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Well, an awkward turn of events has given me more spare time in general: I lost my job. My bosses sold the store, so all the staff gotta go. Oh well, I get a good reference, a wealth of snack foods, and I have another seasonal job in a flower store I'm already signed up for. Time to get cracking.

Status: In progress.

Cloud, Aerith and Tifa decided they would fight the monster while the others were to save the girl. The monster, which resembled a massive sea serpent had launched three large bubles from it's mouth and they were heading straight for the party of three. Cloud had easily dodged it, but it had engulfed both Tifa and Aerith, they struggled to get out but nothing they did seemed to work, to top it off the bubble was draining their energy slowly. Cloud knew it was up to him to free them, but he didn't have time as the monster was now attacking him. Cloud raised both arms over his head, a green light swirled around him and ending as a ball of lightning in his outstretched hands. He launched it towards the monster. It let out an extremly loud roar, the blast had made a large gash down it's right side, but it wasn;t enough to stop him. To continue his attack, Cloud jumped on the monster's back, took out his sword, stabbed it into the monster's flesh, held onto it as tight as he could then ran. It made an large, fairly deep gash down it's back, Cloud was winning, or so he thought. Just as Cloud was about to jump off the monster flicked it's tail and Cloud went flying. He turned in the air, then his right side slammed into the ground near Tifa and Aerith who were still engulfed in the bubbles. His whole right side seathed with pain, his sword had fell in the water because he had let go of it as he was flying throught the air and he was coughing up blood. To make matters worse, the monster was advancing to finish him off. Cloud knew that he had to free Tifa and Aerith, but how? Bam! Then it hit him, he had bought a special type of potion that would help in this situation. He stood up, in pain, grabbed two bottles with his left hand and threw them at the bubbles. They shattered and a greyish liquid oozed over the bubbles, in seconds they had evaporated. Tifa and Aerith jumped out, weak, but furious at the monster. Aerith was the first to make a move, a golden light circled around her, then it moved on to Cloud and Tifa, it had healed them a fair bit. Now it was Tifa's turn, she summoned a massive ball of lightning and launched it at the gash in the monster's back that Cloud had made. Cloud and Aerith both made a move as the monsters was roaring in pain. Cloud made a break for his sword and Aerith healed everyone once again, now they were close to full strength. Cloud grabbed his sword and jumped in the air, just as Tifa was summoning another lightning bolt, it hit Cloud sword, and for a few seconds it had the power of lightning, Cloud took advantage of this, he rammed it into the gash in the monsters back and ran down it again. This time, the monster was in to much pain to launch Cloud in the air. Cloud jumped into the water and Tifa summoned the final blow, it was a lightning bolt, once again, but this time it was at least 3 times larger and pulsing with power, Tifa could barely control it. Somehow she had launched it at the gash in the monster's back, it let out a 'glass-breaking' screech, and the party of three watched in horror as the monster 'exploded'. A purplish blood gushed out of it's eyes, mouth , gills and the gash in it's back. Then it's body parts began to fall of and splash in the water, first it's tail, then it's gills, then it's dorsal fin, and finally, it's long slithery body plumetted into the water. With an enormous splash that soaked the group, it was all over. They had defeated the monster, but what of the girl, Cloud looked over to where Barret, Red, and Yuffie had brought the girl, sadness flushed over him as he saw that the girl wasn't moving, she might be dead, but then his hopes went up a little when he heard her cough, he automatically knew that she had to much water in her lungs, he ran over to her and oushed the other's away. "what'r ya.." Cloud interupted Barret, "I'm saving her life."
He pinched her nose, took a deep breath, the blew into her mouth, he did this until the girl made a moaning noise, then slowly regained consciousness.

I regret to inform I won't be able to do much work for some time. I'm gettin KH2!!!! -Nerdgasmic-

xd You and all my crazy anime friends. And no worries on the job thing, found a way to make more money working less days with the flower shop, I start this weekend. Also, not working at Gateway saves me about sixty bucks a month on a bus pass.

I know, but Cloud doesn't have time as he is fighting the monster. I like my way of him getting his a** kicked then it hits him that he could have freed them any time.

Also, drunken master i am so so so sorry this is taking so long... i just send alchem derouge a message asking him if he is almost complete the edit job on your first writing. after that i can either send it to my last editor, or if she is busy (i know her offline) then i can simply send it straight to you.

anatares, spend that extra 60$ a month on a nice mint copy of KH2. then spend the next 60$ a month on AC, coming out on the 25th.

and good job return of say! best game ever....

Okay, Naruto 4ever... this is going to sound harsh, but i need you to try harder. i am afraid your writing is rather weak, and it takes me and my editors a lot of work to do something to your piece. i see a lot of promise in your writing, but it needs a lot of work. you need to describe somethings more, and just leave some things out. keep trying, i am very grateful for you help, but you could use some more experience.

I guess I could try to expand on certain situations some more. And you are right, I like writing stories but havn't had much experience.