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 Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2011 4:53 pm
Character: Akura Tatsuka
Technique Name: Laser Circus: Blade Extention
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ranton
Description: After studying the art of Ranton, Akura managed to find a way to use the Laser Circus in a more descrite way. By placing ranton chakra on the weapon Akura then forces the chakra to extend in a single rod, just like the normal technique. The only diference is that in this version of the jutsu smaller rods can be made from the initial one, making this version of the jutsu much deadlier, and more effective. The only drawback of this use is that the user cannot move the blade, or the jutsu is interupted. The user must pay a C rank worth of chakra for every three rods made.
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2011 5:00 pm
Mephis~ I'm gonna let Q look at this one. Yer OPd strength is outta my league.
Akura~ I'll accept.
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2011 8:46 pm
Mephis Inferni
Character: Shi Otome
Technique Name: Shoryuken
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Description: A powerful spinning uppercut used to demolish her foes. First Shi will bend low and then fire up with her left fist, attempting to drive it into the chin of her opponent. This is the start of a combination technique. If it hits, the next technique used will hit as well.
Character: Shi Otome
Technique Name: Agiel
Rank: Variable
Type: Weapon
Description: A simple, red leather rod in design. It is about the length of the average forearm and completely blunt. In the hands of the unskilled, it's a useless waste of good leather. But in the hands of an accomplished medical shinobi, it can be a deadly weapon. Holding it in ones hand causes pain similar to the D Rank ability. The Agiel is generally used as a last resort in combat, due to the difficulty in wielding it...as such, it is more of a torture device.
D - With just the slightest touch, it causes a shooting pain that sends a mix between a burning and tingling sensation through the nerves of the touched location. The pain is so great that extended and prolonged exposure can cause temporary lapses in sanity. Bruises are a commonplace.
C - Pressing a bit harder, the Agiel can now cause thick welts and cuts...depending purely on the angle she presses the Agiel against the skin.
B - The cuts are now considerably deeper, causing considerable blood loss. If used in the right location, death is a possibility.
A - The Agiel is now able to break bone if the body is struck with any bit of force beyond a simple prod. Even the strongest of bones buckle beneath the power of the weapon.
S - With careful precision, the Agiel is able to cause ruptures in internal organs by placing the tip above the organ and then twisting it against the skin. It can cause hemorrhaging of the brain, even instant death if used on the heart. Accuracy is key in the use of this skill, making it virtually useless in combat.
Alright Qastor, take a look and pass thine judgement.
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Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 12:47 am
Character: Minoru Ibuki
Technique Name: Satetsu Resura (Iron sand: Bone Crusher)
Rank: Variable
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: Iron sand
Description: A Bukijutsu style utilizing the user’s hand to hand combat abilities. Using Minoru’s kekkei genkai, the user would wrap his arms and/or legs with Iron sand that would compress and solidify creating a rough surfaced gauntlet/bracer, giving the user’s punch / kick more destructive power. And because it is made with Iron, electricity could easily be conducted to it that would enhance the capabilities of the attack.
Satetsu Rasura Mastery (when the technique is active)
C = User gains +1 Strength but loses -1 speed
B = User gains +2 Strength but loses -1 speed
A = User gains +2 Strength
Rank:B Satetsu Rasura Punch – (Requires having any level of Satetsu Rasura) The user will engulf his hand with Iron sand and sends a straight forward punch to his target dealing a bone crushing amount of damage when hit.
Rank:B Satetsu Rasura Kick – (Requires having any level of Satetsu Rasura) The user will create a bracer from iron sand on his ankles that would increase the pressure of the user’s his kick.
Rank:A Satetsu Rasura: Pulse Strike – (Requires having any level of Satetsu Rasura) The user attacks his opponent with either his feet or fists. When the attack connects even the slightest, the gauntlet/bracer would emit a sudden powerful lightning shock that would momentarily daze the target.
Character: Minoru Ibuki
Technique Name: Satetsu Kasoku Kuchu (Iron sand: Aerial accelerate)
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Iron sand
Description: While airborne, the user will quickly generate a small amount of Iron sand on the user’s feet just enough to give the user a platform to step on that would either increase the height of his jump or alter his direction mid-air. This technique could also be used to break the user’s fall
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Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 2:11 am
I'ma have Qastor look at that first one, it looks like three techs in one to me...
But that last one is good, accepted.
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Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 10:55 am
Mephis Inferni Mephis Inferni
Character: Shi Otome
Technique Name: Shoryuken
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Description: A powerful spinning uppercut used to demolish her foes. First Shi will bend low and then fire up with her left fist, attempting to drive it into the chin of her opponent. This is the start of a combination technique. If it hits, the next technique used will hit as well.
Character: Shi Otome
Technique Name: Agiel
Rank: Variable
Type: Weapon
Description: A simple, red leather rod in design. It is about the length of the average forearm and completely blunt. In the hands of the unskilled, it's a useless waste of good leather. But in the hands of an accomplished medical shinobi, it can be a deadly weapon. Holding it in ones hand causes pain similar to the D Rank ability. The Agiel is generally used as a last resort in combat, due to the difficulty in wielding it...as such, it is more of a torture device.
D - With just the slightest touch, it causes a shooting pain that sends a mix between a burning and tingling sensation through the nerves of the touched location. The pain is so great that extended and prolonged exposure can cause temporary lapses in sanity. Bruises are a commonplace.
C - Pressing a bit harder, the Agiel can now cause thick welts and cuts...depending purely on the angle she presses the Agiel against the skin.
B - The cuts are now considerably deeper, causing considerable blood loss. If used in the right location, death is a possibility.
A - The Agiel is now able to break bone if the body is struck with any bit of force beyond a simple prod. Even the strongest of bones buckle beneath the power of the weapon.
S - With careful precision, the Agiel is able to cause ruptures in internal organs by placing the tip above the organ and then twisting it against the skin. It can cause hemorrhaging of the brain, even instant death if used on the heart. Accuracy is key in the use of this skill, making it virtually useless in combat.
Alright Qastor, take a look and pass thine judgement. Shoryuken... Im onto you Ryu..... you must limit the combo to three hits though and it cant lead to something fatal like the front lotus or something. Both accepted, just watch it.
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Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 10:56 am
Meh, it was going to originally lead into the Shishi Rendan...buuuuuuut....I can adjust biggrin
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Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 10:57 am
MeeDLe FinGer
Character: Minoru Ibuki
Technique Name: Satetsu Resura (Iron sand: Bone Crusher)
Rank: Variable
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: Iron sand
Description: A Bukijutsu style utilizing the user’s hand to hand combat abilities. Using Minoru’s kekkei genkai, the user would wrap his arms and/or legs with Iron sand that would compress and solidify creating a rough surfaced gauntlet/bracer, giving the user’s punch / kick more destructive power. And because it is made with Iron, electricity could easily be conducted to it that would enhance the capabilities of the attack.
Satetsu Rasura Mastery (when the technique is active)
C = User gains +1 Strength but loses -1 speed
B = User gains +2 Strength but loses -1 speed
A = User gains +2 Strength
Rank:B Satetsu Rasura Punch – (Requires having any level of Satetsu Rasura) The user will engulf his hand with Iron sand and sends a straight forward punch to his target dealing a bone crushing amount of damage when hit.
Rank:B Satetsu Rasura Kick – (Requires having any level of Satetsu Rasura) The user will create a bracer from iron sand on his ankles that would increase the pressure of the user’s his kick.
Rank:A Satetsu Rasura: Pulse Strike – (Requires having any level of Satetsu Rasura) The user attacks his opponent with either his feet or fists. When the attack connects even the slightest, the gauntlet/bracer would emit a sudden powerful lightning shock that would momentarily daze the target.
Character: Minoru Ibuki
Technique Name: Satetsu Kasoku Kuchu (Iron sand: Aerial accelerate)
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Iron sand
Description: While airborne, the user will quickly generate a small amount of Iron sand on the user’s feet just enough to give the user a platform to step on that would either increase the height of his jump or alter his direction mid-air. This technique could also be used to break the user’s fall
If you give Minoru Nanabi you realize you wont have Iron Sand anymore or use of any sand techniques on the Doton List without carrying some sand. I will actually deny both of these if you are switching, you can make better customs with Nanabi.
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Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 9:51 pm
Character: Hex Alabaster
Technique Name: Hell's Vision
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Description: This simple genjutsu allows Hex to manipulate the vision of the victim to see a motion trail, a blurry vision, or have their eyesight taken up by the view that the victim had when the jutsu was cast.
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Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2011 12:03 am
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Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2011 11:41 pm
Character:
Baku Neirfair
Technique Name:
Gold Secret Technique: The Celestial Armada
Rank:
S
Type:
Kugutsu
Element:
N/A
Description:
Baku forms the needed handseals and summons a massive scroll. The user can use this to seal away two of his puppets for the remainder of the battle to summon a certain puppet. This may be only done once per battle, and lasts ten posts. When this puppets are summoned via The Celestial Armada, they gain a special property.
Aries:
A wooden puppet, with its legs covered in iron plating, its ram shaped horns are made from obsidian. This puppet is made to look directly like a ram, from its tail to the tip of its nose.
Aries is summoned with Obsidian horns, nearly un-break via chakra. Provides extra protection from fire jutsu as well, being volcanic in nature. Its draw back, is horns make it harder to change direction during charge, due to their weight.
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Leo:
This puppet is covered in thick leather hide, making it look black, its mane is made from thousands of needles, covered in white paint. It has for legs, each one covered in steel plates covering each of its joins.
Leo will gain the ability to summon Kunai's with explosive tags, with his mouth cannon. its tail is also a sharp sword, to match its paws which contain knives. Draw back, is Leo can only launch six kunai/tags, Baku will then before to drop his control over Leo and use the justu, "Reload" Now because it isnt being un-summoned it takes two posts to reload.
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Virgo:
This puppet is made to look like a female, its fake hair blond, going down to its shoulders. It wears a grey long jacket, covering its black t-shirt, and steel plated legs.
Virgo is summoned with ten swords, now these swords are finely crafted and aren't easily broken. But because of the swords Baku has a harder time reacting to multi hit moves. Because he has to make sure they attempt to dodge.
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Libra:
Libra looks like a Golem. Its grey stone body covered in red and blue runes. Its arms are large com-paired to its small legs. Its arms are big because thats where all its attack is built up in. Its face is covered in a black mask, with one eye hole [ For Baku's signature Sand Eye in a puppet ].
Libra has the power to open a hidden panel in its hands, the left able to launch water, the right able to launch fire. Draw back, it can only use one at a time, and friendly fire happens often because the launchers are hard to just turn off in an instant.
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Scorpio:
This puppet is made to look like a giant scorpion. From its pincers, down to its large steel tail. It is made from a black wood, which is barely viable under its steal plated body.
Scorpio basically becomes a tank, its body covered in iron plating, its tail that stretches eight feet, is made from steel, laced in poison. Draw back, it has so much weight... it is extremely slow.
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Sagittarius:
This puppet, is like two puppets in one. Its bottom half, its legs are made to look like a horses, covered in a gold haired hide. Its torso and face are pure wood, nothing covering them except the leather gloves on its hands. A stab is wrapped around its chest, holding the quiver full of arrows. and one sword.
Because it has chakra flowing through its via strings, its joints can use the bow it holds with incredible accuracy. Now because this puppet has loads of joints to make sure its arrows hit the target, it takes alot more chakra to control.
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Capricorn:
This is a half goat, half fish puppet. Its goat half is made from a birch tree, making its wood black and white. While its fish half is made from a thick and bendable iron, covered in numerous spikes.
Capricorn has the ability to shift its spike covered body into a ball, chick via the chakra strings can be used as a ball and chain. By putting forth a double amunt of chakra, the strings are focused into one finger and much, much thicker. Draw back, is the excess amount of chakra used onto one puppet.
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Pisces:
A black fish, and a white fish, yin and yang in design. The black fish has one white eye, other then that is completely black. The white has one black eye and is completely white.
The two fish have the ability to lunch Suiton covered chains that wrap around the opponent, and use their teeth [or tasers as I'd call them] can close onto the chains sending an intense electric shock. Drawback, hard to control. MUST use two hands and Chakr Strings level Three.
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Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2011 11:45 pm
I accept. I helped him make those, as to complete the set. I do believe they are in ordinance with the rule, seeing as they are, part of a jutsu. ANY mis-usage of the puppets, or what shall happen, will fall upon my shoulders.
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2011 12:05 am
Does that count as all eight jutsu or as a single one?
As such...Gemini is missing and this displeases me. If it is a single jutsu, allow me to create a Gemini puppet for you biggrin
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2011 12:07 am
Gemini is Baku's main puppet. :3 As you;d see if you checked his profile. n . n;
EDIT; And Angy is already making the second half of Gemini. So thank you for yer offer Mephy, but we've got this. <3 Thankssss.
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2011 12:13 am
Das okay, I'ma just make puppet and set a price tag on them...put em on display at the shops. My creations, there will only be one of each model...and not every model can be seen in a singular store.
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