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 Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 9:12 am
"You can pass, you can pass!"
xd That was pretty funny, I was expecting a brawl to start up.
Great story so far Seaphron.
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 3:48 pm
rofl
indeed Maul. you better watch out.
rolleyes and Trenn, PRETENDING to be all smooth and suave. ch.
xd that's AWESOME, Seaphron. ^-^
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 4:03 pm
Heh. Loved this chapter.
Like how I was a wise person showing Koosei magic, and perverted at the end.
Much like Master Roshi from Dragonball Z!
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 3:23 am
Just caught up on the story . I am really enjoying reading this . You can tell you are enjoying writing it ! 3nodding
Next chapter pwease !!!!
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 5:38 am
@Sauvie - Glad you liked it.
@Tatsu - Thank you.
@Fish - Thanks.
@Mune - XD Whoops ~goes to find that~ There might be a few in this one as well (kinda drowsy) give me a heads up kay.
@Zen - Glad you liked it Zen!
@Koosei - rofl You always have the best feedback, glad you like it so far.
@Maul - XD That is a good comparison.
@Ms. Godstone - XD Yeah I really am. I have about three more chapters I can type up right now XD.
Chapter six up!
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 5:53 am
Yay! I got to read this chapter first . I loved the chapter
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 6:27 am
I likes it.
And that's a first. FS is an evil b*****d.
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 8:57 am
Another day another evil b*****d
Good chapter Seaphron... a bit depressing compared to you others, and is FS the evil b*****d because you are the evil b*****d in his story? wink
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 9:59 am
@Ms. Godstone - XD Glad you liked it.
@Tatsu - It's a first I like it.
@Sauvie - Nope, I have always planned making him the bad guy since the beginning and that is just coincidental.
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 11:13 am
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 3:41 pm
FS, you evil b*****d! scream domokun
Nice chapter.
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 3:51 pm
Decent chapter Seaphron, your managing to keep my my interest with this one, alot of the time cult stories bore me so I stop reading them.
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 4:03 pm
Zen Rider Decent chapter Seaphron, your managing to keep my my interest with this one, alot of the time cult stories bore me so I stop reading them.
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 4:46 pm
Sauvie Zen Rider Decent chapter Seaphron, your managing to keep my my interest with this one, alot of the time cult stories bore me so I stop reading them. Your story doesn't bore me though.....
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 7:16 pm
Zen Rider Sauvie Zen Rider Decent chapter Seaphron, your managing to keep my my interest with this one, alot of the time cult stories bore me so I stop reading them. Your story doesn't bore me though.....
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