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 Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 3:23 pm
bump..................#165
The Chief Adviser, looked dumbfounded. He spoke up and replyed to his King.
Chief Adviser, "Your Majesty!!! he said in a trembling voice, that would be to small of a force, with only your three knights in The Panzer Dragoon Force they would most certainly be destroyed by The evil one".
Lord Machielvi, "My Advisor he said in a soothing voice, Chief among all of my advisers I am very adamant in my decision on this matter and believe they shall do just fine".
Lord Machielvi's eyes betryed his true feeling, they burned with a fire that would consume anyone that stood in his way and desputed his decisions.
Chief Advisor, "Your MMMMMajesty!!!!, he stuttered as he saw the fire in his eyes".
He knew when it was best to let him have his way and fell silent at those words.
To Be Continued.............................
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Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 3:51 pm
bump........#166
Lord Machielvi looked satisfied as he had cowed his adviser back into line with his strong words and his determination.
With that Lord Machielvi sent for his Panzer Dragoon's to have a audiance with them and also to provsion supplies to prepare them for thier long journey.
He sat silently noticing his advisors looking over thier shoulder and whispering about God knows what. He was somewhat suspicious of that, but them his Panzer Dragoon's entered and bowed before him.
To Be Continued........................
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Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 4:11 pm
bump...........#167
Indeed Lord Machielvi smiled, "My Panzer Dragoon's, the best and most skilled knights in the Realm".
He sat thinking for a moment and then looked up to noticed his advisors mumbling looking over thier shoulders, this is suspicious he though.
But that faded uickly from his mind as fast as a leaving daydream, his Panzer Dragoon's entered the room and bowed upong one knee before hid thron.
Lord Machielvi stood and greeted his Panzer Dragoon knights, nodding to all three of them and giving the national salute of a hand over the heart raised as if to shield one eyes from the sun.
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Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 9:18 pm
bump...............#168
Let me know what you guys think of my writing and if I should continue it from this point. All critiscism is welcomed.
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 10:20 am
bump 169
wow Giesta, you must had been board lol
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 12:17 pm
bump.......#170
Yup, very bored and I might continue it as well. Depends on how I feel when I get back on later.
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Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 7:29 am
lol go for it. Writing help clenz the brain 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 1:29 pm
bump.............#172
Lord Machielvi " My Panzer Dragoon Knights, I have a long and dangerious mission for you."
Leader of The Panzer Dragoons (Sir La 'Manch) " My Lord, say what the uest is and we shall undertake it."
Lord Machielvi "My Knights, the Evil Sorceror Donkanapo is attacking my kingdom and I need the best men I have to remove his threat to my kingdom"
Sir La 'Manch "Lord, we shall remove the the Evil Sorceror Dokanapo effortlessly and the kingdom shall once more be at peace"
Sir La 'Manch and the other two knights of The Panzer Dragoons bowed and gave the national salute.
To Be Continued............................
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Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 3:15 pm
173 bump
is this story based off of some show you saw, or some video game?
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Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 1:04 am
bump...............#174
Nope just something random I came up with the other day. Kinda a continuation of an old story I had an idea for but never wrote down.
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Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 1:19 am
bump...............#175
Lord Machielvi "I am sending you My Panzer Dragoons with all the supplies you may carry with you and upon your horses."
Lord Machielvi " Sir La 'Manch as always the most wise artifacer I shall send all reagents to make whatever you may need with your Alchemy.
Lord Machielvi " Sir Durana, like an Owl ever watchful and keen sighted you shall have the map so that you may know what territories share good sentiments with our Kingdom and will aid you in your travels.
Lord Machielvi "And also Sir Durana you shall have the best bow and arrows that can be had in my kingdom for this journey for there is no better archer to be found in my kingdom that you.
Lord Machielvi "Lastly Sir Blanc you shall be granted one of our Kingdoms most precious comodities, a gem of Nephrittine to give you even greater spend than you posses now. even without the gem your fleetness of feet is astonding.
To Be Continued.............................
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Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 8:27 am
bump 176
ah okay. Kinda reminds me of Halo
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Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 1:23 pm
Really? Might have to look into Halo a little more. lol
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Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 6:35 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 1:55 am
Its a shooter right? I had tryed to play it with a friend a while back and got my self powned. lol
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