I love your character concept for Polly dragonhealer, she (he) is just so vivid. The idea of being a female forced into a male role is really applicable to the world today and it is such a sensitive topic as well. You handle it so perfectly. I doubt any of us could handle such controversial characters with quite as much grace. Bravo.
That said.. Isa-sama, allow me to say that I love how you have deepened the overall plot with Sierra's plan to overthrow the staff. It really creates a focal point that perhaps will unite our troubled and extremely different characters.
Jokerman-EXE, your posts are always flowing and every so often, your character will say or think something that is just so.. Hang on, let me find an example...
Jokerman-EXE
Remember this: that's ten seconds of freedom and power that I, with everything I possess and everything I am capable of, will never have. And with that in mind, you should continue to move forward, and not waste your time on the ground, like the coach keeps shouting at you. You can prove him wrong."
Such a beautiful passage. You are always in character, always. For that, you get a mental high five. ^ ^
Shauna and Elaine, you know (at least you should know) that I am in awe of your writing. I am thoroughly enjoying both RP's that we are in together. Thank you Elaine for starting them and breathing them life with your expectations. You truly bring out the best in us. And thank you Shauna for kicking Elaine in the behind one day and holding her up the next. We truly would not have this amazing of an RP without you.
((I'm not really sure why I felt the need to say all of this, but I did. Oh, and Elliptic Sin, as soon as I can read more of your writing, I'll do the same for you.))
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