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Royal Taorito Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 12:19 pm
Hm... Hey, Mana, I have a question concerning a grammatical thing in your race's intro paragraph:
"The year is thirteen hundred and sixty-three. A small village disappears from the northern section of Italy. A mystery which had been labeled unexplained by all whom had passed by the unknown village. One day however... Smoke rose from the village and from this smoke."
Is that supposed to say 'disappears' or 'appears'? Because 'disappears' doesn't make sense with the rest of it. xD
Also, that last sentence I have above is an incomplete thought. xD
Just curious because it bugged me when I read it. Other than that, the race sounds interesting. :3
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 6:43 pm
Tonight is the night we become great!The Stars will show us the way! I was just writing something for the beginning. For the most part, I can tell you... Their origin isn't complete.
For the most part, this village pretty much disappeared. However... One day there was smoke coming from the area, which it had been, and with this smoke the village had appeared once more. Like I said, revise. xD Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away!
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Royal Taorito Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:15 pm
Ok. xD It was just bugging me. :3
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:35 pm
Tonight is the night we become great!The Stars will show us the way! Yeah... My work always gets looked over once I finish it. I'm no where close to finishing it, for the most part. God. xD Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away!
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:55 pm
xd The Abeo are close to completion. Alot of their powers, and what you can do with them, is entirely based on the intelligence and creativity of the Abeo user.
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:25 pm
Tonight is the night we become great!The Stars will show us the way! Well then... It's a good thing all my creativity is going to my Sangue then. s**t could hit the fan. xD
Then I assume we'll have two slots, for OCs, in which case I've already got two OCs. xD Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away!
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:32 pm
lol That's one thing I wasn't sure about. Limit of two or three characters? Cause really, I'll probably just stick with Zaine Kairnheart, the Abeo Imperator and the God-Emperor of Greece, leaving other positions open. Grogan is going to take over the Shinigami, possibly with Kane.
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:44 pm
Tonight is the night we become great!The Stars will show us the way! Three would be preferable for a few people, I know. We'd have to keep a rank balance system though.
Granted... I don't see Resshin as a low power being though... I mean... Probably a B at her worst. Gah. Fawk. The downsides are more prevalent. Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away!
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:45 pm
I commonly rp with multiple characters, and I need to use a 'pair' character or something here too because I'm not getting too much practice with that style...
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:49 pm
So....3? xd
Should we just get rid of the stat system?
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:51 pm
Tonight is the night we become great!The Stars will show us the way! Nah, man. Otherwise then we go back to pointless ranks. Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away!
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:54 pm
Mana_ecl Zetsuya Tonight is the night we become great!The Stars will show us the way! Nah, man. Otherwise then we go back to pointless ranks. Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away! Yes man. We just have to be more observant on profiles.
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:57 pm
Tonight is the night we become great!The Stars will show us the way! I'm just saying... We've all seen how much of a point there was to an S rank compared to a B rank. Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away!
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:59 pm
I'm just saying if we use the stat system, then the leaders will be replaced too soon because they're too busy doing Leader things to train. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:59 pm
I see arguments for both. When it comes to Strength, to Reiatsu and rank, most people don't even play to it. I see too many people who claim to be, say, C-rank who will take on an S and expect to beat some a**. As far as I'm concerned, if you are over a rank lower than the other person, you shouldn't be able to move when they release their spiritual pressure. But in the RP, how do we decide how much Reiatsu to keep?
How about we get rid of the other stats and leave Reiatsu? I'm neutral in this, but I'm trying to please everyone here xd
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