Lupa! I don't think you've gotten a chance to change the sword style part of the semblance, but I also wanna mention something: I think the effects of eating a grimm would be interesting if they lasted until he ate another. So like...exchanged them upon eating another. That way, he doesn't stack up the strength of seven ursa or something. As a mod, that simply makes us nervous^^;; Sorry. ALSO! Don't let me forget! I wanted to bring up something about your character count, so if I don't mention it today, quote me when you read this xD I managed to clarify her semblance.
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Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2018 6:01 am
Duronva Sol I managed to clarify her semblance. Nice! Looks great! I'd normally say feel free to create your character thread, but you've already done that so-
Feel free to begin posting! For a "catching up" sake, we are a few weeks into the semester post a little time-skip, and it's a weekend for students. If you'd like to begin posting with that in mind, go ahead! Also, if you're looking for a team to join, I'd suggest taking a look at Team Pairings. It may look a little scarce meow, but it's going to fill RIGHT UP in a couple days, I promise.
Accepted.
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Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2018 6:35 am
Thanks for the submission! There are just a couple things I want to mention for meow:
1. The mid-range combat style of the DERBR is a little broken/over-powered. While against anyone with a semblance, it should be fine, but otherwise, irreparable internal bleeding makes us mods nervous.
2. Dissection: Grimm kinda deteriorate upon death/fatal wound, so I'm not quite sure how those would work.
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Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2018 4:41 pm
Weeamoo Thanks for the submission! There are just a couple things I want to mention for meow:
1. The mid-range combat style of the DERBR is a little broken/over-powered. While against anyone with a semblance, it should be fine, but otherwise, irreparable internal bleeding makes us mods nervous.
2. Dissection: Grimm kinda deteriorate upon death/fatal wound, so I'm not quite sure how those would work. Okay, this time I got it. Ready for re-inspection
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2018 12:33 pm
I'll do my best to look at these before my shift or when I get my break. If not, it may not be til later tonight or tomorrow. T-T
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2018 5:42 pm
Oh, cool! I dig the armor! Alright, alright, just one last thing [and mostly just a question], is the 400lbs his carry weight with the armor dawned, or is that function weight including the armor and Rouge's body-weight as well?
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2018 5:49 pm
Lupa Fur Weeamoo Alright! Sorry for the wait! It's midterm time, so things are a little hectic right meow.
Anyway~ There are only two things I see/wanna know:
1. Night Vision doesn't have to be listed under her Semblance seeing as how it comes naturally [due to being a faunus I can only imagine].
2. Mind elaborating on enhanced senses? I could see enhanced vision as a semblance, but too many things from one semblance gets a little complicated. Anyway, if you could just describe it a little, it'd be greatly appreciated. Hey, Lupa! I don't think you've gotten a chance to change the sword style part of the semblance, but I also wanna mention something: I think the effects of eating a grimm would be interesting if they lasted until he ate another. So like...exchanged them upon eating another. That way, he doesn't stack up the strength of seven ursa or something. As a mod, that simply makes us nervous^^;; Sorry. ALSO! Don't let me forget! I wanted to bring up something about your character count, so if I don't mention it today, quote me when you read this xD I haven't gotten a chance to change the sword style part yet,had enough time for the weight a bit ago so i did that,and i guess the effect lasting temporarily would be more fair since an ursa would be stronger than a regular bear,so it'll be a temporary thing i think.And the character count thing has been addressed,i cleared out the sheets except for Blitz and i'll add this one once its approved,if you're wondering why i didn't leave anyone else its cause i have one more character i really like planned out. Edit:I think that way or writing works,i changed the human part of the consumption too to not entirely remove the purpose of eating people,tell me if thats okay. Unfortunately, accumulating even half the strength of a humanoid poses the same problem as accumulating the strength of a grimm. With it stacking like that, eating enough could cause him to be 10x stronger than anything in the realm. It's simply slower, so unfortunately, gunna say we'd rather not. He's grimm, so I don't think he 100% needs an alternative reason to attack/eat people.
And I know we've spoken about the character thing before, but there were some specifics I wanted to address just-in-case. :3 We could totally NPC Amara, if you'd like so she could still show up as a teacher now and again.
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2018 5:52 pm
Weeamoo Oh, cool! I dig the armor! Alright, alright, just one last thing [and mostly just a question], is the 400lbs his carry weight with the armor dawned, or is that function weight including the armor and Rouge's body-weight as well? Hmm...Weill, I'm going to go with the weight of armor, but not Rouge's weight, it has a lift capability of 400lbs then. Oh, also, should I make a post in the headmaster's office first, after this?
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2018 6:28 pm
Weeamoo Lupa Fur Weeamoo Alright! Sorry for the wait! It's midterm time, so things are a little hectic right meow.
Anyway~ There are only two things I see/wanna know:
1. Night Vision doesn't have to be listed under her Semblance seeing as how it comes naturally [due to being a faunus I can only imagine].
2. Mind elaborating on enhanced senses? I could see enhanced vision as a semblance, but too many things from one semblance gets a little complicated. Anyway, if you could just describe it a little, it'd be greatly appreciated. Hey, Lupa! I don't think you've gotten a chance to change the sword style part of the semblance, but I also wanna mention something: I think the effects of eating a grimm would be interesting if they lasted until he ate another. So like...exchanged them upon eating another. That way, he doesn't stack up the strength of seven ursa or something. As a mod, that simply makes us nervous^^;; Sorry. ALSO! Don't let me forget! I wanted to bring up something about your character count, so if I don't mention it today, quote me when you read this xD I haven't gotten a chance to change the sword style part yet,had enough time for the weight a bit ago so i did that,and i guess the effect lasting temporarily would be more fair since an ursa would be stronger than a regular bear,so it'll be a temporary thing i think.And the character count thing has been addressed,i cleared out the sheets except for Blitz and i'll add this one once its approved,if you're wondering why i didn't leave anyone else its cause i have one more character i really like planned out. Edit:I think that way or writing works,i changed the human part of the consumption too to not entirely remove the purpose of eating people,tell me if thats okay. Unfortunately, accumulating even half the strength of a humanoid poses the same problem as accumulating the strength of a grimm. With it stacking like that, eating enough could cause him to be 10x stronger than anything in the realm. It's simply slower, so unfortunately, gunna say we'd rather not. He's grimm, so I don't think he 100% needs an alternative reason to attack/eat people.
And I know we've spoken about the character thing before, but there were some specifics I wanted to address just-in-case. :3 We could totally NPC Amara, if you'd like so she could still show up as a teacher now and again. Okay,so other than the strength gaining thing its fine? And as far as npc'ing Amara goes i'd agree if we still need more teachers.
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2018 8:55 pm
Confused Commissar Weeamoo Oh, cool! I dig the armor! Alright, alright, just one last thing [and mostly just a question], is the 400lbs his carry weight with the armor dawned, or is that function weight including the armor and Rouge's body-weight as well? Hmm...Weill, I'm going to go with the weight of armor, but not Rouge's weight, it has a lift capability of 400lbs then. Oh, also, should I make a post in the headmaster's office first, after this? All set! Go ahead and make your thread.
Uhm, uhm, feel free to post wherever you'd like^^
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2018 9:27 pm
Lupa Fur Weeamoo Lupa Fur Weeamoo Alright! Sorry for the wait! It's midterm time, so things are a little hectic right meow.
Anyway~ There are only two things I see/wanna know:
1. Night Vision doesn't have to be listed under her Semblance seeing as how it comes naturally [due to being a faunus I can only imagine].
2. Mind elaborating on enhanced senses? I could see enhanced vision as a semblance, but too many things from one semblance gets a little complicated. Anyway, if you could just describe it a little, it'd be greatly appreciated. Hey, Lupa! I don't think you've gotten a chance to change the sword style part of the semblance, but I also wanna mention something: I think the effects of eating a grimm would be interesting if they lasted until he ate another. So like...exchanged them upon eating another. That way, he doesn't stack up the strength of seven ursa or something. As a mod, that simply makes us nervous^^;; Sorry. ALSO! Don't let me forget! I wanted to bring up something about your character count, so if I don't mention it today, quote me when you read this xD I haven't gotten a chance to change the sword style part yet,had enough time for the weight a bit ago so i did that,and i guess the effect lasting temporarily would be more fair since an ursa would be stronger than a regular bear,so it'll be a temporary thing i think.And the character count thing has been addressed,i cleared out the sheets except for Blitz and i'll add this one once its approved,if you're wondering why i didn't leave anyone else its cause i have one more character i really like planned out. Edit:I think that way or writing works,i changed the human part of the consumption too to not entirely remove the purpose of eating people,tell me if thats okay. Unfortunately, accumulating even half the strength of a humanoid poses the same problem as accumulating the strength of a grimm. With it stacking like that, eating enough could cause him to be 10x stronger than anything in the realm. It's simply slower, so unfortunately, gunna say we'd rather not. He's grimm, so I don't think he 100% needs an alternative reason to attack/eat people.
And I know we've spoken about the character thing before, but there were some specifics I wanted to address just-in-case. :3 We could totally NPC Amara, if you'd like so she could still show up as a teacher now and again. Okay,so other than the strength gaining thing its fine? And as far as npc'ing Amara goes i'd agree if we still need more teachers. Yes. Sure thing! As soon as I figure out how we're doing NPCs for everyone other than just the basics, I'll let you know.
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2018 7:58 am
Weeamoo Lupa Fur Weeamoo Lupa Fur Weeamoo Alright! Sorry for the wait! It's midterm time, so things are a little hectic right meow.
Anyway~ There are only two things I see/wanna know:
1. Night Vision doesn't have to be listed under her Semblance seeing as how it comes naturally [due to being a faunus I can only imagine].
2. Mind elaborating on enhanced senses? I could see enhanced vision as a semblance, but too many things from one semblance gets a little complicated. Anyway, if you could just describe it a little, it'd be greatly appreciated. Hey, Lupa! I don't think you've gotten a chance to change the sword style part of the semblance, but I also wanna mention something: I think the effects of eating a grimm would be interesting if they lasted until he ate another. So like...exchanged them upon eating another. That way, he doesn't stack up the strength of seven ursa or something. As a mod, that simply makes us nervous^^;; Sorry. ALSO! Don't let me forget! I wanted to bring up something about your character count, so if I don't mention it today, quote me when you read this xD I haven't gotten a chance to change the sword style part yet,had enough time for the weight a bit ago so i did that,and i guess the effect lasting temporarily would be more fair since an ursa would be stronger than a regular bear,so it'll be a temporary thing i think.And the character count thing has been addressed,i cleared out the sheets except for Blitz and i'll add this one once its approved,if you're wondering why i didn't leave anyone else its cause i have one more character i really like planned out. Edit:I think that way or writing works,i changed the human part of the consumption too to not entirely remove the purpose of eating people,tell me if thats okay. Unfortunately, accumulating even half the strength of a humanoid poses the same problem as accumulating the strength of a grimm. With it stacking like that, eating enough could cause him to be 10x stronger than anything in the realm. It's simply slower, so unfortunately, gunna say we'd rather not. He's grimm, so I don't think he 100% needs an alternative reason to attack/eat people.
And I know we've spoken about the character thing before, but there were some specifics I wanted to address just-in-case. :3 We could totally NPC Amara, if you'd like so she could still show up as a teacher now and again. Okay,so other than the strength gaining thing its fine? And as far as npc'ing Amara goes i'd agree if we still need more teachers. Yes. Sure thing! As soon as I figure out how we're doing NPCs for everyone other than just the basics, I'll let you know. Okie,can't wait to hear how the NPC's are gonna work
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2018 7:05 pm
 Username: Living E- I mean... Weeamoo
Name: Bourbon Bright
Nickname: BB
Race: Human
Ethnicity: Caucasian
Gender: Female
Orientation: Bisexual
Alignment: CN
Academy: Haven
Age: 19
Birthday: 3/13
Height: 5'3
Combat Type: close-range: blunt&shock mid-rage: piercing
Weapon(s): Black Demure: A conductive studded black bat with the ability to fire dust cartridges. On the grip are two different triggers. One sends electricity throughout the weapon. This isn't at a high enough voltage or amperage to deal a lethal blow instantly nor incapacitate an opponent in one hit; however, enemies will feel it. There's enough of a shock so that it makes an impact. It will radiate and cause pain and even numbness in joints and muscles. Enough attacks with it will begin to weigh on an enemy. The other trigger opens up the inner barrel and fires off a single dust round at medium range similarly to a shotgun. Only eight shots can be fired before needing to reload.
Dust Skill: Lighting: Medium
Semblance: Encore: Bourbon's aura is reactive to sound. The louder an area is, the more amplified her aura. This boosts the potency and reactivity, kicking up her endurance like crazy. She's able to take more attacks and more powerful attacks than normally able, making it a real pain to deplete her aura. This also boosts Bourbon's aura's natural healing abilities, quickly healing small wounds. When her semblance is active, her aura is clearly visible. Encore automatically activates at 100 decibels.
Aura Technique Level: Novice
Relationships:
❖ Scotch Bright: Father
❖ Patina Bright: Mother
❖ TEAM MEMBER R: This spot is open [just realize we don't have Haven established]
❖ TEAM MEMBER B: This spot is open [just realize we don't have Haven established]
❖ TEAM MEMBER N: This spot is open [just realize we don't have Haven established]
Strengths:
✔ Popular: Bourbon is the vocalist for a pop rock band called On the Rocks. While most of their fame is from the web, she's often recognized.
✔ Vocals: Based on the previously mentioned Strength, she sing good.
✔ Guitar: She's not the best but can play most songs.
✔ Outgoing: One of Bourbon's innate talents is conversing with people and getting their attention. She got that high charisma.
✔ Strength: Bashing weapons aren't very effective if their wielder is weak-sauce.
✔ Endurance: Regardless of her semblance, Bourbon has a high tolerance for pain and physical wear.
✔ Headstrong: Bourbon's not one to hold back her thoughts or opinions and is forthright.
✔ Clear Minded: Even in a fight, she can keep her wits about herself and act with purpose.
Weaknesses:
✘ First Impressions: When first meeting people outside of gigs and fans, Bourbon is unlikely to attempt to save face and can make people uncomfortable without knowing.
✘ Busy Schedule: Between school, training, gigs, and practice, the young woman doesn't have a lot of time to herself.
✘ Speed: Bourbon's the "strut onto the battlefield" type. She gets in, breaks legs, and hopefully nothing can walk at that point to outmaneuver her.
✘ Stealth: Considering her semblance, Bourbon needs noise. She needs to be around it, make it, etc. Being sneaky and quiet gives her no added benefit.
✘ Range: The longest range she could handle is with her shotgun.
✘ Small Fame: While it's probable some people will notice her, it's going to take a lot of work to make it "big". The littlest mistake at a time like this could ruin any possibility of a music career.
✘ #nofilter: Bourbon is not afraid to say something lewd, swear, point things out, or make jokes.
Likes:
✔ Music
✔ School
✔ The web
✔ People
✔ Preforming
✔ Baseball
✔ Vale
✔ Food
✔ Fighting
✔ Exercise
✔ Leather
✔ Black
✔ CDs
Dislikes:
✘ Grimm
✘ The Dark
✘ Awkward Silence
✘ People Who Are Uptight
✘ Candy
✘ Indecision
✘ Tuning
✘ Sugary Drinks
✘ Being Tired
✘ Liars
✘ Stealing
✘ Wasting Food
✘ Losing
✘ Being Left Out
Personality:
❖ As someone who is very proud and outspoken, Bourbon people often assume that Bourbon is standoffish. While she certainly isn't a person who'll hold back, those are the opinions of people who refuse to even approach her. When it comes to fans, the young rocker will do all she can to provide and please, especially when they're the ones that essentially decide the fate of On the Rocks. Friends are treated similarly, though she won't baby them. As a leader and ally, Bourbon can become extremely overprotective but would like people to find their own conclusions rather than having to write out the answers for them. How is anyone supposed to grow that way, after all? While many may expect her to disrespect authority, she doesn't. Life is hard, and it takes quite the amount of resolve to make it to certain ages. Making it that far and something for oneself is respectable in her opinion. That, however, does not mean that she'll simply roll over without asking questions if she's presented with some fishy explanation. Regardless of her perks and quirks, Bourbon goes through life with a certain... flair.
That flair also applies to the battlefield. They may not understand, but she'll be the first to go out of her way to talk down to grimm and any opponent for that matter. Not the fastest fighter, Bourbon is likely to simply walk up to the enemy and rail into them with everything she has. Luckily with her static way of fighting, she can see the entire battlefield, perfect for making calls to her teammates when she gets an idea or sees an opening. After all, she can't hog the stage.
Speaking of stage, On the Rocks, Bourbon's band, plays local gigs and uploads videos to the internet of their songs. They've gained quite the following, and it's great to be able to play bigger better venues. The young huntress owns the stage and really knows how to work an audience, if you catch my drift. Her persona is very "punk," and her stage presence reflects that.
History:
❖ Music has always been very important to Bourbon. As a child, she loved the emotion is brought about and learning about different genres and bands. Her father always played guitar for her and her mother when he could, and it was something that the child came to cherish. That love never diminished as she learned how to play herself and was usually found singing or humming to herself. Becoming famous was never really part of the plan until she started posting videos on the internet. At first, it was just to share and talk about music. It was a side thing, a conversation starter. After all, she was going to Signal Academy to follow in her dad's footsteps and become a huntress. Her final year there is when her videos really got some attention. While fame and fortune hadn't been her first and final goal for life, all it took was for a single upload to spread like wildfire.
Now a student of Haven Academy, Bourbon has found fellow music lovers and is chasing two dreams at once: becoming a huntress as well as a rockstar. Having grown up in Vale all her life, the only way she thought she could branch out and meet new people was by attending a school in another land. There, she found her other band members and began uploading music more regularly and playing local shows. While one may consider this a distraction, it's the exact opposite for Bourbon when it comes to school. To be able to have a dream, she must protect it. As such, she's in the top twenty percentile of her class, showing her capability as a fighter as well. It's Bourbon's last year at school, and if she can't hit higher fame by the end of the year, she's vowed to fully dedicate her time to being a huntress rather than musician. It's a solemn oath she'd taken with herself and plans to honor it. Musical fame, however, is not something she's ready to give up quite yet.
Outfits:
❖ Casuals/Combats: Just assume she's wearing some combo of jewelry, chains, belts, tight pants, band shirts, tanks, and a leather jacket. Combat boots. Only combat boots ever.
❖ Haven Academy Uniform
Items:
❖ Headset
❖ Scroll
❖ Mini Amp
❖ Permanent Marker
Other:
❖ Her "debut" video is a rock arrangement cover of Mirror Mirror.
❖ She has two tattoos, both thick black bands. One is around her right index finger, and the other is around her left forearm.
❖ Good bands to akin "the sound" of On the Rocks to would be Against the Current and Paramore.
Themes:
❖ Main Theme: Infinity by Against the Current
❖ Battle Theme: Beginning by Against the Current
❖ Emotional Theme: Brighter by Against the Current
 
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