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 Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 1:34 pm
melph, would you tell your friend that someone here adores her posts?
makes me wanna read the outsiders again.
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Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 4:42 pm
Y U U - C A K E S melph, would you tell your friend that someone here adores her posts? makes me wanna read the outsiders again. I shall. I shall also most more of them.
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Melphaligal the Challama Crew
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Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 9:06 pm
I posted again, but it didn't turn out the way I wanted it too...I don't know I think it lacked...pizazz! *has been watching spongebob*
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Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 11:15 am
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thunderbolts_and_sunshine
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Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 11:38 am
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Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 11:49 am
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thunderbolts_and_sunshine
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Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 6:18 pm
OAJFILHdAIOSHFAUSDKGHKASLFILDSHGIOSDGHWODFZSKALJFOISFH
BLAAGH.
I am so sorry I disappeared again!
I got grounded for like a month, and then when I finally got a bit ungrounded I was busy, plus I just got a tablet so I've been messing with that, and I just haven't been on Gaia a lot lately in general.
And now I'm grounded ******** hate my parents.
-.-
Anyways, I'm sorry!
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Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 6:28 pm
hmm...i posted again. I included Kasiya a scoche. I finally got through all my handwritten pages now. Am I posting too often?
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Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 6:29 pm
Colonel Sanders!
Just glad to hear from you Tulip
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Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 6:31 pm
MonAmourSuisseXD hmm...i posted again. I included Kasiya a scoche. I finally got through all my handwritten pages now. Am I posting too often? No such thing as posting to much my dear. Infact we should all take a page from your book and post as often.
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Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 6:44 pm
"Posting too often" does not compute. Abort? Retry? Fail? Nah, not posting too much. You're doing great, so keep up the great work. The only thing I would suggest for your posts is making a new paragraph every time someone new speaks - it just makes it easier to follow the dialogue. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 7:26 pm
Andragoran "Posting too often" does not compute. Abort? Retry? Fail? Nah, not posting too much. You're doing great, so keep up the great work. The only thing I would suggest for your posts is making a new paragraph every time someone new speaks - it just makes it easier to follow the dialogue. 3nodding Si.
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Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 7:35 pm
*smacks forehead* My english teacher constantly gets mad at me for not doing that in my essays. I don't get to practice using dialogue enough so I don't know the finer points of writing with it.
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Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 7:39 pm
Best way to learn is through practice. No worries.
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Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 7:41 pm
Don't listen to him. Worry. Worry like you're life depends on it.......because it does!!!!! AH HA HA HA HA!!!!!
Andy's totally right, you'll pick it up.
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