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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 3:33 pm
metal mist Ace Zero metal mist Ace Zero metal mist ((i went into movies and sls they can get you extra points, techs, and madeup slots.)) Techno Mold: Hacked Entrance- (this is Destined Entrance, improved to meet the need for touching the opponent 3 times to get him/her inside, alsoedited to match my format XP) Techno Mold: Power Limiter- (this is Don't Mess with me!, except it will have the limiter of for every 10 posts my opponent cannot use madeups, i cannot use them for 5 posts.[also note that posts with length of 2 or more still counts as 1 post, also it doesnt mean that someone can just post 10 times in a row to get through it faster.]) Techno Mold: Celestial Mark- (its Celestial Mark just formated to the same name style.) How does it only target made ups? If you answer that then I will approve. It has to make sense. technically i dont know, but then most of the stuff in here doesnt make sense. is it ok if i say it cancels 5 of each persons techniques then? it could be just madeups, or anything else. Why does it cancel 5 jutsus and not all? i dont know! i was just going to have it cancel out madeups but i dont kniow, that and canceling all techs is a little much, i would have to loose use of all of mine mostlikely. besides if i want to do that i can just bring them to The World.if you have any good ideas for it then tell me. I have one But I won't tell you.
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 4:10 pm
Ace Zero Great drainage of the chakra: Does this technique have to be preformed every time that you drain the chakra out of the jutsu that is preformed to attack? Yes.
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 5:18 pm
Um I already put this one on my profile but here you go. Leaf cloud jutsu: This creates a cloud of leaves, the jutsu can be made of other plants like thorny vines or poison ivey.
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 5:42 pm
Ace Zero Great drainage of the chakra: With that cleared up, I see no reason the technique should not be CLEARED then. grindzy Leaf Cloud Jutsu: I am confused about this technique. It makes a cloud of leaves which I get, but what is the point of the technique? What does it do other than just make a cloud of leaves? I am rather confused about what happened in the last two pages of this thread. If I did not respond to a technique that has something that needed looking at from those pages then please repost it since I am not going to spend my time attempting to figure out what the heck was going on there.
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 2:50 pm
((Some of that was my fault lol srry))
Heres my new Uchiha made-up
Tempered Skin: Through years of chakra control and practice Loki has managed to temper his skin to resist extreme heat and cold when it is inactivate((Passivley)) and when the technique is activated it gives his skin a sort of armor like quality causing Kunai, senbon, Shuriken, and bassicly alls orts of projectiles to bounce off harmlessly for 2 turns and after that the seal reverts to passive protection for 4 turns.
Passive: Gives resistance to Extreme heat and cold Active: Armored skin
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 5:07 pm
klamachpin YoshiMitsu789 Shadow Seal Copier… I see where this is going and I am just not sure I want that to be allowed in the guild. I am going to think about it for a while longer. you said you would think about it. what do you say? will you let me have it as a late christmas gift?
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 5:19 pm
Loki Angel of Darkness ((Some of that was my fault lol srry)) Heres my new Uchiha made-up Tempered Skin: Through years of chakra control and practice Loki has managed to temper his skin to resist extreme heat and cold when it is inactivate((Passivley)) and when the technique is activated it gives his skin a sort of armor like quality causing Kunai, senbon, Shuriken, and bassicly alls orts of projectiles to bounce off harmlessly for 2 turns and after that the seal reverts to passive protection for 4 turns. Passive: Gives resistance to Extreme heat and cold Active: Armored skin Pssed but will not be added till after your fight.
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 6:40 pm
I am sorry that I did not reply earlier... YoshiMitsu789 Yoshi Shadow Seal Copier: Copies a seal of any kind and is placed on the other side of the body that it is on. This will amplify the power into a more broad range. If the seal makes a person stronger, it will also make them faster and things like that. It only helps the person that has the original seal. Can't copy a seal from one person to another. Takes chakra to activate and deactivate. None to keep it there. It will also disappear if the person with it dies or the user dies. Can't increase the power of Orichi powers because the powers are limitless after a certain amount of kills and training. I would like to see a limit on the lenght of post that "Shadow Seal Copier" remains active. Make it last only 10 post and then you can have it. You can also remove the deactivation cost.
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 12:56 pm
Big Bang: The user performs some handseals, Rather a bit. Oil begins to rain from the sky, The user exhales Alot of gas out his mouth. This takes place for for around 10 minutes, However the user can stop spewing gas at any time. The user can also set the disinated area for where it will rain oil.
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 5:15 pm
klamachpin I am sorry that I did not reply earlier... YoshiMitsu789 Yoshi Shadow Seal Copier: Copies a seal of any kind and is placed on the other side of the body that it is on. This will amplify the power into a more broad range. If the seal makes a person stronger, it will also make them faster and things like that. It only helps the person that has the original seal. Can't copy a seal from one person to another. Takes chakra to activate and deactivate. None to keep it there. It will also disappear if the person with it dies or the user dies. Can't increase the power of Orichi powers because the powers are limitless after a certain amount of kills and training. I would like to see a limit on the lenght of post that "Shadow Seal Copier" remains active. Make it last only 10 post and then you can have it. You can also remove the deactivation cost. Done. Lastes 10 posts after the post of activation. No deactivation cost
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 6:23 pm
After my most recent death ive found that diseases suck nuts sad so im gonna replace one of my made-ups with a technique to help me resist that
Id like to replace my
Bring the Rain Khouryho! Shikai! With: C-Virus Stage 2 After more intensive practice with manipulating the C-Virus Loki has managed to perfect the virus to stimulate his antibodies to help him resist more advanced diseases keeping him from getting infected through various jutsu and purging his system of disease when activated(costs 1000 chakra to activate but its not permanent cost)
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 6:44 pm
If I remember correctly unless your killed you can't switch made ups.
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 6:48 pm
damn that sux sad i dont wanna die... again sad
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 7:01 pm
I am going to reveiw all of the make-ups tomorrow or the next day. If someone does not do it before then.
On a side note: No one can get their make-ups changed out in the middle of a fight with another character.
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 7:56 pm
time for my infectious ideas XD: Each of these takes up the ability to use the technique for some time. at least a week if not more. Mutation only takes away 20% of chakra per usage, meaning that each time its visited it takes 20% total chakra.
Tyrant Virus- this is a virus that can be inhaled if a vile of it is broken open. it can also be injected or added in any other way. this is one very helpfull disease as it causes all dead/dieing cells to reanimate, which is why it is known as the Zombie bringer. when it is used within a living person/animal/plant, it can cause the cells to die in a way and revive shortly after but it usually only starts to infect the first area where it entered. it takes 5 posts for this to completely breakdown the body's system and take control. once the virus has control it causes the brain to act on its most primary function, to eat. once this has the brain the body can be damaged in any way and it wont stop it from moving. the only ways to stop it are by severing th spinal cord at the neck, or by destroying the brain. damage to the heart is worthless for it doesnt pump as much blood as it used to and only a bit of blood would end up lost in the process.
Beta Virus- a virus that was released to the public before it could be completed(info wise). when it is used it has the potential to close any wounds that may appear on a person at any time. although this may seem like a good virus instead of a bad one it is as destructive as it is good. once it has entered the body, which it does by injection or breathing if it is broken, it can cause the cells to create a cancerous state making the cells rapidly reproduce not following the stages of mitosis completely. the entire reason it heals the body's wounds is because of the rapid cell production which can kill the body in a short period of time or just make the body grow larger until it looses all of its food. nce the body runs out of energy/food it begins to die out as the cells continue to grow unstopped until the body dies. this takes approximately 9 posts length to complete.
Zeta Virus- this is a very potent virus that was believed to have been a cure to cancer as it stopped the growth of cancer cells within a body. but unfortunately when it stops cell growth of cancer cells it stops all cell grouth within a body and once done it will remove all hair from the body, similar to chemotherapy. once this starts to happen all muscle cells are smoothed/condensed to a great strength while leaving the body looking like it is weak. this virus takes most of the brains functions when it takes control leaving the body with few functions, one is pain, and another is need to feed. the major downside to this virus is that the body becomes very worthless in light because of how their bodies change to the point that they dont create new cells. so sunlight will burn their bodies completely making them fear leaving dark places except at night. it can be injected but once one has changed completely the virus becomes slightly more airborn, not all are able to be infected by this, unless very close to the creature. this takes 7 posts to change the body, during which they loose hair and begin to loose control in light.(note:can be used to combat Beta Virus, but virus needs to be kept in check after this.)
Mutation- this is plain and simple as it says. it changes the body form causing cells to mutate in a different way. it can only be used on a viral infectee. once they have become infected they must go to a lab where they are strapped to a table with no chance of escape as they are put onto a life support system to keep them alive as they mutate bodies changing completely. they will technically die during this stage but will come back shortly after as they are still getting the nutrients needed. there are several things that can happen when they mutate. they become a servant to their creator though. people can only be brought here within the time limit of posts once they have posted their last one before changing then they can not enter. this technique can also be used to capture a person and infect them directly although they must be unconscious/genjutsu if not then they can not travel to the lab.
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