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 Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 11:01 pm
Hey hey hey, no more nuclear anything in this thread!
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 12:05 am
"Of course she is a mega babe..."
Great story so farm Seaphron.
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 12:21 am
@Zen - Glad to see you reading my stories again. Glad you liked it.
@Tatsu - rofl Glad you liked it!
Chapter Four Added!
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 12:30 am
My line was honoured, Awesome, pure awesome
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 1:26 am
Not bad. Not much happened, but It was still pretty fun to read. Keep up the good work.
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 2:17 am
It's interesting. A good read, to say the least. I'll be keeping up with it.
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 12:48 am
@Sauvie - XD Glad you liked it.
@Tatsu - Hopefully this one has a bit more too it.
@Fish - Yay!
◄ Chapter Five Added ►
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 12:49 am
Koosei Owned Trenn again
Great work
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 12:58 am
"O.O.....I'm gonna die..."
xd
Nice chapter Seaphron.
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 1:05 am
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 7:31 am
'Tis funneh! domokun
Though I did notice a few spelling mistakes. At one point you wrote "sale" when you meant to write "sail".
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 7:35 am
Masamune 5.0 'Tis funneh! domokun Though I did notice a few spelling mistakes. At one point you wrote "sale" when you meant to write "sail". Do spelling and Grammar errors really bother you that much?
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 7:43 am
Sauvie Masamune 5.0 'Tis funneh! domokun Though I did notice a few spelling mistakes. At one point you wrote "sale" when you meant to write "sail". Do spelling and Grammar errors really bother you that much? Not really, but I just thought that I'd give some suggestions instead of just always complimenting.
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 7:46 am
Masamune 5.0 Sauvie Masamune 5.0 'Tis funneh! domokun Though I did notice a few spelling mistakes. At one point you wrote "sale" when you meant to write "sail". Do spelling and Grammar errors really bother you that much? Not really, but I just thought that I'd give some suggestions instead of just always complimenting. Alright fair enough suggestions are allways good, Quick question... Do you read my story, mine is a trainwreck of grammatical blood and spelling shrapnal
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 8:25 am
Sauvie Masamune 5.0 Sauvie Masamune 5.0 'Tis funneh! domokun Though I did notice a few spelling mistakes. At one point you wrote "sale" when you meant to write "sail". Do spelling and Grammar errors really bother you that much? Not really, but I just thought that I'd give some suggestions instead of just always complimenting. Alright fair enough suggestions are allways good, Quick question... Do you read my story, mine is a trainwreck of grammatical blood and spelling shrapnal I read yours, except I sometimes forget to comment.
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