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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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 Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2012 2:12 pm
haseo: I would've liked to have seen more 4 Winds skills being used in your sample, but I guess it'll do. Approved.
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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2012 2:26 pm
Fenrir Graveheart haseo: I would've liked to have seen more 4 Winds skills being used in your sample, but I guess it'll do. Approved. I described the overall ability although thanks though!
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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2012 4:09 pm
Rpc Name: Maxine Killingsworth
Level: 1
Style applied for: Bloody Razor
What you know about the style: This style uses the user’s own blood as their weapon or a healing aid. The blood used for this style cannot be used by anyone, but the actual owner of the blood, due to the unique Ki within each drop. This style cannot be used recklessly or else the user could die from blood lose if not treated immediately. Also with each pint of blood used, the user becomes weaker. The final stage of this style requires the user to undergo a change. This change gives the user vampire-like characters like blood cravings, enlargement of canines, better night vision, and visual sensitivity to sunlight.
Rp Sample:
They have been fighting for what 3 minutes and both fighters were already growing tired, but neither wanted to be the first to fall. So far Max had only been dodging her opponent’s attacks hoping to either find a weakness or to tire him out. Looking at the state she was in, she could say that her plan kinda backfired on her a bit. A few times during their fight, Max had failed to notice attacks from her opponent. Thankfully, the most of the wounds she had received were minor one, but one attack did manage to slice her stomach up pretty good. As she waited for her opponent to make his next move, Max placed right hand against her open wound, coating it in the red liquid, and then moved it in a slashing motion towards her opponent. Several crescent shipped blades shot out towards him, but only a few managed to actually cut him. Max followed up with a barbed blood trap, which managed to puncture his shoulder and throw him back a couple of feet. She allowed him a few moments to get himself up, because she really didn’t want this game to end just. The end of her lips curved up into a small smirk.
“Come on Danny. Is that the best you could do,” she taunted in her slightly-Irish accented voice. As Danny struggled to his feet, Max slowly removed her bloodied gloves and them into one of her deep pockets. Her arms were already cut by Danny’s previous attacks so she didn’t have to worry about any incisions herself. Max held out her right arm and allowed her Ki to help her grow a blood wing, then brought her arm back in to flex her hand. Once Danny was up on his feet, she ran full speed towards him with her blade ready to slice him up. When she was within arms of Danny, Max thrust the wing towards Danny’s chest. Before her blade managed to touch him, Danny uppercut her in her wounded stomach causing her to stop her attack and instead thrust kicked Dandy in the chest to get him away from her. Max clutched her stomach try to lessen the pain, but it didn’t really work. She could feel herself weakening due to her blood lose and found that she could even move her arm. “This game has to end now,” she muttered sadly as she condensed the blood she had drawn from her wound, in her hand and waited. Max continued to hold her stomach in pain as Danny made his way closer to her. Once he was about a foot away from her, Max shot the blood bullet up at him and successfully hit his pressure point that laid at the underside of his jaw towards his right ear. The hit knock him unconscious and caused him to fall backwards. Max carefully crawled over to Danny head and check for a pulse. After finding one, Max relaxed and used Lifeforce Repression to stop the blood flow out of her stomach wound. “Good fight, Danny. Good fight. You defiantly tuckered me out this time,” she said as she let herself fall to the dirt ground behind her, enjoying the feel of the sun on her face.
Moves used:
Lifeforce Repression, Blood Bullet, Bloody Wings, Barbed Blood Trap, and Blood Blades
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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2012 4:27 pm
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2012 8:04 pm
Rpc Name: Colette Devereaux
Level: 1
Style applied for: Hell's Grasp
What you know about the style: I've played a few fire-users before, but there are a few additional points at which I'd like to derive her power from.
The application of using fire is the same as you have listed-- much like a glove, where the energy or ki flows through the body and exits through chakra points, and the actively-supplied, constant current of energy gives fuel to the kindling flame. It is separated from the skin by only a thin margin, so that it doesn't injure her in its use.
However, Colette has two ways of supplying that ki to be able to make fire.
The first is concentration-- which I see you have noted. By an extended amount of training and application of the composition and heat of flame, one can understand how to duplicate such immense high temperatures. Concentration makes the fire hotter and more potent, but is not as forceful and can't be propelled into farther distances. In layman's terms, what it lacks in range and physical damage, it gains in longer-lasting damage.
The second is adrenaline. Fire is a destructive element, and when it catches, there is little that can be done to stop it. Matching Colette's sadistic tendencies, fire also has some room to be cultured here. Emotional outbursts matched by physical ones are often the result of immense frustration, anger, or fear, including the ultimate will to survive. While concentration focuses on the potency of the flame, adrenaline harbors the destructive power of flame.
Concentration creates high-temperature, long-lasting attacks at a short range, but lack the speed one gains from adrenaline. Adrenaline makes for quick, hard-hitting moves that can transfer to long range, but lack the sort of intensity that concentration gives it.
But the goal is for these two applications to be used in tandem, and to find balance between them. Fire-users with too much adrenaline and without the proper training can end up conjuring more fire than they can control. And if they've missed the primary functions of the element and don't practice concentration, the exertion of fire could make them hurt themselves in the process.
Fire can be used in very practical applications, such as making a campfire, kindling a flame as a torch for light, or melting an ore to forge swords. It also is very powerful in battle-- feeding off of emotions accentuated by punches and kicks. It is also to be noted that once the flame is no longer kindled by the user's ki, it will die if it cannot find its own fuel, or has the potential to spread if it finds enough to feed off of.
Rp Sample:
Is this necessary, since the same thing was practically already approved by Jwalker? I only submitted the application again for consistency with the new character.
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2012 8:38 pm
As your representative, I will try and help you out on this. In it's current state, I don't think I can approve this without being chewed out (again) by the other crew. Normally I won't even bother with applications but Fenrir, the captain of our guild and supervisor of this particular thread is out doing educational stuff for awhile, I am sure he won't mind I take over as long as I make good decisions. With that said, due to me being slightly to lenient on the applications last time, I can't accept in it's current state. However, this is for your benefit as I don't want anymore confusion for you to deal with. Here is what needs to be done. First, I understand that you have RP'ed as a fire user before. If it were me, I would outright accept it as it is due to your past experience, but if you could edit your description to reflect more on what the Hell's Grasp style is more about, such as certain training methods, and skills, then that would be greatly appreciated. Lastly, I know I said that I was going to let you get away with no RP sample, unfortunately due to my screw up that has changed. I would respectfully request that you make a fresh new RP sample detailing the use of the Hell's Grasp style. However, I do not want to be to pushy, so I will be lenient in the fact that if you make a rather short RP sample, I won't bash an eyelash as long as that sample showed me you can use the style.
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2012 8:49 pm
Do the points I made about concentration not adequately capture the effects of the "Hell's Grasp" abilities that are listed? I added adrenaline as a source to further expand on how it can become more fearsome-- concentration alone poses the inclination that fire can be controlled and contained, which is an attribute completely foreign to fire.
Thus, I suggested the duality of usage-- concentration, which gives higher temperatures and suits more of the long-lasting damage moves. And then adrenaline, which is normal in any battle, to use in long-range or quick moves.
And each has their own strengths and weaknesses-- concentration lacks the aggression of adrenaline, and adrenaline lacks the precision or composure of concentration.
Is this acceptable? I want to make sure I'm fully on the right track before I submit an rp sample.
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2012 9:00 pm
Shackled Servant Do the points I made about concentration not adequately capture the effects of the "Hell's Grasp" abilities that are listed? I added adrenaline as a source to further expand on how it can become more fearsome-- concentration alone poses the inclination that fire can be controlled and contained, which is an attribute completely foreign to fire.
Thus, I suggested the duality of usage-- concentration, which gives higher temperatures and suits more of the long-lasting damage moves. And then adrenaline, which is normal in any battle, to use in long-range or quick moves.
And each has their own strengths and weaknesses-- concentration lacks the aggression of adrenaline, and adrenaline lacks the precision or composure of concentration.
Is this acceptable? I want to make sure I'm fully on the right track before I submit an rp sample. Maybe it is just the way you worded it that I was a bit iffy about, but re-reading it allot of what you described is indeed the training methods required to use the Hell's Grasp style. But if you can possibly add some skills from the style in that description, such as, "The style can execute a variety of skills such as engulfing your fists in fire, laying carefully laid traps, and even extremely powerful techniques such as Hell's True Grasp which could potentially lay waste to large chunks of the island". Something like that would be what were particularly looking for..a good understand of the style's weaknesses would be preferred as well.
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 4:24 pm
Rpc Name:
Roxanne M. DelGotti
Level:
1
Style applied for:
Four Winds
What you know about the style: There are four winds:
East, North, South, and West. The mastery of this main style by a character means mastering these winds and being able to manipulate them -- or like, it means Roxanne can harness their power. Maybe manipulate is the wrong word.
When she's first starting out, she'll have to meditate a lot (at high altitude, too) and simply feel the winds while being still. Become aware of them, that sort of thing. Eventually, she'll begin the harnessing of the winds' powers.
The next stage starts at Hirakiri cliff. Roxanne will be pretty good with wind and able to succeed in blunt, but forceful, damage. This is the part where she jumps off the cliff and sees if she can save herself before she hits the floor.
Then, at stage 3, Roxanne will have to fly up above the clouds and meditate there. In the fourth stage, she must learn to make a tornado (it is duly noted that creating one is very draining and dangerous, and can possibly kill her).
Finally, stage five. Roxanne must 'find the first breath'; which will be fun.
Rp Sample:
As her opponent came at her, Roxanne forced the wind to rush before her in the split second she had before impact. The gust pushed her back roughly, but she dodged his attack successfully by using it. He was agile beyond what she'd witnessed in the training area and seemed not to take notice of her dodge; again, he came at her with his scythe, moving swiftly over the floor. Roxanne attempted another push, this one aimed at her opponent, but he was too fast.
The blade of the scythe came down and made a clean, red gash over the left side of Roxanne's chest and shoulder. Luckily, she moved in time so that the cut was not a deep one; luckily, she moved in time so the scythe had not wedged itself between her collarbone and neck.
With a yelp, Roxanne hit the floor and rolled, harnessing the wind so as to move quickly to one side before pushing herself under the man's legs and tumbling up into a fighting stance. The man turned on his heels swiftly, and from his belt he grasped and unleashed a flurry of throwing knives. Stumbling very slightly and falling a step back, Roxanne held each one in her focus and casted them away with quick currents of wind.
Finally, Roxanne had a moment's space to channel her Ki. She could feel it build up in her abdomen. As her opponent once again took a firm grasp of his scythe, he ran at her. The air distilled around her, Roxanne uses the Four Winds' Burst, releasing a forceful gust of wind and blowing her opponent back several feet.
While he staggered back, she moved quickly and broke into a run towards him. Closing the space in-between them quickly, Roxanne brought back her fist before upper-cutting her opponent and sending him flying with the force of Dust Devil. He landed, flat on his back, several feet away.
Roxanne breathed a sigh of relief, stumbling back a few steps and running her hands back through her hair.
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 8:15 pm
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2012 12:06 pm
Rpc Name: Raniero Russo
Level: 1
Style applied for: Kinetic Weaponry
What you know about the style: EVERYTHING No, but seriously, as the name states Kinetic Weaponry allows the user to create weapons from the Ki. This makes it a great style for any weapon user as they can conjure weapons out of thin air. To gain any weapon via this style they have to;
A. Be within the Level Limits
B. the user has to conjure it in a dream, then meditate, then focus their energy to gain access to the weapon.
Rp Sample: [Coming soon...]
[ Not finished, I had to leave before I could finish the sample]
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2012 8:05 pm
Rpc Name: Yun Sung
Level: 1
Style applied for:
What you know about the style: The Lunar Dance gene allows users to use the energies released by the moon in order to amplify the attacks of their weapons and martial art strikes using light. This lights is able to cause physical damage and can even cut through flesh if perfected.
While it can be used during the daytime, it is amplified during the night when the moon is out. Its main weakness is that it is less powerful during the day.
Rp Sample:
A clear night outside in the campus courtyard. A single solitary figure sits, silently, calm and collected, meditating as the moon shown over him. It was Yun Sung, one of the more "calmer" students at the academy. At least, this time he was, since Yang wasn't out yet. Only a few days ago, he agreed to an experiment that, which he was told, would help him conquer his inner demon. The Gene-X program. During the days leading up to now, Yun was discovering his power, the power over lunar energies, the power of the moon. It was why he was meditating right now.
However, it wasn't only the fact that the night time would amplify his techniques for why he was meditating at this time. The silence of the night, the sound of the pond in the center of the courtyard, the fishing swimming in it, and of course, no loud students to interupt him. He breathed in and began to focus his ki into his fists, which he held up at chest level. He could feel the energy pulsing through his body and out of his hands, as a white light began to appear infront of them. Pulling back his right fist, he thrusted it forward, watching the ball of solidified light launch forward. It traveled around two feet before disapearing into nothingness.
Yun began to thrust his left fist out when the light was darkened. A lone cloud had moved infront of the full moon. Turning his head, he saw the ball of light in front of his left fist. It had grown smaller than before. It made sense, whenever the moon was not out or was not full and unleashing its full potential, then neither would Yun. He depended on the moon's blessing to unleash his full strength. The cloud made its way by and the light returned to its normal size. Yun smiled, and returned to meditating, channeling his ki and working on complete control over it.
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2012 8:10 pm
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