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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2016 11:39 pm
Divine Entropy Hello and welcome to the guild! I hope you have fun in this rp. Unfortunately we are still working on somethings, so please keep that in mind and have patience with us. Please make sure to read the Rules and reference the Restrictions List. Be sure to quote or pm the captain in charge of the city you wish to join before making a profile forum.That way we can review it all together in one go and approve of abilities and such. If you need more help with character ideas we are always glad to help and don't be afraid to ask. Also, sorry for the long read, but we had issues in the past that we wanted to make some things clear ^^;; Other than that we can't wait to see what you come up with.If you have any questions let us know. Thank you so much. I'm still trying to figure things out since this is my first time doing this kinda thing. sweatdrop I'm happy I was accepted to join though. I'll do my best to figure things out and ask any questions if I get stuck.
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2016 12:02 am
xXxMystica-MysteryxXx Divine Entropy Hello and welcome to the guild! I hope you have fun in this rp. Unfortunately we are still working on somethings, so please keep that in mind and have patience with us. Please make sure to read the Rules and reference the Restrictions List. Be sure to quote or pm the captain in charge of the city you wish to join before making a profile forum.That way we can review it all together in one go and approve of abilities and such. If you need more help with character ideas we are always glad to help and don't be afraid to ask. Also, sorry for the long read, but we had issues in the past that we wanted to make some things clear ^^;; Other than that we can't wait to see what you come up with.If you have any questions let us know. Thank you so much. I'm still trying to figure things out since this is my first time doing this kinda thing. sweatdrop I'm happy I was accepted to join though. I'll do my best to figure things out and ask any questions if I get stuck. Haha its all good!
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Divine Entropy Vice Captain
Star-Crossed Lightbringer
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2016 1:20 pm
Hello everyone! Apologies for being so absent and out of the roleplay (i.e. not even making a character, so literally out of the roleplay) but I had been super busy with university, work, and personal life. I hope y'all can understand and pardon the absence.
With that being said, I've been reading and creeping here and there so I hope to join you guys really soon! Hopefully the one or two characters I make will fill some niches (and provide some population) in some of the less active gangs ( :.
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2016 5:54 pm
Augustus Winter Hello everyone! Apologies for being so absent and out of the roleplay (i.e. not even making a character, so literally out of the roleplay) but I had been super busy with university, work, and personal life. I hope y'all can understand and pardon the absence.
With that being said, I've been reading and creeping here and there so I hope to join you guys really soon! Hopefully the one or two characters I make will fill some niches (and provide some population) in some of the less active gangs ( :. That's fine. Real life gets busy sometimes and always comes first. XD We just want to make sure people are still planning on participating. Take your time and let us know if you need any help coming up with ideas or when you think you will be ready to start making characters.
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ShadowxOfxAxHeart Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2016 4:45 am
Hey guys! Sorry for not posting for a while. Dealing with personal issues plus working 2 jobs. I finally have time to sit down and reply to the other post. You should see it soon. I wanted let u know that I'm still here just gonna take a bit longer to reply because of it.
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Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2016 11:02 am
CelestePhoenix Hey guys! Sorry for not posting for a while. Dealing with personal issues plus working 2 jobs. I finally have time to sit down and reply to the other post. You should see it soon. I wanted let u know that I'm still here just gonna take a bit longer to reply because of it. It's alright, please take your time.
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Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2017 9:16 am
Hey guys, I wanted to make another character, but this time in the Military that Raven is in charge of (I promise to not be difficult this time lol). I am not sure if this position is filled, but I was looking at Major General position. If that is taken, I would choose Colonal. If that is also taken, let me know what positions are available. Once all vice approved, I can start to create the character. I wanted to get approval first before I do anything.
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Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2017 4:32 pm
CelestePhoenix Hey guys, I wanted to make another character, but this time in the Military that Raven is in charge of (I promise to not be difficult this time lol). I am not sure if this position is filled, but I was looking at Major General position. If that is taken, I would choose Colonal. If that is also taken, let me know what positions are available. Once all vice approved, I can start to create the character. I wanted to get approval first before I do anything. Sorry for a bit of delay in response. Raven is a bit busy so I'll/we'll just rely stuff and just do the usual run down of character creation~ So unfortunately none of us are really comfortable with you having any more high ranked potions due to how you rp'd the other one which mucks up things for other characters and other potions. HOWEVER, the plus side of the military is that there is no specific job like the gangs with enforcer, Intel collector, spy, that jazz. That is not to say positions dont matter at all with the military- instead its more like who gets what orders from who, who you have to listen to, follow your orders/do as youre told,respect higher ranked officers etc. etc. That being said most the military won't be doing much until plot picks up or gang activity picks up.
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Divine Entropy Vice Captain
Star-Crossed Lightbringer
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Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2017 10:00 am
It's no problem. I appreciate the response. If it's alright, I would still like to create a military character. If you have an idea on area in which you think will work best for everyone, I am all for it. I can always wait for day 2 or whenever the rp picks up to post that character. In the end, it's up to all vice.
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Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2017 3:41 pm
CelestePhoenix It's no problem. I appreciate the response. If it's alright, I would still like to create a military character. If you have an idea on area in which you think will work best for everyone, I am all for it. I can always wait for day 2 or whenever the rp picks up to post that character. In the end, it's up to all vice. Thats fine. Sergeant Major and down are your options as a rank to choose from. You can still create your character now, and I personally would prefer that so i'm not caught up in helping making your character while trying to post replies so might as well do it when its slow, but wait to actually rp them on day 2.
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Divine Entropy Vice Captain
Star-Crossed Lightbringer
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Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2017 5:35 pm
Will do. I will work on character now. I am fine with Sergeant Major.
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2017 7:13 pm
Idea for weapon, concerning my character. She has metal left arm, due to losing her real one. She has a small blade attached to it that extract when she wants it to. That is only used when she does up close combat. Also, she is proficient with some gun type weapons, but better at snipping in the distant.
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xX-Void-Rayne-Xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2017 7:43 pm
CelestePhoenix Idea for weapon, concerning my character. She has metal left arm, due to losing her real one. She has a small blade attached to it that extract when she wants it to. That is only used when she does up close combat. Also, she is proficient with some gun type weapons, but better at snipping in the distant. Alright, so there shouldn't be any issue with a hidden blade in her arm, as long as you're reasonable about it, and respectful about when you're using it. As far as firearms, the limit is three, and we would need a list on your profile of your weaponry. She can have a sniper, but can't carry it around unless she is working. Doesn't look good to walk around with it, ya know? Small handguns are fine to carry around, as long as they are properly holstered/hidden etc etc. Let us know if you have anymore questions!
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2017 8:12 pm
Her backstory (Needed Approval):
-Lost both parents at early age (Raised by her Uncle)
-Military career has been tradition in her family (She opposed against it)
-Uncle forced/trained her, placing her in life/death situation to survive (Abused her excessively for years) and become a soldier. (Losing her eye in the process)
-She was forced to join military at a young age, gaining combat experience and being proficient with certain gun weapons.
-At 18, she escaped from her Uncle, but severely wounded in the process, losing her left arm.
-Nearly bled to death, but was found by a group of scientists.
-They provided her with a glass eye and metal left hand
-They discovered she had a illness (Not curable at the time), and was placed in cryogenic state for 90 years (Need to decide on exact years she was frozen for)
-Once there was a cure, they revived her
-She woke with amnesia (No memory of her life)
-She continued in military, and currently in Zlido as a Sergeant Major
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Divine Entropy Vice Captain
Star-Crossed Lightbringer
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2017 9:38 pm
CelestePhoenix Her backstory (Needed Approval): -Lost both parents at early age (Raised by her Uncle) -Military career has been tradition in her family (She opposed against it) -Uncle forced/trained her, placing her in life/death situation to survive (Abused her excessively for years) and become a soldier. (Losing her eye in the process) -She was forced to join military at a young age, gaining combat experience and being proficient with certain gun weapons. -At 18, she escaped from her Uncle, but severely wounded in the process, losing her left arm. -Nearly bled to death, but was found by a group of scientists. -They provided her with a glass eye and metal left hand -They discovered she had a illness (Not curable at the time), and was placed in cryogenic state for 90 years (Need to decide on exact years she was frozen for) -Once there was a cure, they revived her -She woke with amnesia (No memory of her life) -She continued in military, and currently in Zlido as a Sergeant Major We have some issues. The whole uncle abuse/ training is fine. Except you kind of lose me at the part where she runs away from him and military. Like who hurt her??????????? The military would also be after her for going awol (absent without leave just in case) depending on how long she was gone for, but would still peak in if she left without asking. But they wouldn't hurt her like that. The military also wouldn't allow her uncle to do that either. His a** would be in jail the moment they found out what he did to her. And im assuming he's military as well because you mention how military is tradition in her family, which would make that hard to hide. In short no one would allow that to happen. So you mentioned how she got in military at a young age but she obviously was younger than 18. Thats already a no. I understand that some of the military members are implied to have gotten in at a young age, but certainly not as young as what you may or may not be thinking. No child soldiers. My Governor wouldn't allow the military to accept that either regardless of how good they are. I'm also confused to why the scientists cared for her. What were their goals for her. None of that child soldier/winter soldier bull crap. Because who remembered and decided she was important enough to care for her and then find a cure for her after 90 yrs. What were their goals and why her. The amnesia with no memory of her life is also a no. The military wouldn't just recruit someone like that and then put them in sergeant major. If youre going with the she forgot her life but remembers how to kickass/be a soldier its still a no and rather marry sue ish. You have all these points but the people in them seem to lack motives and just kind of do things without reason? Like I get the military tradition and therefore the uncle shoving her in it but I really dont see why or what his goal was in trying to kill her(?) like dude I get some people just do things but this isn't a free for all in which maiming people just to make another plot point that goes no where to happen. Like all of this just seems like a set up to give her cool stuff in a complex way and the people behind it have no real goals other than just to give it to her cause what the hell.
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