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 Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 12:55 pm
Izzy followed him, not having much of a choice anyway. She looked around at her surroundings. She was clearly nowhere near her town. Even the decor of his heme helped her reach that discision. She walked to the rooom he had pointed out as hers, and sat down on the edge of the bed. and took in the surroundings of that room. Apart from the necklace she had made from her key, she had another one she was already wearing. It was a small dragonfly pendant that Loagan had givin her on her first birthday with them. It was always something she resorted to for comfort, and she did that now, clutching the charm in her hand.
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 12:55 pm
((An elf with a condo... now I've seen everything. xd I'll be posting in a few hours, just have to get finished with my driving lesson. stressed ))
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 12:56 pm
(( Ryn thinks I killed the girls family? Oh boy XD
Read my bio. He was sent to the Mortal Realm by Her High Majesty to lookk over the Mortals. He is trying to blend in with the Mortals, his ears aren't even pointed yet.
How could he do that from a shack in the woods? You've offended me >.> ))
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 1:07 pm
((Hes a 7' tall, half dragon half human, who no one truly trusts, and just like your character isn't sure about mine, He isn't sure about you. And I know you are on the Defenders, its just my character comeing through... Oh yah I'm heading out to work for a bit, so I won't be back till about... 5pm at the earliest which is like 4 hours, and I might not be on again at all tonight... not that it matters razz ))
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 1:56 pm
In the solidarity of his room he found inner peace. He calmed his mind and stilled his body in a form of meditation the Elves called Pela en' bela templa, The Energy Vortex. He kneeled in front of his alter. It was adorned with flowers and vines, an empty ceramic bowl, the Tome of the Elves and two wax figures that represented the Great God and Goddess of his people.
He hovered his right hand over the alter and said a small prayer before taking a glass bottle from underneath the alter. He poured the contents, a pure light blue liquid into the bowl. He then bowed his head in prayer and chant.
Yala onna en' vilya ((Summon Air Elemental))
Yala onna en' kemen ((Summon Earth Elemental))
Yala onna en' naur ((Summon Fire Elemental))
Yala onna en' alu ((Summon Water Elemental))
Summoning the elements he was calling for the Divine power. Concentrating, listening, and then it happened. The liquid took on a pure white glow, and Nendirs eyes shot open with a start.
He was walking in a field full of wild flowers, and a clam river parted the field in tween, and there he stood, on one bank, while the Mother and Father god stood on the other. He dropped to his knees and bowed humbly, and spoke the following words. "Great providers of everything that has been lain before me. Your child humbly asks for your guidance. I know not what to do with the path that has been lain before me. I know it is meant for me...but...Izzy..." The Father God raised his hand, commanding silence where there once was none, and spoke these words in unison with his partner. "You are brave, and strong, loving and kind, and your heart will lead you down this path, and this path, Young Tâldaugion, will lead you to victory. You must protect her, you must train her, not only the Mortals depend upon it, but as does your own." The words were cryptic, but in all, Nendir knew he could not give up hope, not yet, and not ever.
All was calm when Nendir came too. He was still in the same position, sitting on his knees. His chest rose and fell, and when he lifted himself into his bed for the night, it took no time at all for his eyes to close, sending him into a deep and peaceful sleep.
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The morning came and Nendir was not surprised to see that Izzy was not yet awake when he went downstairs. It was still early, and she would need time for her body to adjust to the time difference. He was dressed in Mortal clothing, a simple pair of b lack baggy sweat pants, and an almost shear white v-neck t-shirt. His feet made no noise as he stepped across the hard wood floor and onto the balcony, overlooking the street below. He wondered just how long it would take her to awaken as he bit into the unpeeled orange he had taken from the counter.
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 2:57 pm
Izzy sat there, just seemingly thinking. She slipped off her shoes, and laid down. She stared at the ceiling thinking, trying to sort the jumbled thoughts in her mind, and slowly ever so slowly, she drifted off to dreamland. It's amazing that she even fell asleep. Think about it. Some maniac slaughtered her family, she killed the maniac, she saw her family dead in her home, and now she's in an unfarmiliar place with someone she barely knows.
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When Izzy woke up, it was somewhere around nine o'clock in the morning. She had always woke up around, it was like she was her own alarm clock. She sat up and looked around, unsure of where she was. But in a wave of memories, all of the occourances last night washed over her. Izzy reached for her dragonfly pendant, and looked down at the floor. In doing so she relized that dhe had never changed out of her lothes fron yesterday. She quietly grabed clean clothes from her bag, wich she had never actualy put away, and headed into the bathroom to change. She looked at her reflection in the mirror. She pulled her hair out of her face. She neatly placed her dirtly clothes in a pile in a corner of the bathroom floor, and then walked through her room and exited, closing the door behind her, and a soft 'click' was heard as the door closed.
((sorry that took so long, I had to go clean the kitchen. stare ))
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 3:08 pm
((It's ok, I had to put dinner in the oven.))
He heard the sound of the door shutting in the hallway, but he was not alarmed, if it was indeed an intruder they wouldn't have shut it to begin with. He finished his orange, peel, seeds and all and headed back inside. He left the glass door open but allowed the screen door to remain shut, the last thing he wanted was nagging little bugs from the streets below flying aimlessly throughout his home.
"Glad to see your awake. Did you sleep alright Izzy?" He said as he wiped a little bit of sweat from his brow. So early in the morning and it was already pretty warm outside. He walked into the kitchen, washed his hands and then called over to the young girl. "Feel free to eat or drink whatever you like. As long as you stay here, whats mine is yours." He removed a bottle of water from the refrigerator and discarded the top, taking a hardy drink as he made his way into the living room and took a seat on a large brown armchair. His place was all about neutral tones, it reminded him of home back with his family.
"If you need anything you know, food, drinks...soap, just let me know." He laughed a little out loud and draped one of his palms over his head, pulling bat the jet black hair that was missing the silver adornments he had been wearing the night before. When he was in his home, safe of any danger, he was the most relaxed, he even allowed himself to laugh.
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 3:13 pm
Ryn had flown all night, before he finally managed to catch the scent of the Elf. He was exhausted, and sat upon the roof of a small building, his eyes half closed in his drowsy state. He couldn't quite pin down where the Elf was in this large city, full of unfamiliar scents. Yawning he climbed slowly off the building, and reaching the ground he walked for the nearest place with food. Walking into the small deli, he looked at the counter, and spotted three Humans, all women.
One of them looked up, and spotting him went wide eyed, before poking the other two. One of them screamed, and the other fainted. Walking up to the counter he said simply,"I'd like to order some food. One ham sandwich and a fruit salad. Oh yah and a diet coke."
The first girl stuttered," O-ok.... Um... S-so, th-thats, one Ham Sandwich and a fruit salad and a pop. R-right?"
"Yes.", Ryn said, smiling slightly, reaching for his money, and thinking that the girl was quite brave.
"Ok... Thats... um.... Thats.... Seven dollars and sixty cents.",She said nervously.
Ryn pulled out ten dollars and handed it to her, taking his food and saying,"Keep the change."
Ryn walked out of the building, taking a table outside, and watching as everyone walking by quickly changed to the opposite side of the street. He slowly ate his food, trying to figure out where to start looking in this massive city, and yawning constantly.
((I'm probably heading to a friends place, so this post is pretty much my last till about 10 tonight.))
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 3:16 pm
[[Sorry if I sounded accusatory earlier...just VERY confused (seems to happen often). Anyways, I'm going to post in about an hour probably. I'm babysitting my li'l brother...]]
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 3:24 pm
((Wow, this RP grows fast.))
"Awww!" Kin screamed in a gullible tone, placing his hands unto his face. That instant, his face, and his entire shape transfigured. His inner clothings melted away into a plain yet stylish maroon, while his long and sinister coat shanged into a hip combination of red and blue, with black straps along the wrists. His face turned paler and slightly chubby, all the while the rest of his body shrunk and turned more feminine. His sharp and short dark hair flowed outwards into a peachy bright red, some interlocking by two long edges, which bloomed blue large ribbons by each end. His eyes turned pale green, deepened yet shallow at the same time, though the distinctions between his left and right were still as clear as ever. In a few seconds, he had transformed into the girl before him, and began patting on Amati with her, "Aww... good boy..." his, or her, sweet voice spoke out with love, carressing the wolf's forehead.
Bewildered at the girl's question, Kin held out a hand for her to shake, grinning like he was somewhat of a long lost twin, "My name's Kin! Kin Raws!" Before the girl could ask why he had said so, he continued on, "I wouldn't like to keep on conversing to someone I don't know so far." He sounded just like her, imitating her every way of speaking, except for her choice of words.
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 3:29 pm
((Sorry. But I like to write sweatdrop and Saki said it was ok to write more than 5 posts a day if I helped people figure out was going on XD ))
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 3:52 pm
[[Anything said by the gods can only be intercepted by those created by the gods. Humans, Androids, and those from another dimension cannot hear them.]]
"Go ahead and contact them," a woman's voice trailed from the mist. An arrogant grin cross the water goddess's lips as she twirled on the pond, her light laughter now heard by those created by the gods. Her eyes went into a hazy blue began to speak.
"Hello, Children," she said sweetly. "Purifiers, first, I muct congratulate you on your fine work... You made for an excellent decoy." Her sweet voice shifted instantaneously into a dark montone, before continueing. "As for those corrupted by mankind. Your leader has been eliminated. Our elite staged the attack and destroyed the White House. Why don't you watch as mankind begins to destroy themselves." With that the goddess danced off the small pond and seated herself gracefully in her throne.
"Geez, Aequis," an older, more mature voice floated through. "You're such a bad role model. No, wonder half our babies are crazy, psychotic killers." A middle aged woman walked into the circle, holding out a small, struggling purifier in her hand. "Take Jose for example. He was such a good boy until you bashed it into his head that no one loved him, then he went on a killing spree. You know exactly how many other purifiers he took with him?"
The man bit her hand, and she winced a bit, before throwing a giant finger at him. "Jose! How many time do I have to tell you? No biting Mommy! -That's it! You're going to time-out!" With that she shoved the man into her pocket and closed it with a puff of smoke.
"Isn't that the point, Moira?" Aequis chuckled from her chair.[
"NO!" she screamed. "They'll find out for themselves how corrupt humans are and punish them justly. You don't need to go around pounding into their heads!!!"
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 3:56 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 4:00 pm
[[You're not outed. ^_^ It's just illogical that you can hear the gods if you weren't made to hear them. HOWEVER! Turning on your TV is a good way to find out. 4laugh ]]
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 4:05 pm
((Ok, I hadn't intended on him even owning one, but I'm sure theres a way for him to see the program. Maybe a t.v in the window of a store or something. Oh, and can you look at my proofile. I finally filled out the about me section. Tell me what you think?))
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