▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇ XXXXX▇▇㊑▇▇┈┈┈┆ＢＡＳＩＣＳ▇▇X X XXXXXXXX｛ ｇｅｎｅｒａｌXｉｎｆｏ｝ Full Name: Keira Hendricks Nicknames: Key, Kiki Notable Title: - Gender: Female Age: 20 Birth date: February 12th Sexuality: Lesbian XXXXXXXX｛ ａｐｐｅａｒａｎｃｅ ｝ Personality: Keira could literally not give two less ******** about the world, or at least thats what she portrays. On the outside she is a smouldering, sarcastic, and apathetic. On the inside she cares a bit more than she would like. Keira will always begrudingly help someone if they are in a spot of trouble. During battles she seeks to end them swiftly and with efficiency, rather than toying with people. Nindo: "Most of the people in this world suck. It's those few who don't that make this life worth living." Theme song: Eyes on Fire Height: 5'8 Weight: 126 lbs Build: Curvaceous Hair Color: Brown Eye Color: Blue Complexion: Fair XXXXXXXX｛ ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌXｉｎｆｏ ｝ Relationships: XXXXL I K E S Food: Sweets Drink: Root beer Color: Cherry red Miscellaneous: Hand-drawn art XXXXD I S L I K E S Food: Fish Drink: Cranberry juice Color: Yellow Miscellaneous: Loud-mouths XXXXXXXX｛ ｂａｃｋｇｒｏｕｎｄXｓｔｏｒｙ ｝ Keira was born of the secret union of a great woman and a man who captured her heart. Their love was so intense, purer than even a crystal clear diamond. Unfortunately the woman was in no position to raise a baby. Being a very prominent member of society she had to uphold a very stern and specific image. An illegitimate child did not fit in the equation. And so Keira was raised only by her father, kept in the dark as to the identity of her mother. Her life was not an overly hard one, in fact it was quite comfortable. While her mother could not be with her in person she provided for her in every other way she could. Regardless, Keira grew resentful of this mysterious woman. Entering her teen years the girl found herself on the wrong side of the law; constantly. She was always seeking a fight where there was not one and vandalism was like her second language. Her father growing desperate entered her in the Academy, hoping to channel this angry energy into something useful. Unfortunately Keira card little for authority. She was a problem child right from the start and her grades reflected that. There was no apparent ability she retained through genetics, much to the disappointment of her father. No latent abilities showed themselves, only her terrible attitude.
One night, as Keira lay sleeping fitfully in her bed, a woman entered. The woman gazed down at the young girl with eyes of molten gold, her soft lips set in a frown. The look in her eyes reflected anguish, a pain that cut deeper than a physical one could ever. The woman reached out a hand, slender fingers pausing just before Keira's cheek. Keira sighed in her sleep and stirred, eyes cracking open in the night. A flash of white, a blur of gold and the woman was gone. This was the night that Keira ran away from her house.
In those days Keira was not a very good person. More than once she had been called a street urchin. She did regrettable things to live; stealing, soliciting, lying, and more. On one of her usual nightly runs Keira found herself walking by a newstand. A familiar face caught her eye. A gasp escaped the woman's lips as she recognized who it was. Her father had passed away, having suffered a wound in the line of duty. Struck with grief Keira fleed from the streets, retreating to a dark alleyway to mourn the second loss of a loved one. For three days and three nights Keira sat at the grave of her father, barely bothering to try and live.
On the third night a man arrived, giving the last name of Avient. This man seized Keira by the collar of her shirt and slapped her hard. "What a mess. What a disgrace. Your mother would be ashamed." Keira gave the man a hard look and jerked his hand away from her, cradling her face gently. "Yeah well that's just dandy. She can shove one up her ar-" Another slap to the face and Keira tasted the blood in her mouth. "You'll do wisely to watch your mouth. You've nothing left in the world save for what your mother left you. You can cut your tough girl act and come with me, or shrivel and die for all I care." The man turned away and stalked off into the distance, not bothering to look back and see if the girl was following. Keira sat on the ground, dazed and confused. What did this man mean? What had her mother left her? She made a life altering decision then and pushed herself off of the ground. Hardening herself, Keira chased after the man and entered her new life.
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XXXXE S S E N T I A L S Village: Tsukigakure Profession: Ship Guard Rank: Genin Chakra: 20
Clan: - Bloodline: Sharingan Demon: -
Class: Genjutsu - Path: Single Target Destroyer
Strengths: - Illusions - High Perception - Large arsenal
Weaknesses: - Few physical bonuses - High perception can be used against her. - More than one opponent
Fears: - Seeing the ghost of her father, ashamed of her. - Meeting her mother - Tentacles
Elemental Affinities: Fire, Wind
Personal Attribute: • It'll hurt you more For every major wound that Keira receives she gains a 1/2 rank boost to the potency of her genjutsu.
• Cheap Tricks Keira receives a 20% to the cost of her genjutsu
• I know you're there Each rank Keira receives a 1/2 rank to perception, at the cost of being unable to receive a different physical stat boost from ninjutsu/bukijutsu.
Passives:
- Speed: 1/2 - Strength: 1/2 - Perception: 1 1/2
XXXXE Q U I P M E N T Special Items:
Weapons:
XXXXM I S S I O N S / S T A T I S T I C S Missions: - D: - C: - B: - A: - S:
Ryo: 0 Fame/Infamy:
XXXXP E T S / S U M M O N S Name: Species: Abilities:
XXXXX▇▇㊑▇▇┈┈┈┆ＢＡＳＩＣＳ▇▇X X XXXXXXXX｛ ｇｅｎｅｒａｌXｉｎｆｏ｝ Full Name: Wei Xiao Jason Lee Nicknames: Jace Notable Title: Gender: Male Age: 18 Birth date: 5/11 Sexuality: Straight XXXXXXXX｛ ａｐｐｅａｒａｎｃｅ ｝ Personality: Jace is, contrary to the normal Inuzuka, not incredibly loud or wild but instead a very cool and calculating individual who is capable of doing things many people don't expect. Being not only one of the Inuzuka's chosen pack leaders but also psychic has made him a bit ornery, but this only extends to his own mind and he rarely speaks on such things as being better than others, regardless of weather or not it is factual. He spends a lot of time thinking before doing, which is just another thing that made him the runt of the litter. Nindo: "Pray your bark matches your bite, else I'll just take away your higher level functions and all you'll be able to do is bark." Theme song: Height: 5'6 Weight: 100 lbs Build: Toned but skinny Hair Color: Very dark blue. Eye Color: Reddish brown Complexion: Dirty but youthful and alive. Outfits: XXXXXXXX｛ ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌXｉｎｆｏ ｝ Relationships: Has a large family of Inuzuka and wolves/hounds. XXXXL I K E S Food: Red meat. Drink: Good Ol H2O Color: Blue Miscellaneous: Horseplay XXXXD I S L I K E S Food: "Sweet or soft" Drink: Milk Color: Green Miscellaneous: N/A XXXXXXXX｛ ｂａｃｋｇｒｏｕｎｄXｓｔｏｒｙ ｝
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XXXXE S S E N T I A L S Village: Tsuki Profession: Farmer Rank: Gennin Chakra: 20
Clan: Inuzuka Bloodline: Mind Scukptor Demon: N/A
Class: Assassin - Path: The Illusionist
Strengths: - Subterfuge - Close Range - Assassination
Weaknesses: - Long Range - Being Out Moved - Temper Flares
Fears: - Being Buried Alive - Inadequacy - "Not that he is too weak, but that he is powerful beyond compare."
Personal Attribute: Psi Hound - This attribute makes it so that Wei and his hounds are even more stealthy that usual, resulting in people having to work that much harder to find them. Requires the ninja trying to locate them in stealth to have a rank more perception.
XXXXM I S S I O N S / S T A T I S T I C S Missions: - D: - C: - B: - A: - S:
Ryo: 0 Fame/Infamy:
XXXXP E T S / S U M M O N S Name: Max Species: Direwolf Abilities: His personal ability is that he can track the scent of an opponents blood up to the country limits.
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WIND TECHNIQUES
LIGHTNING TECHNIQUES
GENJUTSU TECHNIQUES Double Vision Drunken Sight Instant Strike Chained Mind Distortion Through the Looking Glass Rapid Mudslide Forest Destruction BLOODLINE TECHNIQUES
CLAN TECHNIQUES
•Haraise Animal Stance Skull Crusher Rapid Shredding Cleave Animal Stance Two •Clockwork Upgrade: Scope " Silent Shot Shank'N'Shoot Slugger Gear Windup Clockwork Sniping Counter Balance •Projectile Method Overhand Toss Underhand Toss Bank Shot Snatch Redirect Power Throw Twisting Circle
Posted: Wed May 14, 2014 10:15 pm
The Prophet Wei
Your personal attribute is denied. You can have it so that normal people need 1 rank more in perception but not dojutsu/life force detectors.
Also your hounds passive is denied. You can have it so that if he manages to smell their blood (ie. hits them, you hit them) then he can track them in the country. Other than that no, it'd be way too easy for you to find anyone anytime.
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2014 10:26 pm
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The Prophet Wei
Your personal attribute is denied. You can have it so that normal people need 1 rank more in perception but not dojutsu/life force detectors.
Also your hounds passive is denied. You can have it so that if he manages to smell their blood (ie. hits them, you hit them) then he can track them in the country. Other than that no, it'd be way too easy for you to find anyone anytime.
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2014 10:27 pm
The Prophet Wei
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The Prophet Wei
Your personal attribute is denied. You can have it so that normal people need 1 rank more in perception but not dojutsu/life force detectors.
Also your hounds passive is denied. You can have it so that if he manages to smell their blood (ie. hits them, you hit them) then he can track them in the country. Other than that no, it'd be way too easy for you to find anyone anytime.
You don't start with Justus that aren't C ranked and below Bloodline and Clan.
Remove ALL of your passive that you got from anything other than clan passives, bloodline passives and personal passives.
You get one personal passive since you have both bloodline and clan. And you must elaborate on said passive.
There were more things, but just fix them and then I'll see the others.
If I may ask, could you message me, I have questions to help make my profile better, if you don't mind. Thank you.
Fix the changes then i'll pm you.
Posted: Sun May 18, 2014 2:59 pm
☐ Name: Avior Inuzuka ☐ Nickname/Famous Name: Wild Seven ☐ Hair: (Like avatar's color and style)
☐ Age: 22 ☐ Birthdate: 4/06
☐ Gender: Male ☐ Sexuality: Straight ☐ Ethnicity: Caucasian
☐ Height: 5'7 ☐ Weight: 180
☐ Personality: Reckless at times, short-tempered, persistent, loyal, couragous, enjoys helping other, loves to joke around. ☐ Family: N/A
☐ Theme Song: curse of the werewolf - Timeless Miracle ☐ Nindo: "I will never give up, that's my ninja way." ☐ Background: When he was young, he was looked down upon for being weak and having no talent. He picked fights with the kids in his class that insulted him. After being fed up with all the condescension, he fled into the woods to train with the wolves and learn their ways to better his ability. After a decade of training with the wolves, he now travels with his wolf companion Arctos to show the ninja world his new found power.
☐ Passives: - Speed: - Perception: 2 1/2 (Byakugan) (Inuzuka clan) - Melee Master: - Weapon Master: - Chain Master: - Hand to Hand Combat Passive (Byakugan)
☐ Personal Attributes: - Feral: After taking a good amount of damage, Avior is able to call upon the Feral state that he learns when training with the wolves, this makes him more animalistic. This grants a 1/2 boost in strength but lowers Perception by 1/2
☐ Strengths: - Close Combat - Heightened senses - Wolf companion - Conviction ☐ Weakness: - Heat - Loud noises - Genjutsu ☐ Fears: - Death - Spiders - Fleas
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Nindo: "The measure of a man is what he does with power." Theme song: Indestructible Height: 6'3'' Weight: 178 lbs Build: Picture* Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Red Complexion: Picture* Outfits: Picture* XXXXXXXX｛ ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌXｉｎｆｏ ｝ Relationships: XXXXL I K E S Food: Steak and white rice Drink: Cold Matte tea Color: Red Miscellaneous: Chilling XXXXD I S L I K E S Food: Vegetables Drink: Sake Color: Blue Miscellaneous: Getting Angry XXXXXXXX｛ ｂａｃｋｇｒｏｕｎｄXｓｔｏｒｙ ｝ Before Ryu saw the harshness and brutality of the world, he was but a mere child in the desert wastelands of an uncharted country. Up until the age of ten he lived a normal life as a desert dweller together with his family constantly on the search for food, nourishment and ultimately survival. This childhood molded the boy into a impatient and often aggressive person. His parents were worried that it would day lead to his ultimate demise. Then, on his tenth birthday the boy fell terribly ill. His parents did not have the means to take care of him any longer. They sought help and eventually stumbled up an organization that took a liking to Ryu. They never explained why to his parents, but they promised them that he would live comfortably in the main lands and that they would give him the medical attention that he required. At the last moment they changed their minds about giving up their only child, but the organization didn't quite agree with Ryu's parents and killed them right in front of the poor boys eyes...
They locked the boy away in a cage away from the other "special" children. They knew that he was not sick, but it was in fact ten years of accumulated power trapped inside the body of a boy. While he was trapped they conduced several experiments on him. The power of his bloodline was unfathomable, but it could become even GREATER so they implemented Curse Marks onto his body. The operation was a success until his body began to produce too much chakra for it to contain. The organization tried to stop it, but there was absolutely nothing they could do. When the boy awoke with the fiery eyes of hell he let out an agonizing roar and exploded into an atomic blast of chakra and fire. This explosion caused a chain reaction throughout the facility. When he awoke he was sitting there with his arms held palmwards towards his face. Everything around him was gone except for himself. The Unbreakable Dragon was born.
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XXXXE S S E N T I A L S Village: Tsukigakure Profession: Medical Dudes Rank: Genin Chakra: 20
Personal Attribute: - Unbreakable: 1/2 Strength Passives:
- Speed: 1/2 - Strength: 1 [Personal Attribute included] - Perception: 1/2 - Rank in Weapon based skills: 1/2 [Weapon Master Passive] - Limiter 1: Scarf with Shinzo emblem - Limiter 2: Family Knife - Limiter 3: Simple Necklace
XXXXE Q U I P M E N T Special Items: - - -
Weapons: - (link if custom)
XXXXM I S S I O N S / S T A T I S T I C S Missions: - D: - C: - B: - A: - S:
Ryo: 0 Fame/Infamy:
XXXXP E T S / S U M M O N S Name: Species: Abilities:
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LIGHTNING TECHNIQUES
UNIVERSAL TECHNIQUES • Transformation Technique Using this skill, a ninja can transform their outer appearance to that of another form, whether it be a person or object. However, due to the physical restrictions on the body, the user cannot transform into anything extremely small or larger than what they already are. (Example, you could not transform into a shuriken or a small animal, nor could you transform into an enlarged or distended form of anything... so therefore no such thing as a small human-sized adult elephant, or a human-sized ant). The user must always be within the same proportions as the original form of the object. Also, the user does not gain any extra physical ability through Henge (i.e. transforming into a cheetah will not give you a cheetah's speed). Henge is dispelled when the user is touched in an offensive matter. Thus after the user hits the target in their transformed state they revert.
• Rope Untying Technique A basic skill that allows the user to channel chakra into a rope or chain in order to push the knot the right way, so it loosens.
• Chakra Hair Rope By laying down large amounts of hair, the user can create a chakra infused rope that can bind an opponent's legs to the ground. This leaves the enemy open to various kinds of attack since they are unable to move. In order to be effective, the opponent must be standing on the hair.
• Tree/Wall/Water Walking By focusing chakra into the soles of their feet, a shinobi can attach themselves to a hard surface, such as trees or solid walls and walk or run up them with ease. A careful balance must be struck between applying too much chakra, which would crush the surface on contact and thus make you lose your footing, and applying too little chakra causing you to fall off the surface. Water walking takes a bit more practice and constant chakra fluxing, but is the same general idea. (This technique costs 2 chakra points to initiate, but has no retention cost)
BLOODLINE TECHNIQUES • Transformation One: Only Perfection After the removal of the limiter, a bright light of chakra burst from the user. The user undergoes an appearance change, usually getting silver hair and blood red eyes as the main changes. The transformation also goes further into the body, as they turn into handsome young men, or beautiful young women who are seemingly irresistable. Each transformations appearance varies from user to user.
The user also gets improved instincts, speed, and strength, caused from the demon blood of Kamigawa. Naturally a small dark aura could be felt from them.
Not only do they undergo an appearance change and change in powers, but they also undergo a personality change. Most personalities of this transformation are prideful, cold and cool. But some have proven to be rather different than the rest. This is the easiest transformation to control.
[Abilities] • [Demonic Release] - The User gets a +1/2 increase in Perception, Strength and Speed while in this form. • [Self Control] - The user is able to control their actions, being able not to kill if they don't have too. They also have the ability to recognize who is on their side. • [Chakra Restoration] - After the removal of a limiter, the user is refunded 15% of their current chakra remaining. • [Dark Scent] - Others around them can sense a small dark energy surrouding the user.
CLAN TECHNIQUES • Heaven Seal The Heaven Seal appears to resemble the Sharingan, three tomoe in a circle. When it is activated it spreads flame-like markings across the user's body. When the user enters level two their skin will darken to a grey tone and their hair will elongate. They will grow claws and nails as well as large, webbed, hand-like wings upon their back. They are able to effectively glide with these wings.
[Abilities] • 25% Chakra Increase • 20% Elemental Chakra reduction - Level Two- • 25% Elemental Chakra reduction
• Earth Seal The Earth mark consists of three slightly curved lines, which spread in a rip-like pattern.When the first level is activates, the seals expands and lines spread all over the user's body in contorting and parallel lines. When the second level of the seal is active, the user takes on a dinosaur-like appearance complete with a tail. Several large bones also protrude from his darkened skin.
• Jirōbō Seal The Jirobo Curse mark is three arrows pointing away fromeach other. The pattern that spreads during its first state are like chains of triangular arrows. When the second level of the seal is active, the user's skin turns maroon, their hair grows longer, and they also grows warts on their forehead and shoulders. The user will most greatly resembles an ogre in this form.
• Kidōmaru Seal Kidōmaru's cursed seal is formed like a hook (placed with the sharp end down) with two tags at the end of the upper part. When the second level of this seal is active, the user's skin turns deep red, their hair grows longer and turns a light greyish colour, and they grows horns on their forehead and their elbows. They becomes more spider-like, almost oni-like in appearance in this form.
• Sakon and Ukon Sakon and Ukon's Curse Seal which consists of three circular dots placed like a triangular shape. When the second level of their seals are active, they resemble goblins with red skin, longer hair, a single horn, and can grow black armor from their bodies.
• Tayuya Seal Tayuya's cursed seal consists of three hooks. When the second level of the seal is active,the user's hair grows longer, they grows five oddly-placed horns on their head, slightly resembling a crown, and their skin turns dark brown. The horns grow when they exert themselves.
You don't start with Justus that aren't C ranked and below Bloodline and Clan.
Remove ALL of your passive that you got from anything other than clan passives, bloodline passives and personal passives.
You get one personal passive since you have both bloodline and clan. And you must elaborate on said passive.
There were more things, but just fix them and then I'll see the others.
If I may ask, could you message me, I have questions to help make my profile better, if you don't mind. Thank you.
Fix the changes then i'll pm you.
Fixed it. It should be above. Also, what is a personal attribute?
Go to other profiles for a Personal Attribute reference and go read up on the systems.
Remove "those with higher stats" from fears
REmove tai/buki styles.
Hold on, I thought we had to put the styles we wanted down as our character's abilities. We have to earn them? I don't mind training in them but what about my weapons for those styles? Am I allowed to keep them? I just thought we choose the styles we want if you want to use Tai, nin, etc.
