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 Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 1:42 pm
Don't focus on power at this point. That's a quick way to get yourself in trouble.
Also, numeros aren't scaled in power, but in age. #42 could be just as powerful as #16, it depends on individual ability.
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Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 1:45 pm
Oh i was under a different impression but thank you for letting me know. Luck number 45
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Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 1:47 pm
Not many people are familiar with numeros scaling, but you're welcome. ^_^
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Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 1:53 pm
Once again thank you. mrgreen
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Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 2:16 pm
I posted my profile let me know what you think please.
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Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 2:23 pm
It doesn't seem to have anything that would make it overpowered.. But there are a few things that should be fixed.
First, 556 is too high for a starting age. Try to keep it under a hundred for now.
Second, you can't just be a Vasto Lorde. I believe there is something in Las Noches regarding that.. but you'll need to talk to Wulf about that as well.
Third, your personality needs a bit more detail. Try looking at other profiles to get an idea of what it should look like.
Also, where did you get those nicknames? Generally speaking, nicknames should exist as things that you have been called at some point, not just phrases that sound cool or seem dramatic.
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Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 2:24 pm
Alrighty time to go make some changes
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Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 2:26 pm
Oh, one more tiny thing. The zanpakutou and release need to have the same name. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 2:28 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 2:32 pm
It looks fine enough for now.. Although there is still the issue of the zanpakutou and resurrección needing the same name.
Also, I will say that if you plan on becoming an espada, you'll need to work on literacy and activity a bit. Focus on those two things before asking for positions, and it will generally improve your chances. But again, this is Wulf's prerogative, so you'll need to talk to him.
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Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:14 pm
Hello. I'm Jade and I am a male human being. I've posted an incomplete profile in the profile section and I uh... I'm working on the biography right now which is in Haiku form.
That is all.
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Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:44 pm
Listen to it, it's got cake.
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Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:49 pm
Sadly, 'tis nothing but a lie.
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Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 4:26 pm
No, his cakes legit like the OJ Simpson Case.
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Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 4:59 pm
So.. his cake is going to write a book saying what it would have tasted like if it wasn't a lie?
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