Welcome to Gaia! ::

Naruto: The Path of the Shinobi

Back to Guilds

A Naruto Roleplay 

Tags: Naruto, Roleplay, Ninja, Jutsu, Shinobi 

Reply ☕ OOC & Debate
Bloodline and Clan Application Goto Page: [] [<<] [<] 1 2 3 ... 10 11 12 13 14 15 ... 98 99 100 101 [>] [>>] [»|]

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

A faint smile

Dedicated Friend

PostPosted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 4:06 pm


I like it! Approved, but be sure to keep in mind your limits

~I'll be watching you~

User Image
PostPosted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 4:23 pm


Jade while I appreciate that you're trying to help, Bloodline and Clan applications are something that either Stormold, or myself will take care of. But I do agree with Jades decision, so yes Okamiken you are APPROVED!!!

please send 1000 gold to either zane hajime or myself to make it official, also Jade you will need to send 1000 gold as well for your sharingan

Lance Fulgurant
Crew


A faint smile

Dedicated Friend

PostPosted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 4:24 pm


Oh sorry, you never actually told me what I can and cannot do >.<
PostPosted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 4:50 pm


sorry about that, I will be re-posting crew jobs in both the crew pm topic of the main forum and in the crew forum within a couple days

Lance Fulgurant
Crew


Deil Grist

PostPosted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:53 pm


Rpc Name: Daichi [Clan Name, which will become Lothar if accepted]
Village: Leaf
Rank: Sannin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Lothar

What you know about the clan/bl: This clan used to produce a famous beer. They have a special chakra that makes the opponent drunk when it makes contact with the enemy, as well as protects the user from blades to a degree. The clan specializes at taijutsu and their bodies are made for it. They learn and perform taijutsu better, but genjutsu and ninjutsu are troublesome.

Rp Sample: Daichi had been asked by the kage to go into the sound village to do a little 'research' about the village. He had came in regular traveller's clothes a couple days ago, and tonight was his first night he had been able to drink. He entered the sparce and dim inn with indifference, since he had seen worse before. He sat down at a table near the back of the room, and ordered a glass of ale from the worn-out waitress. When the ale arrived, he took a sip and thought, This stuff is so watery. I don't see how all of these people get drunk off of this crap. But he decided to stick it out and bear it. It wasn't long before someone came over to to size him up, since he was the biggest guy there and a newcomer. "Hey buddy, wanna make a bet?" Daichi looked up into the man, who had only had a couple drinks so far. "Yeah. Whachoo got in mind?" The stranger sat down, and said, "I bet you my bar tab that you can't beat me in a drinking contest. What do you say?"
"Pay the victor's bill? Sure, let's have at it." The stranger motioned over to the bartender, whom brought a couple shot glasses and a bottle of whiskey. He poured the stuff, and the two drank at the same time. Again, watery. It doesn't even tickle. "Gahh, good stuff." Said the stranger. "Keep it coming." The other guy was doing fine until about 10 minutes later when they were at their 15th shot. The opponent was obviously getting flustered that Daichi could drink so much, and didn't want to lose face around the crowd that slowly formed around them. "Hey buddy, why don wez shettle dis over some ahrm wreshlin?" Daichi was more than glad to comply, since he was only just now getting a weak buzz and was bored. They clasped hands, and the crowd stomped up a beat. Daichi didn't even have to try. He let a little chakra form between their palms, and the other became VERY drunk. He passed out on the table, but sat back up as Daichi controlled his mind. He pinned the man's arm, and got him to pay for the bill. They left the bar, and went into a dark alley.
"Tell me everything about you and the plans of the village." The man was helpless he was so drunk. "Well, I'm uh jonin in thish here villahge, and I wahz plannin to drink YOU...under the table. I don know, I guesh I'm off my game." He paused, and then said, "Well, as far as I know, we waz supposed to head off to the rock village soon and...uh...steal some scrolls from the rock village. I think that's all I kn..." The man suddenly passed out on the ground, and Daichi left him there. He couldn't believe his mission was done so soon, but then again he would be glad to help his allies in the rock, and to get back home to some REAL booze.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 4:16 pm


Deil, every time I see you post something I smile. You understand how to write and I take comfort in knowing that you won't bastardize my clan. Ummm You're going to need some sort of bit in your back story about why you are a saanin of the leaf now: perhaps you were a student of mine in the cloud or something, I dunno. I'll also need a full list of the jutsu when you post your profile to be accepted as I teach each person myself. But I like it.

Accepted

Reynard the Wanderer

2,400 Points
  • Person of Interest 200
  • Risky Lifestyle 100
  • Gender Swap 100

OuchRightInTheFreedom

PostPosted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:04 am


RPC Name: Ronmaru Uchiha
Village: N/A (Haven't made a character yet. I want to know just what I can have before I make him.)
Rank: N/A
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Uchiha (Sharingan)


what you know about the clan/bl:

The Sharingan is said to be an offspin of the Byakugan, even though it is later proven to be a descendant of the Rinnegan. However, it differs from its relative greatly; the Sharingan is not attained at birth like the Byakugan. The user must undergo quite the rough experience in order to attain use of the eye, and they only get a few tomoe from the beginning.

When the user first gets the tomoe, they can perform simple tasks like seeing chakra flow. As the Sharingan matures, the user is able to tell if any given person is under a Genjutsu, or if they have other chakra problems. In the middle stages, the user can also memorize techniques, and use them later without problem.

When three Tomoe appear on both eyes, the user is able to, in a sense, predict the opponent's movements. It is in this state that the normal Sharingan is considered fully matured.

However, there is another form of the Sharingan: the Mangekyo. Only by suffering the death of someone extremely close can one utilize this technique. So far, the Mangekyo is known to possess four major techniques. The first, Amaterasu, is an eye technique that, by use of one of the Uchiha's eyes, a burst of pitch black flames engulf a target. The flames from Amaterasu have seemed impossible to extinguish, and only by the strongest Fire Seal can they be contained.

The second technique, Tsukuyomi, is an extremely powerful Genjutsu in which the user torments the foe in any way they wish, taking refuge in a completely inverted environment. The use of this technique was used in spans of both 24 and 72 hours on Sasuke and Kakashi.

The third technique, Susanoo, takes many forms from different Sharingan users. Itachi's Susanoo possessed a sword deemed to permanently seal anything it strikes. Sasuke's first Susanoo took a more skeletal form, but his second utilized a pure chakra bow and arrow, which he used to defeat Danzo.

The final technique is Izanagi. This technique is said to be the most powerful Genjutsu one can cast on themselves. The user is able to make fatal wounds inexistant, at a heavy price. As seen in Sasuke's fight with Danzo, it demanded the closing of Sharingans on his arm every time he used it, making it extremely costly, and only used if you intend to die, and take your enemy with you undoubtedly.

The weaknesses of the Sharingan are that using it demands high chakra reserves, for both users of the bloodline, and those that have it implanted, like Kakashi. Those who have it implanted require a lot more, however.

Heavy use of the Mangekyo Sharingan, unless it is the Eternal Mangekyo, causes a person to go blind. They would have to have another set of eyes surgically installed in order to see again, and chances are these eyes wouldn't have the sharingan.

RP sample:
Ronmaru stood toe to toe with his new opponent; a Jounin from the Village Hidden in The Mist. His enemy had already cast the Hidden Mist Jutsu, and Ronmaru couldn't tell his chakra from the rest, even with the use of his matured Sharingan. Ronmaru, being a hunter ninja himself, had been in these sorts of situations before, and he made heavy use of those combat skills in every battle he engaged in. Even though he and his opponent were standing on water, it would be impossible to deny him the use of his primary element; lightning.

After performing the required hand seals, a set of four kunai formed in his palms. His opponent, also being hidden in the mist, wouldn't be able to see what Ronmaru was plotting. Through the mist, he aimed two of the kunai straight where the shinobi was when he casted the jutsu, and threw the other two at his sides. Thankfully, his hunter skills proved true; the enemy noticed the two flying straight at him first, and leaped to his left, and was impaled and horribly shocked as he kunai pierced him.

With another set of hand seals, Ronmaru lunged across the water when he heard the kunai hit their mark. As soon as he made eye contact with the ninja, Ronmaru noted that he planned to make a strike with his katana at Ronmaru's left side. As the katana made a single fell swoop from the air, he curved down to the left, going under the katana and leaving the ninja wide open. He then swung at the ninja with his fist, hoping to possess him. The ninja moved quickly, however, and the blow was narrowly evaded. For now, Ronmaru would have to move in a more calculative manner in order to ensnare the ninja. Their close range combat continued, and every physical move the ninja made, Ronmaru saw, and countered with relative ease. It was the ninja's mistake to swing his open fist at Ronmaru, who extended his hand and caught the ninja's fist, initiating the Sai Sen No Jutsu he had previously made seals for.

Tendrils of lightning chakra formed from Ronmaru's body, and latched on to the other ninja. The Mist ninja immediately drew a kunai from his pouch, and slit his own throat, ending the fight swiftly, and breaking the bonds between Ronmaru and the ninja. However, the clone vanished in a cloud of water....a water clone.

"Not bad....but this is over." The ninja appeared from behind Ronmaru, and immediately began to swing for a vital point in his throat, which would either kill him, or put him into a coma if the strike made contact.

Ronmaru ducked quickly, barely evading the well aimed blow. He dashed across the water, and turned to find his opponent still pursuing him. Now that he had vision of the ninja once again, he saw that the mist ninja was beginning to focus chakra, most likely for a Jutsu. When the ninja began to form seals, Ronmaru performed the same seals. It just so turned out that the jounin from the mist was a user of water and lightning.

It just so turned out that they both knew Chidori as well.....Ronmaru could only wonder if this man could use the more advanced techniques. At this point in time, the two ninja had full Chidori, and were lunging full scale at one another. Ronmaru knew how the man was going to attack before he actually attacked, and used this to his advantage. The ninja was going to move to Ronmaru's right, and strike the side that didn't have a Chidori focused. In response, Ronmaru moved to the left, and when the ninja struck, his attack met no avail. Ronmaru lunged in, and struck the ninja through the heart, ending the real one this time.

"I was hoping you'd be more of a challenge.....I don't hunt weaklings." Ronmaru said as he deactivated his Sharingan, spun on his heels, and proceeded the few miles back to his village for his next victim.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 6:34 am


alright well I see a few problems

1. the sharingan allows you to see chakra yes, but you wouldn't be able to distinguish the users body from the mist as the mist itself is infused with chakra

2. I suppose that the mist ninja may not have known the mist vision technique, which would allow for them to see perfectly fine through the mist, but I just wanted to make you aware that a jounin from the mist probably would be able to see every move you make in the mist

3. The Sai Sen no Jutsu requires you to make physical contact with your opponent and shove the static strings into them, you cannot use it at a distance as you did

So go ahead and fix it up a bit, keeping in mind the points I made, and you should also use your sharingan more, this is a sharingan app after all, I need to know that you know how to use it

Lance Fulgurant
Crew


OuchRightInTheFreedom

PostPosted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 5:04 am


Is this better?
PostPosted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:49 pm


Rpc Name: Raiden Hayabusa
Village:Kumogakure
Rank:Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for:Uchiha(Sharigan)
What you know about the clan/bl:The Sharigan is not automatically activated in the user by birth. It is unlocked under some stressful or emotional condition. After that the sharigan can be used freely. When the sharigan is first activated it usually has a different number of tomoe. when a sharigan user continues the train they obtain more tomoe around their pupil.
Rp Sample (at least 2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan)
Raiden and his squad mate Tenjho were rushing to save their third member Kaiko from enemy territory. "We have to hurry and save Kaiko!! who knows what they'll do" said Tenjho. "Shut up I don't want to think about...this mission just can't get any worse" Raiden replied with anger and stress coming from his voice. They both stop in front of the cave where Kaiko is being held to come up with a battle plan. Tenjho pulls out a sheet of paper and draws a battle plan "Ok I'll go inside and find Kaiko while you'll create a diversion....since you're of the Uchiha I'm sure this wouldn't be a problem" Tenjho said trying to cheer Raiden up which worked as Raiden let out a grin. "Alright lets do this". Tenjho heads for the cave and signal Raiden to get ready. "This seems a little bit to easy and quiet" Raiden was thinking to himself
The minute Tenjho runs inside the cave it explodes. "TENJHO!! NOOOO!!!" Raiden screamed as he watched his friend get killed right before his eyes. A figure appears next to Raiden to kill him but Raiden lashes at him with his kunai but the figure dodges and turns invisible. "You b*****d you killed my friends!!" Raiden said in anger swinging wildly hoping that he'd hit something. "Correction your friends killed each other!! Bwahahaha" The evil figure laughed "And now I'm going to kill you!! NOW DIE!!!" the invisible figure dashes behind Raiden to stab him but Raiden turns around with his sharingan activated. Raiden went from seeing nothing but forest in front of him to seeing the man's chakra outline."I don't think so!!" Raiden stabs the figure in the chest. "B-but how?! You shouldn't have seen me!!...wait t-those eyes."The figure coughs up blood and quickly swings at Raiden with his sword. Raiden see's the attack since it appears that its moving slow with his sharingan and counters it by blocking the sword with his kunai and stabs with his second kunai that it kills the shadowy figure. Raiden looks towards the cave to check to see if his friends are still alive by looking for their chakra. But to his dismay their chakra is fading at an alarming rate. "Tenjho....Kaiko....I'm....sorry" Tears begin to fall from Raiden's Sharigan activated eyes down his face from the thought of losing his friends.

HadoKennie
Crew

Friendly Conversationalist


Lance Fulgurant
Crew

PostPosted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 7:02 pm


Muffin: sorry for the wait, much better, APPROVED! go ahead and send 1000g to me or another VC and I will put you down on the list.

Inazuma: The RP sample wasn't bad, but for what you were trying to do you're going to need to show a lot more rp prowess, I can see that you know the kind of situation it takes to activate the sharingan, but you didn't really show how you would use it in a fight, in fact you didn't really describe how the sharingan changed anything. Describe how the sharingan changes your vision, describe the difference between what your vision was before you activated the sharingan and then what changed when it was activated
PostPosted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 7:30 pm


Inazuma Dorobo
Rpc Name: Raiden Hayabusa
Village:Kumogakure
Rank:Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for:Uchiha(Sharigan)
What you know about the clan/bl:The Sharigan is not automatically activated in the user by birth. It is unlocked under some stressful or emotional condition. After that the sharigan can be used freely. When the sharigan is first activated it usually has a different number of tomoe. when a sharigan user continues the train they obtain more tomoe around their pupil.
Rp Sample (at least 2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan)
Raiden and his squad mate Tenjho were rushing to save their third member Kaiko from enemy territory. "We have to hurry and save Kaiko!! who knows what they'll do" said Tenjho. "Shut up I don't want to think about...this mission just can't get any worse" Raiden replied with anger and stress coming from his voice. They both stop in front of the cave where Kaiko is being held to come up with a battle plan. Tenjho pulls out a sheet of paper and draws a battle plan "Ok I'll go inside and find Kaiko while you'll create a diversion....since you're of the Uchiha I'm sure this wouldn't be a problem" Tenjho said trying to cheer Raiden up which worked as Raiden let out a grin. "Alright lets do this". Tenjho heads for the cave and signal Raiden to get ready. "This seems a little bit to easy and quiet" Raiden was thinking to himself
The minute Tenjho runs inside the cave it explodes. "TENJHO!! NOOOO!!!" Raiden screamed as he watched his friend get killed right before his eyes. A figure appears next to Raiden to kill him but Raiden lashes at him with his kunai but the figure dodges and turns invisible. "You b*****d you killed my friends!!" Raiden said in anger swinging wildly hoping that he'd hit something. "Correction your friends killed each other!! Bwahahaha" The evil figure laughed "And now I'm going to kill you!! NOW DIE!!!" the invisible figure dashes behind Raiden to stab him but Raiden turns around with his sharingan activated. Raiden went from seeing nothing but forest in front of him to seeing the man's chakra outline."I don't think so!!" Raiden stabs the figure in the chest. "B-but how?! You shouldn't have seen me!!...wait t-those eyes."The figure coughs up blood and quickly swings at Raiden with his sword. Raiden see's the attack since it appears that its moving slow with his sharingan and counters it by blocking the sword with his kunai and stabs with his second kunai that it kills the shadowy figure. Raiden looks towards the cave to check to see if his friends are still alive by looking for their chakra. But to his dismay their chakra is fading at an alarming rate. "Tenjho....Kaiko....I'm....sorry" Tears begin to fall from Raiden's Sharigan activated eyes down his face from the thought of losing his friends.


alright I suppose that's a little better, just be sure to remember that the sharingan can't keep up with everything, and even if your eye can keep up with your opponents movements it doesn't mean you'll have time to react. APPROVED!!! be sure to send 1000g to either me or a VC to make it official

Lance Fulgurant
Crew


HadoKennie
Crew

Friendly Conversationalist

PostPosted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 7:36 pm


Lance Fulgurant
Inazuma Dorobo
Rpc Name: Raiden Hayabusa
Village:Kumogakure
Rank:Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for:Uchiha(Sharigan)
What you know about the clan/bl:The Sharigan is not automatically activated in the user by birth. It is unlocked under some stressful or emotional condition. After that the sharigan can be used freely. When the sharigan is first activated it usually has a different number of tomoe. when a sharigan user continues the train they obtain more tomoe around their pupil.
Rp Sample (at least 2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan)
Raiden and his squad mate Tenjho were rushing to save their third member Kaiko from enemy territory. "We have to hurry and save Kaiko!! who knows what they'll do" said Tenjho. "Shut up I don't want to think about...this mission just can't get any worse" Raiden replied with anger and stress coming from his voice. They both stop in front of the cave where Kaiko is being held to come up with a battle plan. Tenjho pulls out a sheet of paper and draws a battle plan "Ok I'll go inside and find Kaiko while you'll create a diversion....since you're of the Uchiha I'm sure this wouldn't be a problem" Tenjho said trying to cheer Raiden up which worked as Raiden let out a grin. "Alright lets do this". Tenjho heads for the cave and signal Raiden to get ready. "This seems a little bit to easy and quiet" Raiden was thinking to himself
The minute Tenjho runs inside the cave it explodes. "TENJHO!! NOOOO!!!" Raiden screamed as he watched his friend get killed right before his eyes. A figure appears next to Raiden to kill him but Raiden lashes at him with his kunai but the figure dodges and turns invisible. "You b*****d you killed my friends!!" Raiden said in anger swinging wildly hoping that he'd hit something. "Correction your friends killed each other!! Bwahahaha" The evil figure laughed "And now I'm going to kill you!! NOW DIE!!!" the invisible figure dashes behind Raiden to stab him but Raiden turns around with his sharingan activated. Raiden went from seeing nothing but forest in front of him to seeing the man's chakra outline."I don't think so!!" Raiden stabs the figure in the chest. "B-but how?! You shouldn't have seen me!!...wait t-those eyes."The figure coughs up blood and quickly swings at Raiden with his sword. Raiden see's the attack since it appears that its moving slow with his sharingan and counters it by blocking the sword with his kunai and stabs with his second kunai that it kills the shadowy figure. Raiden looks towards the cave to check to see if his friends are still alive by looking for their chakra. But to his dismay their chakra is fading at an alarming rate. "Tenjho....Kaiko....I'm....sorry" Tears begin to fall from Raiden's Sharigan activated eyes down his face from the thought of losing his friends.


alright I suppose that's a little better, just be sure to remember that the sharingan can't keep up with everything, and even if your eye can keep up with your opponents movements it doesn't mean you'll have time to react. APPROVED!!! be sure to send 1000g to either me or a VC to make it official

ok i'll remeber that and thanks
PostPosted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 6:40 pm


Rpc Name: Luna Bravenheart
Village: Leaf Village
Rank: Academy Studnet
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Byakugan (Hyuga Clan)
What you know about the clan/bl: (If you put everything it will be denied on the spot) The Byakugan is a bloodline known to the Hyuga clan. It allows the user to see the chakra flow of an opponent, and allows the user sight of their surrondings more clearly. The gentle fist is a taijutsu used by the Hyuga clan that allows them to exert chakra from their hands and stops the flow of the opponents chakra. The only weak spot is at the back of the neck.
Rp Sample (at least 2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan)
Luna walked onto a battlefield, fallen ninja were everywhere. Most of them were still alive and dying, med nin on the scene trying to save them. She knew that the enemy was still by, and she was the only one who could find them. She activated her Byakugan, a burst of wind following her eyes turning silver, the veins in her eyes becoming clear. She used her sight to look around the whole perimeter for anything unusual. She saw birds, trees, and even farther than that, two unusual figures. She saw their chakra flow, they both contained an unusual amount of chakra. She did not recognize them, and was about to call out when she felt a third person behind her. She turned around and faced her third opponent, the man only held two kunai in his hand and his chakra flow was not as poweful as the third. Luna got into the Hyuga battle stance, her left hand foward, right arm right leg pulled back, knees bent. The man rushed at her and she saw where his vital spots where, before he could do damage she hit the spots and he dropped both his kunai. She hit him one more time sending him flying backwards, he was out cold. She decided to let the med nin take care of this rogue and went to chase the two ninja with the unusual chakra. She hid in the trees, silent, as she followed them to a cave. She was still able to sense their chakra, and she followed them, staying hidden.

Mikasa Ackerman Jaegar


ElvenStarDragon

PostPosted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 10:57 pm


Rpc Name: Vincent Darko

Village: Konoha (Village Hidden in the Leaves)

Rank: Academy Student currently

Bloodline or Clan applied for: Uchia Sharingun

What you know about the clan/bl: I know that the Sharingun can be a very useful tool in seeing through illusion jutsu however it takes times to develop it to add the tomoes to the eyes itself. It can also be a very useful technique in creating illusions as well as coping the techniques of others.

Rp Sample: It had been a very strange turn of events since the Sharingun had first awakened and he was determined to find out more about it. He called out "Sharingun" and his eyes changed from their once deep brown to the right red with the single tomoe in each eye. Through it he looked around him and could see the minor movements of the little creatures. A squirrel scurrying from a bush to a tree. A bird rustling up in the branches. Even a rat that was dashing in the nearby alleyway.

He then felt a certain fatigue come over him. He disengaged the Sharingun. The world around him looked normal once again. He understood at a more conscious level that the Sharingun took a good amount of chakra to keep up. Still the prospect of having this technique was quite exciting and he was determined to gain more tomoes.
Reply
☕ OOC & Debate

Goto Page: [] [<<] [<] 1 2 3 ... 10 11 12 13 14 15 ... 98 99 100 101 [>] [>>] [»|]
 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum