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onixdragon

PostPosted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 10:45 am


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Character name: Yoshikuni Hiro
RP sample
Hiro walk into class and sat down. While he dreaded going to school everyday, he knew that it would be over soon, and that he could become a ninja. He had always liked adventure, and even the thought of sitting around at a desk for endless ours just bored him. Then suddenly the teacher appeared at the front of the class, and it seemed as though everyone woke up.
"Are all of you ready? the teacher asked.
"Yes sir!" shouted everyone in unison. One by one, students went up to the front of the room to show the teacher how good they were at using their jutsu.
"Your turn Hiro! Come down here!" shouted the teacher. Hiro got up and walked down the steps to where the teacher was. "Show me Bunshin no Jutsu!"
"Okay. Bunshin no Jutsu!" shouted Hiro. A copy of Hiro appeared beside him, and they both looked at the teacher. "Happy now?" They both asked the teacher.
"Yes, now go back to your seat!" replied the teacher. The Jutsu disappeared, and Hiro walked back to his seat as his friends congratulated him.


pass
PostPosted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 7:07 pm


((God it's been a while.))

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[ Tori ] @}------

Man has been endowed with REASON,
with the POWER to CREATE,
so that he can ADD to what he's been GIVEN.


“The forest is hot.”

“We must keep the water, so hot.”

“You abandon the forest.”

“Abandoned the forest. You bring the fire. The heat.”

“Bring the girl to the forest.”

“She will be destroyed with the forest. Bring her bring her!”

Tori, green eyes were wide, brown hair a mess, sat in the corner of a white room. A grin sat on her face as she rocked back and forth. The look on her face was one of fear, a happy psychotic fear. Her head cocked from left to right with each of the voices sentences, her bangs covering the respective eye. However; when she talked, her head was centered, her bangs covering neither eye. It was an odd quirk, but one that helped her keep track of the three, well two technically, brains sharing her head. She had to admit to herself, she probably looked like a whack-job doing her weird head bobs, and in time she would figure out a new quirk, but you know what they say, “Old habits die hard.”

Tori made her way to her feet, her arms bound by the constraints of a straight jacket, or “Kooky Coat” as she use to call them before her parents betrayed her, and sentenced her to a life in the nut house. The smile had faded from her face, and now only the look was that of confusion. “No, no no no no no.” Tori mutter quickly leaning against the soft wall of her room, “I’m coming, and the heat will die.” Tori laughed, stumbling towards the door of her cell as she had many times prior to this little conversation.

Slamming her body into the Tori door screeched, raising her head up to the slit in the door. “I must go. The forest demands it.”

“So hot.”

“The forest demands”

The human hair often carries the seeds of over 10 different plants after a short walk through the park. Tori fell to her knees, feeling the heart beat of these seeds. How had she not thought of this herself? Putting her head to the floor she took a few breaths, hearing the rustle of leaves as plants exploded in growth. The reason it takes plants forever to grow is not biological. It is because it has no where to be, so has no reason to rush. When given incentive however… Tori looked up watching the plants grow. It was like watching a person grow on a time lapse. Before she knew it the metal door was overtaken with vines. "Thank you, thank you thank you thank you!” Tori sobbed into her mind as she stood up and rammed her body against the door. The extra room made by the vines gave enough leeway that it swung open with ease. As she darted through the hallway she turned back watching as the vines continued to grow before withering, dyeing, promptly falling off the door and decomposing. It’s entire lifespan in less then a few seconds. Quite a nifty trick.

“Stop.”

“He is natures passing.”

“He is what?” Tori asked herself breathing heavy. She stopped at a stairwell hearing a man walking on the stairs. Up or down she couldn’t tell, but it didn’t matter now. She was stuck. “Why can’t it be a two way push door?” Tori asked herself hitting her head against the door, wishing it would open.

“He is your key.”

“Who is he? I see no one.” Tori complained taking a seat on the stairs in front of her. What was the point, she was caught, “Fracking straight jacket.”




But up to now he hasn't been a CREATOR,
only a DESTROYER.
FORESTS keep DISAPPEARING,
rivers DRY up,
wild life's become EXTINCT,
the climate's RUINED and the land grows POORER and UGLIER every day.
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Nosfouratwo


333sama333

PostPosted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 10:20 pm


*Breaths out* Ok, so my character's name is Kyoki. (She doesn't have a last name. sweatdrop )

RP Sample
Kyoki steadily walked through town. She glared at everyone she walked past, knowing well she should be in school. She continued walking until she reached the forest. She relaxed a little and looked around. She jumped when she heard a sound coming from behind. Kyoki spun around to see a little rabbit hop out from under a bush. She sighed and glared at the rabbit. "You nearly gave me a heart attack!" She said to the bunny as she slowly got closer. She smiled and held out her hand. AS the rabbit started o move away, she pulled her hand back, but only a bit. "It's okay, I won't hurt you." She slowly dropped to the ground and held out her hand again. After a moment of hesitation, the rabbit crept forward. "See? what did I tell ya?" Kyoki said as she smiled at the bunny.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 11:44 am


Nosfouratwo
((God it's been a while.))

User Image
[ Tori ] @}------

Man has been endowed with REASON,
with the POWER to CREATE,
so that he can ADD to what he's been GIVEN.


“The forest is hot.”

“We must keep the water, so hot.”

“You abandon the forest.”

“Abandoned the forest. You bring the fire. The heat.”

“Bring the girl to the forest.”

“She will be destroyed with the forest. Bring her bring her!”

Tori, green eyes were wide, brown hair a mess, sat in the corner of a white room. A grin sat on her face as she rocked back and forth. The look on her face was one of fear, a happy psychotic fear. Her head cocked from left to right with each of the voices sentences, her bangs covering the respective eye. However; when she talked, her head was centered, her bangs covering neither eye. It was an odd quirk, but one that helped her keep track of the three, well two technically, brains sharing her head. She had to admit to herself, she probably looked like a whack-job doing her weird head bobs, and in time she would figure out a new quirk, but you know what they say, “Old habits die hard.”

Tori made her way to her feet, her arms bound by the constraints of a straight jacket, or “Kooky Coat” as she use to call them before her parents betrayed her, and sentenced her to a life in the nut house. The smile had faded from her face, and now only the look was that of confusion. “No, no no no no no.” Tori mutter quickly leaning against the soft wall of her room, “I’m coming, and the heat will die.” Tori laughed, stumbling towards the door of her cell as she had many times prior to this little conversation.

Slamming her body into the Tori door screeched, raising her head up to the slit in the door. “I must go. The forest demands it.”

“So hot.”

“The forest demands”

The human hair often carries the seeds of over 10 different plants after a short walk through the park. Tori fell to her knees, feeling the heart beat of these seeds. How had she not thought of this herself? Putting her head to the floor she took a few breaths, hearing the rustle of leaves as plants exploded in growth. The reason it takes plants forever to grow is not biological. It is because it has no where to be, so has no reason to rush. When given incentive however… Tori looked up watching the plants grow. It was like watching a person grow on a time lapse. Before she knew it the metal door was overtaken with vines. "Thank you, thank you thank you thank you!” Tori sobbed into her mind as she stood up and rammed her body against the door. The extra room made by the vines gave enough leeway that it swung open with ease. As she darted through the hallway she turned back watching as the vines continued to grow before withering, dyeing, promptly falling off the door and decomposing. It’s entire lifespan in less then a few seconds. Quite a nifty trick.

“Stop.”

“He is natures passing.”

“He is what?” Tori asked herself breathing heavy. She stopped at a stairwell hearing a man walking on the stairs. Up or down she couldn’t tell, but it didn’t matter now. She was stuck. “Why can’t it be a two way push door?” Tori asked herself hitting her head against the door, wishing it would open.

“He is your key.”

“Who is he? I see no one.” Tori complained taking a seat on the stairs in front of her. What was the point, she was caught, “Fracking straight jacket.”




But up to now he hasn't been a CREATOR,
only a DESTROYER.
FORESTS keep DISAPPEARING,
rivers DRY up,
wild life's become EXTINCT,
the climate's RUINED and the land grows POORER and UGLIER every day.
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Pass, night you know you don't have to do this again XD.User Image

cheerios18


cheerios18

PostPosted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 11:45 am


333sama333
*Breaths out* Ok, so my character's name is Kyoki. (She doesn't have a last name. sweatdrop )

RP Sample
Kyoki steadily walked through town. She glared at everyone she walked past, knowing well she should be in school. She continued walking until she reached the forest. She relaxed a little and looked around. She jumped when she heard a sound coming from behind. Kyoki spun around to see a little rabbit hop out from under a bush. She sighed and glared at the rabbit. "You nearly gave me a heart attack!" She said to the bunny as she slowly got closer. She smiled and held out her hand. AS the rabbit started o move away, she pulled her hand back, but only a bit. "It's okay, I won't hurt you." She slowly dropped to the ground and held out her hand again. After a moment of hesitation, the rabbit crept forward. "See? what did I tell ya?" Kyoki said as she smiled at the bunny.
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It's a good length, but try not to use 'She' so much, you could use 'the girl' or not use it at all. Pass.User Image
PostPosted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:54 pm


Sano is my character’s name. He has no surname at the moment because I am hoping to put him as part of a clan, but since I need permission normally to join a bloodline figured it might be better to first pass the academy before I go sending out a pm to ask for acceptance.

RP Example:
“Stupid! Stupid! Stupid!” Sano continually shouted the words out as if he were performing some ancient chant. In a sense it was sort of like a ritual for the rambunctious youth. The young boy skidded out his front door as his mother shouted chastisements behind him. She had been trying to wake him up for the past thirty minutes and only the final shout about the first day of the academy had jarred him from his slumber. Sano mumbled a soft curse as he took off towards the school. As he rushed through back alleys and around street corners he had to wonder why schools insisted on opening so early. Didn’t they know that they were only giving him a new location to nap the morning away? Perhaps in the future he can see if he could push school hours until after eleven.

The new academy student would have been happy continuing his daydream if his stomach had not made a growl that would have made jounin run in fear. He held his stomach realizing he had not grabbed a bite to eat due to his sleeping in and headed towards the nearest stand. Sano smiled as he saw his chance and snatched himself a loaf of bread as the merchant busied himself attempting to coarse a customer into a purchase. This mischievous kid munched on the loaf proudly as angry shouting followed him like a shadow coming from the now fuming merchant.

Sano chuckled and ate all the way to the academy and eagerly dove through the closing gates to the school. He marched proudly through the hallways and then into what was to be his classroom until his graduation. He smiled as he looked at some familiar faces and shouted, “Let’s learn some jutsus already!”

meatwad2000


cheerios18

PostPosted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:57 pm


meatwad2000
Sano is my character’s name. He has no surname at the moment because I am hoping to put him as part of a clan, but since I need permission normally to join a bloodline figured it might be better to first pass the academy before I go sending out a pm to ask for acceptance.

RP Example:
“Stupid! Stupid! Stupid!” Sano continually shouted the words out as if he were performing some ancient chant. In a sense it was sort of like a ritual for the rambunctious youth. The young boy skidded out his front door as his mother shouted chastisements behind him. She had been trying to wake him up for the past thirty minutes and only the final shout about the first day of the academy had jarred him from his slumber. Sano mumbled a soft curse as he took off towards the school. As he rushed through back alleys and around street corners he had to wonder why schools insisted on opening so early. Didn’t they know that they were only giving him a new location to nap the morning away? Perhaps in the future he can see if he could push school hours until after eleven.

The new academy student would have been happy continuing his daydream if his stomach had not made a growl that would have made jounin run in fear. He held his stomach realizing he had not grabbed a bite to eat due to his sleeping in and headed towards the nearest stand. Sano smiled as he saw his chance and snatched himself a loaf of bread as the merchant busied himself attempting to coarse a customer into a purchase. This mischievous kid munched on the loaf proudly as angry shouting followed him like a shadow coming from the now fuming merchant.

Sano chuckled and ate all the way to the academy and eagerly dove through the closing gates to the school. He marched proudly through the hallways and then into what was to be his classroom until his graduation. He smiled as he looked at some familiar faces and shouted, “Let’s learn some jutsus already!”


Great, pass.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 11:15 pm


Ok here I go. My roleplay characters name is Marashi Tyriu.

The streets of ???? were quiet and damp after the heavy rainfall. It had rained for several days, leaving the dirt roads muddy and nearly impassible. Marashi was waiting in the middle of the rain, his blood red hair soaked and drooping in his face. As he waited another figure jumped down from a nearby tree. "Your late," Said Marashi. The figure walked closer to Marashi, until he was only several feet away. He was a couple inches taller then marashi and had brown hair and eyes. Marashi's silver eyes tightened and remained unflinching, as did his opponent. After several seconds the browned hair boy blinked, "HA YOU BLINKED FIRST!" explaimed Marashi while pointing at the figure.

Marashi Tyriu


onixdragon

PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 11:22 pm


Marashi Tyriu
Ok here I go. My roleplay characters name is Marashi Tyriu.

The streets of ???? were quiet and damp after the heavy rainfall. It had rained for several days, leaving the dirt roads muddy and nearly impassible. Marashi was waiting in the middle of the rain, his blood red hair soaked and drooping in his face. As he waited another figure jumped down from a nearby tree. "Your late," Said Marashi. The figure walked closer to Marashi, until he was only several feet away. He was a couple inches taller then marashi and had brown hair and eyes. Marashi's silver eyes tightened and remained unflinching, as did his opponent. After several seconds the browned hair boy blinked, "HA YOU BLINKED FIRST!" explaimed Marashi while pointing at the figure.


pass. try to use some variety to start your sentences. use words like he, she, them etc... you don't have to use your characters name to start every sentence
PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 7:31 pm


Here goes nothing

Hagane stepped out of the doorway of his house into the damp air of the night. He clothed him self from head to toe in black, black haori, black hakama, and a black kosode. He inhaled deeply enjoying the scents and tastes of the big city. Hagane smiled to himself as he grabbed a black parasol from out side his door and slipped on his geta. He took a moment to look down the dark street, at all the houses whose occupants were safe in bed unaware of what lurked in their city that night. Hagane opened the parasol and set off down the dark street, and after awhile he began to hum a lullaby that had been sung to him by his long dead grandmother. The song had a dark sweeping melody that could send chills up the spine, in fact the song didn’t sound like a lullaby at all but a funeral dirge. His forest green eyes swept the rooftops and the dark doorways looking for any sign of life while the clop of his geta kept beat to the song. A flash of moonlight on steel was the only warning he got before a kunai slashed down upon him. Hagane quickly stepped back, dodging the fatal blow, but he was not fast enough to escape any injury. He felt a flash of pain across his chest where the blade cut into his flesh. He plunged his right hand into his haori and drew three senbon needles that flashed threw the air towards his target. Hagane smiled in satisfaction as he heard a grunt of pain. By now he had been able to pick out the position of his attacker and had already set into motion his death. With a squeeze of his left hand a 6 inch blade extended from the top of the parasol, Hagane then slashed sideways at the throat of his attacker and was rewarded with a gurgle that signaled the enemy was choking on his own blood. The man collapsed to the ground where he twitched for a moment under the cold stare of Hagane. When all life had left the man’s body Hagane smiled to himself and set back on his way and after a moment the haunting song picked up again.

Hagane Bala


onixdragon

PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 7:36 pm


Hagane Bala
Here goes nothing

Hagane stepped out of the doorway of his house into the damp air of the night. He clothed him self from head to toe in black, black haori, black hakama, and a black kosode. He inhaled deeply enjoying the scents and tastes of the big city. Hagane smiled to himself as he grabbed a black parasol from out side his door and slipped on his geta. He took a moment to look down the dark street, at all the houses whose occupants were safe in bed unaware of what lurked in their city that night. Hagane opened the parasol and set off down the dark street, and after awhile he began to hum a lullaby that had been sung to him by his long dead grandmother. The song had a dark sweeping melody that could send chills up the spine, in fact the song didn’t sound like a lullaby at all but a funeral dirge. His forest green eyes swept the rooftops and the dark doorways looking for any sign of life while the clop of his geta kept beat to the song. A flash of moonlight on steel was the only warning he got before a kunai slashed down upon him. Hagane quickly stepped back, dodging the fatal blow, but he was not fast enough to escape any injury. He felt a flash of pain across his chest where the blade cut into his flesh. He plunged his right hand into his haori and drew three senbon needles that flashed threw the air towards his target. Hagane smiled in satisfaction as he heard a grunt of pain. By now he had been able to pick out the position of his attacker and had already set into motion his death. With a squeeze of his left hand a 6 inch blade extended from the top of the parasol, Hagane then slashed sideways at the throat of his attacker and was rewarded with a gurgle that signaled the enemy was choking on his own blood. The man collapsed to the ground where he twitched for a moment under the cold stare of Hagane. When all life had left the man’s body Hagane smiled to himself and set back on his way and after a moment the haunting song picked up again.


pass
PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 7:56 pm


Characters Name is Marie saiyuki

Marie stepped out of the forest and into a small clearing that she calls her own. She then looked around quickly hopeing that no one will see her. she sat down next to a very old tree that she has been coming to since she was little. this tree was where her father was buried. His ashes were scattered all around this tree. Marie pulled the hood down from her cloak showing her silver hair which shood out against the darkness of the night. her dress under the cloak was an old style mandlin dress with a dragon going from the chest down. this dress meant alot to her. Maries mother made it for her. She reached up to the silver clasp on the coat she unlatched it and let the black cloak fall to the ground. Slung across her back was a one of a kind sword. this sword was her fathers. Marie treasured this she did not with to lose it. Inscritped on the blade were the the words "love conquers all" this was her family motto. Marie pulled the blade from its sheath then standing up. She turned facing this old tree and slammed the blade into the ground at the base of the tree. The words began to glow a soft blue color a the did when enemys are in the area. Marie bowed her head and waited for her attackers. no words left her lips there was no need. this was her fight and it will always will be.

Angel Marie Luna


onixdragon

PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 7:58 pm


Marie Saiyuki
Characters Name is Marie saiyuki

Marie stepped out of the forest and into a small clearing that she calls her own. She then looked around quickly hopeing that no one will see her. she sat down next to a very old tree that she has been coming to since she was little. this tree was where her father was buried. His ashes were scattered all around this tree. Marie pulled the hood down from her cloak showing her silver hair which shood out against the darkness of the night. her dress under the cloak was an old style mandlin dress with a dragon going from the chest down. this dress meant alot to her. Maries mother made it for her. She reached up to the silver clasp on the coat she unlatched it and let the black cloak fall to the ground. Slung across her back was a one of a kind sword. this sword was her fathers. Marie treasured this she did not with to lose it. Inscritped on the blade were the the words "love conquers all" this was her family motto. Marie pulled the blade from its sheath then standing up. She turned facing this old tree and slammed the blade into the ground at the base of the tree. The words began to glow a soft blue color a the did when enemys are in the area. Marie bowed her head and waited for her attackers. no words left her lips there was no need. this was her fight and it will always will be.


your grammar needs a lot of work but that is fixable. pass
PostPosted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 6:01 pm


Rp Test

Artimas's eyes suddenly opened as he heard footsteps in his house, fear overwhelmed him but after a few moments he gathered his courage and rolled out of bed silently, after a few quick moments of pondering he opened his door a bit and heard two men talking
" What if he finds us?" said the first voice
" That's impossible, hes to stupid to look for us here " said a second one
Artimas took the first thing he could find which was his sword, he crept up and open the door but the step creaked, and Artimas's house had a thing for echoing, the creak so strange it made the two men run and jump out of his house, later artimas had some men identify them as his two friends on a run away scheme

bladedark78


onixdragon

PostPosted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 8:44 pm


4 master
Rp Test

Artimas's eyes suddenly opened as he heard footsteps in his house, fear overwhelmed him but after a few moments he gathered his courage and rolled out of bed silently, after a few quick moments of pondering he opened his door a bit and heard two men talking
" What if he finds us?" said the first voice
" That's impossible, hes to stupid to look for us here " said a second one
Artimas took the first thing he could find which was his sword, he crept up and open the door but the step creaked, and Artimas's house had a thing for echoing, the creak so strange it made the two men run and jump out of his house, later artimas had some men identify them as his two friends on a run away scheme


pass.
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