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 Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 10:24 am
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Full Name: Deidrith Korkarn Oni
Nickname: Deidrith
Age: 15
Birthdate: 3/8
Gender: Male
Height: 77 inches
Weight: 300lbs
Nindo: "Live by the Strength of your Soul"
Personality: Deidrith is a fun loving character. he likes competing with people in all kinds of games, especially drinking. He likes to be around people and socialize with everyone, even if they are afraid of him. He is fiercely loyal to his family, his clan, and his friends. He is very nice and gentle to everyone until something makes him mad,which very little really angers him. Once angry enough, he goes into a blind killing rage which few can break him of.
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Taijutsu
Subclass: Brawler
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Bloodline: Oni Clan
Chakra Pool: 200
Chakra Element: Fire and Lightning
Chakra Color: Red
Chakra Materialization: It appears as a massive fiery aura.
Strengths:
• Massive Strength
• Massive Endurance
• Drinking Capabilities
• Close Ranged Combat to Mid Combat
Weaknesses:
• Very Slow
• Wind and Water Weakness((Depending on element using))
• Low Agility
• Horrible Long Ranged Fighting
Fears:
• Horns being Removed
• Death of a Close Friend
Class Attributes:
• Slight Increase to Strength
• Reflexes and Flexibility Slightly Increased
Reductions:
• Learn Taijutsu [1] post faster
Personal Attributes:
• Endurance Slightly Increased
• Strength Slightly Increased
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Ryo: 両{Money} 0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
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Weapon Type: None
Weapon Range: None
Weapon Weight: None
Weapon Location: None
• None
Summoning Type: None
Summon Sage: None
Pacts: None
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• Throwing Axes x30
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Raiton
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Katon
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Oni Clan jutsu
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Deidrith was born among the Oni as a regular freak. When he came out he was the largest kid they had ever seen. He was born with muscles as a baby. His skin tone was red, ever after the blood was wiped off. His mother died giving birth to him and his father disowned him after seeing him. he got along just fine though. he was raised by the hospital until the age of 4 where he was a massive 4'7. He had not stopped growing since that day. He went around as other Oni did and looked for competition. Most like facing him to prove themselves better, but he has been undefeated in every drinking challenge and brawl he has ever been in with those in age close to him. In one brawl, he got his left horn snapped off and he has kept it that way since as a mark of the worthy challenger. He left his home up in the mountains at the age of 13 in search of more worthy challengers. He has now settled in Suna. Most dislike him, but there are few there that he considers friends.
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 10:46 am
A few problems, Zeph:
1) We don't measure stats like that, or at all. You can have a slight increase to strength or endurance, but not +3 or... whatever that means.
2) For class attributes, you have to pick one. Can't have both strength and speed.
3) Throwing Axes are not an acceptable projectile. Kunai and Shuriken are, and only an amount of 30.
4) "Reflexes and Flexibility Slightly Increased" Should be in class attributes.
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 11:00 am
Anonymous_Alcoholic A few problems, Zeph: 1) We don't measure stats like that, or at all. You can have a slight increase to strength or endurance, but not +3 or... whatever that means. 2) For class attributes, you have to pick one. Can't have both strength and speed. 3) Throwing Axes are not an acceptable projectile. Kunai and Shuriken are, and only an amount of 30. 4) "Reflexes and Flexibility Slightly Increased" Should be in class attributes. 1. I fixed everything but I really want this character to rotate around strength and endurance. He will be super slow in speed and agility though. 2. Why can't throwing axes be a projectile? They are something that you throw, and it would fit his size and strength.
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 11:03 am
1.) It's the Brawler attribute.
1.) Oopsies. He meant they're not measured by like "+1, +2", they're marked like "Strength slightly increased" or "Endurance slightly increased."
2.) They're just... too much. We typically mean basic ninja projectiles, like shuriken, senbon, and kunai.
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 11:04 am
Zepharius Serpenthelm Anonymous_Alcoholic A few problems, Zeph: 1) We don't measure stats like that, or at all. You can have a slight increase to strength or endurance, but not +3 or... whatever that means. 2) For class attributes, you have to pick one. Can't have both strength and speed. 3) Throwing Axes are not an acceptable projectile. Kunai and Shuriken are, and only an amount of 30. 4) "Reflexes and Flexibility Slightly Increased" Should be in class attributes. 1. I fixed everything but I really want this character to rotate around strength and endurance. He will be super slow in speed and agility though. 2. Why can't throwing axes be a projectile? They are something that you throw, and it would fit his size and strength. 1. That's fine, he can be. It's just that he's a genin, a neophyte. He's strong for a genin, but... He'll have to grow into his role as a really strong Hulk-like person. Also, you can only have slight to moderate increases to things like strength and that. Too many people have kinda abused that. 2. Eh, hell with it, Use 'em. They're interesting enough. Just a note, why would he have a lightning weakness? If anything, he'd have a wind and water weakness considering his elements...
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 11:06 am
Hmm... I suppose that's true, Donut. Some people have started out with Fuma-shuriken, after all. I approve. :s
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 11:07 am
Anonymous_Alcoholic Zepharius Serpenthelm Anonymous_Alcoholic A few problems, Zeph: 1) We don't measure stats like that, or at all. You can have a slight increase to strength or endurance, but not +3 or... whatever that means. 2) For class attributes, you have to pick one. Can't have both strength and speed. 3) Throwing Axes are not an acceptable projectile. Kunai and Shuriken are, and only an amount of 30. 4) "Reflexes and Flexibility Slightly Increased" Should be in class attributes. 1. I fixed everything but I really want this character to rotate around strength and endurance. He will be super slow in speed and agility though. 2. Why can't throwing axes be a projectile? They are something that you throw, and it would fit his size and strength. 1. That's fine, he can be. It's just that he's a genin, a neophyte. He's strong for a genin, but... He'll have to grow into his role as a really strong Hulk-like person. Also, you can only have slight to moderate increases to things like strength and that. Too many people have kinda abused that. 2. Eh, hell with it, Use 'em. They're interesting enough. Just a note, why would he have a lightning weakness? If anything, he'd have a wind and water weakness considering his elements... Awesome guys. Thanks. I would say ok to the growing into then. And for the lightning, I messed up with that. I was still thinking of a different clan I wanted to use. Allow me to fix that. Other then that though, am I ok to go?
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 11:08 am
Your personal attributes should say "slightly" not "sharply." o:
Mmm... I might also avoid the usage of Strengths as "Immense", but... I suppose that doesn't matter too much, they're just sort of characteristics. So, yeah, I think you're basically good to go.
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 11:47 am
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Full Name: Hitomi Hyuga.
Nickname: The stupid genius.
Age: 15
Birthdate: 29/6
Gender: Female
Height: 60 inches
Weight: 135lbs.
Nindo: "Those who deny freedom to others deserve it not for themselves."
Personality: Hitomi is generally kind a gentle. She may come off as not very intelligent and maybe a little bit clumsy to most, but she is actually fairly intelligent and a powerful physical fighter when she needs to be. Although she rarely remembers fights and will usually forget all about them later on. She is quiet by nature, but is kind and caring and nurturing, part of the reason that she began to study medical ninjutsu.
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Taijutsu
Subclass: Medical
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Bloodline: Byakugan.
Chakra Pool: 200
Chakra Element: Lightning and fire.
Chakra Color: Blue.
Chakra Materialization: A light blue aura, almost calming.
Strengths:
• Fast
• Close range fighting
• Agile
Weaknesses:
• Weak at long range fighting.
• More focused on speed, her physical strength suffers.
Fears:
• Being alone her whole life.
• Bugs.
Class Attributes:
• Class Attribute - Lower Body Training: Speed slightly increased.
• Class Attribute - Faulty Precision: Accuracy with techniques slightly increased.
Reductions:
• Learn Taijutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Speed slightly increased.
• Reaction time slightly increased.
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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
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Weapon Type: None
Weapon Range: None
Weapon Weight: None
Weapon Location: None
• None
Summoning Type: None
Summon Sage: None
Pacts: None
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• Kunai x15
• Shruiken x15
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
{Your first element's name} Lightning
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{Your second element's name} Katon
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{Other jutsu type's name} Hyuga clan jutsu.
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
• {If none, remove section}
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
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Hitomi was born in Suna to her parents who had moved there. She never really knew either of them because they both died when she was quite young. She soon graduated the academy and has since been making a meager living for herself doing missions, earning enough money to live off of and doing her best to support the village that has taken her in as one of their own. Dreaming of one day becoming not only a great medical ninja, but a Taijutsu prodigy also.
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 12:26 pm
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Full Name: Ashitaka
Nickname: Ash
Age: 15
Birthdate: June 28th
Gender: Male
Height: 5'5''
Weight: 120lbs.
Nindo: "Blade in one hand, drink in the other... what could be better?"
Personality: Ashitaka is very much free spirited. He doesn't know the meaning of restriction or limitation. While others of his 'clan' are generally level headed and collected, Ashitaka prefers to express himself. However, don't mistake his actions for childish or idiotic; there's a method to the madness... always.
Village: Konoha
Rank: Gennin
Main Class: Bukijutsu
Subclass: Bloodline
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Bloodline: Hakemoto
Chakra Pool: 200+20 = 220
Chakra Element: Wind / Lightning
Chakra Color: Multi (Explained below)
Chakra Materialization: A dim glow within Saru's eyes based off the state being used.
Strengths:
• Versitility
• Chakra Manipulation
Weaknesses:
• Ninjutsu Use
• Fighting Women (-1 rank to techniques when fighting women)
Fears:
• Death of Friends
• Failing at Swordsmanship
Class Attributes:
• Arrogant Skill: Able to wield weapons with slightly advanced prowess.
• Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased.
Reductions:
• Learn bloodline techniques one [1] post faster.
• Learn bukijutsu one [1] post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Swordplay Protege: by losing both elements and costing an addition 1 post to learn Ninjutsu, Ash gains a -3 to learning Bukijutsu
• Hakemoto Weaponmaster: Hakemoto clan jutsu are treated as Bloodline and Bukijutsu techniques, opposed to Bloodline and Taijutsu.
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Ryo: 両{Money} {Start at zero}
AC: {Advancement credit} {Start at zero} {Additional information in mission board subforum}
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 03
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Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: Three Feet
Weapon Weight: 8 lbs. ( Don't know actual sword weights, could be off by a few pounds )
Weapon Location: Right side waist mounted sheath
Summoning Type: --
Summon Sage: --
Pacts: --
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• Kunai x30
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Fuuton
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Raiton
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Hakemoto States and Techniques
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
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In the back water mountains of the continent far to the south of the know Shinobi World lies a village dedicated to an isolated monk lifestyle. Ashitaka was an orphan found at the Main Temple while still in the cradle. He never did fall into line with the other children, who were taught to control their emotions. He'd rather interject them outward rather than bottle them inside. When he came of age, he decided to traveling north across the sea to sight see and view new lands. He eventually found himself at the great forests of Konoha, and the rest... well... has yet to be discovered.
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 12:32 pm
[ Mog: } Mmm... from what I can see, you're pretty good... I'd appreciate it if you could resize your image, though... Mmm... and, a Hyuuga without the Byakugan? Have you just not applied, or what?
[ Tenchi: } Your weakness doesn't have to be so... literal, if you don't want it to be.
Haha, you also don't have to cripple yourself so bad by ditching your elements. If you want to just have it like +1 to learning ninjutsu, and -2 bukijutsu, that's fine.
Also, average katana length is about 41 inches / 3.4 feet, and roughly 3.1 pounds.
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 12:37 pm
I have applied and been accepted. I just didn't see anywhere to post my Kekkei Genkai up there, perhaps I'm just looking in the wrong place. sweatdrop I will resize it for my posts and when I actually post up my profile in the Suna thread.
*Edit* Fixed the Byakugan thing.
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 12:40 pm
Hmm... hmm... Looks good, Mog, and thank you!
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 12:42 pm
Shinsua Hmm... hmm... Looks good, Mog, and thank you! So I'm accepted? >.>;
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 12:50 pm
*Nod*
Good to go, Moggy~
[ Tenchi: } Oops. I just realized that I read my source wrong. A 3.1 pound katana typically has a length of 2.2 feet. :s
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