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 Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 1:19 pm
Carly smirked at Micheal's consern.
"It'll take a lot more then that to scare me!" she said to Micheal happily. 'Trust me,' she said to herself, 'I've seen alot worse.'
She gave a quick strech to get her spirit settled back in to her body, right now it was moving all over the place. When it finallly stopped moving so much she turned around to face Cid.
"It was a pleasure meeting you," she said, with an evil-like smile. "We must have another meeting of this sort again," she said almost sarcastically.
((i know...still pretty short...but its better (i think) ^^))
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 1:23 pm
((@freak: I do hate to be a bother but your posts are still pretty onelinerish. Perhaps you can give your character more movements, discribe things more do that should give you length. Even make an inner monologue happen in their head that should help alot.))
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 1:24 pm
((Sorry, will change now ))
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 1:29 pm
RAven walks over to where Shino and Cid are."Stupid kids.They fall in love then go and get themselfs killed."She smirks and sits down on the floor.
Shino smiles she looks at Cid's face."So are you going to be ok?"She seems very worried and her eyes starts to water.Crying will only make it worse for him.She quickly wipes away the tears before he sees."I just want you to be ok."
The little girl walk behind Shino and looks at the boy.In a very soft quiet voice she says."Shino....chan,who is this boy?"So walks around him looking him over.
RAven smiles,"Kelly get over here and leave them alone."She leans against the wall watching everything.
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 1:40 pm
((@Freak:quite, with time I assure you that you'll get better. If you ever want help you can always look at some of my rps. They are not the best by far but if they can ever give you an idea of what you can put in a post then by all means I am happy to help.))
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 1:46 pm
((yeah, im new to RPing, so im still not that good with getting into character. But it helps when people actually HELP you instead of going, "HEY!!! You with the short post...YOU SUCK!!" .....Cause that really dosent help...at alll!
So thanks for your help, i'll keep working on it!))
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 1:47 pm
Athin still sitting next to Cid looks at Shino and see her eyes start to water and thinks to himself 'wow she really cares deeply about him. I wonder what she would've done during me and Cid's fight.' Just then Athin saw his friend Kar come threw the door." Hey Kar over here
kar came throught the door slowly as slowly and as quietly as he could He heard Athin call Him and looked around. he saw Athin with a bunch of peole. He smelt the oder of a battle and noticed Athins friends on the floor. He walked over to athin and said " Hey athin hows it been? I smeel that a battle has taken place here."
" Hey Kar Ya its been good... So I see you finally made it to Ria high. hh I want you to meet my friends" Athen looked at Shino and said " Shino, Cid, This is my friend Kar
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 1:48 pm
Rent sat in a corner crying. His tears couldn't stop he just couldn't belive what happen. "Why did I do that." The demons tried to comfet him but they couldn't "I must talk with that man but not now I feel too sad to do a thing." He laided there looking at Cid
X walked into the trainging hall wear tons of blodd soaked bandages. "Hey Cid thanks for taking me to the hospital but looks like all I needed were bandages." He lied he just didn't like the whole you need rest thing. He walked over to Rent and took a seat next to him. "Cheer up brother school just started." X grabed his robe and put it back on and he grabed his hat. He put the hat on only he let his face be seen.
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 1:49 pm
Cid looks up at shino, "I will be fine dont worry." "Who is the little girl over there beside Raven," he aked still stayingin hisposition. He wondered why michaelhadnt left yet, was it to make sure he was alright, na that couldnt be it. It had to be something, maybe that girl. He turned to Carly, "the pleasure is all mine, I hope he comes back so I can finally kill the b*****d," he said laughingly to Carly. He turned to X, "dont mention it and sorry I ran out on ya."
Michael laughed at Cid's dumb comment. His insigna stopped its glowing. "Good I dont want you to be scared," he said to her in a soft and low voice. Michael was thinking on the battle. He had many elven magic to spare especially cause of his swords little secret. He new it would come in handy in one of the next fights he might have with Cid. "I still win my friend," he said lowly.
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 2:00 pm
Carly was now fuming. If it was possible, flames would be shooting from her ears, but sadly, it was not possible for her
"Trust me, Mr. Cid, you will do nothing of the kind," Carly sneered, "You will die by this blade....even if i have to shove it into your chest myself," she said, pointing to Micheals sword.
Carly was not about to let this man live the rest of his life peacefully, esspecially after what i did to Micheal.
'That little twit better watch his back...before i ssend a spirit into him and explode his little heart," Carly thought to herself.
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 2:04 pm
((@freak: Looking good.))
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 2:05 pm
"Listen Rent you need to control your demons." He got up and helped Rent up. "Should you lose control there might be someone stronger even still and kaboom you will be dead got it." X looked serious at Rent.
Rent wiped away his tears and looked at his brother. Rent gave X a hug but X just stood there. "I understand brother but I am just glad you are alive." He let go of X.
"Good." X looked at Cid. "Hey Cid sorry to interupt but is there a place where me and Rent can just relax we could both use it." X walked over to Cid. Rent followed X closly.
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 2:14 pm
Michael looked at Carly, "I will be the one killing him, dont mind his bowels, he cant kill me even if his life depended on it and which it does." Michael smiled at Calry. He grabbed her hand laughed by how easily she got ticked off after hearing Cid's dumb comment. Michael didnt think she would react so protectively. He laughed again.
Cid laughed at Carly's remark then turned to X as he approached, "I dont know I sleep beside this place anyways heh," he laughed as he answered. Cid sat up from Shino's lap and turned to her, "Thank you again shino." He say that she was whiping tears away from her, "dont cry, it is alright. I am fine for now." Cid cracked his knuckles.
((I g2g be back later k, and talk to you tomorrow if you arent on when I get back))
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 2:20 pm
Raven was a little bit disturbed by what Carly had said to Cid."Hey you little punk watch what you say to poeple who could kick your a**."She threw the cigarette on the ground."You got it?"She looks at Michael,"You too."
Shino says,"Raven! Watch who your talking to!"Shino looks down at Cid still in her lap,and then at Carly.She gives her a wicked smile."You will do no such thing while Im around okay?!"She looks at Kelly,"Cid this is Kelly she is here trying to learn for her angel exam.Her parents told me to watch over her."She motions at the little girl."
Kelly points and Raven with her hand over her mouth."Oooo Raven said a bad word!"She giggles and runs around to Michael.She looks him up and down and Carly too."You bad people need to be nice!"She turns around and waves at Shino."They be nice now Oni-chan!"
Midnight gasps,"Kelly get away from there right now!"He runs after her.
"Okie mr.Midnight!"She runs back over to RAven.She plays with the flowers in her hair,and twiters her wings."YAy go Oni-chan!"
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 2:48 pm
Carly took a deep breath, and shook off Cid's comment. For now Micheal was alive and well, so no need to yell at Cid about it.
"Good! I must say, for a friend, he sure isn't friendly." Carly always pictured friends to be there for each other(not to kill each other). But these two seemed more eager to kill each other then to help each other.
Carly fingers tightened around Micheal's hand, glad to feel his flesh warm and alive.
'I would have midded that feeling,' she thought to herself.
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