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 Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2013 2:08 am
And thus we commence the post-moving of shame... I still can't believe I didn't see the human block. Ehfbfiehfndidjfksndl
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Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2013 3:56 am
*doesn't know what to do.... sitting duck style* Ducky-cat :3*
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Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2013 10:34 am
Woo! Mission accomplished! Deleting time.
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Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2013 3:20 pm
Sorry if I'm going a bit fast @ ~ # Liam's personality is something new for me...and he is fairly excitable so I kinda write like...ya know > ///// > if I'm going a bit fast please tell me > x <
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Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2013 3:35 pm
Haha, it's fine to me! If I think it's going too fast I'll be sure to tell you, but I'm fine now. I've never roleplayed with someone who does anything other than past tense, so it's odd to read your posts, but I like it!
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Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2013 3:43 pm
-doesn't want to be over bearing- @ ~ # -flails- Just tell me right away! So I can adjust > x <
I generally try to write in third person > x < I think that's present tense- I know First Person is.... -thinks-
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Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2013 3:46 pm
I shall do my best! I'm used to people getting snippy if I do say something, so we'll work it out. xD
You're writing in third person, future tense right now.
"he would peer in" - that's future tense
"he peers in" - that's present and I actually despise it, pleeeeeeeeease don't write in present! gonk
"he peered in" - that's past tense
Saying "I" instead of "he" would be first person. I'm sorry, I'm an English major, so all this stuff is just burned into my brain, haha. I always write third person, past tense, anything else for me is just weird.
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Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2013 4:03 pm
-had literally no idea he was doing that-
It's not bad is it? > x <
Wait, what person am I writing in then? ( Was answered ) D: AM I BREAKING THE FOURTH WALL?! AHHHH XD
I don't like writing in present tense....it seems awkward if I do....same with first person.
Its fine, I'm learning something new- kinda. Well like being reminded XD
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Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2013 4:08 pm
Nope, it's not bad! xD Like I said, the only thing that gets me is present tense. It makes me want to punch babies and kick puppies all at the same time.
BAHAHAHAHA. No fourth wall breaking here, there's no Kool-Aid dude around.
Yeah, I don't like present tense or first person either, it just doesn't seem right to write in.
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Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2013 4:13 pm
Thank goodness > x < I don't wanna make anyone want to.... "Kick puppies and babies at the same time" every time they read a sentence XD
> o > I did a character who tended to break the fourth wall, funniest character without a doubt. xP
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Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2013 4:23 pm
xD No, if you did, I'd have told you before running away.
I love those! I have one, I rarely use him, but he's just hilarious. They do tend to be funny, I think.
I hope I'm giving you enough to work with! I feel like they're shorter. xP
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Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2013 4:26 pm
LOL xD Running away XD
Agreed, Deadpool is a really good example of a crazy nut case fourth wall breaker xP
Huh? Lol if you weren't I'd only be able to give a paragraph or two- I tend to try and reflect what people give me as compared to trying to write more or less. Ya know, a mirror writer I think is what they call them?
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Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2013 4:28 pm
Deadpool is amazing. >> I love him.
Ah, I see! I do the same, only sometimes it's just impossible for me to stretch out a post to match without really just throwing in tons of filler and fluff and then it's like, "that's not good writing, you idiot."
xD
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Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2013 4:34 pm
I do too xP I want that game he has, cause it looks good.
I put filler in with new personalities and characters....ya know to flesh them out a little bit so I get a better feel, but I see what your getting at > x <
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Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2013 4:42 pm
Yeah, sometimes I feel like I'm just being cheap, haha. So I try not to babble on when it's totally unnecessary. Fleshing them out is one thing, but just stretching to make a post bigger...nah.
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