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 Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 4:52 am
My character name is: Taiyo
Taiyo was sitting down on his bed with a game controller in hand. His fingers moved in a rapid furry as he pressed buttons. His tounge lay on top of his lip as he played. "Come on, come on." Taiyo thought. He was in the middle of a boss fight and from the looks of it he was not on the winning end.
"Taiyo! Come here for a second." His mother chirped from downstairs. Taiyo ignored her though and continued playing his game. His mother waited for a few more seconds. "Taiyo, come here now!" she shouted. Even though his mother had called him his fingers never left the controller.
"A few more seconds." He replied. A scowl grew on the mother's face. "No, come here now." She stated. When his mother yelled Taiyo's concentration broke and he pressed the wrong button. His face fell in defeat as the music began to play and the screen read "Game Over".
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:37 am
Tsujae My character name is: Taiyo Taiyo was sitting down on his bed with a game controller in hand. His fingers moved in a rapid furry as he pressed buttons. His tounge lay on top of his lip as he played. "Come on, come on." Taiyo thought. He was in the middle of a boss fight and from the looks of it he was not on the winning end. "Taiyo! Come here for a second." His mother chirped from downstairs. Taiyo ignored her though and continued playing his game. His mother waited for a few more seconds. "Taiyo, come here now!" she shouted. Even though his mother had called him his fingers never left the controller. "A few more seconds." He replied. A scowl grew on the mother's face. "No, come here now." She stated. When his mother yelled Taiyo's concentration broke and he pressed the wrong button. His face fell in defeat as the music began to play and the screen read "Game Over". pass...OMG have i been there. I ******** hate that lol
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Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 2:34 am
My Character's Name is: Ayame.
The library was a quiet place. With a pile of books stacked neatly on either side of her she read book after book in silence and then just as she reached the most exciting part of her latest novel a shout interupted her dream world, "Time for bed!"
The entire world she had created dissolved and there she sat at her bedroom desk with her mother at the door insisting she go to bed. Looking at the clock ayame smiled. It was 2 am. She had been in her dream world for the past day. "I will I will, I just need to finnish the chapter..." Ayame said turning back to the book and continued to read. Of course once she was in the book's world again she completely finnished the book before realising she had only intended to finnish that chapter.
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Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 4:36 am
My character's name is Umi Anzaki:
She could hear the sound of screams in the distance but she still didn't open her eyes. She was too stunned out of what had happened a few moments ago that she just couldn't open her eyes. Instead she stayed curled up in her bed covering her ears. "No!" she screamed. Then she suddenly sat up and opened her eyes. "Oh, It was just a night mare..." she stretches and takes out a picture of her siblings from under her pillow. "I wish you guys were here." she says to herself. Umi sighs and gets up. She dresses in her usual clothes, walks across the hallway to the door and leaves without breakfast. As she walks to the academy she remembers the old days, with her siblings supporting her everyday while she trained after class. She was so deep in thought she doesn't even realize what shes doing or where shes going anymore. CRASH! Umi walked right into tree. "Ow..." she says rubbing her head. A ninja she never saw before walks up to her and helps her up. " Are you okay?" the ninja says. Umi nods without looking at the kind lady. "I`m fine." Umi says unpationately. "Thats good. Watch where your going next time okay?" the ninja says. Umi finally turns around and looks at the lady. She realizes shes seen her before but can't tell who the ninja is. She doesn't respond to the question. " Well, it was nice seeing you again!" the lady walks away waving goodbye. " Is it me..." "or is she extremely perky........?"
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Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 5:56 am
My characters name is Kolo B Licin
Kolo had been sitting in the same chair for the past three years, taking this class, learning how to become an effective RPer. He had been studying every chance he could. He was a smart kid, classes didn't worry him at all. In fact, he liked to learn, so it saddened him to be leaving these hallowed halls. He almost did not want to leave; but he knew he had to. He took his final exam and immediately took it to the teacher, a person of whom Kolo had great respect for. "Ma'am, I have finished the exam, I hope I will be seeing you again soon."
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Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 9:38 am
Onix, don't be lazy and remember to update the list of graduated people and last checked date on the first page. Demonic Storm My Character's Name is: Ayame. The library was a quiet place. With a pile of books stacked neatly on either side of her she read book after book in silence and then just as she reached the most exciting part of her latest novel a shout interupted her dream world, "Time for bed!" The entire world she had created dissolved and there she sat at her bedroom desk with her mother at the door insisting she go to bed. Looking at the clock ayame smiled. It was 2 am. She had been in her dream world for the past day. "I will I will, I just need to finnish the chapter..." Ayame said turning back to the book and continued to read. Of course once she was in the book's world again she completely finnished the book before realising she had only intended to finnish that chapter. A bit of spelling errors here and there. But generally, pretty good. Good job on the length too - pass.
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Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 9:39 am
KonohaUmi My character's name is Umi Anzaki: She could hear the sound of screams in the distance but she still didn't open her eyes. She was too stunned out of what had happened a few moments ago that she just couldn't open her eyes. Instead she stayed curled up in her bed covering her ears. "No!" she screamed. Then she suddenly sat up and opened her eyes. "Oh, It was just a night mare..." she stretches and takes out a picture of her siblings from under her pillow. "I wish you guys were here." she says to herself. Umi sighs and gets up. She dresses in her usual clothes, walks across the hallway to the door and leaves without breakfast. As she walks to the academy she remembers the old days, with her siblings supporting her everyday while she trained after class. She was so deep in thought she doesn't even realize what shes doing or where shes going anymore. CRASH! Umi walked right into tree. "Ow..." she says rubbing her head. A ninja she never saw before walks up to her and helps her up. " Are you okay?" the ninja says. Umi nods without looking at the kind lady. "I`m fine." Umi says unpationately. "Thats good. Watch where your going next time okay?" the ninja says. Umi finally turns around and looks at the lady. She realizes shes seen her before but can't tell who the ninja is. She doesn't respond to the question. " Well, it was nice seeing you again!" the lady walks away waving goodbye. " Is it me..." "or is she extremely perky........?" Pass. Good length, but try break up paragraphs. It's a bit distracting if it just looks like a large clump of text.
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Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 9:40 am
I Survived My Autopsy My characters name is Kolo B Licin Kolo had been sitting in the same chair for the past three years, taking this class, learning how to become an effective RPer. He had been studying every chance he could. He was a smart kid, classes didn't worry him at all. In fact, he liked to learn, so it saddened him to be leaving these hallowed halls. He almost did not want to leave; but he knew he had to. He took his final exam and immediately took it to the teacher, a person of whom Kolo had great respect for. "Ma'am, I have finished the exam, I hope I will be seeing you again soon." Haha. Pass. Interesting perspective...I haven't seen anyone do their graduation post from the RP Academy Student's view. xDD Good job on the length.
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The Ghost of Xmas Awesome
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Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 1:08 pm
My character's Name is Xenon Marboroshi
The sun was bright as it shone down through the small breaks in the trees. It danced upon the ground in a strange and iridescent pattern that for a small time managed to harness his attention. Xenon wasn't really in all that much of a hurry. But then he never seemed to be no matter what he was doing.
His dull expression seemed entirely mellow as he reached into the pocket of his lab coat, and pulled out a small black book. With a pen from the same pocket, he opened the palm sized and began to scribble down something. Perhaps itwas a note about the scene, perhaps it was a theory inspiried by his surroundings, maybe it was something entirely unrelated like "Must remember to buy milk."
But whatever it was when he finished he slipped his precious journal away and instead reached for the pocket watch he kept, where else, in his pocket. He snapped it open and examined it's face with a careless air. Apparently his watch told him something because he put it away, secured his hands in the pockets of his white coat, and looked up one last time. The sun shimmered off his glasses and for one moment, his mouth crawled into one of the most disturbing grins ever seen on a teenage face... then he was calm again, and he wandered off... it was time to go to the academy...
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Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 3:06 pm
The Ghost of Xmas Awesome My character's Name is Xenon Marboroshi The sun was bright as it shone down through the small breaks in the trees. It danced upon the ground in a strange and iridescent pattern that for a small time managed to harness his attention. Xenon wasn't really in all that much of a hurry. But then he never seemed to be no matter what he was doing. His dull expression seemed entirely mellow as he reached into the pocket of his lab coat, and pulled out a small black book. With a pen from the same pocket, he opened the palm sized and began to scribble down something. Perhaps itwas a note about the scene, perhaps it was a theory inspiried by his surroundings, maybe it was something entirely unrelated like "Must remember to buy milk." But whatever it was when he finished he slipped his precious journal away and instead reached for the pocket watch he kept, where else, in his pocket. He snapped it open and examined it's face with a careless air. Apparently his watch told him something because he put it away, secured his hands in the pockets of his white coat, and looked up one last time. The sun shimmered off his glasses and for one moment, his mouth crawled into one of the most disturbing grins ever seen on a teenage face... then he was calm again, and he wandered off... it was time to go to the academy... Nice! Very descriptive - pass!
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 1:05 pm
((btw I haven't chosen a village but here I go))
the young shinobi was sprinting through the forest, it had rained, so the earth was soft and you cud smell the kinda smell you get after it rains.
at the other side of the forest the city was at it earliest stage of wakening stages, the men and women where moving out to there works, children running of to school, there he was late "again"
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 3:56 pm
edoz9502 ((btw I haven't chosen a village but here I go)) the young shinobi was sprinting through the forest, it had rained, so the earth was soft and you cud smell the kinda smell you get after it rains. at the other side of the forest the city was at it earliest stage of wakening stages, the men and women where moving out to there works, children running of to school, there he was late "again" Please capitalize properly and watch out for missing punctuation. Also, be careful about where to break paragraphs... Besides that - pass.
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Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 1:58 pm
RP sample:
Ito walks slowly into the village, he looks around since he had not been here in a few months. Everything seemed the same, but something felt weird. ito ingnored the feeling and began running, randomly jumping off building's walls.
Finally Ito got to his appartment to find his stuff outside, it wasn't even all his stuff, someone took his favorite piggybank. "No one touches Piggy!" Ito runs off in a mad fray and trips and falls down the steps.
((Oh and can someone explain to me in a PM the D 20 thing))
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Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 4:16 pm
My character's name is Kane Inuzuka.
A slight breeze rustled the leaves on a large oak, it's limbs creaking from age. Wild eyes stared out from the shadows of one limb, observing every small detail of the small village that lay before them. The ninja stepped out into the moonlight, revealing himself. Kane scratched one cheek where a distinct red fang was painted, and yawned, ready to finish his mission and get some sleep. "Let's go," he murmered, and jumped from the branch, landing lightly on the soft dirt, sending a small cloud into the crisp night air. Another shape landed a little to his right, and he reached out and laid a hand on his dog's head. "You ready, Ryoko?" he asked the canine. The dog grunted once, and slightly nodded it's maw, signaling his answer. Kane nodded back. "Alright." He turned his gaze back towards the village, seeking his targets home. Reaching into his pocket, Kane pulled a piece of cloth out, holding it towards Ryoko. "Where is he, boy?" The dog leaned towards it, his nose twitching as he smelt it. Ryoko raised his head, sniffing the crisp air. When he caught the scent, he turned towards the house and let a low growl out of his maw. "Good boy. Let's move out." As Kane finished speaking, the two began running towards the house, intent on the mission. Kane allowed a small grin pass across his face, glad to have a worthwhile mission. When the two finally reached the building, Kane signaled Ryoko to wait outside. With a small grin, Kane slipped through an open window, carefull not to make any sound. As he dropped to the floor, Kane surveyed the room he was in. He decided it was a bedroom, and his target's at that. Luckey me, he thought to himself as he crept towards the bed. There were two figures, so he sniffed the air, detecting the target was the one on the right. Kane silently reached into his pocket, pulling out a double edged kunai. He rose his arm, ready to finish his mission, and get home. He didn't like killing an unarmed opponant, but his mission was to kill the man while he slept. Kane stabbed down, blood spattering across the room, and a blood-chilling scream spilt the night.
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